A little bit of Poetry

[curiousvirgin]

wow hot!

 

[Incocknito]

wow hot!

You're not bad yourself lol :wink:

 

[HiddenLacey]

All of time

Through the valley's,
where the flower's are sweet and blooming,
and precious waters flow.
Everywhere he would lead me,
through his touch love would flow.
Day and night,
night and day.
He would wipe my falling tears away,
and whisper in my ears,
things that only I could hear.
Fore I was his,
and he was mine.
Through-out all the rest,
and all of time.

 

[Incocknito]

Nice one submissivegirl. Some spelling mistakes and I would work on the meter (pace) of the poem. But a good first...entry

 

[Incocknito]

The Snowflake

There is a lonely snowflake,
branded with your name.
A lonely snowdrift,
with just one wish;
To see you smile
And make all the shivering and all the suffering,
all the cold and all the snow,
worthwhile

 

[curiousvirgin]

very romantic submissive girl.. i loved it. made me all warm and fuzzy inside =)

 

[HiddenLacey]

Nice one submissivegirl. Some spelling mistakes and I would work on the meter (pace) of the poem. But a good first...entry

My spelling is horrible. Always has been always will be. I read like a fiend it just turns into a jumbled mess when I write it out. I'm normally thinking about a million other things at the same time and I crisscross. I don't focus very well either. As I'm sure you can see from some of my postings:biggrin1: Guess I'm not smart, but animals love me

 

[HiddenLacey]

very romantic submissive girl.. i loved it. made me all warm and fuzzy inside =)

Thanks I actually wrote that after something bad happened in my life and I was dreaming of something different.:smile:

 

[curiousvirgin]

Your eyes beckon, come closer,
Your breath, a lure, a whisper,
Our glances speak clear,
A language no else can hear.

 

[HiddenLacey]

It's amazing what can pass in a glance sometimes:wink: I liked it

 

[HiddenLacey]

The Snowflake

Very nice!

 

[Incocknito]

Thanks. I won't post any more. Let's see what someone else has got :smile: