GTOK, The latest update is excellent. Do you have a character or story arch that you're following or building toward? I'm curious as to where you're taking the story.
Lance Gets a Physical (PE, BE, MFF)
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The clinic wasn't at all what they'd seen on their first view visits. Gone were the translucent fixtures, gone were the sleek desks and chairs, gone was the faint hum of the calm, soothing music that was piped throughout the walls and offices of the space. When Joan and Lance stepped off the elevator, they were greeted with nothing. Everything was gone save the lone remaining desk where Peggy sat. On the desk sat a large metal container that resembled a pc tower. It had a small monitor that was built into the case on the top and it had a small glass panel near the bottom on the right side. On the front was a single USB port that sat above a numbered keypad. There were no wires running from the box to any wall jacks or outlets. Lance guessed that everything was self contained and that it ran wirelessly over a network.
"Whoa! What happened here?" Joan said, her massive breasts swaying softly under thin mind-bogglingly overstretched cotton tshirt as she walked around what used to be the main foyer. "I don't know," Lance murmured, as he himself was quite baffled at what he was looking at. They quickly made their way down the bare halls and looked into nothing but empty room after empty room. When they returned back to the front, they walked over to the desk and pressed the red blinking button.
The monitor flickered and came to life, revealing an extremely attractive woman who’s chest marveled Joan’s in size. She wore a white, very form fitting one piece mini dress with matching white heels. Lance thought she looked familiar as he thought he had seen her in the halls during one of his visits. When she finally spoke, they recognized her voice as the same one that they heard on the phone.
"Thank you for taking time to visit the Program to retrieve your updated protocol. We know that the condition of the old clinic and this method of transmission may be a bit unsettling, but there have been several changes to the Program that required immediate action. Please pay attention to the following instructions carefully as this is a one time use process," the voice said. Lance and Joan looked at each other with curious looks. "I don't like this," Joan mouthed to her husband. Lance nodded in agreement as the voice continued.
"In system before you contains information on your new protocol. Your complete file and protocol information will be downloaded to a data drive that will be be presented in the glass compartment on the right side of the tower. The drive contains a self-executable file that will launch once plugged into the USB drive on your PC or laptop. Please read the documentation carefully. Now, on the keypad, please press the pound sign, then enter the last four of your social security number, then press the pound sign again.”
Lance entered press the pound key and entered the four digits as directed. He pressed the pound key again and there was a long pause. The machine made a light whirring sound for roughly 15 seconds before finally slowing to a stop. They heard a light “clink” on the right side of the container and looked over to see the glass cover slowly raise up, reveling the data drive.
"Please look to the right of the container,” the woman continued. "If the data drive is red in color, your status in the Program has been terminated. The drive will contain instructions on how to maintain the protocol and how to keep it viable for as long as you desire. Any gains you have made during your membership will not decline as long as you follow the guidelines within your base set. Additionally, your account has been closed and there is no further financial obligation. If the data drive is blue in color, your status in the Program has been modified. Please follow the instructions carefully and you will be contacted within 90 days with more information. If the data drive is green, plug the drive into the USB port on the front of the compartment. You will be provided instructions on what to do next.”
Joan looked at Lance fearfully. “What the hell, Lance?” she whispered. Lance held up his finger to silence her as the woman continued.
"We thank you for your participation in the Program. Wherever the path of your life leads you, we hope it brings all of the pleasures and fullness you deserve. Good bye.”
The monitor went dead and the red button resumed its slow blink, the same as it was when they arrived. Joan pulled the data drive from the compartment and the glass door slid down shut.
They both stared wide-eyed at the drive - it was green.
"Whoa! What happened here?" Joan said, her massive breasts swaying softly under thin mind-bogglingly overstretched cotton tshirt as she walked around what used to be the main foyer. "I don't know," Lance murmured, as he himself was quite baffled at what he was looking at. They quickly made their way down the bare halls and looked into nothing but empty room after empty room. When they returned back to the front, they walked over to the desk and pressed the red blinking button.
