Ideas for short stories

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  1. legaleagel

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    Hi everybody,

    I've been working on a longer piece of fiction for a while now ('Hung' just in case you were wondering, if you haven't read it you should check it out). My main priority is to try and finish this, however I would like to try my hand at writing shorter pieces of fiction.

    I've got a couple of ideas for these but I thought it might be interesting to ask people on here to pm with ideas for stories they'd like to see.

    I'm doing this because I've spoken to lots of people on here who often have great ideas for stories but either don't have the time or inclination to write them themselves.

    So if you've got an idea for a short story involving large penises (in combination with any other fetish you care to mention) please feel free to pm me with it or post it here.

    I would just like to add the note of caution that as I'm quite busy I'm not promising to write every single story or respond to every pm. However hopefully I'll be able to turn a couple of your ideas into pieces of short fiction.

    Also while I like stories about large penises I'm not interested in writing anything where the penis is absurdly big (14 inches plus etc).

    Best wishes

    Charlotte
     
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    I like this idea! I hope that more people post their ideas rather than PMing them because I'm curious to see the ideas and I'm sure many others are as well.

    I've got a few ideas that I've been toying with. They aren't nearly at the stage were they can be written properly or else I would write them myself, but I think they might go somewhere eventually, perhaps in someone else's hands.

    There are rubber-forehead aliens out there with absurdly powerful technology and absurdly human appearance. Maybe they are green or some other funny color, but aside from minor differences they are human to such a degree that you'd love to have sex with one. Part of their technology is a glowing nutrient fluid that gives them superhuman strength and abilities. It makes them taller and bigger in every way, including the penis.

    They are mostly just normal people, but one of them abused the awesome technology to become a brutal dictator across the stars. Before the story begins, he was defeated. As punishment they exile him to Earth, a planet with a so-called brutal population to match his own brutality and with no hope of ever developing interstellar technology. He takes all the non-interstellar technology he wants. He gets a supply of nutrient fluid to last him forever, stored in a tank the size of a car.

    He declares war on Earth using his enormous strength, builds himself a palace with human slaves to fulfill his every whim. There is lots of sex. Humans somehow get exposed to some of his fluid and become superhuman, and there is fighting. The supply of nutrient fluid is lost somehow and he has to struggle to avoid losing his powers. He probably loses his powers, then gets them back later. I'm not sure; it needs work.

    A guy hangs around in changing rooms and checks out guy's genitals. His goal is to recruit people with large penises. He takes them somewhere and makes them do something. He can't tell in advance just how big each guy really is, and some of them being show-ers can add tension because they aren't really as big as the rest of the group.

    Maybe he is doing some sort of research into the origin of the large penis. He can hook each penis up to a machine for analysis. Maybe he is scanning the large penises for some sort of super advanced internet porn. Or maybe it's just regular porn, a simple pornographic movie. The smaller guys get jealous of the larger guys; fun ensues.

    In the future, cops police the world without restraint. They kill criminals as often as they bring them to trial and no one cares, so the police run wild. They're not actually police; they are agents of the all-powerful Enforcement Ministry. When the cops have that much power, you've got to have criminals who are even stronger. They commit crimes with total freedom, go anywhere, do anything, kill anyone. To be a cop in a world like that you need really big balls.

    The top criminal in the world is the mysterious Mister Doom, the man whom everyone fears. He kills, he rapes, and he's a tricky devil who can slip past any security and disappear with even less effort. He also probably has the largest penis in the world.

    The only cops who stand a chance of stopping Doom are the top agent with the biggest dick in the ministry and his sexy female rookie partner. He's got experience and she's got an itchy trigger finger. They need to take down organized crime, deal with the jealousy of other agents, and try to discover the identity of Mister Doom.
     
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    Thanks G, thats a great start.

    I like the last idea as the whole police thing is a bit of a turn on (uniforms, power, aggressive guys etc). Depending on whether anybody suggests anything else I might give that a go.

    It just suddenly occured to me that I should add two general things I should have mentioned in my original post.

    1) The idea has to be something I could write in 2000-10,000 words maximum. I've already got one epic on my hands so I want something I could write over a week or so. If its popular I could always write a sequel later on.

    2) If I do take an idea of someone on here and turn it into a story please don't have a go at me if it doesn't match up to the vision of it in your head. I can string a sentence together but I'm not a great writer so I might not do your idea justice.
     
