A French Adventure

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  1. D_Abraham Slinkin

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    My first attempt at writing erotica. Please
    Leave comments. I hope it makes you cum as much as it did me.

    Jack was a 19 year old student at UCLA. His major was French and he had gone travelling in Europe in the summer with some friends. He stayed with them for 3 weeks, when he left to go and stay with a friend in Bordeaux that he had met at UCLA. He had to make an 8 hour train ride on his own which he wasn't looking forward to to say the least. He sat down on a seat and settled in for 8 hours of doing nothing on a boring journey. He looked at his reflextion in the window. This past year he had really changed. He had really grown into his looks. He was 6'1, short dark hair, deep blue eyes and still had quite a young looking face. He had a few stubbly hairs on his face, but for a 19 year old it was a little unusual that his facial hair hadn't come through yet. Jack had considered him self straight until recently. He had only ever slept with girls, but lately was noticing men more and more. He had fooled around a bit with friends at high school but nothing more.*
    *As he sat there gazing out the windows somewhere near Vichy, he noticed a face in the reflection. He turned and saw opposite something that made him stare. 3 rows ahead on the other side facing towards him was a young french man. He looked around 23. He had a chisled face, short thick dark hair, olive tanned skin and deep blue eyes. He had dark stubble, the perfect amount. Jack quickly turned away as the man caught him staring. But in the reflection he could see him staring back at him.*
    *For the next 10 minutes, the cat and mouse game of staring carried on. Then, the guy stretched, and reached up to adjust the light above his seat. Until this point everything but his face was hidden by the seat infront, but now he revealed more. He was muscular, his gym shirt clung to his ripped pecs. His neck was a thick and masculine one of someone who clearly worked out a lot. As he reached up to adjust the light he showed his thick muscled arm, with veins bursting out of his pumped guns. As he turned jack got a glimpse of this thick underarm hair. This man was perfect. Jack couldn't help but notice that he seemed to be taking an awfully long time adjusting the light, which was strange anyway considering the sun was blaring through the carriage windows. Then jack turned away. The man had saw jack staring and unconsciously almost drooling. Jack blushed, but the man smiled. Was he doing this just to show off? Was he just teasing him? No, he couldn't have even thought Jack. What a crazy thing to think. You're deluded he thought, getting all worked up about a guy you've never even spoke to.
    *Jacks attention was turned elsewhere however when his phone made a noise. He reached down and his heart skipped a beat as he caught sight of the screen. There, his phone read: Bluetooth Message Received. He opened the message, and saw 'Aimes tu ce que tu vois ;)?' French for, 'Do you like what you see?'*
    He looked and saw the guy smiling at him in an excited lustful sort of way. Jacks heart began beating rapidly. He couldn't believe what was happening. What would he do? He had secretly been dreaming of something like this happening for a while, but did he have the courage to go though with it?*
    He thought for a while, the whole time his body tingling. He messaged back one simple word, 'Yes'.
    *He heard his phone bleep, and watched his fingers tap away his response. His phone flashed 'Look again'.
    As Jack gazed back over to the man he saw him smile, and move so that his tshirt was visible through the gap in between the seats. Then, he lowered his hand down to his lap and lifted up his shirt, revealing to Jack through the slither of the seats a vue which made him cringe with awe. He had a firm set of toned abs, each one as hard and defined as he had ever seen, traced down the middle by a line of thin dark
    hairs. He then licked the fingers of his other hand and slowly draped them over his body. He bit his lip, and closed his eyes, before lowering his shirt.*
    *Jack now realised it wasn't all in his head. He couldn't believe what he was seeing. He felt his cock stiffen in his jeans and felt his breathing becoming irregular. He then felt his phone make a noise again, and it read 'Follow me'
    The man then got up, revealing
