Don't You Wish m/m

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  1. ospice05

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    This is my first attempt at a story. Part of it is based on truth and then I embellished....a good amount. But it is loosly based on truth. Enjoy. More to come if you like it.

    Oliver and Tim were good friends. You could never say that they were best friends or just acquaintances, but they were simply good friends. They had met a long time ago in Jr. High. At that time, they were just acquaintances; playing the band together. But after years of knowing each other, they both began doing the Summer musicals at their local community theatre. Over the years they began to get to know each a little bit better. Coming out to each other (when they both already knew about the other), taking dance classes together, and although going to different high schools and seeing each other only a few months out of the year, they became good friends.
    Then, the last summer came. Oliver, now 19, and Tim 18, both knew that this would probably be the last summer musical that they would be doing together. With Oliver already in college out of state, he knew that next summer he would probably be doing a internship, or trying as a hard as he could not to go back to his hometown. Tim would be going off to school in the fall, and the chances of them seeing each would be slim to none. So the both of them knew that they had to make this summer count.
    During the day, the two were inseparable, going the swimming pool at the Country Club, and sometimes even going to movies together. At night, they rehearsed for their show, and often hung out with Oliver’s best friend Abby after they were done. One night though, Tim and Oliver went back to his house to hang out and chat. What was supposed to be a friendly hang out session turned into something more.
    The two began to talk about life and relationships. As the conversation continued, Oliver began to feel himself becoming attracted to Tim. After all of these years this conversation was when he began to realize that he had feelings for Tim. Throughout the conversation, Oliver began to desperately try to get closer to Tim. Just to touch him. The two had touched before. But when Oliver was attracted to someone, the slightest touch just gave him the most wonderful feeling. There was this electricity that would run through his body. He slowly tried to get close to him.
    After finally realizing that they had been talking for three hours, Tim decided that he needed to go home, because he had to work the next day. “Damnit”, Oliver thought
    “If only I had touched him. I should have kissed him.”
    As Oliver walked Tim out to the car, he wanted so badly to kiss Tim, and tell him how he was feeling. These hormones and emotions were so strong. But as usual, he didn’t. Oliver was always afraid of hearing no. So after a friendly hug, Tim was on his way to his car . But something came over Oliver and he couldn’t let Tim leave like this. So he ran after Tim, spun him around and began to kiss him. Right in the middle of the dark street, Oliver put himself out there, and waited for a response from him. To Oliver’s pleasant surprise, Tim kissed him back. Against the side of Tim’s car, the two of them continued to make out. Oliver, in his tall stature pressed up against Tim and began to feel a warmth down in his pants. There tongues played a feisty game, and their hands moved up and down each other. They embraced each other. Both were breathing so hard. What started out as a slow kiss turned into a rough arousing kiss. The both of them breathing heavily as they touched each other. But Oliver stopped. In order to leave him wanting more, Oliver ended their exciting escapade and said goodnight. Blind sighted by this abrupt stop, Tim got into the car, and Oliver left glowing, and hornier than he has been in a long time. All night, Oliver thought of the chemistry they had together, and all the things they had in common. Why hadn’t he realized it before? That night, Oliver went to sleep with thoughts of Tim in his head (Both of them).
    The next two days were a blur for Oliver. There was a break in the rehearsal schedule, so they weren’t rehearsing at night. During the day Oliver was either at work or with Abby. He didn’t want to call and seem needy, but all day Oliver’s mind slipped back to that hot make out session against the car. He could barely contain his boner at work. Finally he couldn’t take it anymore and had to slip into the employee bathroom and take care of himself. Releasing his 8 inch cock from his tenting pants, Oliver speedily jerked his dick as not to be away from the front counter too long. With his mind wondering about Tim’s own dick and the erotic movements of their bodies from the night before, Oliver exploded into the bathroom sink leaving him hot and panting. He needed more. He wanted that touch again.
     
