2123 (sci-fi/humilation/cock worship)

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  1. B_smallpenis22

    B_smallpenis22 New Member

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    Hey guys, my first story i've posted on here hope you like it!

    Keywords: Straight, Forced Gay/Bi Sci-Fi, Humilation, Large Cock Worship, Mind Control.

    This is only a sample to see if anyone likes it, if you guys want more tell me.

    The year is 2123 and the world had just recovered from one of its longest and most horrific world wars ever. World War 4 as they called it killed 75% of the worlds population, 70% of its males. The survivors of the war, mainly women, climbed out of the rubble that was once was the earth. That was 60 years ago, and now finally order and stability gained a foothold thanks to the work of the Utopians, a nation of strong and powerful women who endured the aftermath of the war. The Utopians, led by Sarah Darringer a widower, gathered the survivors and led them to the last bastion of fertile land and plentiful resources located in central Canada. They named this place New Terrain, and harvesting the resources nearby with old machinery still let untouched from before the war, they rebuilt society. Sixty years of work had built New Terrain into the city it now is today. Inside the city boundaries, which are marked by a large cement walls topped by barbed wire, there is a fully functional, a sports stadium which has a resemblance to the roman coliseum, five large common living areas, and a capital building where the leader of the Utopians resides. Surprisingly New Terrain 2123 is not a too bad of a place to be living in post war Earth. It has fully functional electricity and water systems, heated buildings, and a good school system. However, there is also something very different about New Terrain that has allowed it to flourish as fast as it did. And that is the power of women.

    In new terrain woman outnumber men 4 to 1, and control every aspect of society. Now men no longer hold the same position of power, and culture roles have been reversed. Sarah Darringer helped establish a new code of conduct and law for the 3,000 males in New Terrain. First, men had to answer to women at all times, second a mans body was not his own property, instead it was owned by all women living in the city, if they wanted to touch him or use him for sexual intercose they could. Third, men would be valued by their strength and their cock size. Big strong men would highly needed in New Terrain for manual labor, and big strong cocks were equally needed to pleasure all the females the only way a large cock could. Cock size in fact is so highly valued that mating for reproduction was limited only to men who were knighted by council of women leaders for having a large and attractive penis. A tradition that was started from the first day the Utopians set foot in New Terrain, has most defiantly helped the modern men have much larger than average sexual organs. Not only were hung males chosen for sexual reproduction but they also received a higher status in society. Only men processing large penises were allowed to own land, and only the biggest of them all could ever be in a management position in a company or a leadership role the military.

    Jared Westin was not of those men. At age 24 having a penis measuring only 5 ½ inches long x 4 ½ inches in girth he was under the average male Utopian who measured 7 x 6 inches. By law men above 18 who were under 6 inches in length and 5 inches in girth were put to work at the ore mines and farms. And that’s exactly were Jarad has spent the majority of his working life, in the deep dark depths of the mine. It was long hours, normally 6am to 4pm Monday through Saturday, boring as hell chopping away black rock till your muscles could go no further, but it paid.

    This day at the mines was like any other as Jared rode up the dirty and dark elevator to the surface chatting with a few co-works.

    “I hear that the weather is gonna get real bad the next few days as the winds pick up” yelled a short and skinny gentlemen in his 40’s who Jared had known for the past two years from working at the ore mine, and who had an even smaller penis than himself”

    “Heard that” Jared said “Also heard that way out by outpost 3 they are picking up traces of a bad storm, gonna get real Brutal Jim”

    “Sounds like a good week to light a fire and read a book, right Jaded”

    Jared nodded, looking rather distinct as he looked forward to maybe watching a few adult films that he rented. Jerking off to big cocks was one favorite activities, not uncommon for a small sized man to have

    As the rickety elevator grinded to a halt, Jared took his lunch box and canteen and walked toward the men’s locker rooms, were he was met by Mr. Dawson the dayshift manager.

    “Westin!” shouted Mr Dawson

    “Yes sir!” said Jared his head aimed downward in respect, glancing at the buldge that his manager’s large hung flaccid cock made in his trousers.

    “I want you to deliver this package after you got off work. The client lives 3 blocks from you, so it shouldn’t be that much trouble. Do you understand?” Mr Dawson stated

    “Yes sir” Replied Jared angrily as he was not to thrilled with the idea of running errands.

    As Jared got undressed to head to the shower room he was really pondering why he had to listen to Mr Dawson. What made him so much better? Just because he had a big dick?

