Dedication Part 1

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    The sun broke through the small areas on the blinds of Moe's bedroom window. At the same time, his alarm went off, at 11am. Moe slowly stirred out of bed, hit the snooze button, and stumbled back into bed, and put his arm around his girlfriend, Sarah. If Moe didn't set the alarm, even on a Saturday morning, him and Sarah would probably end up sleeping well into the afternoon.

    "Morning beautiful." Moe mumbled.

    Sarah turned onto her back, her face inches from Moe's. "Hi..." She said, in a cute, sleepy way.

    They kissed a few seconds. "Mmm, I love your morning breath." Moe said, jokingly.

    "Shut up." She said, and turned onto her right side, so her and Moe were facing each other. She was in her sweat shorts, and one of Moe's T-shirts, while Moe slept only in his boxers.

    Sarah and Moe hadn't had sex the night before, but they didn't mind. They liked morning sex better. Besides, they were up with their friends all night, which is why Sarah just slept over Moe's apartment. After their friends left, they both just knocked out. Moe was a light skinned guy, 6'2", about 200 lbs. He worked out, so he had a build to him, but he never watched what he ate, so he had some pads of fat here and there. Nothing too significant, though. His hair was short, buzzed all around the same length, with his beard the same length as his hair. He did shave off his mustache completely, along with all the hair below his jawline.

    Sarah was a pretty girl, taller than average, standing at 5'8". She was relatively large up top, being a 32C, which was good for Moe since he was a breast man. Even though C isn't that much larger than average, they looked massive on Sarah's fit, small frame. She played tennis at their college, and managed to keep in shape. This, of course, led to her having a perfect, bubble butt. She had red hair, with a small amount of freckles that ran across her nose and cheeks. She had light green eyes.

    Sarah and Moe made out for a few moments, and Sarah slowly moved her hand down Moe's stomach, and began to stroke his already partial morning wood to full erection. She turned it so it was pointing toward Moe's bellybutton, and felt it grow more and more erect. It swelled, poking it's head out of Moe's boxer waist line, and kept growing, just passing his bellybutton.

    "You feel so big this morning..." Sarah said softly, and suspiciously. Moe didn't respond, he just bent over and kissed her neck. Sarah titled her head slightly, enjoying her neck being kissed. After a few moments, Sarah ducked under the covers, and pulled Moe's boxers down to his mid thighs, and began kissing his large penis. "I keep forgetting how thick you are..." She said, unable to fit her hand fully around his member, and began to put her mouth around his large penis head.

    She worked at it for a few moments, and then stopped. "What's wrong?" Moe asked.

    "Why does your penis taste like lotion?"

    "I don't know." Moe said, being a bad liar.

    Sarah threw the covers off herself, onto the ground. "Are you jelqing again?!" She said, angrily.

    "No! I told you I stopped!" Jelqing was a penis enlargement exercise, that have worked for some men, to gain some mass in their penis size, and Moe did it using lotion.

    "I was with you all day yesterday, there is no way lotion could have gotten on your penis! You did it while I asleep!" Sarah said, slightly louder.

    "First, keep your voice down, my roommates will hear..." Moe said.

    "I don't give a shit! Why are you so selfish?!"

    "I said keep your voice down! This isn't your damn house that you can act however you want! Let me explain!" Moe said, very agitated at this point.

    Sarah would've kept yelling, but Moe was right. Sarah did let her temper get the better of herself, only thinking of herself and ignoring how rude she may be acting. But she knew she was right. "Go, explain."

    Moe paused. His erection had subsided at this point. He was sitting on his bed, while Sarah was standing, his flaccid penis hanging against, and almost over, his thigh.

    "See! You are jelqing! Don't you get it, sex is starting to HURT me now! I don't like doing it anymore! You are getting too big!"

