Brooke's story or how a big cock changed my life

[neon_beaches]

I took a bottle of Black Afghano body wash from a cedar shelf and returned to face him. The steam swirled around us both. He seemed godlike standing there, waiting for me to clean his body. But still, I had my pride.

What, I said, you think I'm just going to fuck you because you have that horse cock and that body.

Bear grunted, smirking. Looking me dead in the eyes he said, You're not going to fuck me Brooke. You're going to wash your friend off of me. Then I'm going to fuck you.

He turned around and braced his hands against the tile underneath one of the waterfall spouts, the warm water cascading down his back, over his rock solid haunches. His glutes looked like they belonged on a stallion, his ass jutting out as he leaned forward to allow me access.

I understood what he wanted. I squeezed the soap into my hands and started on his lower back, rubbing down onto his ass meat, spreading the cheeks, working my hands inside. As I massaged over his prostate he started to groan and I was feeling it too. His submissiveness shocked me. It was really hot. He could have crushed me with his thumb and he was letting me clean his ass.

I bent down behind him - my hand trembling, barely breathing. I reached forward between his thighs to grip the swollen shaft where it swung between his knees. My hand scarcely wrapped halfway around. I pulled his cock backward between his legs. Even in the sauna the heat coming off it made me gasp. As I started to peel back the foreskin I noticed a frothy white crust. I knew at once it was Chandler. I used both hands to work up a lather, gently milking him like some kind of prize steer, cleaning her juices in preparation for my own.

Bear was clearly enjoying this treatment. His meat started to swell and lengthen, twitching in my hands as the head emerged from the sheath. I had two hands on him and could barely encircle his girth. And he wasn't even hard. I heard him grunt, then his cock jerked in my hands and a clear stream of pre-come spit from the tip. I kept tugging. My pussy was throbbing, losing her poor mind. He was going to kill me and I didn't care. I reached up and started to caress his balls. They were even hotter, sizzling and pulsing and angry. It’s ok baby, I sighed. I’m gonna take care of you.

Coated in soap, his cock continued to grow. Some guys with big dicks don’t get super hard but this wasn’t the case with Bear. No way. That thing started to expand horribly. As long as my arm. A solid foot, then more.

Bear snarled and twisted around, his meat smacking me across the belly. He looked frustrated, enraged to the point of explosion. Instinctively I cradled his dick against my tits, stroking the glans, cooing, trying to sooth him. Because of his size and the height difference I could suck him standing up. I lapped at the head with my tongue, twirling silver ribbons of seed over my lips and tracing the smooth shaft down the base ringed with heavy black stubble. Then I moved him between my legs and straddled the shaft, closing my eyes with pleasure as he pulsed against my cunt. He had to be 3" just across the root. The circumference I don't even know. 9 inches, maybe more?

He was hard between my legs and yanked me in close, my tits mashing against his chest as he bent down and kissed me, hard, deep. I felt his need. I wasn’t going to be able to tease him much longer before he skewered me with that thing. I started to slide along his length, grinding my clit, already my first orgasm was close. I looked back and saw the head emerging well beyond ass.

Mother of god he was a monster. I had no fucking idea how it was going to work. I knew I couldn’t take him all inside me. But I hadn't come this far for nothing.

Bear lifted me under my arms and slammed me against the wall. Enough, he snarled, striding past me and vanishing into the steam. I heard the door slam shut. It was silent and warm. I slid down into a squat and moved my fingers over my cunt. She was pulsing, a low-level orgasm radiating through my hips. I shut my eyes and stroked my clit, gritting my teeth and coming immediately, squealing into the empty room. When I’d recovered I got to my feet and headed for the exit.

 

[neon_beaches]

Miles was waiting for me in the bathroom. He wore white slacks and a white polo shirt and seemed utterly unbothered by my nudity. Well duh Brooke, he’s totally gay, I thought. He handed me a towel and I patted myself dry. Bear wasn’t around.

He’s in a bit of a state, said Miles. He wants you in there ASAP.

In where?

The bedroom.

Miles opened a robe and and I slipped it over my shoulders. Then he held out a latching gold collar attached to a chain lead. You’ll put this on as well, he said.

I stared at the collar. For real?

For real. It’s not negotiable.

I nodded and he clasped the collar around my throat.

Is it too tight?

I shook my head.

He smiled and tucked a strand of hair behind my ear. You have a great body, he said. Your ass is amazing. You’ve put in the work and it shows.

I felt like a piece of meat on an auction block. Thanks, I said.