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    Oh, I see now where we differ (and why you probably weren't too impressed with the stories I sent some time ago). Funny, I used to prefer stories that were more in line with realistic sizes, but that mindset started to fade when I read "My Life As A Teenage Stud," then was systematically demolished bit by bit first by Richard Steele's stories, then "Generous Spirit," and finally (and especially) Love's World. I still have an upper limit on sizes (which would be the point at which it becomes impossible to imagine a way to fit it's entirety into the woman) so anything larger than the distance from a woman's pussy to her head is still out for me, but otherwise, I guess my thinking has become slightly perverted (though I always imagine a woman feels no pain and only overwhelming pleasure, so I'm no sadist). This, by the way, is also the reason why I love porn featuriing Mandingo, especially when the girls can take him almost entirely (though for the last 2 years, his scenes have been extremely weak) while scenes on "Freaksofcock" don't do anything for me because the girls can barely take even half of that guy.

    I'm afraid with your admission I now must take much less interest in both Hung and any short story you eventually pen (I can't really go back to smaller sizes now that I've discovered my penchant for absurd/"fantasy realistic" stories), but that doesn't take away from my opinion that you do undoubtably have a significant talent for writing fiction. Good luck, I'm sure you'll have many fans who are more like I once was.
     
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    I'm sorry to here that although I respect the reasoning behind it.

    For me I tend to stick to 14 inches as the upper limit as 12 inches generally seems to be the limit in real life both in terms of how big porn stars get and what women can actually take. Therefore I don't mind stories that push the limit of this.

    However stories where the guy is 18 inches or bigger aren't really a turn on for me. Who knows though, maybe I'll go through a similar conversion to yourself and start enjoying that genre of fiction in a few years time. Certainly my tastes in erotica (and porn) have changed a lot over the past five years. I now enjoy harder material that would have been a total turn off for me when I was going through my feminist phase at university (actually I'd like to think I was still going through my feminist phase :) )

    I enjoy penis growth stories and Billy will get a lot bigger in Hung as the chapters progress but again the upper limit will probably be between 12 and 14 inches. Maybe a could do a poll on here and people could vote (democracy in action).

    As a writing challenge to myself though I think I'm going to have a go at writing a much larger cock story (of the dimensions you suggest) just to see if I can do it (I would like to write stories covering every single aspect of the fetish so I should include the super size cocks as well). If you pm a plot or scenario thats would take up no more than 2,000 to 10,000 words I'd be more than happy to write it.

    Charlotte
     
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    LPSG is missing stories have a harem with many women for a big-dick stud.
     
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    Well, if a story is based in reality, any size beyond 13 inches would pretty much be impossible for a woman to take entirely without causing serious bodily harm. Richard O Steele and a lot of others like this idea of a "second vagina" occuring when the cervix opens up as a result of a girl's excitement, creating a channel to the uterus, but from what I understand this is anatomically impossible in reality. (I find I can ignore that though, since it seems possible given that babies do make that very passage in reverse, and I've read online that some women are ashamed and embarrassed because they occasionally feel sexual pleasure when this happens during labor- seems to me good fantasy ideas often arise through the creation of factual errors that seem plausible on the surface, similar to the development of scare tactics in urban legends).

    This is why I've been searching for stories featuring fantasy concepts that allow women to accept larger cocks, like magic (ala Generous Spirit, genie), generations of genetic adaptation (Future Genetic Aberrations), alien reconfiguration (Love's World), or my own idea (similar to the alien reconfiguration except by humans) of a rearrangement of internal organs around an enhanced body-length vagina achieved through drugs that manipulate the genetic code. It wasn't until Love's World that I even really considered concepts like this, but now it's the first thing I look for in a potential hot story.

    I've retained certain button-pushers in my mind from all of the stories I've read also, like a cock that can hold a woman's weight, a cock that comes up between a guy's nipples, has the rigidity of an iron bar, is constantly erect, constantly leaking precum/cum, that will spew a continuous stream of cum at great force for minutes or even hours (harder to justify even in a fantasy world, but my idea for this is some kind of super-concentrated combo protein/hormone drink developed by the woman to keep the cum production in overdrive), sticks up at about 45-60 degrees from parallel to the ground, throbs intensely with arousal, circumference too large to encircle with hands, visible "semen tube" on the underside that distends during ejaculation, has a blood-purpled big mushroom head (even approaching the size of the woman's head), attached to giant balls the size of some large fruit or another (coconuts or cantaloupes seem popular). These ideas are pretty common for the genre, but are not often combined together as a whole.