The monitor flickered and came to life, revealing an extremely attractive woman who’s chest marveled Joan’s in size. She wore a white, very form fitting one piece mini dress with matching white heels. Lance thought she looked familiar as he thought he had seen her in the halls during one of his visits. When she finally spoke, they recognized her voice as the same one that they heard on the phone.
"Thank you for taking time to visit the Program to retrieve your updated protocol. We know that the condition of the old clinic and this method of transmission may be a bit unsettling, but there have been several changes to the Program that required immediate action. Please pay attention to the following instructions carefully as this is a one time use process," the voice said. Lance and Joan looked at each other with curious looks. "I don't like this," Joan mouthed to her husband. Lance nodded in agreement as the voice continued.
"In system before you contains information on your new protocol. Your complete file and protocol information will be downloaded to a data drive that will be be presented in the glass compartment on the right side of the tower. The drive contains a self-executable file that will launch once plugged into the USB drive on your PC or laptop. Please read the documentation carefully. Now, on the keypad, please press the pound sign, then enter the last four of your social security number, then press the pound sign again.”
Lance entered press the pound key and entered the four digits as directed. He pressed the pound key again and there was a long pause. The machine made a light whirring sound for roughly 15 seconds before finally slowing to a stop. They heard a light “clink” on the right side of the container and looked over to see the glass cover slowly raise up, reveling the data drive.
"Please look to the right of the container,” the woman continued. "If the data drive is red in color, your status in the Program has been terminated. The drive will contain instructions on how to maintain the protocol and how to keep it viable for as long as you desire. Any gains you have made during your membership will not decline as long as you follow the guidelines within your base set. Additionally, your account has been closed and there is no further financial obligation. If the data drive is blue in color, your status in the Program has been modified. Please follow the instructions carefully and you will be contacted within 90 days with more information. If the data drive is green, plug the drive into the USB port on the front of the compartment. You will be provided instructions on what to do next.”
Joan looked at Lance fearfully. “What the hell, Lance?” she whispered. Lance held up his finger to silence her as the woman continued.
"We thank you for your participation in the Program. Wherever the path of your life leads you, we hope it brings all of the pleasures and fullness you deserve. Good bye.”
The monitor went dead and the red button resumed its slow blink, the same as it was when they arrived. Joan pulled the data drive from the compartment and the glass door slid down shut.
They both stared wide-eyed at the drive - it was green.
GTOK, You always manage to create some sort of tingling sensation when reading these stories. You are truly talented, and I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
***De-Lurks***
I probably don't need to beg... But I beg to disagree.
For my buck, this is one of the best stories going.
Can't wait for more.
Cheers,
GJ
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The story needs to be more sex! Less sex, more growth! More about the girls! More about Lance, more about the program. How about you toss some gay action in there? What happened if a derranged ex employee started the program on a horse? Why is there sometimes a post without sex? The plot needs to be better, the language is too advanced.Why does the author take so long to post?!?!
This story is of Amazingly high quality and the author hears dozens of suggestions daily on what would make the story "Better" and that he needs to post on it more often. If you don't like it then that's fine, let the literally hundreds of thousands of other viewers enjoy it how it is. And however the author chooses to steer the storyline is his choice and shouldn't be influenced by the chanting of the horny mob loving every word.
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GTOK and many of the other authors do good work. I'm fine with what they post and when they post. I'm sure they all have other lives and their writing isn't paying the bills, but a fun distraction for them.
In the last few months I've used a writers idea from several years ago to meet a couple. So GTOK and the rest, write what you want when you want.
In the last few months I've used a writers idea from several years ago to meet a couple. So GTOK and the rest, write what you want when you want.