    Moe kept his face away from her, and kept an angry look on his face, but knew she was right. He was being selfish, but he couldn't stop himself. Him and Sarah have been together for about a year, and over that year, Moe went from 6.5 inches long, and 5 inches around to 9.5 inches long, and 6.5 inches around. He was jelqing and stretching his penis, which is what he read about on the Internet, as a way to naturally enlarge his penis. At first, it worked great. Moe gained size, stamina, and hardness. He was able to last longer, stay erect after an orgasm for much longer, and able to bring Sarah to multi orgasm. This got Moe addicted to the exercises, and when Moe reached about 8 inches in length seemed to be the peak for her. She couldn't get enough of him, and they had sex constantly. After that size, he grew a bit more, and he was bumping her cervix to hard, and his girth was beginning to be uncomfortable. Moe didn't stop, and just kept with the exercises.

    "Please...Moe...I can't handle this. Why do you not care that it hurts me? While you are having orgasm after orgasm, I'm writhing in pain, and have to make sure I'm not torn or bleeding after we have sex! If you keep getting bigger, I won't even be able to have sex with you!"

    Still, all this talk of him being too big, and getting bigger, made him hard again. Still, he remained silent.

    "And look! you don't even care. It's up to YOUR chest!" His penis head reached about an inch below his mid-chest, because he was sitting, and kind of slouched over. "One day you are gonna puncture my lung!"

    There was a long pause, and Moe's giant erection slowly began to subside again. "Alright fine, I'll stop."

    "No. You said that 100 times. You probably won't." The whole time Sarah was arguing she was getting dressed. After saying this, she walked out.

    Moe say there for a few minutes, his 5 inch flaccid penis resting on the bed between his legs. He got up, and went to his computer, and began searching and making purchases. This wasn't enough, his penis wasn't big enough, and Sarah wasn't gonna stop him. He wanted to be the biggest in the world. And for some reason, he was able to gain much, much more than other guys doing the same exercises as him, and he wasn't about to give up on this luck he was bestowed with.

    Moe opened up his online chat program, and began talking with his online friend, Sam, who had been sort of his penis enlargement mentor, teaching him what to do to get the best gains.

    Moe: Hey, Sam, Sarah bitched at me again.

    Sam: Really? you gonna stop then?

    Moe: Fuck no. I need better ways to grow without using lotion. She can smell that stuff.

    Sam: You mean devices? What did you get so far?

    Moe: I got the jelqing thing, with the wheels or whatever.

    Sam: Alright, yeah, that would work. Buy a clamp too.

    They talked about the details, and other, less "mainstream" ideas of PE, and Moe brought everything he needed.

    He looked down, and began tugging at his penis.. It grew hard again, as he remembered all the ranting Sarah did about his penis being too big. It was such a turn on to hear that. That his penis was getting so big, it was making her angry. He reached full erection quickly, and began using both his hands to stroke himself, still having a good two inches left. He turned on a random porno on his computer, and moved to his bed, and laid onto his back. He stroked more and more, his penis curved slightly to the right, but upwards as well, but his penis was pointed upward. Moe bucked his body a few times, as he grew closer and closer to orgasm. He moved his left hand down to his balls, and cupped them through his boxers, wondering silently why they seemed to have enlarged in size too. His penis was out of the hole in the front of his boxers.

    Moe paused, and began to attempt to take off his boxers. attempting to bend his erect penis downward so that he could slide his boxers off was proving difficult. The exercises made his penis rock hard, and it wouldn't bend. After some tugging, he managed to get the waist band over his penis head, and pulled it down. If anything, the fact that he was struggling with his penis because it was too big just turned him on more. Moe put his hands around his shaft again, and squeezed, causing the head to swell up slightly, and then he let go, causing it to go back to normal. Moe glanced back and forth between his huge penis, and the porno, which had a huge porn star on it, having sex with a girl. Moe almost smiled, thinking of how he could probably be bigger than this porn star that most people consider huge, and that Moe might grow even more. Moe glanced at his penis again, after he noticed something weird. At that moment, Moe realized that he was unable to touch his thumb to his finger around his shaft, and this caused him to climax. He shot a massive load, straight into the air, that almost hit the ceiling of his room. A thick, massive stream upward, followed by another, and another. Moe's body bucked with each stream, his head moving forward slightly each time. A good 10 streams shot, at full strength, followed by 4-5, each less than the last, followed by 2-3 small spurts. He laid there for a few moments, taking deep breaths. His erection remained fully hard, and he took a deep breath, and looked at the mess he made. He panted a few times, glanced back at the porno. His penis remained rock hair, still throbbing with life, and repeated the process.
     