He’s going to really enjoy you. I can tell.

Then Miles took the chain in his hand and led me out of the bathroom down the long hall toward the master suit.

Bear was waiting on top of the clean sheets, totally nude, leaned back against the bank of pillows. He watched me like a wolf watches a lamb as Miles brought me forward, finally placing the chain in Bear’s hand.

The only light in the room came from the logs on the fire. Flames and shadows danced over the walls. It was very warm. I’ll never forget that. How warm the room was and how good it felt when Miles pulled the robe off exposing my flesh to Bear. He licked his lips and yanked the chain until I stood beside the bed. His cock lay casually draped across one thigh, dormant for the moment. He caught me taking it all in and grinned. My nipples were rock hard and I could literally feel the wet running down the inside of my legs.

Leave us, said Bear.

Miles frowned, looking somewhat disappointed, and bowed out of the room shutting the double doors behind him. I guess no one was immune to the allure of that cock.

Bear reached out, stroking my cheek, rubbing a thumb across my jutting nipple. A wave of pleasure shot up my spine and I shivered. I had never in all my life felt so vulnerable, so powerless or been so fucking turned on.

Bear coiled the chain around his fist, coaxing me up onto the bed. He gripped my hips and spun me around, sliding my ass into his face while my head hovered directly over his oiled meat. I knew what was happening. He was going to devour me. And he was going to take his time.

I felt his stubble on my inner thighs and his lips probing my cunt. I was going to explode.

He started in with his tongue, slurping at my pussy, probing my ass. He wrapped an arm around my waist, holding me in place so he could taste me at his leisure. His tongue was enormous, lapping, slathering. A low growl rumbled through his throat. Motherfucker was hungry. I’d never had my ass eaten with such wild abandon. I could feel my hips opening, my juices gushing. I started to buck and thrash, grinding my swollen clit on his jaw.

Oh my fucking god, I whimpered. Eat my ass like that baby. Your tongue is gonna make me come. I’m gonna come right now all over your face.

Orgasm overtook my body and I fell forward, planting my face into Bear’s crotch, inhaling the wild pheromones emanating from his swollen balls. I knew I must be spraying all over him as he slurped my meaty ass. I had no control. I was just a meal for a king.

Instinctively I wanted his cock, his seed. I started kissing his meat, washing it with my tongue. I kept coming and his dick started to grow, pulsing and emerging from the heavy foreskin sheath. I think I was screaming. I don’t remember. I couldn’t hear anything but the blood boiling in my ears as I watched that pole rise up before me. I wrapped my mouth around the slit and started to nurse, feeling the head expand and push my jaw open. A disgusting amount of drool and pre-come flowed freely down the shaft. He got hard so fucking fast. I tried to comprehend what I was looking at.

Bear, I gasped. What the actual fuck.

A tower of flesh throbbed before me. Fucking immense. The first several inches bulged incredibly thick, the foreskin peeled back taut beneath a massively flared glans. The shaft narrowed slightly toward the middle then swelled out again getting disgustingly fat at the base. I leaned against it - hard as steel - pumping with both hands as I gagged myself on the head, coating him in spit, not caring how I looked. I pulled back with ribbons of saliva hanging from my lips. I needed two more hands to cover him. He definitely had more than a foot of cock. I thought I might cry right then it was so beautiful. But that would come later.

The collar tightened, choking off my breath. I spun around and faced Bear, straddling his waist. He looked angry, enraged. I could tell it was time. He was ready to fuck.

He kept pressure on the chain and I folded forward, our mouths mashing together, his tongue slipping down my throat. My hearted skip a beat. It was almost…romantic.

I felt his breath heavy in my ear. Now, he said. Show me what you can do.

 

[neon_beaches]

He let the chain go slack and pulled a pillow over his face.

He wanted me to fuck his pole. He wanted me to show him how much I could take. He didn’t want to interfere. It was all on me.

I curled against his chest and reached back to guide him toward my opening. I had never put anything this large in my body. None of the black guys even came close. They had all been hung and very thick - but Bear was in another dimension. It literally felt like I was trying to maneuver a baseball bat between my legs. Unless I had a child there was no doubt this is the widest my poor pussy would ever have to stretch.

Rubbing the apple tip over my lips I tried to relax completely from the waist down. I wanted so much to please him. He needed to come. He deserved it. I could already tell this was a man I didn’t want to disappoint.

