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Wrote this for a friend ages ago. Didn't realize I still had a copy of it saved, but found it in my gmail account while looking for a story for another friend. It was written on the fly in gmail, so I apologize for any typos, etc. Seems a bit silly reading it several years after it was written, but maybe somebody here will get a kick out of it. Starts off a bit slow, but there is sex in it eventually.:biggrin1:
Edited to add: sorry about the formatting; it looked fine when I posted it, but as soon as I clicked submit, it got all wonky. If anybody knows how to fix it, please let me know.
Coffee at the Arabesque Cafe
The torso rocks and the eyes are keepers
Now where'd we sample those legs?
I'm thinking Marilyn 4.0 in the Green Book
I like the neon I love the music
Anachronistic but nice
The seamless segue from fun to fever
It's a sweet device
"Green Book"--Steely Dan
Even in a college town filled with cafes, the Arabesque stood out as
something special, a place tinged with magic. Louise had been walking
listlessly, even a bit aimlessly, through downtown when she'd spied
it. The white exterior and tall narrow windows made it seem out of
place in Northern California, made it seem more like something you'd
encounter in Morocco or Tangiers, and yet, there it was, nestled in
between an art supply store and a women's shoe store. The rich aroma
of dark-roasted coffee assailed her nostrils as she opened the heavy
wood door, cherry, or perhaps red stained oak, beautifully grained and
worn by the passing of many hands.
She noted the stark whiteness of the plastered walls, sharply
contrasting with the dark wood trim as she made her way to the counter
to order. As she was waiting for her mint tea, more details caught
her observant eye. Perhaps most striking, so striking in fact that
she wondered how she'd missed it upon first entering the cafe, was a
contiguous band of green neon running just below the crown molding,
casting an other-worldy green glow onto the pressed tin ceiling. The
effect was striking, the only touch of modernity in a cafe whose other
furnishings would have been quite at home in the nineteenth
century--austere wooden tables and chairs, and a few lithographs
depicting scenes of Arabian life from around the turn of the century.
A few tasteful potted plants near the front windows completed the
sparse decor. Even the music was a bit anachronistic--Miles Davis if
she wasn't mistaken. Smooth haunted jazz that hinted at a segue into
something more.
Her mint tea came in a tall pint glass with an ornately filigreed cup
holder, which kept her hand from getting burned as she made her way to
a table near the front window. There was pretty steady foot traffic
on the sidewalk outside the cafe, and if the book she'd brought along
didn't keep her attention, she could always people watch.
She'd made it through the first fifteen pages of One Hundred Years of
Solitude when he walked into the cafe. Though she continued holding
the book, she didn't read another word. He was tall, well over six
feet, and aside from the shaved head and modern clothing he could have
come straight from a Viking battlefield for a coffee break. He wasn't
gaunt, nor was he stocky. His broad shoulders and deep chest radiated
strength, power, and there was a feral intensity in his gaze that
attracted her immediately. There was something of the wild animal
about him, a sense of unease and tension that made him seem dangerous,
dangerous and even a bit sexy. No, she thought, more than a bit sexy.
He was wearing a long sleeved shirt and a light jacket that looked
like something from a surplus store. His long legs were sheathed in
faded jeans, and his huge feet were encased in badly worn combat
boots. She couldn't help but notice as he walked by that there was a
pronounced bulge in the crotch of his jeans. It set her mind to
wondering.
His movements as he made his way to the register were deliberate yet
fluid. he moved with surprising grace for a big fellow. He pulled a
battered leather wallet from the front pocket of his shoulder bag and
paid for his large coffee. She could tell as he made his way to the
front table on the opposite side of the door from her own table that
the pint glass he was carrying must have been burning his hand, but he
neither hurried nor betrayed any sign of pain. She was intrigued.
He sat, placing his coffee on the small round table, and began to
rummage through his bag. Louise, at this point, made no pretense of
doing anything other than staring directly at him; her book was held
droopingly between her hands. He pulled a battered trade paperback
from his bag and placed it on the table. He glanced over at Louise as
he did so and noticed that she was looking at him. He returned her
gaze, noting as he did so that she was particularly attractive. She
was incredibly petite, no more than five feet in height, and less than
a hundred pounds soaking wet. In fact, at first glance, he'd mistaken
her for a much younger girl, a teen even perhaps, but as he drank her
in with his gaze, he realized that she was no girl; she was a woman.
The delicate skin of her face, the sharp planes of it, framed two of
the most intense eyes he'd ever seen, eyes that were at this very
moment fixed upon him. He held her gaze for a moment, and then looked
away, visibly tense, perhaps even shaken. He picked up his book,
thumbed about a third of the way through, found his page, and began
reading. Louise gazed at him a moment more, and then returned to her
own book, but her mind wasn't on it. She found herself glancing at
him across the cafe, and more than once, she found him returning her
gaze. Every time, though, he looked away. He was either shy or
dense, she decided. She was hoping it was the former. She had a
great disdain for stupidity.