    I guess I would like to see your take on the idea I already sent you (remember, the genius couple who meets in high school and puts their incredible brains to the task of using genetic manipulation to turn each other into their perfect mates, with the girl eventually becoming insanely obsessed with cock?), but I tend to like long stories, so if it's only going to be 10,000 words you'll have to be careful about how you go about doing it. Pretty much, that's only enough for maybe 2 sex scenes tops, so I guess what you'd have to do is give some backround/setup, then skip forward some time for the 1st encounter (about halfway to the depraved finish), then fast forward all the way to the climax scene (literally and figuratively). It would be a little more disjointed than I prefer, but seeing as how I'm too lazy to write it myself (and it looks like nobody else will either, despite my $50 contest offer, which was largely ignored) I guess your short story offering would certainly be better than nothing. I imagine it'd be hard for you to write it well though, if you can't appreciate the concept of larger-than-life fantasy stories just yet (but maybe you'll understand what I'm looking for since I've more than made clear what types of elements would be effective).

    Once again, I will post my "desired huge cock erotic story manifesto" from an earlier post, and I'll leave it up to you if you want to tackle these concepts yourself (warning, lots of redundancy here):


    1. Sci-fi/fantasy theme, mostly hetero (maybe some light lesbianism, not necessary by any means though)

    2.Penis growth. Should start normal then slowly yet continually grow larger and larger until it's length reaches from a woman's pussy to the top of her head, somehow directly activating pleasure centers in her brain (should be at the level of or slight above guy's nipples by end of story). Girth can be as large as 5" in diameter. Can get larger if the protagonists get taller (though height should not exceed 8' for the guy and 7' for the girl). Once it gets bigger, it can't get smaller! Circumcised, well shaped, slight upward curve, some veins, stands up on it's own at about 45 degrees. Wide, flaring, mushroom dickhead almost the size of the woman's head. Balls the size of cantaloupes.

    3. Correlated continual increase in virility. Guy first gets hard more often at base state, then perpetually hard with precum drip at base, then perpetually hard with continuous precum flow at base, then continuous sperm flow at base, then continual increase in flow at base state. Cock gets harder and harder, then gains consistency of rock, then almost painfully erect and throbbing. Orgasms become more and more prolonged and powerful, eventually spurting thick creamy spunk for minutes or even hours in a thick steady stream. Cock can also hold a woman's weight under it's own rigidity alone.

    4. Increase in women's sexuality. Correlated continual increase in vaginal viscosity and squirting, nearly rivaling prodigious production of male sperm. Increased libido over time and desire for orgasm/bigger cock/more cum. Wants to alter her body's hormones to produce results that will get her man even HOTTER, spurring more virility.

    5. Woman's size obsession. Both woman and man wants his cock and balls bigger but especially the woman. She has a size fetish that slowly builds out of hand, is absolutely OBSESSED to an eventual point of insanity with huge cock/balls and his sperm production, the bigger the cock/load the bigger her orgasms, and the more she wants more. She eventually gets to the point where she has small orgasms just looking at the guy's equipment. Has some control over the mechanism by which the guy gets bigger, i.e. persuades him to take more of some pill/hormone/pharmacrop or simply injects him directly. Good example of the idea found in the dissapointingly unfinished "genie" story posted under "Imported" user name ("shooter" the original author).

    6. Loss of control. Hormone/pills/pharmacrop/alien vegetation/magic has some sort of addictive quality, leading to the couple losing all control of the situation as virility and orgasms increase exponentially. Could also be some sort of mental change (as in "genie") that leads to a loss of control.

    7. Continually improving physiques of both male and female to utter sex God status, including perfectly spherical basketball sized tits and long hair for the women and enhancements of muscles used in fucking, especially in woman's legs and vagina (i.e. kegels).

    8. Increases in sensitivity and orgasmic ability.

    9. ANTICIPATION! (Not too long, but enough to make the payoff worthwhile.)
    Obviously not a simple task with only 10000 words.

    An idea I had where this could all be put to use was two genius high school AP biochem students meet each other, fall in love, and decide they want to have the best sex ever together so they put their IQ's to work creating formulas for each other to engineer hormones/pills/pharmacrops to create the perfect sexual partner. The important thing is to start slow then gradually ramp it up to over the top obscene fucking.

    There it is, do with it what you will!
     
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    Actually, not to be copy-catting (not a word I know), several of these themes are present in my first effort (Magic Penis). Of course, LegalEagle inspired me by creating Hung. I have an idea also along the lines of Hung, with a club of hung men... I'll have to revamp so as not to plagerize ...
     
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    I'd like to echo the desire to keep things moderately reasonable/believable. Even 12-14 inches pushes the envelope on what is realistic, in my opinion. Growth stories are fun, but if the method of growth becomes too absurd it distracts from what the story is really about. I'd also like to see more stories from a woman's first person perspective.
     
