A Change of Character (M/F/F)

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    Hi folks this is my first attempt at posting a story on hear, I hope you like it is currently a work in process, so more is to follow. It's based on some personal experiances names have been change and all the usual stuff but I sincerely hope you like it and let me know if I should bother posting the rest.
     
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    Fraser had always been a quiet lad, never got himself into any trouble to speak of while growing up and as a result he had never really been noticed by anybody either. Funny how, he thought if you never really made a sound nobody really took the time to notice you. He assumed most people though he was just a shy young man, maybe lacking a bit of confidence.

    He had been told he wasn’t a bad looking kid, standing 5’9” tall he was never going to grab attention as the tallest guy in the room but he did realise that he had some characteristics that could be classed as “positives”. Despite being born and raised in Scotland he possessed a reasonable tanned complexion, short dark brown hair that was so dark it looked black, dark green eyes that had been a gift from his mother and a muscular physique that had come about from his boxing training and influenced by stories of his father’s boxing career.

    Fraser would never consider himself vain but he couldn’t help but cast a quick admiring glance at his body as he was getting dressed for work. Being just 3 weeks away from his next bout, his training program was punishing. 5 miles of roadwork in the morning, weights at the gym midday and sparring in the evenings, coupled with a strict diet of six small meals a day his body was responding well. His skin was tight and velvety to the touch, his well developed chest and shoulder muscles showing increased definition with the drop in his weight. His abdominals were solid and defined, essential he thought as his upcoming opponent was a notoriously hard body puncher.

    As he stepped away to finish getting ready his mind drifted back to the weekend, mainly the works party that he was at on Friday night. For one thing he regretted drinking at all, being so far into his training plan the alcohol went straight to his head and he could remember very little of what actually happened all he could do was pray that he hadn’t made a complete fool of himself.

    Being 19 years old and working part time in his local video store. Of the small number of staff the store employed Fraser was one of only two guys who worked there. The other guy Malcolm was a good guy, quiet but with a sharp sense of humour he and Fraser had more than a few laughs when they were shifted on together. The rest of the staff was all female and Fraser was well liked by them all.

    Fraser knew he was shifted on today with two of the women, Laura and Claire. Laura was the boss and she was a good boss into the bargain. If you needed time off on short notice she would always work something out to get you the time you needed and if you needed an advance on your wages she would always sort you out. She was a great laugh to boot, she had arranged the party for everyone at the video store and was always the first one up to sing and dance at a get together.

    Claire could easily be described as the store flirt, she would bat her eyelids, talk in a cute little voice even show off her cleavage to help sell the promotions in store. Suffice to say she was always top of the team list for additional sales. Claire definitely lived by the motto “If you’ve got it… flaunt it!”

    Both Laura and Claire were older than Fraser, each of them in their thirties and they were both two good looking women in the bargain. Laura a brunette and Claire a blonde. Both took care of themselves, they both went to the same gym as Fraser. Being a small town there was only one gym anyway. Both were in good shape, Laura being the shorter of the two was slightly more curvaceous than Claire although Claire did have the larger breasts and she certainly wasn’t averse to showing them off. Fraser had almost been caught staring at them a few times. Fraser thought to himself that it was never a bad shift when he was working with the two of them.

    As he walked into the store both Laura and Claire were already there, in behind the desk and checking over the previous day’s takings. Both looked up as he came in through the door, Fraser noticed that the tow of them smirked slightly as they realised it was him coming in. “Hey there… how you both doing?” he said. “Oh were doing very well Fraser and how are you feeling today? Did you enjoy yourself at the weekend?” said Laura with a smirk on her face. Trying to play it cool and not give away the fact that he couldn’t really remember what had happened “Yeah. I had a great time thanks” Claire and Laura both were laughing “Oh we know you did… big boy!”

    “Uhhmm..” He stuttered “How do you mean?” His mind started to race through the possibilities of what he may have done. His stomach tightened as the last part of Claire’s statement sank in. Oh god he thought did he pass out in the toilet... did he strip off? He couldn’t help but wish the ground would swallow him up.