I pushed back hard, gasping as I felt my pussy swallow the head. Bear grunted his satisfaction but made no move to touch me. I already felt split the fuck open, like I was giving birth in reverse. I pushed back more and my legs started to spasm, his girth putting so much pressure on my clit that I was already fluttering with miniature overlapping orgasms. I planted my hands on his chest and started to circle my hips, letting my body slowly accommodate this absurd invasion. Another couple inches and I was moaning, muttering oh my fucking god like some kind of crazy mantra. I was fucking myself steadily on the first half of his cock. It was all I could take. Silent in the bedroom but for the crackling logs and my slurping juices.

Bear’s chest was starting to heave harder now and I knew I was pleasing him. His hands suddenly shot toward me, encircling my ass where it glided along his shaft. Oh no no no, I thought, he wants to go deeper.

Sure enough. Holding my hips by my gold belly chain he pulled me down onto his cock. I tried to resist but I was impaled. I heard myself scream - BEAR NO NO IT’S TOO MUCH - and then my arms locked up and I started to come - an orgasm from deep inside my core - hot tears streaming down my cheeks as he claimed me, my entire pussy contracting around his meat as I squirted all over that monster cock. A river between my legs. I had no control, my mouth frozen open in a silent scream. The lights flashed bright and then dark. Bear threw the pillow from his face and yanked the collar chain bringing us face to face. His tongue in my mouth, hot and thrashing. My muscles were totally slack. He was pumping me like a doll. I had no voice. I was a senseless tool for his pleasure.

How much of him was inside me. I didn’t know. I could feel him through my entire being and into my throat. His lips at my ear telling me, Good girl Brooke. Such a good girl taking that meat.

His thrusts had urgency. He was brushing at the door to my womb and he wanted release. It was almost too much. The edge of horrible pain and incredible pleasure. The line blurred and the pain became the pleasure and my orgasms were a constant unending wave of vibration through my being. I had never felt anything like it. My body was gone. I was gone.

Bear’s fingers wrapped around my throat and he was licking my face, covering me in his scent like a wild beast. I felt his cock start to pulse, buck and jump inside me. He was swelling, getting even thicker. This fucker was close to going off. He was going to unload inside me. I was finally going to feel it.

A growl started in his throat that became a savage roar as he exploded in my belly, thrusting deeper than any man had ever been. I can’t even describe the power, filling me with a steady stream of boiling seed. Rope after rope shot forth as I lay sobbing against his face, rolling in an ocean of senseless orgasm. He was coming so much and I was stuffed so full that there was nowhere for it to go. I could feel my stomach distending out with thick heavy jets of sperm. Now I knew why Anna hadn’t wanted him to stop. Why she didn’t care if she got pregnant. This was the bliss of wild abandon. Of being owned. Of being free.

My vision blurred and I was falling forward into a dark void. I blacked out briefly. When I woke up I was lying on Bear’s chest with his cock instead me, still twitching, still coming gently. I whimpered as he caressed my ass, drenched in sweat. I reached back to stroke his shaft, his bull balls. I think passed out again with him stroking my hair. When I woke up he had softened enough to begin to pull out. A horrible squelching as I moved forward, nearly having to stand up on the bed to let him fall free.

Come absolutely belched down my thighs. Steady gobs oozing out of my warped pussy. He must have come a goddamn quart. No joke. I started to apologize profusely for the horribly mess but Bear just laughed and pulled me in close. His dick lay covered in thick white paste sagging across his thigh, still burping up some final spurts onto the sheets.

Goddamn babe, you’re still coming.

Bear smiled and snorted. His dick looked like a massive sea slug and I could see from my come drying along his shaft how much I had taken: more than half. Maybe even two-thirds. But not nearly the whole thing. What a monster. Still, I was proud of myself.

Bear got up to put another log on the fire. I tried to say something but wasn’t capable of coherent speech.

Fucked to death, I thought. You did it girl. You really did it.

By the time he got back to bed I was asleep.

 

[Nickc716]

Awesome job Brooke! Great installment. A lot of the elements of your writing, especially that last sex scene, remind me of lja’s Kingdom of Cock series from a while back. Did you use that as inspiration for some of this?

 

[suckmachine]

Hey Girl..WOW! Im in total awe of your writing... U got me so excited that I would say this is one of the best stories I've ever read...I love when u said u felt like a "Human sacrifice" to Bear, the sheer brutal size and animal power is what all of us size Queens respond too. Brava!

 

[phonehome]

If you want to call it a "spinoff" or what ever but some of us would have been interested in reading how Brooke's beemer driving friends night at the club with the BBC's turned out.

