Art Teacher Gives me a Lift

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Very well written. I consider myself to be very picky about writing, so if I tell you it's well written, it means you've impressed me. Kudos!

I have a story I wrote about a girl and her drama teacher, but I'm not sure if it would be well received. The protagonist is only 15 and that's quite illegal here in the States.
 

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I wonder whether I should do another story with the same protagonists but a diferents scenario, or one that carries on the story. What do people think ?
 

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have them become fuck buddies
she could ask him to act as her pool boy to live out a fantacy or something
 

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Good idea, I was thinking maybe have her use him as a waiter at a party when the catering company she hired is short handed. Obviously the uniform would be nice and revealing etc. What do people think ?