Getting a Ticket

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  1. Wilde316

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    First attempt so try and be kind

    Stephan revved the engine of his brand new 2006 Ford Mustang, feeling the power of its V8 engine pulling him forward past the slower moving cars. This car was his pride and joy, not for its material value but for what it symbolized, freedom. After spending his younger years casually destroying his credit rating it had taken 7 long years for him to be allowed to buy such an extravagant purchase. While not rich, he had recently been promoted to a very respected position at his job of 8 years, proving once again that his slow long crawl from the gutter of his past life was indeed worth the effort. Thinking back to that life Stephan remembered that it hadn't been all bad, at least not until the end. Before the end he had enjoyed many memorable nights with many memorable women. His morals were non-existent then, allowing him to justify the many drugged out orgies, and a never ending assortment of deviant behaviour. It even let him justify the countless relationships he had ruined. Stephan had been a predator, and all eligible women, taken or not, had be his prey.

    One could harldy argue that genetics had been unusually kind to him, standing 6'3" and carrying 210lbs. of lean toned muscle, he had a ruggid handsomeness that resemble Kris Kristofferson, mixed with the youthful male beauty of Tom Welling. His eyes were a startling emerald green, they could easily convey both weakness and strength all at once. Toppin his head was a thick mane of jet black hair that he kept just long enough to let his natural curls show. He had a sharp intellect and was well spoken with a deep bass voice that seemed made for radio. All these traits were almost perfectly merged creating a man almost designed to melt a womans resolve. These traits plus one other allowed Stephan to enjoy many of the finer things in life, which he did excessively, abusing both his mind and body with drugs, alcohol and sex. All the "friends" he made along the way seemed to disappear as he fell deeper into what one could only describe as self destruction. He had dug a hole of debt so deep that he could no longer afford to even pay rent on his small apartment. One day he officially found himself hitting rock bottom, seducing his middle aged landlady in an attempt to pay his rent. Unfortunately for him her husband interrupted the transaction and made a withdrawal out of Stephans hide with an aluminum baseball bat, leaving Stephan almost dead. While he healed slowly in the hospital he was visited by his landlady, she cave him and envelope and left. On the envelope was clearly stamped "NOTICE OF EVICTION".

    Stephans parents took him in, allowing him to stay free of charge, his father, a tradesman in a local factory was able to get Stephan a job working in production. The work was not easy and the pay was not great, but eventually he paid his creditors off, slowly his mind and body healed, and he became an asset to life instead of a liability.

    Stephan snapped back to reality as he saw lights flashing in his rearview mirror, glancing at the speedometer he saw why, 100 km/h in a 60 zone. He pulled over, waiting for the officer to come to his window, he lowered it as the officer aproached, looking up he saw and attractive female.
    "Out for a cruise?" she said retorically.
    "Actually, yes officer he said smiling, " I just picked her up and I guess I just had to test her out"
    "How'd it feel" the officer asked looking over the car then directly at Stephan, shock filled her eyes and her voice shook as she squeekily asked
    "Oh my God Stephan, is that you?"
    Quickly he looke the cop in the face again slowly a memory kicked in and a name came to his shocked mind, "Tracey" he said hopefully.
    "You remember, I'm surprised" she said with the smile never leaving her face.
    Stephan remembered that Tracey was one of the few women he had ever seduced that he actually had a relationship with, in fact she was the only woman he had ever regretted ending it with. She had been 3 years younger than him and a virgin, her innocenve and genuiness had been almost as attractive to him as her amazing body. Over a period of a year they had a semi-serious relationship, one that he had abused, whether due to drugs or the fact he was a gigantic asshole. When he ended it, she had been so corrupted by his influence that she became somewhat of a town whore. Ashamed of himself Stephan now looked into her eyes and tried to find a way to tell her he was sorry, but before he could she quickly jotted down some information on a piece of paper and said with a beautiful smile,
    "Here's my number, You'd better call or I'll arrest your ass, now slow down and enjoy your new toy." With that she turned and walked back to her cruiser. Stephan gasped with shock and shakingly said "Yes Mam".

    Arrangements were made and a date and time was set, dinner at 8:00, it was now 6:00 and Stephan was showering, he had just spend 2 hours in the gym, a ritual he followed 5 days a week. As he stepped out of the shower onto a bathmat he wiped the moisture from the mirror, doing a quick one over, tracing his body, his mind making notes of areas he would like to improve on, slowly his eyes fell to his abdomen then lower to his groin. There he saw the one last reminder of his past life, the one last trait that seperated him from most other men. Hanging long inches of cock, even limp it was over 5 inches long with a thick vein running down the middle, the length while impressive was only made more so by its thickness, about 3 inches in diameter and 2 inches wide, his cock was the instigator of many shocked looks and whispers at his gym. Stephan knew that while it was impressive limp, it was more so when erect, bigger than a babies are was an understatement. Still he didn't linger and quickly sprayed deodorant on his underams, followed by some Hugo. He picked a nice suit out of his closet with a nice royal blue shirt and tie, if he remembered correctly Tracey loved blue. Stephan looked at the clock and realized that he was really early for his date, so he sat down and lit a cigerette, it was his one last vice and he refused to quit. Taking a long drag Stephan closed his eyes and thought about Tracey, images flashed in his mind of their time together, happier simpler times, then suddenly for some unknown reason the images turned erotic, glimpses of Traceys beautiful nake body straddling him, her hair flailing as she orgasmed, images of sweat dripping down her back towards her firm tight ass as Stephan drove himself deep into her from behind. Stephans eyes hot open with shock as the heater from his smoke slightly singed his fingers, he butted out and realized that he had zoned out for the entire smoke letting his mind wander, looking down he saw and felt his hard dick pressing agains the inside of his dress pants, straining for freedom, leaving an immense bulge in his pants. He watched it slowly fade, shocked at how vivid his daydream had been.

