barry6290
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Please only post if going to be positive. If you don't like it read other stories. Plenty of other people are loving it.This story is so chaotic.
This story is so chaotic.
Please only post if going to be positive. If you don't like it read other stories. Plenty of other people are loving it.
You are entitled to your opinion but I am a first time author and trying from different points of view as I want to do something different.I disagree with that. There was nothing wrong with his comment. I also thought it felt chaotic because of so many different points of view. That wasn’t a mean comment, but it was an honest one. Now do I think he should of explained a bit why he felt it was chaotic like I did, absolutely that way it can be constructive for the you the author. Now don’t you think as the author it’s unfair to say “only say positive things” that’s kind of like saying. “Only stroke my ego or don’t say anything at all”. Trust me there is a difference between an honest critique (with reasons given) and just being down right mean attacking the story and or the author personally.
I really enjoy the different point of views.You are entitled to your opinion but I am a first time author and trying from different points of view as I want to do something different.
You are entitled to your opinion but I am a first time author and trying from different points of view as I want to do something different.
Thanks just trying something different as I think stories/films/TV videogames can be better of you view from point of view of several characters.I really enjoy the different point of views.
Thanks for at least explaining your point of view not just being negative. I understand can be a little chaotic sometimes but is a first time Story.That’s fair.
Thanks for at least explaining your point of view not just being negative. I understand can be a little chaotic sometimes but is a first time Story.
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