 

[neon_beaches]

Awesome job Brooke! Great installment. A lot of the elements of your writing, especially that last sex scene, remind me of lja’s Kingdom of Cock series from a while back. Did you use that as inspiration for some of this?

wow someone knows his lpsg fiction. thought I was the only one...

Those stories are disgusting...in the best way. parts of them I’m like wtf - but others are really really hot.

low key I def took some inspiration.

 

[Nickc716]

wow someone knows his lpsg fiction. thought I was the only one...

Those stories are disgusting...in the best way. parts of them I’m like wtf - but others are really really hot.

low key I def took some inspiration.

Yeah same haha, it’s definitely an interesting read, but some parts are incredibly hot!

 

[deeperthanyou]

Very very nice I hope I hear more

 

[SSwede]

I'm not normally into stories, I need visual aids as well but this is awesome, I start reading just like a normal story and end up blowing a load, so hot, great work

 

[thirteenbyseven]

You are an amazingly accomplished erotic writer. Too bad there isn't a Pulitzer Prize for erotic fiction. Women are so under-represented as authors of actual suck 'em-fuck 'em works it's a shame. I could never attempt sexual prose. It would come out something like:

She lay languidly upon the inflated pool mat, her sleek string bikini-clad form taunting me from the waters of the infiniti pool. Turning her head, a single strand of golden blonde hair fell provocatively across one azure-blue eye. She spoke.

"You want it. I want it. You know I want it. You don't have to bullshit me and even if you do bullshit me you still get it."

Left unmentioned: The part about his tireless, relentless 18" phallic war club pummeling her nether regions.

 

[neon_beaches]

You are an amazingly accomplished erotic writer. Too bad there isn't a Pulitzer Prize for erotic fiction. Women are so under-represented as authors of actual suck 'em-fuck 'em works it's a shame. I could never attempt sexual prose. It would come out something like:

She lay languidly upon the inflated pool mat, her sleek string bikini-clad form taunting me from the waters of the infiniti pool. Turning her head, a single strand of golden blonde hair fell provocatively across one azure-blue eye. She spoke.

"You want it. I want it. You know I want it. You don't have to bullshit me and even if you do bullshit me you still get it."

Left unmentioned: The part about his tireless, relentless 18" phallic war club pummeling her nether regions.

That’s actually pretty darn funny. Like tongue in cheek good satire. Might be hot too. Give it a...shot! You never know. I bet you’d be better than you think.

I never planned or practiced writing erotic fiction. I write lots of other types of things so I figured why not write out some of my hottest fantasies as stories.

I’m so glad you are enjoying the Brooke saga. Your compliments mean a lot to me.

 

[neon_beaches]

I'm not normally into stories, I need visual aids as well but this is awesome, I start reading just like a normal story and end up blowing a load, so hot, great work

Best compliment I could ever hope for.

 

[giantguy23]

wow amazing story

 

[supersteve]

I wonder what happens next. She fucked bear but will she conquer him???
It's as if she's only reached Everest base camp but not yet reached the peak.

Here's hoping she gets to the summit

 

[suckmachine]

Or bear totally conquers her...

 

[justbigenuff]

OMG! Definitely one of the hawttest stories on LPSG, maybe anywhere. Can't believe how good you are neon_beaches. Really looking forward to more of your writing if you pursue it.

Psychologically (always my fave!!) it reminds me a bit of The Re-education of Alysen by alysen6 (hope I have those details right... yes, it's old, on from the .org era. I go back a ways!). There's such POWER in a huge cock, properly used.

 

[justbigenuff]

OMG! Definitely one of the hawttest stories on LPSG, maybe anywhere. Can't believe how good you are neon_beaches. Really looking forward to more of your writing if you pursue it.

Psychologically (always my fave!!) it reminds me a bit of The Re-education of Alysen by alysen6 (hope I have those details right... yes, it's old, from the .org era. I go back a ways!). There's such POWER in a huge cock, properly used.

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[neon_beaches]

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That’s one of my all-time fav stories!! Def an influence for Brooke’s adventures. God that story is hot.

I too have been around here for a long time. 2007 actually. Lurking, reading, plotting bwahahahaha.

 

[neetbix]

I can't give you any more accolades than others have already done ahead of me, but I want to thank you for sharing your gift of writing with us here. What a hot story! One of the best I've read in the way it develops and builds towards the eventual climax - pun intended - of Brooke being fucked - owned - by Bear.
I hope you have the time and desire to continue to develop this story.