Finally (Gay M/M, my first story)

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    This is my first time writing. This story is based on true events, names were changed and bits added in to make it a bit more of a story. If you like it please let me know and I'll keep going. I'm planning on writing about my previous sexual encounters but not in order, more like using them as inspiration for the story. If you have comments, ideas or feedback I welcome it. Thanks for reading and I look forward to hearing from you all. :)

    (splitting up so it's not one massive post)

    I searched frantically on my phone map app for the address, following that little blue line and circling around and around trying to find the right doorway.

    I walked in the rain for about 15 minutes between the same 2 streets, looking for some sign that I was at least in the right area. I suppose it's a good thing that it's so secluded but I really had the urge and wanted to experience this as soon as possible. I should have scoped it out the day before instead of going in blind on my first visit.

    Just when I was thinking of giving up and going home without even a glimpse of some action I saw two guys walking out from an alley way about 20 feet from me. They were talking and laughing with each other and both looked about late 30's. Both had shaved heads. One was carrying a gym bag, quite muscly and had tight black trousers on and big boots. The other was putting on his leather jacket and playfully punched the other guy on the shoulder, this led to a swift kiss. I knew where I was going.


    The bath house was in an alleyway between the 2 streets I'd been pacing back and forth on, I'd probably walked past it a dozen times that night. I made a mental note to kick myself when the night was over. By this time it was around 5am but luckily the place was open all weekend; so people like me could stumble from club to party to bath house, no doubt.

    I walked up to the door, "Please buzz for entrance". I did just that and was buzzed in. It was dark inside but once my eyes adjusted I could see the place was clean, well decorated and safe.

    The first area is small, as it was just a foyer. The walls had posters all over them, different nights with different themes, the price of entry (as I was late it was only £9), a "no recording equipment" notice and various other pieces of information as well as two bowls - one with condoms and one with lube. I passed by the bowls though and straight to the lift - I wasn't looking for a fuck, I was looking to suck some dick.

    The main area is one floor up. I stepped out of the lift and straight away was greeted at reception by a totally stunning guy. He was a bit taller then me, maybe just over 6ft, and very slim (just my type). He had dark hair and blue eyes, his face was almost model perfect with a bit of stubble and he had the hottest Irish accent I've ever heard. I was nervous already but this guy had tipped the scales, I started to get a semi.

    "Hi there", he said, "that'll be nine pounds." He handed me a key and a towel in return. He sounded bored, I guess that's fair though as he must see some hot guys coming and going and won't be able to take advantage of the situation. I was too scared to say anything apart from "Thanks" which was answered with "Have a good time" and a wink. If I hadn't have been so nervous I'd probably have just spunked in my boxers right there!

    I walked into the next area with the lockers and found my number : 49. I noticed that next door was the showers, followed by a doorway to the cruising area, to the right was a huge room with a hot tub, bar and sofa's followed by a curtain of chains concealing more sofa's and a huge TV with some amazingly dirty porn showing.
     
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    I walked into the next area with the lockers and found my number : 49. I noticed that next door was the showers, followed by a doorway to the cruising area, to the right was a huge room with a hot tub, bar and sofa's followed by a curtain of chains concealing more sofa's and a huge TV with some amazingly dirty porn showing.

    I couldn't decide where to start or what to do so I sort of paced back and forward for a while. Building up courage and trying to calm myself down. After about 10 minutes I started getting undressed. I'm about 5ft 11 so couldn't really shrink into a corner and hide while I did it, luckily there weren't any other guys around. I took off my jacket and put my phone and wallet in the locker. I then unbuttoned my polo shirt and slid it over my head. I'm not exactly skinny but not fat either. I've got moderately toned arms and chest, a small patch of hair in the middle of my chest and a small trail from my belly button down. My stomach is quite flat, but not defined, but I like it.

    I started thinking about what to do about the underwear situation as I was taking off my trousers. I was thinking of just going full on nude but I have a bit of a confidence issue with my body. My thighs are quite thick, all muscle, but if you look you might not think that. It's from all those years of cycling and badminton but it isn't as bad as I think. The other reason is that when my cock's soft it's quite small, around 3-4 inches. It grows to about 7 inches or so when erect and is thicker than average then too but I want to keep it hidden until that starts to happen.

    I take my trousers off but keep my boxer shorts on, they're tight and black, I'm sure no one would mind. I also keep my socks on (for some stupid reason) as I don't like feet. I feel totally ready to go in and have a look around so I wrap my towel around my waist and start to walk to the doorway past the showers.


    The place is quite difficult to navigate through. Lots of doors lead to dead end rooms, and one just leads to a metre long corridor with the staff entrance - no warning. I must've looked like a right dick going round and round in circles and always making the mistake of taking the wrong door.

