Broken Relationship & Venting My Feelings

[Bluebiss01]

I've recently come out of a relationship, being dumped for no apparent reason...I guess I just have to accept it and move on. I needed a way of venting my feelings so I wrote some lyrics.

I hope you read them and enjoy...Hard times

Comments would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks alot, Blue X

[Someone I'm Proud To Be]

I woke with this fear
Knew something was wrong
Asked myself questions
Found comfort in songs

Knew you'd be leaving
I guess I could tell
The way you were acting
Just put me through hell

Now I'm letting go of everything I had...

So I'll set you free
And if we're meant to be
You'll realise you're lonely
Come crawling back to me

But until that time comes
Know that you're the only one
Who's ever made me someone...

Someone I'm proud to be
Someone I'm proud to be

Now I'm left scared
Sometimes it just hits you
So well unprepared

I will be waiting
And I will be strong
A brave face for the ones
I've loved all along

Now I'm letting go of everything I had...

So I'll set you free
And if we're meant to be
You'll realise you're lonely
Come crawling back to me

But until that time comes
Know that you're the only one
Who's ever made me someone...

Someone I'm proud to be
Someone I'm proud to be

I don't know
Where it all went wrong
My heart aches
I never thought we'd be alone

So I set you free
And if we're meant to be
You'll realise you're lonely
Come crawling back to me

But until that time comes
Just know that you're the only one
Who's ever made me someone...

Someone I'm proud to be
(Sweet Bethanie)

 

[D_Jared Padalicki]

Good lyric man, but don't be so sad, those things happen and you are young! Let's make a deal, you have another week to be sad and after that you have to realise that nothing worse happend :smile:
Good luck

 

[nicenycdick]

I spent many of my younger days writing love songs about the women I didn't get. It helps get you through those days of doubt and sorrow. But move on. Save the song as a tribute to love, but go on to the next wonderful relationship that awaits you. It is just ahead...

 

[B_Think_Kink]

Interesting lyrics, but I agree with the others, it may hurt for the moment, but soon you will realize that it's not so bad.

 

[Pitbull]

Writing is good therapy.

Things that are inside need to get out.
Write some more.
You will feel better.
You will understand yourself better.

Then find another woman
Write her a song.
Wish I could put my words to music and perform them (way too shy)
I think I could be rich and just magically entrance women.
Kind of like Barry White used to do
(You are probably too young to know of him - Check him out on YouTube)