    Fraser had always possessed a split personality of sorts although quiet and unassuming in day to day life, he never felt restrained when in the ring. He knew in the right circumstances he could always let go and let rip. He wondered if he had let go a little too much at the party.

    Claire jumped straight in. Laura was quite content giggling to herself. “Well let’s just say, you were quite happy showing off how many one arm push-ups you could do that and I’m guessing you started to feel the heat in the room and started to take off your shirt” She smiled. “Now to be honest... none of us complained.” Fraser felt sick “So we may have suggested that you take your jeans off as well... after all we wanted you to be comfortable.” Not knowing where to look or control his blushing Fraser spoke up. “I didn’t... take my jeans off did I?” Claire couldn’t help but respond “OHHH you certainly did and we couldn’t help but notice that you certainly filled out your boxer shorts”

    Now it was Laura’s turn to blush but she spoke up “Me and the girls got some interesting shots of you posing in your shorts” Claire butted in “GOD when we saw the bulge at first we all thought you had a hard on” Laura followed “But when we realised you didn’t... we were all shocked” both smiled.

    Aside from having a strong physique, Fraser was also very well endowed. It had caused some issues for him in the past. It was irritating if he ran without a cup to stop it rubbing against his thighs. Having to wear tight underwear to keep in check during the day or worse getting a hard on in public, it was nearly impossible to conceal.

    “Sooo..” Claire started “just how big is it then?” Louise slapping Claire quite hard on the arm “CLAIRE!!!” “Oww!... don’t act like you don’t want to know... it was all you spoke about the rest of Friday night” Claire had a wicked smile on her face.

    “I don’t know if I should say really” trying to stall for a little bit of time to try and think. “Oh don’t be shy... you have got nothing to be shy about” as she finished speaking he felt a faint and quick brushing of a hand against the middle of his thigh as it softly pressed against his cock. Claire gave him a sly wink.

    Feeling a sharp surge of adrenaline untangle his stomach for the first time in what felt like hours. Fraser could feel his nerves starting to fade and his heartbeat slowing gently.

    “I... can’t tell you how big it is”

    “Why is that?” asked Laura.

    I’ve never measured it” as sad as that sounded he thought it was the truth, he knew it was big and that it was a nuisance sometimes. He had never actually measured it.

    Both Claire and Laura looked at each other, Claire spoke up “Well how about we measure it for you” she smiled deeply, giving an almost feline look to her face. Fraser also noticed she had unbuttoned at least two buttons on her blouse which gave Fraser a nice eyeful of her lacy pink bra.

    Feeling like he did just before the bell would ring for the first round “OK then”
     
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    Yea Kahuna.... welcome to the fiction section ...

    Keep going, we need some good new hot material from new writers on this site. Lots of description ... nice work.
     
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    oh yes! keep going
     
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    Claire and Laura both smiled. “Well” said Laura “We better go someplace a little more private”

    Fraser felt that familiar surge of adrenaline course through him, although the places his mind was starting to wander to, forced him to keep a check on his breathing. “Where would you suggest?” It was a bit of a silly question really as the only place in the whole shop that was private was the storeroom.

    Claire now moved behind Fraser. placed her hands on his shoulders. “Let’s take this naughty boy through to the store Laura” Fraser felt the warmth of her soft hands kneading into his shoulders. So much so he couldn’t hold back a soft groan as she continued to massage his thick neck muscles. “I think our boy here is a little tense… Lets help him relax a little” Fraser missed the mischievous little wink Claire gave to Laura but then again he was finding it a little hard to concentrate. “Let’s go to the storeroom then” Agreed Laura.

    The storeroom was truly a multifunctional marvel. The shelves held the extra stock of films that were perhaps to old to keep on the shop floor but still popular enough to be requested frequently. The office desk and cabinets on the left held the employee and financial records and was always well stocked with useful stationary and to the back of the room was the breakout area where, customers permitting you could put your feet up for fifteen minuets.