    I headed on anyway as the place had started filling up. The rooms where you could have fun were dotted about and thin corridors connected the rooms together. It was really dark and only red light helped with any kind of visual recognition. I started walking in a circle, zig zagging round the corners and after about 5-10 mins of slowly walking I'd done a full circuit. The guys I saw on my way round were varied and each of them hot in their own way.

    One guy was quite short and clearly worked out, his chest and abs were well defined and his arms were bulging. His towel showed off his tight little ass and as I looked down it bulged out impressively. Man that boy must have been HUNG! I'd estimate about 8inches not even fully hard. He smiled at me but I just looked back. I didn't mean it in a rude way, I was just too nervous to pick up on any signals, he quickly looked away and continued his search.

    I walked past 2 well muscled bears, probably in their late 40's, kissing, jacking and fingering a hot twink who was totally my type of guy. I stood and looked for a bit and totally started getting hard. I felt embarrassed but it was the hottest thing ever. I wasn't the only one enjoying it, about 5-6 other guys were standing around the area, all of them with erections, some with no towels on, I thought I was in a dream. The bears and their boy moved into the nearest room and 2 of the guys went with them. I never saw any more of them, but from the noises I heard coming my way I think it must have been a lot of fun.

    As the group dispersed I saw him. He was around my height and build. Tanned skin, very hairy legs but nowhere else other than his pubic area. He caught me looking and I smiled, slowly walking towards him. He smiled back and stood leaning in the doorway of the nearest room. I got within about 2 feet of him and he reached out and grabbed my dick through the towel. I was semi hard but almost fully by the time he took his hand off. I grabbed his left nipple and gave it a little squeeze as I leaned in and started kissing him.

    The kiss was amazing, I was lost in this moment, stumbling forwards through the doorway as he led me to the mattress, it was black PVC material and felt amazing against my skin. We barely stopped kissing to remove our towels, he kissed me hard, yet passionately and I had my tongue so far in his mouth I couldn't believe it. The hottest kiss ever.

    He took my towel off and stopped. "You have underwear on?". Oops. "Yeah, I do…sorry" I felt so stupid. "It's fine he says, they're hot, mmm" He took them down slowly as he kissed me again and started firmly jacking me off. "What's your name?" he asked. I replied. He told me his was Tom. "It's my first time here" he said, and took his hand off my dick. At this point he stared into my eyes, it was heartfelt somehow, like he'd found something. I felt the same, not necessarily Tom, but the bath house. It felt good to be somewhere you were able to act out your desires. It was hot to think of what other men were doing in their rooms and it was so erotic to think about what you could get up to with any number of guys in just one visit.
     
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    I ran my hand down Tom's chest, he was sweaty and warm. I licked his nipples and bit on the right one slightly while I allowed my hands to explore his body. I'd had sex before but I get so turned on my different bodies so I like to explore every part of them. I slid my hand across his tight stomach, playing slightly with his pubic hair and teasing him as I moved my way to his back. He was so sweaty and smelled amazing. I instantly got even more hard and started thrusting against him as we lay on the black bed, we pushed our dicks together and Tom grabbed them both in his hand and started jacking us both off at the same time. We didn't even need lube because we were sweating so much.

    I grabbed his ass and pulled him into me. Kissing him again was somehow even more passionate than the last time, I didn't even think it was possible. I broke the kiss though. "I'm getting pretty close" I said. "Really? That fast?". "Well yeah, you're so hot, but don't touch me for a bit, I want to do something". I had felt his dick against mine but not really seen it, I looked down and saw his glistening cock, about 8inches throbbing thick and leaking a little teardrop of precum. It looked so fuckin' tasty.

    I pushed Tom down flat on the bed and moved his legs apart so I could kneel down and take his dick in my mouth. "What're you doing…? Oh, oh I see! Yeah, you like sucking dick?" I stopped kissing his legs and replied "mmhmm, I love it. I have some rules though", "Rules?", "Yeah, nothing major. First rule - don't jack me off, I'm likely to cum as soon as you touch me. Second - When you cum you can do what you like, keep it in, take it out, but as long as I get some in my mouth or in my face then I'll be happy. How's that sound?". "Well, fine I guess. One thing though - it's all going in your mouth"

    My heart was beating so fast and hard in my chest after Tom said that. My cock spasmed and more precum leaked out of my dick. I swiftly wiped it up with my finger and licked it clean. Tom saw and thrust his cock in my mouth, ramming hard until I almost gagged. I liked it though, it takes a lot to gag me. I held his cock in my mouth, moving my lips up and down his sizeable length, licking at the head with every pass. He was almost leaking precum non stop and it kept me wanting more and more. I took his dick out with a slurp and jacked him off for a minute or so. He groaned and held my face to his balls which i started sucking and licking. They smelled so good, I never wanted it to stop.