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    After two days he finally got the call. Tim wanted to hang out again and go swimming. Oh the thoughts Oliver has about slipping bathing suit down to his ankles, and sucking him in the locker room. Yes was the answer. He couldn’t wait to feel his wet tanned body against his own. Because Oliver had the membership to the pool, Tim asked if it was ok to bring someone along. Oliver didn’t mind at all. He didn’t have that many gay friends growing up because he found them to be bitchy and the ones in their town were all about drama. So if he was a friend of Tim’s, then he was sure this guy would be just fine.
    Brandon was his name. A shorter, average body type of guy. He seemed a little trashy…but kind of in a hot way. Brandon, as Tim introduced him, was his new boyfriend.
    Oliver didn’t know what to say when he heard this news. They had had such a great connection two nights ago when they were together. He thought that they might end up dating, or even fucking. All erotic thoughts dashed in the blink of an eye. Tim had Brandon, and once he was in the picture, he never left.
    Suddenly at every rehearsal, Brandon was there. They would show up together and they would leave together. Oliver was furious. It was a bomb that was dropped and kept exploding. Oliver kept it civil and never revealed how hurt he was to Tim. But what he did do, was vent to Abby. Brandon did nothing. All he would do was sit in the audience and watch rehearsals. He would never speak to anyone. He just sat there like this cloud of reminder that Oliver didn’t have Tim.
    One day though, Abby pointed something out. “Oliver. Brandon keeps looking over here.”
    Not believing her, Oliver looked over and saw that Brandon was staring at him. “That is so weird”, Oliver said.
    Every few minutes, Oliver looked over and sure enough, Brandon would be staring at him and then look away. For some reason, this turned him on. That silent bad boy type had always been Oliver’s fantasy, but never his reality. Something about the way he stared made Oliver want to hang out with him more and be closer to him. Something also made him think that this could be the best way to get back at Tim for betraying him. Thoughts began to pour into his mind. He was furious with Tim. Brandon just irritated him because he had something Oliver wanted. But he also left Oliver curious. Something aroused him. Everything after that night happened so quickly. One night, the three of them went out together to go see a movie, and it changed everything.
    King Arthur was the movie. A stunningly beautiful film, but boring as fuck. Oliver wasn’t too upset, as he went with other intensions. The three being the ones in the theatre had their pick of where they wanted to sit. Tim sitting on the left, Brandon in the middle, and Oliver sat on the right side of Brandon. As the movie progressed, Oliver slowly lifted his finger up toward Brandon’s hand, which was sitting on the arm rest. Briefly and ever so gently, Oliver’s fingers brushed Brandon’s. Within a few seconds Brandon returned the movement. VICTORY! What Oliver wanted had happened. Brandon was having sex with Oliver right next to his boyfriend. The thought of knowing that Tim was right there and could see at any moment just made this deed even more arousing.
    What began to run through his mind was a song called “Don’t You Wish”. The lyrics made perfect sense for this exact moment.
    “Don’t you wish, that only for a night or two. All the things I love do . Oh temptations calling you. Don’t you wish, that you could leave your woman’s arms. Capture you with all my charms. Just to have my way with you.”
    Throughout out the rest of the film, the two’s hands fondled each other. Touching so innocently, but making his minds think dirty things, Oliver’s pants began to get a little tight. He was so aroused by the thought of Brandon and the idea of the song coming to life. He was dark and mysterious, and most of all, he had a boyfriend. Oliver had to stop or else he was never going to be able to hide his erection any longer. But he couldn’t stop doing it. This slight touch just sent electricity all through his body. That was it. He had to get out of there or he was going to cum in the seat. He got up quickly to relieve himself. He was about to explode from excitement. Those slight touches and all those thoughts were getting him hornier and hornier. He needed to get off now.
    As he walked into the bathroom, the one stall in the bathroom was occupied. So Oliver had to make a choice. He could either wait for this guy in the stall to leave, or let himself explode in the corner urinal. He had to do it. Right before he made his way the urinal, the door opened, and through the mirror Oliver could see Brandon walking in.
    He didn’t know what to say. They stared at each other in the mirror with just silence. The aching silence. A sexual tension that was so strong, there was know way to break it unless they acted on it. Both had the same thoughts running through their heads. Passion, desire, and need were all they wanted. But then a silence that felt like lasted forever was broken by a flush and an older gentleman walking out of the stall. The two guys walked themselves over to the urinals to not seem conspicuous. The man began talking on his cell phone as the two were pining for each other the adjacent urinals. A thin piece of wood separated them and this man was keeping them from letting their bodies touch. “JUST LET THIS MAN LEAVE”, Oliver begged in his head, and finally he did.
    The two moved back from their urinals and once again were looking at each other. But this time, face to face. Suddenly, Brandon grabbed hold Oliver shirt and pulled him into him. The two began to kiss passionately. They basically fell into the stall. As fast as Oliver could lock it, Brandon had gotten Oliver’s pants down. Already heading south, Brandon’s mouth took Oliver’s dick and began to suck it. He had a tongue ring, Oliver had discovered. Never before had a blowjob felt this good. The metal against the tip of his head. The thrusting of his own hips, and the bobbing of Brandon’s head were to much. He pulled Brandon up and turned him around. He basically ripped his pants off. There was no being careful. This was passionate animalistic sex. Oliver, who’s dick was already lubed from Brandon’s mouth , put his hand around his throbbing shaft, and entered Brandon. There was no time. They couldn’t stay in here long. Tim would start to suspect. So Oliver went in and out as hard and as fast as possible. He was so tight and it made Oliver crazy. They were panting and grunting. Brandon reached around and grabbed Oliver’s ass and pushed him deeper into him. Before Oliver knew it, he was about to cum. He couldn’t hold it any longer. As he was pulling out, Brandon turned back around took Oliver’s dick into his mouth. Oliver began to moan. He was about cum. Like an eruption of senses, Oliver came harder than he ever had before. Shooting more and more shots, Brandon swallowed each and everyone. Oliver, so exhausted from this had to lean against the door to keep from falling over. Panting and sweating, the two looked at each other with hunger in their eyes.
     
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    omg that's so gay
     
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    How observant^ hahaha. Typically when two guys get together, it is gay haha. More to come soon
     
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    What an awesome story!! Keep going!
     
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