And ladies and gents, that's probably where I'm going to leave this one, to be honest. I really more enjoy the buildup, than what comes afterwards. Do Dave and Nicole stay together? Most likely not. They probably awkwardly wrap up camp and go home and fight and split up, but idk. The finishing of the story, the "And they all lived happily ever after", never feels necessarily in these to me. The "happily ever after" is when an innocent, fat-assed redhead finally gets fucked proper, if you ask me.
I appreciate all of the comments along the way, which is why I write on here rather than literotica. Feels more engaging, I guess? I never have used literotica, but maybe I should put this stuff on there.
--BEHIND THE SCENES EXTRA--
I don't ever mention his measured size, on purpose, for those wondering. Use your imagination.
I was initially tempted to write this story, based almost exclusively from the JackandJill video with Noire, a fat-assed redhead. It's their three-way video, I wanna say the first time she fucked Jack's big dong. The whole time, Jack and Jill appear tense, like they are like bickering the entire video about little shit, like married couples do. Not their usual carefree attitudes.
I like to think that was because of Noire. She has an enormous booty, something Jill doesn't have, and maybe Jill was jealous? Idk, probably not, but that's what I like to imagine. Noire eventually mounts Jack on the couch, and bounces her big fat ass on him, better than anyone I've ever see do it before, while Jill sits annoyed. Jack almost cums, which is a big no-no on their show, as he needs to cum when the timer is over for the people paying to watch.
Noire says "is that okay??" as her ass bounces hard as fuck all the way up and down him nonstop, to which Jill replies "NO!". It almost appears as though Jack may have came in the condom at that point? Idk, maybe not. But that whole video I find myself coming back to over, and over again.
The campfire scene, of Nicole being able to take his entire cock, while the other girls couldn't, was the initial "pilot" of this story, too.
Regarding the tent scene, where Nicole forces Alexis to take more of Jake's huge dick. She controls Alexis' ass and pushes her back onto the pole. I got that from the scene with Shane Diesel, Jack Napier, and Tweety Valentine. Tweety crawls over to shane and starts sucking his cock, while Jack plops down behind her on his knees and starts fucking her doggy. Shane leans forward, grabs her ass and fucks Jack's cock with it essentially. Really toeing the gay line, as Shane has done in a lot of his videos. That was what I wanted Nicole to do, in case that didn't make sense.
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All that come here and enjoy this sort of stuff, or erotic lit in general. I think we all appreciate plot, and how much it can really intensify sexual encounters. I do like when stories add little pictures (which I did in the physical therapist story on here), and I feel like, even though by themself they seem mediocre, even the most fraction of a picture can add a ton to an already vivid story.
That being said, there is a lot of 3d work out there that lacks good plot (mainly due to lack of voice acting). I've been kicking around taking a 3d video, cutting out several gif's of different actions, and writing an entire story around it, peppering in the gifs as the story unfolds.
An easy example would be Mother's Warmth 2, from Jackerman. That story is perfectly good by itself, and the whole video is a masterpiece if you ask me. I just hate how there wasn't enough dirty talk. Idk if I'd get cancelled if I took an already good video like that and tried making it something else, but something I've been thinking about it.
Again, thanks for the kind words along the way!
Hope you enjoyed
I appreciate all of the comments along the way, which is why I write on here rather than literotica. Feels more engaging, I guess? I never have used literotica, but maybe I should put this stuff on there.
--BEHIND THE SCENES EXTRA--
I don't ever mention his measured size, on purpose, for those wondering. Use your imagination.
I was initially tempted to write this story, based almost exclusively from the JackandJill video with Noire, a fat-assed redhead. It's their three-way video, I wanna say the first time she fucked Jack's big dong. The whole time, Jack and Jill appear tense, like they are like bickering the entire video about little shit, like married couples do. Not their usual carefree attitudes.
I like to think that was because of Noire. She has an enormous booty, something Jill doesn't have, and maybe Jill was jealous? Idk, probably not, but that's what I like to imagine. Noire eventually mounts Jack on the couch, and bounces her big fat ass on him, better than anyone I've ever see do it before, while Jill sits annoyed. Jack almost cums, which is a big no-no on their show, as he needs to cum when the timer is over for the people paying to watch.
Noire says "is that okay??" as her ass bounces hard as fuck all the way up and down him nonstop, to which Jill replies "NO!". It almost appears as though Jack may have came in the condom at that point? Idk, maybe not. But that whole video I find myself coming back to over, and over again.
The campfire scene, of Nicole being able to take his entire cock, while the other girls couldn't, was the initial "pilot" of this story, too.
Regarding the tent scene, where Nicole forces Alexis to take more of Jake's huge dick. She controls Alexis' ass and pushes her back onto the pole. I got that from the scene with Shane Diesel, Jack Napier, and Tweety Valentine. Tweety crawls over to shane and starts sucking his cock, while Jack plops down behind her on his knees and starts fucking her doggy. Shane leans forward, grabs her ass and fucks Jack's cock with it essentially. Really toeing the gay line, as Shane has done in a lot of his videos. That was what I wanted Nicole to do, in case that didn't make sense.
----
All that come here and enjoy this sort of stuff, or erotic lit in general. I think we all appreciate plot, and how much it can really intensify sexual encounters. I do like when stories add little pictures (which I did in the physical therapist story on here), and I feel like, even though by themself they seem mediocre, even the most fraction of a picture can add a ton to an already vivid story.
That being said, there is a lot of 3d work out there that lacks good plot (mainly due to lack of voice acting). I've been kicking around taking a 3d video, cutting out several gif's of different actions, and writing an entire story around it, peppering in the gifs as the story unfolds.
An easy example would be Mother's Warmth 2, from Jackerman. That story is perfectly good by itself, and the whole video is a masterpiece if you ask me. I just hate how there wasn't enough dirty talk. Idk if I'd get cancelled if I took an already good video like that and tried making it something else, but something I've been thinking about it.
Again, thanks for the kind words along the way!
Hope you enjoyed