    Laura walked in first, her cheeks and neckline flushing a wonderful shade of pink as the anticipation of what she was about to witness was causing her heartbeat to rise. Claire now leading Fraser by his hand had a rather more composed complexion but an unmistakeable glint in her eye. Fraser knew if this was discussed or planned Claire was definitely the one who would have come up with it. Laura made herself comfortable on the left edge of the desk and turned to face Fraser who was standing about a foot and a half away. Claire was busy searching through the desk drawer “ah here it is” she pulled out a 12” wooden ruler, giggling “I think were going to need this” Laura’s blushing darkened, as did Fraser’s as he watched Claire’s hand sliding suggestively along the length of the ruler.

    “Well big boy… show us what you’ve got in there” Claire’s smile he thought must be similar to what a mouse witnesses as it’s being taunted by the cat.

    Fraser found himself taking a deep breath as he started to undo the buttons on his shirt. He could see the women’s eyes drawn to his hands, following them as he slipped each button off one by one. Once the buttons were hanging loose he grabbed the collar of the shirt and let it slip off to the floor. Laura let out a little audible sigh as her eyes moved across his broad chest and over his abs. Claire not surprisingly had her focus a little lower. He reached for the button on his trousers pausing for a second, remembering to take off his shoes. Bringing his hands back up he pulled down his zip and slowly pulled down his trousers. As he slipped them off and put them to one side he stood up to let the women get a look at his bulge. He was wearing tight white lycra boxer shorts and his cock was tucked to the left. His balls hung heavy against the material and his cock was thick and long stretching the material down the left side of his shorts. Both women’s gaze was fixed solely on his bulge, he saw Laura lick her lips ever so slightly. Claire now had a firm grasp on the ruler. With a little inward smile. He slipped his thumbs inside the waistband of his shorts and slowly pulled them down.

    The elastic clung tightly round the base of Fraser’s cock. He saw both Laura and Claire’s eyes widen as inch after inch of thick meat was revealed. When the shorts were off he stood back up to let both women see it hanging down long, thick and heavy. “Oh My GOD!!!” Claire blurted out. Laura couldn’t speak. “That… that… th..” Claire finishing Laura’s statement for her “that is huge!” Laura’s gaze kept shifting from Fraser’s eyes to his cock and back to his eyes, a look of genuine disbelief in her eyes.

    Claire however was not so reserved she walked over to Fraser, never lifting her gaze. Dropping to her knees in front of him she placed the ruler next to his flaccid shaft. She just smiled when she saw where the tip was hanging. Moving slightly to Fraser’s right to allow Laura to see what she was seeing. “Can you believe this… 9 inches and it’s not even hard” She quickly wrapped her fingers around the tip “God it’s soo thick too… “ she deftly pulled back his thick foreskin revealing the head “mmmm” she purred as she teased the tip with end of her index finger. Fraser could feel the rush of blood to the base of his shaft, working to the tip of his cock. He found himself moaning as Claire began to stroke along the length of his stiffening shaft. “Now why did you keep something like this to yourself for so long” she quipped. Laura was rooted to the table watching her friend harden Fraser’s cock. Fraser just felt the warmth and the pleasure the Claire was giving him overloading his senses. He felt his vision tunnel and his hearing soften but his sense of touch was in overdrive. He looked at Claire’s face a vision of lust and craving, he thought to himself what it would feel like to have those soft, warm lips sliding over him. It would not be long before he knew exactly but for now his sense returned as he became aware of just how hard he had become. His foreskin was stretched tight, the thick veins running the length of if and increasing the appearance of his already impressive girth. The head of his cock was a dark shade of scarlet and the throbbing he felt in his cock was mirrored by the pulse he could feel surging up his neck.

    Claire stopped stroking to pick up the ruler. She teasingly ran her hand from the base to the tip on the velvety underside of his shaft enjoying the inability to fully grip round his cock. She gently placed the ruler along the top of his throbbing meat. Gasping she shouted to Laura “He’s 12 inches long!”
     
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    keep up the story...
    looks to be just getting good.
     
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    Absolutely first rate. I'm getting damp just imagining all of this. Keep it up - so to speak! Looking forward to the next episode.
     
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    Good story - would love to see some more of your writing
     
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