Broken Relationship & Venting My Feelings

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  1. Bluebiss01

    Bluebiss01 New Member

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    I've recently come out of a relationship, being dumped for no apparent reason...I guess I just have to accept it and move on. I needed a way of venting my feelings so I wrote some lyrics.

    I hope you read them and enjoy...Hard times :(

    Comments would be greatly appreciated.

    Thanks alot, Blue X

    [Someone I'm Proud To Be]

    I woke with this fear
    Knew something was wrong
    Asked myself questions
    Found comfort in songs

    Knew you'd be leaving
    I guess I could tell
    The way you were acting
    Just put me through hell

    Now I'm letting go of everything I had...

    So I'll set you free
    And if we're meant to be
    You'll realise you're lonely
    Come crawling back to me

    But until that time comes
    Know that you're the only one
    Who's ever made me someone...

    Someone I'm proud to be
    Someone I'm proud to be

    Now I'm left scared
    Sometimes it just hits you
    So well unprepared

    I will be waiting
    And I will be strong
    A brave face for the ones
    I've loved all along

    Now I'm letting go of everything I had...

    So I'll set you free
    And if we're meant to be
    You'll realise you're lonely
    Come crawling back to me

    But until that time comes
    Know that you're the only one
    Who's ever made me someone...

    Someone I'm proud to be
    Someone I'm proud to be

    I don't know
    Where it all went wrong
    My heart aches
    I never thought we'd be alone

    So I set you free
    And if we're meant to be
    You'll realise you're lonely
    Come crawling back to me

    But until that time comes
    Just know that you're the only one
    Who's ever made me someone...

    Someone I'm proud to be
    (Sweet Bethanie)
     
  2. D_Jared Padalicki

    D_Jared Padalicki Account Disabled

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    Good lyric man, but don't be so sad, those things happen and you are young! Let's make a deal, you have another week to be sad and after that you have to realise that nothing worse happend :smile:
    Good luck
     
  3. nicenycdick

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    I spent many of my younger days writing love songs about the women I didn't get. It helps get you through those days of doubt and sorrow. But move on. Save the song as a tribute to love, but go on to the next wonderful relationship that awaits you. It is just ahead...
     
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    Interesting lyrics, but I agree with the others, it may hurt for the moment, but soon you will realize that it's not so bad.
     
  5. Pitbull

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    Writing is good therapy.

    Things that are inside need to get out.
    Write some more.
    You will feel better.
    You will understand yourself better.

    Then find another woman
    Write her a song.
    Wish I could put my words to music and perform them (way too shy)
    I think I could be rich and just magically entrance women.
    Kind of like Barry White used to do
    (You are probably too young to know of him - Check him out on YouTube)
     
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