And we met Jeremy again! A good suprise. Have you modified the story , in the sense I can see your opinion that you prefer stories where the characters are willing? Billy is very critical of the whole scene and feels aroused but uncomfortable. I feel Billy could gain even more independence and freedom to choose... maybe establish who can grope him w Philip (even if that ends the story as is). One can relate with his doubts. Like the surprise ending where Jeremy seemed to be enjoying. I am still following, probably as I hope for another photoshoot

or another short story about AJ and Jason that moment in chapter 11 really left me hanging and it could lead to a very mature and emotionallly deep conversation.