    him self fully to jack. He must have been around 5'10, with broad shoulders matching his muscled physique. He was wearing gym shirts, revealing a set of toned unshaven legs which bulged as they took his full weight. He then walked away down the train, each step taken tightening his rock hard ass whose shape was not at all concealed by the tight gym shorts he wore.*
    Jack hesitated, he didn't know what to do. His raging pulse and hardening cock were screaming yes, but his mind was saying no. What would the rest of the train think? Had they already seen the man show him his chest? Could they feel the sexual tension that he could? Where was he even following him too? *Would they be seen?
    *Jack then thought he had been waiting for this to happen for a long time, and he got up and followed the man. He watched him go into the toilet and leave the door open, there was no one facing the toilet door so he didn't hesitate. As he entered he saw the door slam shut and saw the man put his hands on the wall either side of him caging him in. 'Je m'appelle Nico' he said, but before jack had time to even process what he had said he felt a hot mouth press against his, as Nico pushed his lips against jacks. He began furiously and passionately kissing jack, who still in shock wasn't really taking any of this in. He was lost in it all. He felt nico's stubble pressing against his face, his Tongue was forcefully powering into his mouth, he was pushing against Jack, his big muscular frame made it impossible to move, he was so big and powerful. Jack felt nico grind his crotch against his, he could feel a large package beneath those shorts. He felt so good, underneath this man, he could have came right there and then. Nico then pulled away and took off his shirt, then ripping jacks off. Jack moaned at the sight of nicos torso. His big chest muscles twitched as he moved, his abs contracted. Jack began to loosen up a little after as the initial shock of it all wore off. 'Fuck you are so hot' he said to nico, as he ran his hands over nicos chest. He then moved his face to his chest, and began kissing his pecs. He then flicked his nipples lightly with his Tongue. "oh fuck yeah..." he mumbled as he bit his lip. Nico then reached his hand behind his head to better thrust himself outwards, as he did his arms flexed and his pits were exposed. Jack could feel the head radiating off them, he could smell his manly scent and was drawn to them. He kissed his side, his arm and then nussled his face into his arm. 'mmmm' groaned nico. He then moved his arms away from his head and pulled down his shorts, where jack got his first glimpse of his package. He was wearing a pair of White Calvin Klein briefs which barely could contain his massive pacakge. Jack immediately got onto his knees and and pulled them down, where he found himself face to face with the Nico's cock. He had only ever seen a few other cocks before, his friends, his families, but none as big as this. It must have been around 6 inches long and 5 inches thick whilst still soft, and his balls were each as big as a golf ball. His thick black bush was trimmed a little and his balls were completely shaven. The smell was overpowering. A thick heavy man scent of sweat, deoderant and sex radiated off nico's giant fuckpole and Jack felt precum leak out of his own dick as he felt the heat against his face. "You want my big dick?' asked nico. Like he needed to ask. "I want it more than..." but before jack could even finish his sentence nico grabbed his jaw and opened it with one hand and put his giant soft cock in it with the other hand. Jack felt nico's dick begin to swell from his warm wet mouth, *and it kept growing and growing. Jack began to choke and gag as his giant French cock filled his entire mouth and began to push against his throat. He spluttered and pulled away, unable to contain his manhood anymore. Then he saw his cock. It must have been almost 9 inches long, and over 6 inches wide, with a big bulging head. He was uncut, but his foreskin was fully retracted exposing his beautiful head. His monster of a dick glowed as his saliva made it shine, but before he could say anything he felt nico's hand against his head. "Suck my cock bitch" he said, "now", and pushed his head back down onto his raging manhood. "relax and take it all in" he ordered. Jack grabbed the base of his trunk and went down on it once again. He had gone over this in his head a thousand times and knew exactly what to do. He sucked hard on the top of his pulsing dick whilst tonguing the head. "ohh fuck, ouais" cried nico. Jack carried on sucking and he felt his mammoth cock pushing on his throat once again, he relaxed and took more inches down his throat thinking he had it all, only to feel