    Tom began smacking his cock off my face. I fucking love that so started rubbing my cock, he saw this and held my mouth open, hitting his cock off my tongue and rubbing it on my cheeks and chin. I kept licking out for the head, sucking up the strings of precum dripping out. I got really close to cumming again at that point so stopped touching myself and sat up.

    "What're you doing?" Tom asked. "Changing it up" I responded. I grabbed him and in one swift move pulled him onto of me as I lay on my back. We kissed again and rubbed our cocks together. I pushed him back and started adjusting his legs so he was straddling my shoulders. "I really want you to fuck my mouth" I said. Tom smiled. "I really want you to fuck my mouth so fucking hard. And don't hold back, keep smacking me with your dick and holding my mouth open, but still no touching my dick, I'm too close and don't want to cum just yet" Tom nodded and immediately shoved his cock in my mouth.

    This time I worked on him for about 5 minutes. He pulled all the way out and rammed all the way in, every stroke he released a little more precum and I sucked it all out of him. Every few thrusts he'd pull right out and wipe my face with his cock, covering me in saiva, precum and getting me worked up even more. After 5 minutes he slowed a little.

    "I'm getting close now" he said "do you want me to cum in your mouth?". "Yes!" I said, barely able to breathe after that session. "Ok, but I cum a lot. Like, a huge amount." My eyes widened at this, I LOVE the taste of cum, the more the better. "Well, if there's so much how about you shoot in my mouth then pull out and coat my face in your spunk then?" Tom grabbed my face and kissed me, beating his cock all the time, this was all the go ahead he needed.
     
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    I pulled my head off the mattress and looked directly at his dick, it seemed bigger yet again and was glistening, dripping with juice. Tom was pulling on his cock so hard I thought it was going to break. I played with his balls waiting for them to tighten. He grabbed the base of his cock and shook it - I knew where we were heading.

    He must have been close so I wrapped my mouth round his cock and started sucking all his length while my left hand jerked him and my right played with his sack. His balls tightened after a few seconds and his girth increased massively. I knew he was going to cum so I took my right hand away and jerked myself instead, feeling my own balls get tighter in the process.

    All of a sudden I felt a warm, thick jet in my mouth, followed by another. I swallowed once but it wasn't enough and my mouth was getting full of his salty-sweet spunk. I pulled his cock out of my mouth and he kept cumming, spurt after spurt of hot cum splashed on my face, hair and neck. About 10 jets altogether. All the while I kept his cum sitting in my open mouth so i could savour the taste and swirl it around as I shot my own massive load all over his back and even hit his hole with a jet of my own jizz.

    I groaned and smiled, so did Tom. He wiped his hand across my cock and licked my cum off it. He smiled again and licked my face, then started to kiss me. I pulled my hand up and licked the rest of my cum from it and went back to the kiss. We kissed for about 7 minutes. Passing our cum back and forward between our mouths. Grabbing each other close and getting more and more sticky and covered than I've ever been.

    When we finally stopped, Tom got the towels from the floor and started cleaning me off, wiping the cum from my face and body, as well as squeezing the last out of my cock to enjoy for himself. I returned the favour, wiping him down, taking a big whiff of the towel and squeezing about half a mouthful from his cock and newly licked-clean balls.

    We kissed again and opened the door, there were more guys than before and 3 were standing right infront of our room. I wondered if they were waiting for us to finish, but their smiles suggested something else. Tom reached out, shook hands and exchanged hugs with 2 of the men, both far too hot to even describe, tall, tanned, scruffy and well hung. "This is Mike and Oliver, we live together, they took me here tonight". They said 'Hi' and I did too then Tom grabbed me, kissed me and steered me towards the showers. "Bye guys, we'll see you later. And you…" the 3rd guy looked over to Tom "…you have NO idea what you've been missing".

    I followed Tome to the shower area and we helped each other clean up and shared some more kissing and embraces. We got changed and handed our keys back, getting a wink and a handful of condoms from the hot Irish guy at the front desk, who seemed to have his hands full with the twink from before, they seemed to be an item.

    We got outside and Tom got his phone out. "Do you want my number?" I said. "Well, yes, of course. We should definitely do that again." We smiled and exchanged numbers. We were going different ways home so when we reached the main street Tom walked to the middle of the road, turned and said "Maybe next time we'll get you in the sling room. Put this to good use" and waved the lube and condoms at me. I laughed 'Sling room?' I thought, we'd better get a crowd then! I walked home and got into bed just as the sun was rising and started to think about what tomorrow had in store for me.
     
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