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    Great story mate love to here more from you pm me some time
     
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    this is really hot, and well done. keep going!
     
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    VERY WELL WRITTEN--love the detailed descriptions of moe, his cock and his girlfriend
     
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    Loving this! More please!
     
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    best story on here in a long time, i look forward to reading more.
     
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    Good story; now who will he find to satisfy him?:cool:
     
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    Part 2

    Moe got his enlargement devices, and managed to hide them from Sarah, and continued his exercises. In a way, Moe was growing more obsessed, but the issue was, even though Sarah was complaining, Moe's size still seemed to be an amazing sensation to her. Sarah was loving it, still having multiple orgasms from Moe's staying power, and overall size. Moe couldn't figure out why his size was making her complain so much. He was always attentive to the way she felt, he never went too deep.

    Moe was dedicated, and his PE exercises took up more and more of his alone time. Slowly, after a month or so, Moe managed to pass the 10 inch mark, and reached 7 inches around. This, actually, was his initial goal when he began his exercises, but never thought he would actually reach this size. Now that he had reached it, it wasn't enough for him, he still wanted more.

    He was gaining faster than he ever was, which just motivated him more and more. Shortly after Moe reached his10x7, things began to fizzle with Sarah. She wouldn't have sex with him as often, it would be slow and boring, she even bled a few times.

    One afternoon was the breaking point. After some foreplay, Moe slowly inserted himself into Sarah. "Ah...ahhh please go slow." She asked. Moe listened, and slowly began pumping. "Wait, wait, ah, ouch!" She said, and began pushing her hands against Moe's hips to get him to pull out. "Don't go so deep please..."

    "God dammit." Moe said, slightly frustrated.

    "Don't be a dick!" She said. "This is your fucking fault, I asked you to stop the exercises months ago."

    Moe paused. He was sick of this. There are girls out there that would kill for a penis this big. And girls who wouldn't make such a big deal. "Fine, you know what? I have still be doing the exercises, and I'm not gonna stop anytime soon. If you can't handle that, then that is your problem."

    The fight escalated, and Sarah eventually stormed out of Moe's apartment, yelling how the relationship has ended between them. Moe sat there, still nude, his flaccid penis hanging over his right thigh. It was as big as the average guy while hard. He stood up, got his best set of clothes, and went to a friend's party just hear his apartment. He met up with some friends, chatting with some people, and fished around trying to find a girl to take home that night.

    He glanced over, and saw an amazing girl, sitting on a couch, chatting with a guy. She was one of the most adorable girls Moe had ever seen. She was 5'6", and was relatively thin, almost model thin. She still managed to keep a nice, firm, bubble butt. What really got Moe's attention, being a breast man, was that she was absolutely massive. He actually debated if they were real or not, and couldn't even guess how big her bra size was. She had short, red hair, down to her neck, green eyes, and small facial features. Moe was, at first, slightly annoyed that she was already talking to a guy at the party, but then realized it was Tim, who was sitting next to his girlfriend. Tim knew Moe would show up, and made sure to keep this girl occupied for Moe.

    "Tim, you fat asshole, what's up." Moe said, walking up to him. Tim was one of Moe's skinnier friends, and it became a running joke to call him obese.

    "Moe, what's up man." Tim said.

    "Hi Moe." Tim's girlfriend said.

    "Hey, what's up."

    "Moe, this is Mollie." Tim said, and Moe put out his hand.

    "Nice to meet you Mollie."

    Mollie smiled. "You too."

    They four chatted a bit, and Mollie was one of Tim's friends from high school, and Moe slowly phased out Tim and his girlfriend, making the convo between only him and Mollie.

    Moe took a mental note to thank Tim, as she seemed to flirt more and more as the evening went on. Moe actually mentally debated if her breasts were real, but realized they were when every tiny movement sent them shaking with a ton of force. They started with small talk at first, but as Moe drank a few beers, his confidence grew a bit, and he acted more like himself. Moe didn't like to get wasted, he only enjoyed a few beers here or there. Mollie was a bit more tipsy than him, but didn't want to get wasted either.

