Ethan and the Mormon Boy

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  1. B_JasonDawgxxx

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    Ethan woke up with a raging hard on. He thought for sure he would have gotten laid last night as it was his 19th birthday. Ethan is a great looking guy. 5ft10, light brown hair, big blue eyes, tanned toned body, with just the right amount of body hair, full pouty lips and a thick 8 inch pretty uncut cock, with massive low hanging smooth balls and a high bubble ass thats been said to taste like candy.

    Ethan was happy that so many people showed up to his birthday party last night. He just wished he had hooked up and gotten the blow job he so wanted for his birthday. Just as Ethan was about to pour himself a cup of coffee there was a knock on his door. Ethan threw on his robe and opened the door and there stood Ethans wet dream.

    It was a mormon guy spreading the word about god. The poor guy looked like he was going to pass out. Ethan asked if he was ok and the mormon boy said he had been riding his bike in the florida humid heat all day and he wasnt used to this weather.

    Ethan asked him to come in and sit down in his air conditioned apartment. Ethan learned his name was Josh and he just moved here from utah. Ethan thought to himself, of course your from utah, a mormon, fucking hot and I cant have you.

    Ethan grabbed Josh a cold bottle of water and asked josh to relax. Ethan was sitting on the couch talking to Josh and he couldnt believe how sexy he was. Josh was 18 and 6ft2 blond hair and blue blue eyes. He had a little scar right above his full sexy lips.

    Ethan asked why he was in florida and Josh Explained he was on his mission and would be in florida for 2 years. Ethan felt Joshs eyes on his cock and looked down and sure enough his robe had fallen open. Ethan laughed and told Josh he was sorry his robe had fallen open.

    In Ethans mind he knew he had done it on purpose. Josh just shrugged his shoulders and said it was cool. So Josh asked if he could use the bathroom and Ethan showed him where it was.

    When Josh came back out Ethan noticed he had a huge hard on in his tight black pants. Ethan walked up to josh and rubbed his mormon cock and asked what was going on. Josh whispered to Ethan that the sight of his cock had gotten him hard and he was confussed.

    Ethan lead Josh to his bedroom where he slowly undressed Josh and Ethan smiled when he noticed Joshs body was well worked out and as smooth as a babys ass. Josh didnt say much and let Ethan take charge.

    Ethan threw off his robe and attacked Joshes untouched body. Ethan ate Joshs beautiful sweet pink ass out like his life depended on it. Ethan was getting so fucking hard as he heard josh moaning and groaning. Josh reached down and started to stroke Ethans now rock hard 8 inch cock, Ethan had to have joshs cock in his mouth. So he slowly slide his 7 inch fat cock with the mushroom head into his mouth.

    Ethan could taste the pre cum that was on the head of his cock. Ethan thought to himself how sweet his cum tasted. As Ethans head was bobbing up and down on that sweet mormon cock Josh said, I want to suck yours as well. Ethan moved so that they could 69.

    Josh started licking on Ethans hard cock and he liked it ALOT. Ethan told Josh to suck on his balls and Josh did so. Ethan reached into Joshs ass crack and slowly slid a finger up Joshs tight pink asshole. Ethan didnt know what overcame him but he found himself smelling his finger after he finger fucked the mormon. It smelt sweet and fresh.

    Josh did the same to Ethan and slid a finger up his ass as well. Ethan was so turned on he grabbed a bottle of lube and lubed up Joshs cock. He slid down on the fat cock and started riding Josh like there was no tomorrow. Ethan was a pro at fucking at prided himself at being a great fuck.

    He clinched his hole so tight around Joshs cock that Josh let out a moan so loud Ethan was afraid everyone in the building would hear it. Ethan looked down and saw Josh was grinning like a fool. Ethan rode Joshs cock hard and was suprised that the mormon virgin hadnt came yet.

    Ethan started to jerk his now dripping cock as he rode Josh hard and fast. Josh was pumping into Ethans ass so hard Ethan thought he was going to get slammed into the wall. Ethan felt himself ready to shoot and he looked down and told Josh he was close.

    Josh told him he was close as well and he wanted to come with Ethan. Ethan shot a load and it hit Josh in his face and he saw Josh had opened him mouth to catch a few squirts. Ethan could feel Joshs cock unloading up in his ass and he liked the way it felt.

    The 2 of them fell on one another and hugged each other. Ethan rolled over and kissed Joshes pretty lips. They both were laying there sweating and catching their breathes. Ethan asked if Josh had to get back to the church or wherever he lived.

    Josh didnt say anything. So Ethan asked him again. Finally Josh looked Ethan in his eyes and told him. Dude Im sorry Im not a mormon. I just moved in down the hall and I saw you leaving last night and I knew I had to have that ass of yours. Ethan just laughed and said, fuck dude all you had to do was ask.
     
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    Good effort, but believe me, paragraphs are your friend.
     
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    always a critic in the room, lol
     
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    haha...that ending was awesome...:tongue:
     
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    I always love a good ending!!
     
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    Happy Endings? :biggrin1:
     
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    Mormon porn? Now there's a wonder to behold! LOL!
     
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    May I suggest you do not quit your day job . . . that is, if you have one. If you're serious about becoming a word smith, I understand The University of Indiana has a well-respected writing program. However, it might seriously mess with your tanning schedule. (I mean this with only your best interests in mind.)
     
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    Excellent stuff. I dated a Mormon a few years ago, and I think all that repression resulted in some very hot times.
     
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    Good story, well written....very nice!
     
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    When is a Mormon not a Mormon. springs to mind. Good story Jason, Is there more to come, how there friendship developes etc.
     
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    I like the ending.

    Ignore the prats who decide to criticise your literary style. It's a xxx story which is also funny - quite unusual and therefore refreshing.
     
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    my compliments on your writing...
     
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    I like it too. Short, sharp, refreshing!!
     
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    Hey Jason Dawg!
    A fast, hot read!
    I loved the surprise ending!
    Write again for us soon...
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    Thanks guys. Ethan has been up to no good and shall return soon.
     
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    well i thought it was great, very horny. Those who commented on your prose style clearly weren't paying enough attention to the hot story ...
     
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    Great Story, and enjoyed your blog too!
     
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    If you're referring to me, I am in fact a reviewer and critic by trade and was simply pointing out that a big mass of text, with no paragraphs or changes at all, is extremely difficult to read. If you can't get through the format, the content never gets its chance to be appreciated, and may as well be irrelevant.

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    Hmm.. great story. It reminds me of a gay themed movie starring Steven Sandvoss called "Latter Days" where a LA party boy falls hard for a Mormon boy.
     
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