Do you do Haiku?

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  1. Ethyl

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    Post your favorites or create your own arresting visual!

    One of my favorites:

    The phantasm of
    falling petals vanishes
    into moon and flowers

    One of my own:

    Brushing light on my lips
    rising stamen springing forth
    blossoming artist
     
  2. invisibleman

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    Invisibleman
    Loves haiku so much that
    he let let it be known.

    Happiness can be
    Yours. If you can get out of
    the way of yourself.
     
  3. DC_DEEP

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    Untalented me
    Attempting to write haiku
    is not a good thing



    Soft autumn sun shines
    warmly on my buttocks as
    we fuck, and both cum.
     
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    Workin' up a good pot of mad!
    Ok... who said the limit was just two? I am off to an appointment, but when I return... watch out! Wonderboy. dazzle 'em!

    My love is a poster child from Biafra.
    moot
    and no longer politically relevant.

    You are the original recipe
    Come to my table
    And let me dine
     
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    Open your eyes up to
    The sights and sounds around you
    Before they are closed

    You smell like haiku
    A thousand flowers made of shit
    You smell like haiku

    Rain falls and sun rises
    By Nature's eternal command
    I take cock in hand

    Bathed in bathos
    As a bukkake girl in cum
    This is what I do

    The cow, she says moo
    A cow lay down signals rain
    Cows are good to eat
     
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    The gentle koto
    And soft, sweet shakuhachi
    Blend to soothe your soul.
     
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    Forlorn me, I cry
    With each breath, my soul escapes
    How to replace you...
     
  8. DC_DEEP

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    Here's one I wrote for my man while he was away on a business trip...

    I sit here cursing
    that hateful eon-second
    when we are apart.
     
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    DC's haiku stinks
    But his big cock is really hot
    So we forgive him
     
  10. DC_DEEP

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    April brings the rain,
    but greedy August hoardes it
    killing my garden.
     
  11. D_Sheffield Thongbynder

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    I amend my post
    That referenced post number three
    This one resonates
     
  12. invisibleman

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    The Tao Te Peen

    The Way of the large
    Is the unvarying way.
    "large" meaning penis.


    KFC

    Think not what you can
    do to your lovers at a
    KFC buffet.


    The Pink Brute

    The brute strikes again.
    He's all Pepto Abyssmal.
    Wintergreen obscene.



    Reverence

    Prehensile penis.
    Lube is stranger than friction.
    Topics of sermons.


     
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    I really like "Reverence," Invisibleman.
    (I also confess to to putting an extra syllable in line two. LOL.)
     
  14. invisibleman

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    Reverence

    "Prehensile penis."

    "Lube is stranger than friction."
    Topics of sermons.


    I make mistakes. Oh well. Hehehe. Happy that you liked the haiku. :tongue:
     
  15. madame_zora

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    I don't stay true to the syllabic requirement, but here's an old one:

    There was a morning
    Vaccuous purple yields gingerly
    From obsidian sound surroud
     
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    Strict syllabic form:
    Haiku is the silliest,
    but most transcendent
     
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    I actually composed this one off the top of my head when someone asked me a confrontational question a little while ago.

    I live with myself
    The same as everyone else
    One day at a time
     
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    Meat on tortilla.
    Taste buds sing, mouth watering.
    Methane factory.
     
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    An Ode to LPSG Fleshpiles
    Of which so many of you are very fond

    Large Penis Support:
    Is it the conversations,
    or the many hands?
     
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    Detached wanderer
    finds not a home of his own
    makes one in each stay
     
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