    Stephan quickly stood up and stretched, shaking his head to clear it. He grabbed his car keys and left his townhouse, locking up as he left. He jumped into his car and was just about to start it when a black hummer 3 pulled in behind him. He got back out of his car to see his visitor. A womans long leg stretched out below the door frame, Tracey had somehow found out where he lived, obviously through her police contacts. As she stepped out Stephan was shocked by how stunnigly sexy she looked, her long dark hair was hanging wavy down her naked shoulders, framing her face revealing her gorgeous eyes and soft features. She wore a form fitting blue dress which left no imagining on how spectacular her figure was, Tracey had obviously kept in shape. The dress was cut just above her breasts showing a respectful yet seductive amount of cleavage, Stephan remembered vividly that Traceys breasts were perfectly shaped, firm and ample, she rarely need to wear a bra as they always sat high on her chest, even now after so long they looked amazing. As her gazed at her body he saw the curve of her wonderful hips, a thougt ran through his head realizing that he had only ever seen one woman look even close to as sexy as Tracey did now, his mind searched for the famous actress who he had seen where a similar dress at the academy awards, Tracey looked exactly the same, no better than Salma Hayek.
    "Wow" Stephan said stunned "You look unbelievable".
    "Why thankyou" Tracey said with a grin "Thats the look I was going for, I know our date isn't for another hour or so, but I wanted to get something out of the way before we started" she said this as she moved forward looking directly into Stephans eyes. Closer now he could smell her perfume, realizing it was his favourit, Pure Vanilla, no smell had ever had the effect on him that this one did, it aroused him instantly and Stephan found it hard to concentrate as his mind fought against his bodies desires. Tracey moved closer sitll, Stephan could now feel her body heat against his, he was getting lost in her pressence, she touched his hand and shock spread throughout his entire body, then with a slight eye contact she told him all he needed to know. She pulled his head down to her and kissed him with animalistic passion, Stephan was shocked at how powerful his urges were and returned her kiss forcefully, he pushed her agains the car running his hands through her thick dark hair, she pressed her firm body against his as they gave in to the overpowering lust that permiated their bodies. Then as quicly as it had started they both pulled back from each other, both showing signs of immense arousal, her nipples stood out against her dress protruding like eraser heads, the bulge in his pants was impossible to hide and Stephan tried to find the right words to say. Tracey seem to have no problem finding them "Inside Now" She said breathlessly with a sexual harshness to her voice.

    STAY TUNED FOR PART 2
     
  2. stretcher74

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    great story so far ... I like the depraved cop angle. Hope she's really corrupt. Will she be able to turn around and use drugs/power of her new job to use him the way he used her ? or will she become such a craven cum/cock slut that he will be in charge again ?

    can't wait to find out !
     
