I posted another story called Ginny here a while ago. It was very vanilla and, as I've been told, too predictable. In this new one I plan to start it off pretty vanilla but then really mix it up and add a few twists here and there. Thanks to all the people who gave me input on my last story, esp. Jordan85 who encouraged me to step out of my safe zone and try walking in someone else is shoes. I've tried to take all you told me and use it here. Comments and criticisms welcome. Like Ginny I'll be posting in parts. N.B.: Some of the characters are going to have asshole streaks, even the main character. This is because I wanted to create a story in which there are no real 'good' people to make it a little less predictable. Just a heads up. Also I'm sort of just typing and posting almost immediately with a quick spell check so forgive me for errors, have school work to do too :tongue:.