    “That’s insane I’m just as big of a man as he is, big or little dick!” Jared thought

    But then as he entered the hazy white shower room, he saw something that quickly made him realize why he had to take orders from Mr. Dawson. Across from the hall was Mr Dawson himself buck naked showering. Aside from being a model of male perfection physically, standing 6 foot 4, weighing 200 pounds, his cock was shaped by the gods. In its soft and flaccid state it hung down a thick 8 inches low and heavy covering his equally massive egg sized balls. It had been a few days since Jared had the privilege of seeing such a woman pleaser in real life, and although having seen his fare share of big cocks in school, never did they cease to amaze him. Looking down at his own 3 inch soft penis, reminded him that he had no business of trying to compete the big boys like Mr. Dawson. To reassure himself he looked around the shower room seeing all sorts of familiar co- workers whose cocks resembled his, small. In all 30 men filled the steamy shower room, the majority of whom were labeled as less powerful by the state as their penises hung down less than 5 inches when in flaccid state.

    The one expectation was Mr Dawson, who apparently out of kindness had worked up his cock into its erect state. Standing a pound 10 inches x 8, the others found it hard not to take notice. However, this is not out of the ordinary for a boss to revel his erection to the workers at shower time, for it has been proven to increase productivity and respect in the work place. On que the many other men also start getting this penises to full mass and encircle their boss Mr. Dawson.

    27 small and ridged cocks now proudly stand to their potential, all waiting orders from their leader. The smallest belongs to Dud Smith, a very late blooming long blond haired 18 year old fresh from the academy. At 3 ½ inches fully hard, Dud still hopes for one final growth spurt that can propel him from small cock status. Even at the ore mines where most men are not blessed with a real penis he still gives ridiculed for his size. On the other end of the spectrum there is Eric Sunderman, a 30 year old shift leader with a black goatee a 6 ½ x 6 inch uncut cock.

    What is now taking place is called a “Society Bonding”, a act of togetherness, big cocks and small penises for brief moment in the day where smaller men may enjoy the site of a large penis. For men with large cocks this has historically been a moment where they may revel to others his place in society. Jared remembers his first SOBO (society bonding) in grade school, where boys finally got to see where their role would be in society. When Matthew Kraig strolled into the showers for the first time in 6th grade with his massive and hard thick cut 8 inch cock, Jared instantly knew his life would be one of servitude and worship.

    More? PM me and tell me you liked it. Help me with ideas, etc.
     
  2. Lorki

    Lorki New Member

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    Would love for you to continue. As for ideas I guess you could keep the story about his life, deliviring the package and witnising various acts, or you could make it in a growth story make him become a high status male, ethier or would be hot.
    Anyway hoped that helped.
     
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    Sounds great so far. You could tell the story from several characters points of view.
     
  4. D_Ashtreigh Cigarbutt

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    gd start, hope the gay/bi forced sex comes soon.
     
  5. KMFDMlv

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    very cool start. You should write how his cock grows enormous (possibly something with the package) and he starts taking over women etc...
     
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    I like where this is going!
     
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    Interesting. A very good start, please continue.
     
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    hi, wats happening with this?? hope it continues soon
     
  9. sizemike

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    This is fantastic. One of the best stories ever written here since it deals with the size issue straight on and clear. Particularly the accepted heirarchy of small men at bottom and large men at top of society. I like the Society bonding as a way to treat the small men to a daily viewing of a big cock while the reason being that showing the big cock reinforces why the small men are in the mines and the big cocks have such better lives. Keep up the good work!
     
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    What about explaining how Matthew Kraig went from 6th grade to now to a life of a powerful position while the narrator had to struggle. The realization of how important big penis size is - coming from the flashback of grade school. Just a thought.
     
  12. 5in.and.humble

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    Great story so far. Size superiority is an interesting topic and probably appeals to many smaller-than-average guys.
     
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    this story was actually beyond ridiculous and bordering insulting
     
  14. B_casualtxt

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    You also might want to pay a little attention to spelling & punctuation. Yeah, I know this isn't school, but they invented all that stuff to making writing clear for the reader. School was to teach you to use it for after you got out. You have a lot of typos and errors where you just used the wrong word.
     
  15. TheRob

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    well at the schools where he is from it's mroe about social pecking order...so he has an excuse
     
  16. wallyj84

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    Too bad this story was forgotten so quickly. I would have loved to have seen it continued.
     
  17. wallyj84

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    Why is it insulting?
     
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    i like this story too and hope some more installments are posted
     
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    it is a shame that this story was just left, very good writting and I tell ya I was hooked.
     
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    Yes, it's a shame it's been neglected.
     
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