    More coming. He gagged once again on this 9 inch monster. "I said take it all!" said nico, as he grabbed jacks hair tighter, pushed his head further into him and thrusted his crotch towards the young man. Jack couldn't believe how big he was. He had imagined this situation in his head but never planned for a cock this big. He tried to relax and swallow more, when he felt a hand on his throat. It began massaging and tapping his throat and he found his throat loosen and more of Nicos cock slide down deep inside of him. "ohh fuck that's it" cried nico, as jack felt the tickling of his pubes against his nose, and his giant balls push against his chin. Jack began to quiver from the pleasure of it all. His enormous manhood filling up his entire throat, its salty manly taste was better than he ever could have imagined. His balls felt humoungous pushing against his chin, heavy and soft, and the smell radiating off his thick black hairs as his nose brushed up against them was incredible. In college he found the thick masculine smell of the changing rooms to be his weakness. The scent of sweat and man left behind by the football team gave him an instant rock hard erection every time, but this was 10 times better. "ohh swallow my cock" grunted nico, and he fucked jacks face. The tight warm throat surrounding his cock made him harder than ever. "ohhh" "mm" cried nico as waves of pleasure ran throughout his body. The sound of his balls smacking against his chin, the squelching of his 9 inch cock ramming down a tight throat and of his muffled groans of pleasure filled the train toilet and all proved too much for jack. He had never been so sexually aroused in his life, and his cock twitched as he shot rounds of cum into his boxers. He didn't even care, he was so immersed in this man he was pleasuring he just sucked harder and harder. "0hh fuck, fuck I'm going to cum" said nico. He began thrusting harder and harder into jacks mouth, his cock grew even harder, he could feel his veins trying to burst out of his solid dick, his balls smacked against his
    Chin harder and harder, so that they ached in a good way, he gripped the boys hair harder, his leg muscles contracted harder, sweat began dripping down his abs and into his hairs, the whole toilet began to shake at the violent force of this muscular stud fucking jacks mouth with all his might. "ahhhh" cried nico, "ahhhhhh" he shouted loudly, loud enough for the whole train to hear, but he didn't care, *nor did jack, they were lost in the moment. Jack knew what was coming, he had tasted his own cum before and had fantasises about tasting anothers. He grew hard again from anticipation, and then it came. He felt nicos cock head stiffen even more to the point where it felt like rock, he felt his balls contract upward, he felt nicos ass and leg muscles spasm, and then felt a jet of hot cum spurt down his throat "ahhhhhhh" cried nico in a deep groan that vibrated the entire carriage. Spurt after spurt of hot cum filled jacks throat as he tried to swallow it all, he gagged as his throat filled and pulled his cock back into his mouth, but nico showed no sign of stopping. His giant cock kept spurting, his balls kept contracting, until jacks whole mouth was filled with his thick French man juice, he spat nicos cum covered cock out, but he kept Cumming, spurt after spurt of hot cum smacked against jacks face until finally he stopped.*
    Jack collapsed against the wall, in complete shock at what had happened. His whole face was covered in cum, his throat was filled with thick white nectar and the whole toilet stunk of spunk. Nico breathed out, his cock began to soften, and he bent down, opened his mouth and passionatly sucked jacks mouth and all of his remaining cum out of it. 'where you headed by the way?' he asked. Still in a cum covered daze jack replied 'Bordeaux' 'Me too' said
    nico with a smile in his face, as he reached down to pick his shirt up. 'Call me' he said, and he opened the toilet door still shirtless, he walked out, and shut the door.
    Jack lay there still in shock. There he was, lay against the wall in a French train toilet covered in hot sticky man cum.
    And he thought this journey was going to be boring...

    To be continued.
    based on a true story
     
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    really hot story man, totally got me going. maybe break up the paragraphs though for an easier read. all that text and my head starts to spin ;)
     
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    Very intens story! Please continue!
     
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