Crossing Lines With My Gym Bro; Joey And Eric
- Thread starter Joey Rubio
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So does anyone have any ideas for how the story should continue? Should the guys have full sex? Or stay more platonic? What should happen on the Vegas trip? Another threesome with a woman? Or maybe they go to a wild bachelor party. Any ideas?
Much like a lot of their story so far it would be a bit of a slow build to them actually going the full way and one of them fucking the other, but the last chapter certainly puts them on that road.
I would think their trip to Vegas probably ends up with them going somewhere and getting horny, maybe a strip club or something else, but ultimately they end up back at the room with each other and no girls. Still horny, they decide to take care of themselves, but this time they don't have the toy. Taking up similar positions to before Eric takes Joey into his hands like he did before but jerks him before moving in close so they are rubbing their dicks together, humping against each other, staring at each other as they moan, and then as the pleasure heightens they get lost in the moment and their lips meet in a kiss that quickly turns hungry and passionate, leading to them both blowing their loads and falling asleep on the bed together.
I would think their trip to Vegas probably ends up with them going somewhere and getting horny, maybe a strip club or something else, but ultimately they end up back at the room with each other and no girls. Still horny, they decide to take care of themselves, but this time they don't have the toy. Taking up similar positions to before Eric takes Joey into his hands like he did before but jerks him before moving in close so they are rubbing their dicks together, humping against each other, staring at each other as they moan, and then as the pleasure heightens they get lost in the moment and their lips meet in a kiss that quickly turns hungry and passionate, leading to them both blowing their loads and falling asleep on the bed together.
Wow, ‘Di No’ you’ve pretty much got the next chapter well outlined!! The story seems to write itself! Is this AI maybe?! 
I would like to see one of them tasting the others Precum and possibly cum, be it intentionally or by accident, but it turns them on to want to do more, eventually to BJs and edging each other restrained, before they eventually have full sex. We haven’t waited this long for them not to go all the way at some point in the future!!
After this they can really embrace the lifestyle and maybe bring a young college jock from the gym to teach him to serve them!
I would like to see one of them tasting the others Precum and possibly cum, be it intentionally or by accident, but it turns them on to want to do more, eventually to BJs and edging each other restrained, before they eventually have full sex. We haven’t waited this long for them not to go all the way at some point in the future!!
After this they can really embrace the lifestyle and maybe bring a young college jock from the gym to teach him to serve them!
Wow, ‘Di No’ you’ve pretty much got the next chapter well outlined!! The story seems to write itself! Is this AI maybe?!
I would like to see one of them tasting the others Precum and possibly cum, be it intentionally or by accident, but it turns them on to want to do more, eventually to BJs and edging each other restrained, before they eventually have full sex. We haven’t waited this long for them not to go all the way at some point in the future!!
After this they can really embrace the lifestyle and maybe bring a young college jock from the gym to teach him to serve them!
Haha, unless my filthy mind is AI then no.
The cum tasting etc is possibly an option in the scenario above where one of them shoots far enough for it to land on one's mouth and then they share a final kiss, also sharing the shot of cum between them.
- Jaqc,
They should def have a threesome or orgy first before they have sex. 1 on 1.
They already had a threesome. But I do think another would be interesting. An orgy would be interesting too
I just think that them having full gay sex would kind of change a lot of the story. This story is about a unique relationship between two guys with a mysterious sexuality. If they have sex and become boyfriends or something then the very title of this thread would be betrayed. I just like them more as bros who are fooling around and not really sure what they're doing. But I can see how the logical end-point for the story's build-up could probably be sex.
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Had this kind of relationship a few times so I can confidently say that full on sex is inevitable in their trajectory. Whether it happens sooner or later down the road in the friendship, it’s definitely on Eric’s mind.
Also as a writer myself seems really weird to just pickup someone else’s story cause everyone’s horny and impatient. He doesn’t owe us anything and has a life. He’ll either continue it when he’s ready or he won’t.
I would agree being a fellow writer.
It is also difficult to get into the minds of the characters too and to do them justice when they are not your own. Of course it is possible but you have to be very careful not to stray into the realms of fan fiction.
- Jaqc,
Its still better than nothing and its blatantly obvious the writer has no intend on coming back to this.
for all of you writers. Stop starting things you won’t finish or declare finished when you get bored.
for all of you writers. Stop starting things you won’t finish or declare finished when you get bored.
The real problem is that we have to wait in limbo for months without knowing if the author will ever return. Besides it's not like fan stories of a fictional story hurt anyone. The author may never even see them. So what's the actual problem with fans continuing a half-dead work?
I agree.
As a fan of this story I would enjoy seeing it develop further but will lose interest if we have to wait many many months between chapters, and if the original writer is unable to spend the necessary time to write it’s unfair that people are badgering him to do so, especially when someone else is willing to continue the story for them.
Although if at any point the original author wants to continue from where they last left off or even from where the new writer has finished we would very much welcome their return!
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