    Moe never considered himself a charming guy. He had an odd sense of humor, and he relied on that. It was about a 50/50 hit, though. Half the time, girls found him hilarious, laughing at almost every joke he made, even if they weren't flirting. The other half, they found his jokes too blunt, and were usually shocked by his lack of political correctness for the sake of humor. Although, most people knew Moe was only joking.

    Luckily, Mollie was in the first half. She didn't even want to leave Moe's side at the party, almost fearing she was going to miss something amusing. They chatted a bit, and eventually, Moe convinced her to go back to his place.

    "Wow, this is a nice place, it's huge!" Mollie said, scanning Moe's apartment as they walked in. He lived in a penthouse right near his campus, on the 11th floor. It was big, but it was expensive. Moe managed to turn one of the offices into a bedroom, and managed to get 2 roommates, making the rent payable.

    "Yeah, sorry about the mess."

    "I didn't even notice...I was looking at the view." Mollie said, looking at the view of the city. Moe's college was right in the middle of downtown. "The city never looked this nice!" Moe sat down on his couch, his roommates still out at the same party he just came from. They chatted for a bit, and the next thing Moe knew, they began making out. Mollie was aggressive, and knew what she wanted, but she managed to keep things going at a smooth pace. They were side by side first, but then she turned, and sat on Moe's lap, facing him, and they made out like that for a few moments. Her large breasts pressing slightly into his chest. Moe, slowly being turned on, felt a slight pain as his penis began to grow erect under Mollie.

    A few moments pass, and Moe slowly moves his right hand up, groping her left breast on the left side softly. His penis grew harder against his jeans, which caused him some more pain, forcing the erection to subside slightly. Mollie sat up, still on top of Moe, edged back slightly, smiled, and then grabbed the bottom of her shirt, and in one motion, pulled it off over her head.Her breasts looked even more massive in her bra, her pale skin almost glowing from Moe's perspective. Moe stared in awe, and reached up his right hand again, and hefted her left breast slightly. "Jesus, you are huge! Easily the biggest I've seen in real life."

    Mollie blushed slightly. "Please, I'm really self conscious about them..."

    Moe wasn't sure if Mollie was just fishing for compliments, but he had felt he had to be honest anyway. "No, seriously, they are amazing." He said, putting his arms around her back, and pulling her closer again as they made out for a few more moments. Mollie pulled back again, and reached down to Moe's pants, and unbuttons, then un-zipped his jeans, exposing his blue boxer briefs from the front. His penis immediately reacted, taking up the free space that his jeans had previously not allowed access to, being pulled tight downward by Mollie's weight on top of him. His penis pointed upward in relation to his body, and swelled slightly, taking it's journey toward full erection. Even in this half state, the head of his penis slowly poked out the top of his waist, and still growing in that direction. Mollie leaned forward, and they made out again for a few moments, her hand down, outside of his underwear, stroking his penis softly.

    Moe kissed her neck for a few moments, and she said softly "God, it's so thick..." and backed up again, to get a look at it. At this point, it had reached past his belly button by an inch or so, but was still swelling longer and thicker, still having about 2 inches left to lengthen, and an inch to thicken. "Holy crap, you are a monster!" She said, almost shouting.

    "Shh my neighbors might hear!" Moe said.

    "Sorry." She said, less loud. "But look at it, and it's still getting bigger, holy shit!" Like a kid opening a Christmas present, Mollie jumped up, her breasts bouncing wildly, and tugged at Moe's pants, forcing them downward and off. And this point, Moe was near full erection, as she tugged off his boxer briefs, giving his penis the freedom to point where it liked, which was straight up at the ceiling. Her eyes wide, she put her hand around it, unable to touch her fingers around it. She could feel the weight from it's sheer size, but Moe's erections were so intense and strong, the hardness of his penis kept it from slanting or losing to gravity. "What the fuck, Moe." She said in amazement. "You have to be the biggest in the world, seriously."

    Moe laughed a bit. "Maybe someday..."