David was shy, and at times he could be quite dense, but generally he
was very clever, perhaps too clever even for his own good.
Overthinking crippled him at times, and this was one of those times.
He couldn't keep his eyes off her, and yet he was afraid to approach
her, unsure that her eyes had been welcoming, worried that he was
imagining something in her gaze that wasn't really there. He was
worried of making a fool of himself, but at the same time, he was
finding himself irresistibly drawn to this woman. Her long, lithe
dancer's legs were crossed high, and in the darkness created by her
incredibly sharp charcoal wool skirt, he couldn't tell if she was
wearing panties or not, but for some reason, the question plagued him
so thoroughly that he found he couldn't concentrate whatsoever on One
Hundred Years of Solitude, even though he'd been enjoying it
immensely. She'd captivated his attention to the point where he could
think of nothing else.
Finally, Louise decided that if anything were to happen, she'd have to
go hit the guy over the head, which she was willing to do if it came
down to it. She got up from her table and began walking across the
tiled floor of the cafe towards his table, no clearly formulated plan
of what she would do once she got there, but she was a quick thinker,
and she had every reason to believe she'd think of something. Sure
enough, as she neared his table, She could make out the title of the
book he was reading, the very same book she'd just set down on her own
table next to her tea a moment before. "I couldn't help but notice
your taste in literature," she said. "It must be very similar to my
own; I'm reading the very same book right now," and with this, she
gestured vaguely in the direction of her table. "I'm Louise, by the
way."
"David," he said, looking up at her with an odd mixture of surprise
and blatant desire. He wasn't exactly sure why such a fox had just
walked over to his table to talk to him, but he was desperately hoping
that she wasn't going to leave anytime soon. "It's always nice to run
into another fan of magical realism," said David. She agreed,
enchanting him even further with a bit of mirthful laughter. He
invited her to share his table, and she did so gladly, returning first
to her table to grab her book, her purse, and her tea.
Their discussion was animated, wide-ranging and playful. They talked
of the book they were reading, the cafe, the town, bits and pieces of
their lives, and of course, the people walking by outside the window.
Louise laughed as a group of emo kids walked by, the boys wearing
tight capris and bullet belts, and David joined her, their laughter
mingling pleasantly. They'd talked for a good hour, the dregs of his
coffee long grown cold, when David realized he hadn't taken his eyes
from her the whole time they'd been talking. He was utterly
captivated, and utterly aroused.
(continued)
Edited to add: sorry about the formatting; it looked fine when I posted it, but as soon as I clicked submit, it got all wonky. If anybody knows how to fix it, please let me know.
Coffee at the Arabesque Cafe
The torso rocks and the eyes are keepers
Now where'd we sample those legs?
I'm thinking Marilyn 4.0 in the Green Book
I like the neon I love the music
Anachronistic but nice
The seamless segue from fun to fever
It's a sweet device
"Green Book"--Steely Dan
Even in a college town filled with cafes, the Arabesque stood out as
something special, a place tinged with magic. Louise had been walking
listlessly, even a bit aimlessly, through downtown when she'd spied
it. The white exterior and tall narrow windows made it seem out of
place in Northern California, made it seem more like something you'd
encounter in Morocco or Tangiers, and yet, there it was, nestled in
between an art supply store and a women's shoe store. The rich aroma
of dark-roasted coffee assailed her nostrils as she opened the heavy
wood door, cherry, or perhaps red stained oak, beautifully grained and
worn by the passing of many hands.
She noted the stark whiteness of the plastered walls, sharply
contrasting with the dark wood trim as she made her way to the counter
to order. As she was waiting for her mint tea, more details caught
her observant eye. Perhaps most striking, so striking in fact that
she wondered how she'd missed it upon first entering the cafe, was a
contiguous band of green neon running just below the crown molding,
casting an other-worldy green glow onto the pressed tin ceiling. The
effect was striking, the only touch of modernity in a cafe whose other
furnishings would have been quite at home in the nineteenth
century--austere wooden tables and chairs, and a few lithographs
depicting scenes of Arabian life from around the turn of the century.
A few tasteful potted plants near the front windows completed the
sparse decor. Even the music was a bit anachronistic--Miles Davis if
she wasn't mistaken. Smooth haunted jazz that hinted at a segue into
something more.
Her mint tea came in a tall pint glass with an ornately filigreed cup
holder, which kept her hand from getting burned as she made her way to
a table near the front window. There was pretty steady foot traffic
on the sidewalk outside the cafe, and if the book she'd brought along
didn't keep her attention, she could always people watch.