  3. Wilde316

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    Part 2


    Quickly Stephen found his house keys, which he had dropped, he unlocked the front door and let her into his home, as he closed the door she was on him, forcefully ripping open his shirt popping several buttons off. She moved her mouth to his chest biting and sucking on his flesh kneeling down in front of him as she led her tongue down his stomach, then hurrying her face lower into his crotch, grabbing his ass in her hands before standing up to kiss him fully sticking her tongue deep into his mouth. Stephan used the opportunity to hike her long dress up, grabbing her ass cheeks he lifted her to him picking her off the ground with sheer animalistic strenght, her legs instictively wrapped around his waist as he turned and carried her up the stairs to his bedroom. As he carried her she used her hands to fully remove his shirt and tie. He pushed open his bedroom door and went to lay her down on the bed, but she swivelled her powerful hips and he found her on top of him, she was amazingly strong and wasn't afraid to show it. He was lying half naked on the bed as she pulled her dress over her shoulders revealing that she wasn't wearing a bra at all, nor was she wearing any panties. Her body was so well tanned that it only accented how amazingly fit her body was. Every inch was muscle, her breast didn't even drop an inch when revealed, sitting wonderfully on her chest. They were perfectly round with firm thick nipples protruding, Stephan gazed at her hard body, her stomach was firm and tight, As he looked down further he found that her pussy was cleanly trimmed, revealing a dark patch of pubic hair.
    "Hly shit you're gorgeaous" Stephen sighed breathlessly, she looked at him like an animal quickly undoing his belt and ripping off his dress pants, underwear and sock, their shoes had been tossed somewhere downstairs. As she looked up from off the bed she saw his rock hard cock, standing at full attention, almost 10 inches long with a huge head Stephans cock size was staggering yet it never faced Tracey as she quickly grabbed it, her hand couldn't wrap around the girth but she still held it firm.
    "You have no idea how long I've waited for this" she said, just as she place his rod into her mouth. Stephan fell back on the bed in ecstasy boggled by the shear intensity that she sucked on his cock. Using both hands she stroked it while bobbing her head down, taking over half of it in at a time. Minutes passed as she worshipped his manhood, Stephan was amazed at how long he was lasting after so long a break from sex. Quickly and without warning Tracey had a condom out of its package, she put the condom on her lips and slowly slid it down Stephans cock, deepthroating him almost to the base, she had obviously remembered to bring the larger size. As she rolled the remaining latex to the base of he cock she climbed on top of him finally allowing him access to touch her, he rolled her over surprising her by his speed. He ran his tongue along her quivering body, around her neck, down to her shoulders, around her breasts, stopping for just a moment to lick and bite her nipples. Slowly he made his way down between her legs, he looked straight up into her eyes, then buried his mouth into her wet hot pussy, everything hit him at once as he tasted and smelt her at the same time, he gave in to the need and began flicking his tongue slowly against her inner thigh, tracing a line up her labia, finding her rock hard clit he pounced, his tongue flicking like mad s he grasped her hips with his hands and pulled her to him harder, her back arched in pleasure revealing ever muscle contraction, even this quickly he could tell she was about to cum, he double his efforts hearing her breath quicken, she moaned in uncontrollable pleasure, in one joyous moment her entire body tensed as she came so hard her legs grasped his head like a vice.
    "Get up Here" she ordered, he obliged happily, she reached down and grasped his still erect cock, placing at her pussy opening. He slowly pushed, feeling a resistance, her pussy opened to him. Inch by Inch he slid deeply into her, Traceys eyes bulged with pleasre.
    "God I forgot how fucking good you feel" she groaned
    "So big, So hard" she seemed to be spurting profanity as he entered her deeper, her body was tensing again, Stephan realized that Tracey was having another orgasm just from him being inside of her.
    "Fuck Me" She screamed
    Slowly he began pumping in, taking long deep strokes, going further in each time, Traceys orgasm did not seem to be fading, finally he touched bottom and his egg sized balls tapped against her. He began building speed, pounding into her with tremendous force, she gripped his bed frame and pushed, fucking him back, then as he slammed into her, she moved one hand down slowly rubbing her clit, her body shook in pleasure as another orgasm ravaged her body. Stephan lowered himself to her, kissing her deeply, she bit his lower lip in ecstasy, their body slid together with sweat. Tracey could only accept so much before she rolled on top of Stephan, sitting upright and slowly taking him in from his tip, she leaned back with her hands on his knees and began to grind herself against him, Stephan watched this sexual creature ride him, the shear site of her body almost pushed him to climax, he realized he was seeing the same image he had only imagined earlier. He held strong waiting until Tracey flung herself forward, her breasts dangled in his face and he greedily sucked on her nipples, again she shuddered and again she came.

    Stephan slowly pulled his now immense cock out of Tracey, it bulged even bigger than before as blood flowed to it and stayed there. He rolled her over letting her climb to her knees, her ass presenting itslef. Stephen entered her from behind slowly then quickly built speed, he grabbed her shoulders and used them to pull himself fully into her, she screamed with joy, begging him to cum, pleading for it, he slammed recklessly now, watching her back drip with sweat, her grabbed her hair and pulled her up, running his hands down to her firm tits then lower rubbing her clit while he slid deeply into her until they both tensed together and came in one explosive orgasm.

    Exhausted and enraptured the fell asleep for what would be hours, her final words before passing out were
    "God I'm glad I didn't give you that ticket".

    A Few hours later they awoke slowly, gently they began grasping one another until within minutes they were insanely fucking, As if their two bodies could no longer exit without one another, they made love, fucked, and as they once called it "threw down", neither admitting defeat, neither wanting the other to, Stephans townhouse became a sexual playground, where all bets were off. Eventually life came crashing back and they both had to work. Stephan was happier at work now, everyone notice it, he almost skipped to his car on his way home. As the weeks passed they grew closer, eventually months passed and they became a family.

    Stephan slowly pulled out into traffic, checking his mirrors, beside him sat the woman who had given him a second chance in life, looking in his rearview mirror he was able to see his pride and joy looking back at him, sitting in a brand new car seat, The mustang was gone but Stephan was more than happy to trade it in on his new SUV.
    "Careful Honey" Tracey said with a smile, seeing the glazed look of contentment in Stephans eyes.
    "You wouldn't want to get a ticket".

    The End
     
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    I love it. You better copy right your shit.
     
  5. Wilde316

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    It's been a long time since I wrote this and this is the first time I've read any responses, thanks for the kind words.
     
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    Both part 1 and 2 were very enjoyable. Would love to read more from you.
     
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