    She stroked it softly with one hand, then two, moving them simultaneously up and down his shaft. She got on her knees in front of him, Moe still sitting on the couch. She looked at the top, the huge penis head thicker than the rest of the shaft. She examined his massive member, slowly moving her eyes down, his penis throbbing, with veins placed seemingly randomly throughout his penis. She got to the base, and noticed how his penis was so big, it didn't even look like it was a part of his body. She was then distracted by his large testicles, which hung down enough to rest on the couch he was sitting on, each one bigger than a golf ball. "Look at your balls dude! They are humongous!"
     
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    Moe was extremely turned on. He was so use to hearing about Sarah whining about his penis, he was happy that there was someone actually seemed to like it. Mollie moved her left hand down to his testicles and cupped them slightly, and moved her face to lick up and down his giant penis. She tried to put his penis in her mouth, but it was too much for her, not only because of Moe's massive girth, but because of Mollie's smaller than average mouth. She did end up licking and playing her lips around the head a bit.

    "God...My hands and mouth aren't big enough..." She said, struggling to pleasure Moe's massive penis, which stayed extremely hard regardless.

    Moe stood up, and Mollie stayed on her knees, and looked up, seeing Moe's penis looming over her, blocking the light above it. She moved up a bit, and licked the bottom of it, reaching her right hand up, to hold and pleasure the giant head. Moe was extremely turned on by the fact that his penis was longer than the length of her head. "Maybe you should use your tits." Moe suggested.

    "Like a tit fuck?" Mollie asked.

    "Yeah, I got some body oil, it will be awesome."

    "Alright, sure." Mollie said, and Moe paced quickly to his bathroom, grabbed the oil, and paced back to Mollie holding her 32G cup bra in her hand, standing with her other hand on her hip. Her breasts looked amazing, almost seeming to defy gravity, they were full and perky. They reminded Moe of Jani Defi's breasts, except, somehow, sagging less.

    Moe paused, and just stared for a few moments, his penis still fully erect, seeming to point directly at Mollie. She dropped the bra out of her hand, and slowly moved her hands down, and unbutton her pants, causing them to drop to the ground.
     
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    I know it's an abrupt stall, but I'll finish this scene shortly. I didn't want it to go on too long.
     
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    Please do - good story. I check for the next chapter daily!
     
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    End of Part 2

    Moe pulled his shirt over his head, and threw it to the ground, and walked over to Mollie, who had a big smile on her face. They began kissing while standing, and Moe's huge penis was forced to point upward, against Mollie's body, his penis head actually pushing into the bottom of her large breasts. Mollie reached her hand down, and slowly began moving her hand down, and then way up, his shaft. She could feel it throbbing in her hand, feeling the blood force it's way into his metal hard member. Mollie inched backwards, eventually getting to the couch again, and sat down in it.

    Moe got down on his knees, and began rubbing the outside of her vagina, which had already begun to wet itself, with his hand. Moe listened as Mollie's breathing increased slightly. He got up, and sat beside her, and brought his hand around to her vagina again, and inserted his middle and ring finger inside her slowly, while kissing her neck. After a few moments, Mollie moaned softly, and moved her hand back to Moe's giant member, which was pressing softly into her torso.

    Mollie grew more and more wet with Moe's stimulation, and eventually Moe stopped, and got on his knees on the couch, and Mollie turned herself, and put her legs on either side of Moe. Moe slowly moved his member up and down the outside of her vagina, at this point completely soaked, giving Moe plenty of lubrication. He stroked his member, spreading her lube on his penis, as he moved his massive penis upward, and the slapped it down a few times on her vagina. He body shifted somewhat, and move grabbed his penis midshaft, and slowly moved it up and down the lips of her vagina. He slowly moved in about 2 inches, and then out 1 inch. He then repeated, moving in 2 inches, and then out 1 inch. He kept the process up until he got about 8 inches of himself inside her, and he hit the end, poking her cervix slightly, causing Mollie to get out a small yelp.

    "Sorry..." Moe said, softly.

    "It's fine, just try not to go too deep." Mollie responded, and Moe smiled. He was use to Sarah just yelling at him for hitting her cervix without warning. Moe took a mental imagine of how far deep he should go. Mollie's right leg was up over his shoulder at this point, and her left leg around to his side. Moe slowly pumped himself in and out of her, as Mollie's moans became more often and slightly louder. Her breathing was intense, as she sounded like someone who was jogging, and still picking up speed. Mollie released more and more of her juice, as Moe realized her vagina had expanded somewhat, allowing him to penetrate more and more, eventually able to fit his entire shaft in without hitting her cervix.