She'd made it through the first fifteen pages of One Hundred Years of
Solitude when he walked into the cafe. Though she continued holding
the book, she didn't read another word. He was tall, well over six
feet, and aside from the shaved head and modern clothing he could have
come straight from a Viking battlefield for a coffee break. He wasn't
gaunt, nor was he stocky. His broad shoulders and deep chest radiated
strength, power, and there was a feral intensity in his gaze that
attracted her immediately. There was something of the wild animal
about him, a sense of unease and tension that made him seem dangerous,
dangerous and even a bit sexy. No, she thought, more than a bit sexy.
He was wearing a long sleeved shirt and a light jacket that looked
like something from a surplus store. His long legs were sheathed in
faded jeans, and his huge feet were encased in badly worn combat
boots. She couldn't help but notice as he walked by that there was a
pronounced bulge in the crotch of his jeans. It set her mind to
wondering.
His movements as he made his way to the register were deliberate yet
fluid. he moved with surprising grace for a big fellow. He pulled a
battered leather wallet from the front pocket of his shoulder bag and
paid for his large coffee. She could tell as he made his way to the
front table on the opposite side of the door from her own table that
the pint glass he was carrying must have been burning his hand, but he
neither hurried nor betrayed any sign of pain. She was intrigued.
He sat, placing his coffee on the small round table, and began to
rummage through his bag. Louise, at this point, made no pretense of
doing anything other than staring directly at him; her book was held
droopingly between her hands. He pulled a battered trade paperback
from his bag and placed it on the table. He glanced over at Louise as
he did so and noticed that she was looking at him. He returned her
gaze, noting as he did so that she was particularly attractive. She
was incredibly petite, no more than five feet in height, and less than
a hundred pounds soaking wet. In fact, at first glance, he'd mistaken
her for a much younger girl, a teen even perhaps, but as he drank her
in with his gaze, he realized that she was no girl; she was a woman.
The delicate skin of her face, the sharp planes of it, framed two of
the most intense eyes he'd ever seen, eyes that were at this very
moment fixed upon him. He held her gaze for a moment, and then looked
away, visibly tense, perhaps even shaken. He picked up his book,
thumbed about a third of the way through, found his page, and began
reading. Louise gazed at him a moment more, and then returned to her
own book, but her mind wasn't on it. She found herself glancing at
him across the cafe, and more than once, she found him returning her
gaze. Every time, though, he looked away. He was either shy or
dense, she decided. She was hoping it was the former. She had a
great disdain for stupidity.
David was shy, and at times he could be quite dense, but generally he
was very clever, perhaps too clever even for his own good.
Overthinking crippled him at times, and this was one of those times.
He couldn't keep his eyes off her, and yet he was afraid to approach
her, unsure that her eyes had been welcoming, worried that he was
imagining something in her gaze that wasn't really there. He was
worried of making a fool of himself, but at the same time, he was
finding himself irresistibly drawn to this woman. Her long, lithe
dancer's legs were crossed high, and in the darkness created by her
incredibly sharp charcoal wool skirt, he couldn't tell if she was
wearing panties or not, but for some reason, the question plagued him
so thoroughly that he found he couldn't concentrate whatsoever on One
Hundred Years of Solitude, even though he'd been enjoying it
immensely. She'd captivated his attention to the point where he could
think of nothing else.
Finally, Louise decided that if anything were to happen, she'd have to
go hit the guy over the head, which she was willing to do if it came
down to it. She got up from her table and began walking across the
tiled floor of the cafe towards his table, no clearly formulated plan
of what she would do once she got there, but she was a quick thinker,
and she had every reason to believe she'd think of something. Sure
enough, as she neared his table, She could make out the title of the
book he was reading, the very same book she'd just set down on her own
table next to her tea a moment before. "I couldn't help but notice
your taste in literature," she said. "It must be very similar to my
own; I'm reading the very same book right now," and with this, she
gestured vaguely in the direction of her table. "I'm Louise, by the
way."
"David," he said, looking up at her with an odd mixture of surprise
and blatant desire. He wasn't exactly sure why such a fox had just
walked over to his table to talk to him, but he was desperately hoping
that she wasn't going to leave anytime soon. "It's always nice to run
into another fan of magical realism," said David. She agreed,
enchanting him even further with a bit of mirthful laughter. He
invited her to share his table, and she did so gladly, returning first
to her table to grab her book, her purse, and her tea.
Their discussion was animated, wide-ranging and playful. They talked
of the book they were reading, the cafe, the town, bits and pieces of
their lives, and of course, the people walking by outside the window.
Louise laughed as a group of emo kids walked by, the boys wearing
tight capris and bullet belts, and David joined her, their laughter
mingling pleasantly. They'd talked for a good hour, the dregs of his
coffee long grown cold, when David realized he hadn't taken his eyes
from her the whole time they'd been talking. He was utterly
captivated, and utterly aroused.
(continued)
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