First time with my true love.

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  1. rivenoriven

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    This is my first story and just the first part of what I expect to be a faily short story. Tell me what you think and hopefully I should be able to finish it. This is all based on my daydreams I have about a girl I love(d).

    We laid together in bed, with our only source of light being the full moon outside the window. We didn’t say anything at first but we need as ,we held hands, that this would be night we physically express our love. I kissed her gently on the lips and looked her straight in her beautiful eyes. “God you look so beautiful, Priscilla”. She kisses me back and tells me she loves me. We then begin to kiss more pationetly as my hand slips underneath her pajamas and into her panties. My fingers find just what we’re looking for and begin to rub her clit. She begins to moan in my ear and whispers “don’t stop”. I can feel her tight pussy is getting wet so I know she’s ready for me. I take off my boxers slowly and let her get her first real look at my 8inch dick. Her face was shock at first, then a big smile comes across it. She holds my dick in her hands for the first time while my fingers move up to her chest. She didn’t mind as my inexperienced hands cupped her soft breasts. I wasn’t an expert at cup sizes but I guessed she was a C cup. I love D cups and above but she was absolutely perfect with everything she had. She comes closer to me and whispers into my ear real seductively, “I’m ready for you”. I smile and kiss her again but realize I can’t find the condom. She noticed I’m looking for it and holds my hand and says to me “I want to feel the real you inside, and then taste you when you’re about to finish”. I get on top of her and rub my dick around her pussy lips. She puts her head back, closes her eyes; preparing for the upcoming pain of her first time and pleasure from her lover.
     
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    Part two: I'm not really pleased at what I have so far but I gave it my best shot. I find it also more difficult to write this with me being a virgin but I had always imagine that my first time with the woman I love would be something similiar to this. Critiscim welcomed, and if this story becomes anything remotely good when it's done I'll re-write it, so consider this just a rough draft.




    After carassing her firm breasts and fingers her I have gotten her wet enough for me. I tease her pussy a little before finnaly going in for the first time. I slowly pushed in, neither of us really expecting what it would be like. Finnaly I got in and began to push in deeper but very slowly so my love wouldn't be in too much pain. I can see it in her eyes that it wasn't exactly comfortable but I began to soothe her by telling her how much I loved her. The feeling of being inside the woman I love was magnificent. I remembered how many nights I fantasied about this and now I was finnaly doing it. At first I was only about to get about 6 inches in but I was finnaly able to get the full 8 in. I let it stay there for a while allowing her to adjust. She looked at me in the eyes and gave me the look letting me know she was ready for it.

    Now this is where all those hours of watching porno finnaly helped. I rocked back and forth allowing my dick to please the woman I would die for. She reached her arms behind her head to grab a pillow as the the feelings of pleasure grew within her.
     
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    Looks good! Keep going!!
     
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    This won't be another one of those stories where the author starts it and never finishes it. Just been too busy to finish and haven't been in the mood lately.
     
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