Enlarging a friendly connection [Fiction]

TheWaffleHaxor

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So I need some opinion on this, especially from women. My female friend who recently complimented me on how hung I am, but we haven’t fucked yet because she’s in a situationship atm. I have recently asked her if I wrote her an erotic fiction about a fantasy I have about her if she’d read it and she said yes. I told her I’d send it to her after I wrote it.

Truth is, I’ve already wrote it. Just need it to be critiqued before I send it.

Here it is:

As I lay on the bed, my heart raced with anticipation as I waited for her arrival. We had been friends for years, but tonight was different. Tonight, she wanted something more from me - something that I wasn't sure I could give her. But when she arrived at my doorstep, all doubts were forgotten in the face of her radiant beauty and unbridled desire.



She looked stunning as she stood before me, her beautiful blue eyes sparkling with a fire that ignited my own passion within seconds. We talked for a while, smoked some weed, and shared laughter. The air was thick with tension between us, but it only made our connection stronger. As the night wore on, I could feel myself becoming more and more aroused by her presence.



She was shy, but tonight she was ready to explore something new with a trusted friend who possessed the one thing she desired most in this world. I had a feeling that she had likely experienced large penises before - after all, she does have a wild side and is no church girl. But I guess because I’m a trusted friend and I've always been seen as a cool guy or something like that, I was the first and only guy she thought about to call for her fix for big dick.



As I stood before her, exposed and vulnerable, she couldn't help but stare at me down there in awe. Her eyes were filled with desire as she reached out to touch my penis, admiring its size and shape. She took it into her mouth, sucking on it for what felt like an eternity. The sensation was indescribable - the warmth of her lips, the rhythm of her movements, all combining to create a symphony of pleasure that I had never experienced before.



When she finally pulled away from me, I could see the desire in her eyes intensifying as she lay back on the bed and spread her beautiful legs wide open for me. I instructed her to lay down in a missionary position with her legs towards her chest, making it easier for me to penetrate deeply into her body, so she did. As I slowly inserted my penis into her body, she gasped at how deeply I could fill her up.



I started off with slow, shallow strokes, teasing her and building anticipation. She loved it - the slower, more gentle movements were like a symphony of pleasure that filled every inch of her being. As I picked up speed and intensity, she felt herself reaching new heights of ecstasy. The sensations were intense - both pleasurable and painful at times, but the pleasure was worth it all.



The deeper strokes hit her cervix hard a few times, causing a sharp sting that made her gasp in surprise. But she powered through it, because the pleasure was too great to ignore. As I continued with deeper, harder thrusts, she had an intense orgasm - her body convulsing and shuddering.



After several minutes of deep, hard strokes, she tapped my legs twice in a way that reminded me of a UFC fighter tapping out. "I tap out," she whispered with a moan. We cuddled for a while, and then she asked for more - but this time, she wanted it gentle.

She gets into the perfect doggy-style position with her back arched. I started thrusting from behind with long strokes, deep yet gentle ones that seemed to be just what she needed.



"You want me to be gentle?" I whispered to hr. She replied with a combination of a whisper and a moan: "yes, baby." I continued my slow, deep, and gentle strokes, loving the way they made her feel. And then she spoke again - this time, it was a soft whisper that sent shivers down my spine: "You're going to make me cum again."



As she warms up, I am able to go hard and deep again. As I pick up the pace, it triggers another intense orgasm. She screams out in ecstasy: "God, I fucking love your huge-ass dick!"



We had sex for hours, exploring every corner of each other's bodies with intense and deep thrusting. She was a willing participant, eager to please me and make sure I enjoyed myself as much as she did. We talked dirty, we laughed, we moaned - our connection was deep and intense. And when it was all over, her vagina was extremely wet and throbbing from the hours of deep hard thrusting.



We cuddled together on the bed, falling asleep in each other's arms. As we were falling asleep, she thanked me for the amazing experience we shared. She commented on how she felt seen, heard, and understood.


The night had been everything she hoped for and more, and we both knew that our lives were forever changed by this experience. As I drifted off into a peaceful slumber with her in my arms, I couldn't help but smile at the thought of how much pleasure we shared together - not just physical pleasure, but emotional connection as well.
 

TheWaffleHaxor

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We had sex for hours, exploring every corner of each other's bodies with intense and deep thrusting. She was a willing participant, eager to please me and make sure I enjoyed myself as much as she did. We talked dirty, we laughed, we moaned - our connection was deep and intense. And when it was all over, her vagina was extremely wet and throbbing from the hours of deep hard thrusting.



We cuddled together on the bed, falling asleep in each other's arms. As we were falling asleep, she thanked me for the amazing experience we shared. She commented on how she felt seen, heard, and understood.


The night had been everything she hoped for and more, and we both knew that our lives were forever changed by this experience. As I drifted off into a peaceful slumber with her in my arms, I couldn't help but smile at the thought of how much pleasure we shared together - not just physical pleasure, but emotional connection as well.