A Weekend In Chicago

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Damn!
One of the hottest stories I've read yet!
Just wanted to say, I thought the gold ring thing was a great idea...
hint's at all sorts of possibilities...
Gotta say this story is Gold!
Love that they met online? and then in reality...
or at least suggests that possibilty...
Also, the idea that this is his first time with a man is so hot!
Loved the descriptiveness, especially the quivering lad.
Man I could go on and on...
Excellent story!:biggrin1:
 
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Awesome story. I could read about Zach and David for days. Please continue the story. I am dying to know what happens next.
Shane
I am in the process of writing another chapter in the story of Zack and David. I'll post it in this thread when it is done. Thanks for asking, Shane, and for your kind comments!

Sam
 
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BUMP:cool:

Seeing as my other stories are on the front page again, and seeing as FortiesFun a.k.a.Doc does this from time to time with his stories; I thought I would give this story a bump just in case there was still interest. I'm still thinking about writing a continuation of the story of Zack and David—most of the story now in my head—but it won't be until June.

Sam
 

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You and Doc are making my life an absolute hectic mess--I spend hours daily just trying to see who will get me more aroused in their daily journals.

Good work--keep the stories coming so I can.
 
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You and Doc are making my life an absolute hectic mess--I spend hours daily just trying to see who will get me more aroused in their daily journals.
LOL. I can't speak for Doc, but I wish the erotic image of me that these stories conjure up for many were true for those that wish it were so. Alas, I am who I am and what I am, and am content with being me. The stories reflect the sexuality and needs of those for whom they were originally written, and essentially, they were an act of friendhip. As for me, they do nothing—I am just an amateur writer having fun creating a hopefully pleasurable experience for the reader.

Good work--keep the stories coming so I can.
I willingly concede this great honor to Doc. He can singlehandedly and successfully release endless gallons of viscous matter from his readers. He is the Master of his Domain!
 

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Great story!!! :smile: But I think it's a very tiny possibity to actually hook up over a gym shower :wink: You don't wanna have homophobic straight guys beating you up in the shower for staring at their dicks! :tongue:

To me, the ending is sorta sad, I wish it was stated that Zack visited David once a month cause it seems to me that they just parted away and would only meet online. I know, I'm such a sap :tongue: But again, you said that there's another chapter coming. And again ChicagoSam, thanks for your concern to me, I sense that you're a very nice guy :smile:
 

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LOL. I can't speak for Doc, but I wish the erotic image of me that these stories conjure up for many were true for those that wish it were so. Alas, I am who I am and what I am, and am content with being me. The stories reflect the sexuality and needs of those for whom they were originally written, and essentially, they were an act of friendhip. As for me, they do nothing—I am just an amateur writer having fun creating a hopefully pleasurable experience for the reader.

I willingly concede this great honor to Doc. He can singlehandedly and successfully release endless gallons of viscous matter from his readers. He is the Master of his Domain!
How on earth did I miss this? Well, speaking for myself, my stories reflect my sexuality with pinpoint accuracy. :redface:

I doubt that my stories create the sensation that Sam's do, but they create sensations I like a whole lot! :eek:
 
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Great story!!! :smile: To me, the ending is sorta sad, I wish it was stated that Zack visited David once a month cause it seems to me that they just parted away and would only meet online. I know, I'm such a sap :tongue: But again, you said that there's another chapter coming. And again ChicagoSam, thanks for your concern for me, I sense that you're a very nice guy :smile:
Yes, there will be continuation of the story this summer when I have time to write. Thanks for your kind words.
How on earth did I miss this?
My thoughts exactly? Jeez, I am always playing the straight man for you to come back and rank on me with your delicious ribald humor. I guess you are too busy trying to get to 7000 posts!
Well, speaking for myself, my stories reflect my sexuality with pinpoint accuracy. :redface:
No! Really! You're just yanking my chain—or whatever is readily available—on this, right?
I doubt that my stories create the sensation that Sam's do, but they create sensations I like a whole lot! :eek:
Oh, my dear Doc, you are far too modest. Your literary masterpieces create quite a sensation, too; as mine cause an intense sensation and urgent desire to release. I suspect that our readers go stroke to stoke to the finish in that regard.
 

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Jeez, I am always playing the straight man for you to come back and rank on me with your delicious ribald humor.
And I, in turn, play the bent man...

I guess you are too busy trying to get to 7000 posts!
There is no try, only do.

No! Really! You're just yanking my chain—or whatever is readily available—on this, right?
Chains are, I think, your best offer to date.

Oh, my dear Doc, you are far too modest.
It's true.
 
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And I, in turn, play the bent man...
Is that where the phrase, "Get bent!" comes from? I've never seen you bent!
There is no try, only do.
"You do that voodoo that you do so well!" 7000, I see, is a memory already and we are on to 8000! Is someone a special prize when you reach that milestone?
Chains are, I think, your best offer to date.
Whips and chain! Oh, Baby! Naughty, HollyBlue, and Mercurial Bliss all wanting to work on my virgin ass for my birthday. What a day!
It's true.
You've got under 20s, too?:biggrin1:
 

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Is that where the phrase, "Get bent!" comes from? I've never seen you bent!
That's not because I haven't offered!
"You do that voodoo that you do so well!" 7000, I see, is a memory already and we are on to 8000! Is someone a special prize when you reach that milestone?
Nope. Not 'til 8003. :rolleyes:
Whips and chain! Oh, Baby! Naughty, HollyBlue, and Mercurial Bliss all wanting to work on my virgin ass for my birthday. What a day!
You gotta go for all the gusto you can get.
You've got under 20s, too?:biggrin1:
You got me that time. I cannot break the code...