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D_Sumefielde Sumesausage

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I dare anyone to tell the shortest, coherent sex/love story possible. It has to have a setting, cause and circumstance (it can even be one sentence). Think of it as a haiku. Start with these words (because the stories will be rated, discussed) "DARE -"

I'll try a pathetic first attempt.

DARE - The hour started with a sharp pain in my chest knowing that after I took her standing she would leave me behind, to join her husband leaving for Panama where he would retire. I came and in a blink of an eye she was gone.

This one was quite long (a bit corny too) but I dare you.

Please no variants on "slam bam thank you ma'm".

Another thing, I might not have kept myself to my own rules but you are free to point that out to me.
 

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DARE - As I stood on the balcony and dropped my sheer robe to reveal a warm thick cock, the south pacific sun set behind me I was again reminded of my reason for coming...Suzanne.
 

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She exhalled. Damn! I was our first time "doggie style." She ended up with a "D" in Math, I recieved an "A." Life isn't always fair, but afte 28 years together it turned out just right.
 

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DARE - Every time he walked past the park bench under the cherry tree, he thought of her, thought of how she woke up crying most nights and how only he could comfort her. And he missed her.
 

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DARE - He pinned her to the bedroom wall and became the living jackhammer that she knew and loved. She screamed and begged for more.
 

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DARE-

unknown, unseen, love arrives and slips away with your heart in the night
 

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DARE: -

She stood up and slowly untied the robe, as she did, more and more of her skin was exposed. Jack bit his lip as his pants got tighter and tighter. There was something about this girl, she was amazing. Jack was pulled from his tangled web of thoughts as the robe hit the floor revealing the most perfect breasts. She had a completely shaven pussy. His erection had never been so painful.
Jack cleared his throat. “Okay, you ready?”
 

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This is the true story of the night my (ex)lover moved back to Alabama.

With the stars above our heads MJ parked the car in front of a house that wasn't yet entirely constructed. I pushed him against the vehicle and proceeded to slob on his knob like there was gold in the middle. He came, I hugged him, that was the last time I saw him.
 

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Evaluation after 10 dare's.

While I was writing this I was to late.

Marleyislegend, was that a DARE?

Criteria should be;
Tension.(Oh my god what happened, what's next?)
Setting, cause, circumstance.(time and space)
Original
Shortness (could it be done shorter?)

It's not a judging show. Just to check if we kept to the "rules".
 
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Boycordoba; that was good! Even without the intro in the previous post you get a lot of info! 10 out of 10

ymtt_do; could it be shorter? I don't know but I think so. Still very good.

ScaredLittleBoy: sweet. Is you subject on his couch reminiscing? Feels like it. I like it.

Rommette; Did the parents just leave the house? It's a bit linear. It just happens. It's pretty graphic though. Thanks!

thorprep; Cherryblossoms say cherrytree. It's good but I dare you to go shorter.

Discobear; Same as rommette. Graphic. I think shorter and involving the neighbours would be cool. Can you do that? I dare you!

vince: sweet. A soft romantic soul. sensitive stuff.:)

neildownx: It's good! But can you go shorter? I dare you!

Yankee08; no dare. Sorry.

marleyisalegend: what to do, what to do. Say dare next time! Please!





(if anyone disagrees or thinks I overlooked something please post)
 
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Dare:

The sun was beaming down so hot on the Rio De Janiero beach. It was Carnival and the mood was festive. All the fine toned bodies was a bit much. They had just arrived a few hours earlier from the States. As they lay on the beach he knew he had to get her back to the hotel room now. The sun, the sand, the surf and the beach side Caipirinhas had them both feeling very very saucy. He grabbed her hand and they hurried back to the hotel. 30 seconds after the door slammed they were out of their bathing suits. 30 seconds later he was slidding his organ deep inside her.