Diary of Hung Guy

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  1. Geek2Freak

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    This is my second attempt at a story. The first failed miserably, thanks to me not sticking to the rules, so to be clear all characters are over 18. That’s how I intend it. All events are completely fictional and any likeness to any persons in reality is completely coincidental. This story is based in the format of a point-of-view slash diary, and tells the old cliché story of a kid who goes from zero to hero in college. It starts off a bit slow but the second instalment should be better. Please comment, this is a spur of the moment story so maybe you can help me make it better. This story is strictly straight... well maybe some lesbianism. Enjoy.


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    “Nobody is perfect... certainly not me. Tom Jackson - just a gangly, shy, nerd with too much hair that covered the face. Never been kissed. Never been fucked. Hell, never even had the courage to talk to a girl. He is just a nobody. A nothing. Barely a blip on the radar.”
    That’s probably what they thought about me all through High School, and it was true; I was odd. Beyond odd. I went from being short and scrawny one day to tall and gangly the next. My voice still hadn’t broken by 11th grade, and when it did, let’s just say a little annoying pop star had a bigger knack jump than me. Perhaps I should quickly describe myself at age 18. 6’4”, 165 lbs, no muscle, pale complexion, deep-blue eyes (likely to be my best feature – at this time), a shoulder-length mop of hair. And the absolute worst thing was that my growth spurt, having grown everything else, decided to leave my five incher alone. Even my body hated me.
    High school was a living hell for me. I wasn’t good at sports. Maybe it was the hair in my face that kept getting in the way of me catching the football, or perhaps I just sucked. I know I sucked at schoolwork. I could never concentrate, so how I passed every year was beyond me. The only thing I was good at was Art, and even then I was made fun of by bullies, because they were jealous that I beat them in one thing. I got picked on everyday for one thing or another and ended up with the nickname “Flagpole”. Not so bad, compared to my “best friend” Kenny’s, which was “Princess” (One day someone tied him up and super glued a plastic tiara to his head).
    So literally it was me n’ Kenny against these assholes from the beginning of high school... Wish I could say we were actually best friends, but the only reason we hung out is, because we were just that lonely. Some guys started the rumour that we were gay together; Kenny didn’t come to school for a month. I had suspected that he actually was... Me? I was definitely straight. Girls were all I could think of for the past couple of years. Girls and sex (Not that I got either). And then there was Brianna Smith. Brunette cheerleader, with legs up to the sky and a pair of tits you could bury yourself in. Oh my god... If she had just talked to me at that point, I could have died a happy man. Of course she didn’t. All the girls thought I was a freak already, plus when I even tried talking to one I got super nervous and had a nosebleed. Every. Single. Time. I couldn’t help it. I was that shy. So instead I relied on good ol’ internet porn and hentai. Sigh. I ended up getting caught for it once. These books and the porn watching kinda made me into a closet sex freak. I liked the risqué stuff so doing things in public turned me on.
    On one particular day in the last week of my high school career, I secretly spent the afternoon watching Brianna and the rest of the cheerleaders do practice in their tight little skimpy out fits (I swear I saw a button burst off Brianna’s shirt) All of them had managed to get into the same college and were practicing for the upcoming tryouts. The sight was almost too much for me and I decided to sneak into their change room to relieve my ‘frustrations’. I needed a little bit of stimulation and it wasn’t tough to find Brianna’s kit, just had to find the one with the biggest bra. After a little search I found hers and snatched my prize. About to turn away, something caught my eye. Her dairy, that I had often seen her writing in, (and what eventually inspired me to write this memoir) had fallen out and was lying open next to the bench her bag was on. My hands trembled... the personal thoughts of my perfect goddess lay mere inches away from my finger tips. I knew I wouldn’t feature, but I couldn’t resist a quick peak. I bent over, picked it up, and began to read.
    The first glance told me that this wasn’t a usual diary. The open page was littered here and there were random little words and sentences. Then numbers. A drawing of someone. “Pretty accurate drawing, actually,” was what I had thought. Her hand writing was hard to make out. I flipped a couple of pages. More of the same stuff. I tried to make out what she had written. “... likely to be very... difficult. Mary says he’s... he’s...” What was the next few lines? “... says he’s hung like a...”
    My heart stopped. I looked again just to make sure I had read that correctly. “Michael Scott-Hersh is likely to be very difficult . Mary says he’s hung like a horse.” I couldn’t believe my eyes. What the hell?! I took another look. There it was. In her hand writing. I continued reading.
    “Her brother told her the story once, when she told him she had a crush on Michael, that when they had showered together after basketball prac that he saw the “monster” he was packing. I think he’s lying, but I wouldn’t mind finding out for myself ;) <3”
