Help!

[StormyB]

So I started this illustration today (attatched to msg.) well after I drew it, I was so in a rush to start painting it that I didn't even look over my drawing "I usually take a 30 min. break after I have drawn the illustration then come back to it with a new mind set" but this is for a friend and i'm in a rush to finish it :frown1: Now i'm debating with myself rather or not the gun she is holding is too big. So what is wrong with the basic drawing of this pic.? Its not finished yet, so please ignore the colors, her blank face, and rough hair :redface:

Please help, thanks ya'll!!

 

[crescendo69]

It does seem like a biggun, I mean big gun.:biggrin1:

 

[Gl3nn]

The gun's a bit big; yes

 

[Flashy]

the grip of the gun, and the back side of the barrell are far too big. the actual gun barrell should also be a bit longer to the firing side (IMO)

 

[crossy]

STORMY B - What a great talent you have as well as awesome midshaft girth.

 

[HellsKitchenmanNYC]

The breasts are a tad big for Cher. But good job!

 

[StormyB]

Thanks so much ya'll, I thought that gun looked huge :tongue: its so annoying because in my rough sketch it was actually smaller, but when I went back over my lines with the pen tool I made it this size :yuck:

Thanks, i'll fix it!

 

[SR_Les Intercourse]

yeah its big gun, the handle looks long

 

[StormyB]

It does seem like a biggun, I mean big gun.:biggrin1:

Lol, :silly:

 

[StormyB]

STORMY B - What a great talent you have as well as awesome midshaft girth.

Wow, thank you :redface:

 

[StormyB]

The breasts are a tad big for Cher. But good job!

You know you like it :tongue22: lol j/k you're right, I haven't defined the breast yet

Thanks!

 

[2322]

It's a great pic, very creative. But Cher looks more like Peter Burns in his latest incarnation only with tits.

 

[StormyB]

It's a great pic, very creative.(Thank you) But Cher looks more like Peter Burns in his latest incarnation only with tits.

Yeah, well Cher has a pardon "shes cartoon" what's his? 0_o just saying lol I kidd, I kidd :tongue: