Anderson Family Gift

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    I wrote a short story. Let me know if it's crap or if I should write more...

    Hi, my name is Mark Anderson. I have two sisters and a brother; I’m the oldest child at 18. I live with my mom and dad in a really nice neighborhood in Florida. My parents are very well off and I have always had the privilege of living a rich lifestyle. My friends always say how hot my mom is. She's five ft 4 with good sized boobs and a model's body. I don't think she's hot, she's my mom. My dad is an awesome role model and I would love to grow up to be just like him. He is the perfect man, smart, successful, and also very good looking. He’s 6 ft 5 with about 230 pounds of pure muscle. He knows he has a good body and he loves to show it off every possible moment. He normally walks around the house shirtless and always finds an excuse to flex his pecs and biceps in front of mom and sometimes me. He knows I’m jealous of him. I’ve talked to him about going to the gym with him and I asked to join him. He goes to the gym everyday after work with his 3 brothers and he asked them if I could join in and they all said yes. I wanted to go to the gym to just build up a little muscle and have fun. I wasn’t planning on getting a huge body, but I really desired one. I’m not an ugly kid, but I’m certainly not that good looking either. I’ve had a few girlfriends and we’ve done some stuff like blowjobs and fingering. We, however, never got to sex. I am still a virgin. I’m just a plain old average kid weighing 140 pounds with a 6-inch dick. If I had a better body, I would be able to lose my virginity and finally get the guts to ask a hot girl out. The day after asking my dad about the gym, he took me. We were there for about 3 hours and we had an exhausting workout. My uncles were also ripped like gods and they were easily out lifting me by miles. When the workout was finally done, we all went to the locker room to change and go home. When we got in there, my dad and uncles immediately stripped out of all their clothes. What I saw next really pissed me off, they were all hung like fucking horses they each had soft dicks that easily measured seven inches. My uncle Max had the shortest cock with seven and my dad’s was the biggest and it had to have been at least nine and super thick. How did I get so screwed over in this gene pool? One guy yelled out “Here come the four Horsemen.” They all knew they were the center of attention now and they really showed off. They just strutted around and really took their time when heading to the showers. They each all had really thick bushes too and that surprised me, especially since they were hairless everywhere else. I now knew how they all got the hottest women I’ve ever seen to be their wives. All of my aunts had huge boobs and a nice petite body with gorgeous hair. They were each a teenage boy’s fantasy. As they showered, I stood next to my locker and got changed as quickly as possible. I was so embarrassed and I didn’t want them to say anything about my puny body or prick.
    The car ride home with my dad was silent until he said,” I noticed you were very uncomfortable in the locker room. Why is that?” It took me some courage, but I finally said, ”Because you guys are all studs! I didn’t want to be compared to you and your huge muscled bodies and big dicks! I have none of that. My genes screwed me over!” My dad then told me “We all looked like you when we were your age until we received the ‘gift.’ Our bodies have nothing to do with genes. Now that you’re eighteen, you have the opportunity to become like us and receive the ‘Anderson Family Gift.’”
     
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    please continue
     
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    okay......keep going
     
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    as you were saying...
     
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    and then you said ????
     
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    Love it. There's more ?
     
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    “What’s this gift you’re talking about?” I asked my dad sarcastically. He told me that when he was about twenty-five, he was just an average man like me. One night he and his brothers were camping and they encountered an old homeless man who was begging for food. Instead of cursing at him and shooing him away like everyone else did, they actually invited him into their camp and fed him and gave him shelter for the night. For their generosity, the old man told them that they would be repaid in a big way some time in the near future and he left them. About a week later, this huge, muscular man came up to my dad and brothers and he informed them that he was the old man they helped and that they could all look like him if they passed a series of tests set up by the man. He told them that they would train for two weeks and if they passed, they would each be endowed with immortality, a huge muscular body and a dick that would make porn stars jealous. They asked what the tests would be and the man told them that they would all be sexual in nature. My dad wouldn’t tell me anymore of the story, but he did tell me that all of his brothers passed and they each had an instant transformation. My dad was blessed with the biggest cock cause he was the one who convinced my brothers to help the old man out. They also had the opportunity to pass the gift on to their sons when they became eighteen.
    I didn’t know what to say. I honestly thought that my dad was lying to me, but then I started to think that it was true and how awesome it would be to actually gain a body like my dad and uncles possessed. My dad called me down to the library the next night. I thought that it was a little strange because it was midnight on a school night and normally my dad loved to enforce my curfew and be strict about going to bed early. When I walked in, he was wearing a white robe and asked if I wanted to receive the gift that he was talking about earlier. I told him, “Hell yeah dad. Who wouldn’t?” He then told me that I didn’t have to go through with it if I didn’t want to, but I still wanted to take the test. I wanted a girlfriend and I wanted to get laid! He then got a smile on his face and he said,” Son, you made the right decision, I know you will pass and you will enjoy your new life.” After he said that, he opened one of the shelves in the library to reveal a room that I didn’t know existed. We walked in and it was full of candles and all of my uncles. They too were wearing white robes. My dad informed me that the ceremony to begin my training would begin tonight. All of a sudden, I looked to the back of the room and I noticed a really big stranger, he was so big that he made my dad look small. I figured this was the guy that my dad and uncles helped. He stepped forward and told me who he was, I was right. It was the homeless man. He then disrobed and told my dad and uncles to do the same. The stranger really had a huge cock and it was at least a foot long soft with about 9 inches in girth. I, once again, felt very inadequate while standing there around all of these men with extremely hairy and lengthy schlongs. The ceremony had now begun. They all started chanting and then the man told me what my tests would be: I had to have sex with a girl without cumming for at least 40 minutes to test how well I last during sex. I had to have sex with a woman and give her three orgasms in twenty minutes to test my ability to please a woman. I also couldn’t masturbate for the whole training time to test my patience and will power. This would be very hard considering that I was still a virgin and had never had any practice at lasting long in bed. I also knew that I masturbated at least once a day and I knew that the habit would be very hard to break.
     
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    Paragraphs... please... >_<
    Aside from that, briliiant.
     
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    nice start
     
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    i like where this is going
     
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    Love it so far.
     
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    Continue?
     
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    please continue its good so far
     
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    Nice start. Looking forward to more!

    I agree about paragraphs
     
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    you should continue its a pretty god story so far...
     
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    Really good start but I also think part of the testing should involve drinking the seed of the stranger, his dad, and his uncles. Or, perhaps being bred by taking each of their seed up his hot teenage hole. More please!
     
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    Noooooooooooooo...where's the rest?
     
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