A Perfect Size

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  1. Somerfield

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    Hi, I'm a new member who joined to hopefully write some stories that people will like. To keep it fresh I'm trying to keep things partially reader driven, so I am hoping for some feedback that will give me new ideas and keep me motivated. Enjoy!


    Brooke Robins took a moment to congratulate herself for closing another big deal for her legal firm, as she walked from the revolving doors of the gleaming steel and glass downtown skyscraper and out to the waiting car that would take her to the luxury hotel she was staying at.

    She'd already sent a quick mail with the good news to her bosses, all the way on the other side of the country, and expected to be amply rewarded by them with a big bonus for all her hard work on securing such a new, large client.

    There was a flight early tomorrow morning to take her back to the city where she lived, but there was still what was left of this evening and tonight to celebrate her success.

    Even in the short distance she walked to the car Brooke was aware of the immediate interest her appearance made on the passers by around her. She could feel the immediate jealousy of several of the women nearby and the almost automatic wave of lust and desire towards her from all the men who saw her.

    The reactions from both sexes was completely understandable as Brooke was probably the most stunningly beautiful women that any of them would ever have seen in the flesh, even in this town.

    Not that she was flaunting it at that moment, in fact she was dressed extremely professionally, even conservatively and she had her long her tied back simply and wore a minimum amount of makeup.

    But there was simply no disguising either her striking beauty or shapely figure. The bespoke outfit she wore was tailored for her slender but curvaceous body, the cut of the cloth designed to accomadate Brooke's full, heavy breasts, which were larger than most women as tall and sleek as Brooke would normally posess, at least naturally as her ample endowments were.

    She was certain that nearly all of the men watching her were by now fantasising about fucking her in some way, she was used to this kind of attention ever since high school, but even as they stared at her Brooke was ignoring them, she had no interest or need to even acknoledge their existence or their lusts.

    Brooke was a career driven woman, her need for achievement in the corporate world left little time for a social life, never mind any romantic entitlements. Still she was a woman, and she had certain physical needs, ones that she preferred to satisfy with the touch of another's flesh and not by herself or with the aid of any artificial devices. But Brooke preferred to have those needs satisfied professionally, quickly but skilfully and without any unecessary emotional entanglements.

    To be blunt Brooke frequently used the services of male escort agencies, to satiate her sexual appetites, and over the years she had developed an extensive contacts lists of suitable escorts back home and in most of the major cities around the country, that could offer a discrete service that fulfilled all her wants and desires.

    Tonight was no exception, her companion for the night was already in place at her suite at the hotel, escorted to there from the lobby quietly and without fuss by the wonderfully confidential staff. It was one of the reasons she always stayed at that hotel when visiting this city.

    However the night would be different in one way, as the escort was one that Brooke had never used before, she had heard that her usual companion for visits to this city had left the escort business and his excellent services were no longer available. Instead she had accepted the recommendation of the female owner of the escort agency, whose exquisite taste Brooke accepted completely. The owner had recommended one of her newest escors, but one that she insisted was quickly becoming one of her most popular.

    "His name is Cooper" she said "And he can handle any and all of the services you require from him"

    Then enigmatically she added, "He's always willing to go the extra inch"

    Brooke hadn't pressed her on what she'd meant, she left it hanging there, and she also had no idea even what this young man, Cooper, looked like"

    But she was certain that it would be an enjoyable experience, the agency boss was very reliable, and an interesting one as it was unusual for their to be an edge of the unexpected in her sexual encounters.

    She pondered on this on the way to the hotel and as she passed through the lobby and up to her suite. A frisson of excitement ran through her body as she tried to wonder at what was awaiting her.

    When the lift reached her floor she stepped out and then walked a short distance forward to open the doors to her suite. When she pulled them open and looked inside what she saw caught her completely by surprise and caused her to gasp out loud in amazement...

    Brooke is stunned because:

    1 Cooper is standing there totally naked.
    2 Cooper is actually someone she knows.
    3 There is more than one guy waiting for her.
    4 Other. I'm open to other interesting and instriguing suggestions.
     
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    What's up with Cooper?
     
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    Oooh, I definitely vote number 2.
     
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    Redo the story removing the sex based pronouns and make Cooper a she-male or better yet a full fledged hermaphodite.
     
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    4. all characters are revealed to be anthropomorphic animals of various types
     
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    Hey Somerfield:

    Congrats on a great start... I was really getting into it... you have a wonderful writing style.

    I like your idea of multiple choice at the end of each chapter to get us LPSG readers hooked. I give Query points for being the most imaginative so far... she-male/hermaphrodite twist to the story.

    I would offer a twist on number 2... Cooper recognizes her from high school but she doesn't recognize him. He was a skinny nerd in school. Brooke was a couple of years ahead of him and she never even noticed he was alive. She was a beauty queen in high school and Cooper used to jerk off regularly fantasizing about her. Now he has bulked up and his teenage pimples have cleared ... he is tall, handsome and hung ... she is struck by his physique and sexual prowess... but she doesn't recognize him from high school.

    This hot steamy chapter of sexual tension and memories of high school lust could end with him bringing her to the height of arousal then letting her know where he knows her from... she is mortified because a) he saw her giving the math teacher a blow job for better marks. b) Cooper's father was the school janitor and was also hung like a horse and Brooke had sucked Cooper's dad's dick in high school c) he brings her to the edge then leaves her horny and frustrated just like she used to do to the boys in school d) use Query's twist... as Cooper is getting her fully aroused with his erotic performance and he thinks about his high school fantasies... As he is about to have sex with this hot woman and former high school beauty queen that Cooper and all his buddy's used to fantasize about ...Brooke removes her panties to reveal that she is a she-male...
     
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