    I scanned the rest of the page. It looked like a biography. Height, weight, all sorts of descriptions about the school start quarterback. Next to all this was a little drawing of him! I turned back a page. It was the same. A work-up of Rick Tolben, right down to estimated cock size. Flipping through it I saw it was all the same. James, Nicholas, Zack, even Jun Soek Kim the exchange student from South Korea (labelled funnily with, “A toothpick would work better”), everyone was there and she seemed to focus on their endowment. Just below every entry was a little rating she called “The Fuckability Scale”. I turned to the the 1st page, written inside was “i love BIG cocks!” I was beyond astounded... There were other entries inbetween... “Love cu’cum’bers, but not as good as the real thing :p”
    What was this girl? Like something from one of my sex fantasies. I kept looking, my eyes couldn’t be drawn away. Then I saw my name. Thomas Jackson.
    “5 inches? You’ve got to be kidding. Wouldn’t fuck this frickin’ Sasquatch in a million years.”
    My heart sank. I stood there transfixed. I dunno how long I had stood there reading, but this seemed to stretch on for an eternity. A sudden noise wrenched me from my nightmare though. I looked up. There she stood. A temptress. A devil. Brianna staring at me, holding her black book and underwear and staring right back. I couldn’t tell what she was thinking, a whole range of emotions crossed her face, but I know what I was feeling. Anger, dispare, but mostly I was just feeling sick to my stomach. Her eyes met mine and a silent pact was signed as we saw what was in each other’s eyes; fear in hers at having her reputation destroyed by me revealing her little secret, and fear of the little dignity I had left, remaining intact. I snapped the book shut, and tossed it at her, “Here!”, I said before storming out.
    Pure emotion gripped me, as I ran, flat out, the full two miles back to my house. On the way It began to rain. I couldn’t tell if it was that or my tears that were stinging my eyes, but I kept running, blind. The water had soaked through my jacket to my skin, when I reached my house. My mother’s car was in driveway - I wanted to avoid talking to her at all costs. “How could she?” kept running through my mind, the rest of my thoughts just swirling around with that, making my head pound. I dashed through the front door and up the stairs to my room before my mother could even say her usual, “Hi, darling.”. I closed the door and locked it behind me. I was breathing hard. I was crying. My chest was sore and my head was spinning from all my thoughts. The room began to swim before my eyes. I thought I had to lay down, so I moved towards my bed, just as everything began to spin too. I wish I had reached the bed before I fell, it might have hurt less, when this feeling of fire shooting up my spine from my crotch occurred. I hit the floor hard, my breathing ragged and my vision nearly gone. “Why?” was the last thought in my head as I passed out to blackness and pain.

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    Oh If people would need me to repost this to make it easier to read just ask.
     
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    i am intrigued do continue :)
     
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    Liking it so far. Keep going.
     
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    Finally, a new straight story worth watching. Seems like the gay stories have dominated for a while now, I hope "Princess" doesn't make this one doesn't go bi though.
     
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    1000 views and I post a second installment. Princess will not. Lol. At the moment he's a character just to fill in the background.
     
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    Over 1,000 views at this moment, get back to work!!! :biggrin1:
     
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    ^^ I agree. I was about to look to see how many views I had to add myself to get another part as this seems great so far.
     
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    Can't wait to see this furthered.
     
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    Oh damn will take me some time to get another one up (lol). Sorry, hectic schedule cums first.
     
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    Pretty good so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.
     
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    I like it so far update soon! :D
     
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    Most intriguing, can't wait for the next chapter :)
     
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    bump !
     
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    Your public needs you, please post more!
     
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    diary of hung gai

    sounds like a HK movie....






    dont you all know its lpsg toss law
    to NEVER complete fictitious/true?? storys..
     
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    indeed
     
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    There are over 6,000 posts now, so can we have another installment please?
     
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    This is just going to be like the other 99.999% of stories in this forum:

    NEVER. FINISHED.
     
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