Ladies can you review my erotica please (Guys welcome too)

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  1. D_Darius Danglers

    D_Darius Danglers New Member

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    I hope its okay posting this here.
    I'm writing an erotica for my girlfriend. We met in University and have been in a long distance relationship for I while now. We sometimes send naughty pics to each other but I wanted to do something special.
    She's really into well written, drawn out erotica and since I write as a hobby I thought I'd do one based VERY loosely on how we met. If any of you are in to erotica can you check mine out.

    http://www.lpsg.org/243956-ginny-long-story-good-bits.html

    Also something of a challenge as its hard to find any good romantic interracial sex stories as most are about 'big ugly black guy with huge cock rutting my gf while I watch'. If you know any though do tell :smile:
     
  2. ManlyBanisters

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    No. Not really.

    You posted the story in the right place - 'advertising' it here is skirting fairly close to the forum rules.

    Not quite as bad as a 'rate my cock' thread, but not the intended purpose of this forum. There was a thread a while back where someone asked the men to try to impress the readers of this subsection with their fiction. You'd do better digging that up and posting a sample in it.
     
  3. Intrigue

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    Atleast he was skirting right? (Sorry I thought the skirting was a pun so I laughed)
     
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    We have a forum for stories already, and it's not women's issues. I vote we move the link there.

    And if you want to know where the free but good erotica is, ask Space Lord. He writes at one of them. Mine is mostly fan-fiction at Adult FanFiction Forum.
     
  5. ManlyBanisters

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    The guy knows, h - the link is to a story posted there. He'd just like women to read and comment.

    I don't think his asking is a big, hairy deal - but it is a sliding scale - open the door to the borderline requests like this and we're back to 'rate my schlong' in no time.
     
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    Yeah I agree. Kind of like "give em an inch and they'll take a mile" huh?
     
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    Wanna see my etchings? :tongue: okay, I'll look. Stay tuned.

    >comments moved to fiction forum
     
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  8. ManlyBanisters

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    Arf, arf.

    More like give them an inch and they'll insist you take all 13 internet inches...

    Do us a favour and post your answers in the original thread, not here. It's where the feedback belongs.
     
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    Woops! I think that was in response to me. I'm a professed fan of her art. My apologies if that is how that came about.
     
  10. ManlyBanisters

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    Or I'm misunderstanding an interaction - I'll get me coat...
     
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  12. D_Darius Danglers

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    Really sorry, my bad. Is there a way to lock the thread and let it sink into oblivion?
     
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