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    In the near future, a man will work in a biologically hazardous waste processing facility. His incredibly beautiful girlfriend works there too and she loves teasing him about his small penis. He has seen how certain chemicals cause gigantism and mutation in small animals. Out of desperation and extreme sexual frustration, he dips his penis into the chemicals and hopes for the best. Then he slowly begins to change.
     
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    This is why your story is currently my most watched of the newer stories, and one of the few I really tend to follow. I'm not into more than just a dude and a girl mostly, so bringing a third party in, or other dudes even (as would be the case with the club story) doesn't excite me much.
     
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    This is a good one too.
     
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    was thinking, Charlotte, since you are so kind to ask for suggestions for you to write, if there was anything that you would like written for you.

    you gave so much with the story Hung and came back to post and work on it more, so the least that I or anyone else could do is to write something for you to your tastes (especially the penis growth aspects).

    feel free to PM me if you would like something done or just to share along some ideas that you might have.

    all the best

    Shadow
     
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    I've actually made great progress in writing the toxic waste idea myself since I posted the idea. Anyone who wants to use that idea might also want to keep in mind that I'll probably come out with a version of it too. I don't want to discourage anyone from using the idea; I just don't want to be accused of stealing an idea back after having given it away.
     
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    Here's a scenario for you...

    I think that it is only a matter of time before someone comes up with
    a penis enlargement drug that actually works. They are almost
    certainly working on it already; such a drug would probably be worth
    as much, if not more then Viagra, Ciallis, and Levitra combined.

    I imagine it as causing a slow but measurable growth between two to
    four inches a year ... the growth would be irreversible and continue
    as long as they continue taking the drug.

    The drug would probably be available by prescription only, but there
    would soon be a booming black market.

    There's a great number of people who would love to add an inch or two.
    They would take it a few months, and then stop.

    But some guys may have a size queen girlfriends.
    Some guys are gay porn stars.
    Some guys are male prostitutes.
    And some are just never satisfied.

    This is a world of enormous variation... people go anywhere from
    perfectly, completely normal to well beyond absurdly big, with everything
    in between as well.

    I tend to also prefer the "absurdly big" stories as well, but I like them to happen in some sort of realistic way.
    Sure, I like magic and fantasy too, but it seems more exciting to me if it feels like something that could really happen...
     
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    That's an interesting premise, but do you have any ideas about stories that might happen in a world like that? I find it difficult to imagine.

    My first thought is that size would no longer be important. No one would envy people who are bigger because anyone can be as big as he chooses to be. Women wouldn't want big guys because any guy can be big; take any guy you like and if you want him to be bigger, you can work on that later. Women might actually prize the smaller guys, since it's impossible to make a big guy small even if you think he is too big. Small men would be rare and precious.

    I think it would take a lot of the fun out of being big if I couldn't be envied for it. Maybe the drug could be very expensive so that only the rich and powerful can get it. Then a large penis could be envied even more because it is a symbol of real status.
     
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    There have been a couple of really interesting ideas for stories posted on here and also PM'd to me. OVer the next week or so I'm going to sit down and work on some story ideas and then try to write an actual short story based on one of them. I'm not 100% sure which one I'll do first but hopefully over time I'll be able to do a variety of different story types.

    By the way, thanks to everybody who has suggested a story idea. I can't promise I'll manage to write all of them but I'll do my best to try and make them hot and push a few different buttons.
     
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    I think that the effect on mainstream society might not be quite so
    dramatic. Sure, there will be a lot of jokes about it on late night
    television, but life will, for the most part, just go on.

    The normal range is currently about 5 to 7 inches. I expect that
    might shift upward by a few inches, but probably not more than that.
    Most straight guys will do whatever pleases their wives or girlfriends
    the most.

    I think that among the general population, the truly big ones, like 10
    inches or more, would continue to be uncommon. Many of the guys on
    LPSG say they aren't interested in getting any bigger, and I believe
    them.

    The interesting stories, at least for me, are the ones that happen more
    to the fringes of society. You are right, some things would change a
    lot. There wouldn't be any more small penis humiliation. In fact, the
    smaller guys would be envied by their friends who may have overdone things.

    As for story ideas... The one I'd like to see the most is about a
    sweet young guy who falls desperately in love. His intended partner
    just smiles at him and tell him he's just not her type. But he keeps
    right on trying ... and eventually she confesses her "shameful secret".

    And as anyone could guess, she has a sort of an unusual fetish ... she
    likes big dicks. And he's like no problem, just move in with me and
    I'll start taking the drug tomorrow. She still seems hesitant, like
    no you don't understand, she wants them really really big. At this
    point you would think warning bells would start to go off... but he's
    blinded by love, and promises he won't stop until she gives permission.

    You can see where the story goes from there...
     
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    legaleagle, did you get my PM?
     
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