    "Oh....Oh God...you are so big..." She said, her eyes closed, and playing with her own large breasts. The motions continued for moments, and Mollie whispered "I'm...cu...uhhh" She was barely able to talk lost in ecstasy.

    "Huh?" Moe said, not stopping his motions.

    "Gonna...*pant*...cum...ah..." She barely said.

    Moe wasn't even able to respond, and Mollie started moaning loudly, arching her back. Moe looked down and saw the moisture dripping off their genitals, onto the couch under the. She bucked and moaned with more and more intensity, for a good minute, as Moe held her legs, trying to keep her from falling off the couch in her wild thrashing of pleasure and lust. Finally, she slowly stopped, and Moe pulled out, still not reaching his orgasm, as Mollie laid back, twitching and almost shivering. Moe continued to stroke his giant member, laughing slightly, "Are you okay?"

    She couldn't even answer. Her mouth quivered slightly and opened as she tried to say something, only to buck slightly again, the waves of pleasure still impacting her. She finally nodded. Moe's penis was never this hard before, he had never seen a girl orgasm this wildly in his life, even in porn where the acting was over exaggerated. She finally nodded with a very soft "Y..Ya..."

    Moe pointed his penis over her, and stroked faster, with both hands. "Okay, here I go, haha." Moe said, and began shooting wave after wave of thick stream onto Mollie. The heat of Moe's cum stimulated her slightly, landing on her breasts, stomach, and face, and Mollie's already sensitive, lust full body began to buck again, as a much smaller orgasm because to overtake her again. Moe shot load after load after load, soaking Mollie's torso, as he tried to avoid her face since she couldn't really seem to flinch from the pleasure she was still reeling from. Moe never came more in his life, shooting a good 20 or so shots, at full strength. When it finally ended, Moe looked, seeing some of his semen had hit the wall he was facing, and the wall to his side that the couch was up against. The farther wall was a good 20 feet away, and his cum on it was a good 5 feet off the ground.

    Moe attended to Mollie, who was slowly getting back to normal. He then walked out, and began cleaning what mess he could with a towel, and then picked up all their clothes and threw them in his room. He knew his roommates would be pissed if he left his mess everywhere. He managed to get Mollie to sit up, she was panting like she just sprinted a mile. "You OK?"

    "Yeah...I'm...that was amazing..." She panted, and stood up, her knees shaking.

    "Let's get to my room." Moe said, holding her arm as they walked toward his room. Her knees and body still shaking slightly from the intense orgasm, Mollie's legs actually gave out and she fell down. Moe caught her, and she struggle to get back to her feet. When she did, Moe put his arm behind her back, and his other behind her knees, and lifted her up, and carried her to his room Moe had actually grown hard again, turned on by how intense Mollie's orgasm was, his giant penis touching her back slightly. He set her on his bed, and she sat up against the head board, and Moe got her some water. She inhaled it, and asked for Moe, and Moe listened. She downed the second glass, and laid down, and closed her eyes.

    "Moe..." She whispered.

    "Yeah?"

    "I've never felt anything this good...I wanna go again..."

    "Seriously?" Moe asked, actually worrying about Mollie's health.

    Mollie didn't respond, her eyes closed, she drifted off to sleep. Moe smiled, and made sure the covers were on Mollie, and washed himself up a bit. He pulled out his his enlargement devices, and began to work.
     
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    Hot story, loved how his first girlfriend started complaining it was to big, lol.
     
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    What do you other guys think so far? Did I take the story in a bad direction?

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    fantastic story - direction is fine - keep on writing. Don't wanna cramp your style so I'll leave any suggestions to more experienced fiction commentators. Lovin it!
     
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    I love the story. I would love to see him taking other girls
     
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    Great story, I look forward to seeing him get even bigger.
     
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    This would have to be a buyp (bring up your post), rather than a bump.
     
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    sorry about the stall, I just finished my spring finals, and need to take a little break from basic use of my brain, such as writing and reading. Give me a few days and next part will be up.
     
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