- GTOK,
Joan rolled over and looked at the clock - 7:15. She blinked a few times and gave a little stretch. She felt refreshed and had slept the best she’d had in a long time. She smiled thinking back to the events of the previous day and wondered what it all meant and how their life was going to change. She looked around the room and remembered that they didn’t go home; they had stayed overnight at one for the suites at the clinic. The suite was extraordinary and decorated like something she’d seen in one of the luxury home and DuPont Registry magazines. The bed was the most comfortable thing she’d ever felt and she snuggled into back down into the pillow. She reached up and caressed her own set of large pillows, thinking about how, even though they had been big before, they’d only been a fraction of the size that they were now. She absolutely LOVED having tits bigger than anything she’d imagined. The way her nipples had gotten even more sensitive after her enlargement was incredible and even the slightest change in temperature or the way fabrics rubbed up against them kept her mind in a constant state of semi-arousal.
She gave herself a larger stretch and her leg bumped into something in the bed. She rolled over and to her shock and surprise, Lance was still there.
In all of the years she’d known Lance, his body was uncanny at knowing the exact time of the day and when he needed to get up. So for her to see him there, her first response was one of shock. “Is he okay? Is he conscious? Oh my - what if he’s dead? Did he die in his sleep? Oh no - not Lance!” The thoughts of dread and anxiety filled her mind until she saw him gently shift and move his arm. Joan sighed a big sigh of relief and giggled to herself for being so dramatic. But this was so unlike him that she still couldn’t help but wonder if something was wrong. But she looked at his face and saw something she hadn’t seen in a a long time - Lance looked completely and totally relaxed. Over the years, she’d watched him as he slept a thousand times and even in his sleep, he never seemed quite restful: grinding his teeth, his brow furrowed, his jaws often clenched. But as she looked down on her husband, she saw none of that. All she saw was perfect contentment and he was as relaxed and peaceful in his sleep as she’d ever seen. In fact, she’d never seen.
She noticed that the bulge of the sheets at his crotch was larger than normal so she moved the light comforter out of the way and slowly pulled back the thin sheet covering him. She smiled with pride as she looked at Lance’s cock. His legs were spread wide to accommodate the expanse of his huge, hairless ball sack and his long, fat, limp dong rested between each smooth, coconut sized testicle. She smiled as she gazed on the thick appendage that stretched well over a foot in length. She could tell that his cock was thicker than it was just the day before, even in its flaccid state. She reached out and softly stroked her finger up and down the length of the shaft and watched as the big balls gently move and shift in the big scrotal sac. The longer she stared at Lance and at his cock, the hornier she became. She looked down at her heavy After a couple of minutes, she couldn’t take it anymore and needed to feel that huge cock inside of her.
Joan began to increase the way she was rubbing her husband’s cock and after a few seconds, she lost patience and started to work on him harder. Lance barely stirred from his slumber but his cock awake from its and Joan nearly squealed with delight as she watched it slowly inflate. She moved over and positioned herself between Lance’s outstretched legs and squeezed and pumped the base of the behemoth. “Fucking shit - I think it’s gained weight!” Joan said to herself as she pumped the big stick up and down. “Let’s see if I can help it along,” she thought as she bent down and lathered the fat head with her tongue. That illicit a bit more than just a moan and shuffle from Lance and his cock responded mores, inflating and lengthening even faster. After a few more seconds of attention with her mouth, Lance’s cock was soon pulsing and throbbing at full mast. Yet he remained fast asleep.
“Hmmm, he doesn’t wanna wake up huh?” Joan thought as she rubbed her very wet pussy in anticipation of mounting the big dong. “Well he’s gonna have one helluva wet dream.” She stood up on the bed and positioned herself over the massive pole. She grabbed the headboard with one hand and grabbed the neck of the big cock in the other. She slowly lowered herself down and rubbed the broad tip against her engorged lips. She shuddered at the sensations and had to stop in order to focus on keeping her balance. After she’d adjusted herself, she once again lowered down and pushed the immense head inside of her. “Fuck - it IS bigger!” Joan’s voiced screamed in her head.
She braced herself with both hands on the headboard and continued to push further down on Lance’s cock, each inch sending ripples of pain and pleasure coursing outward from her clit to every inch of her body. She was thankful the headboard had wrought iron bars and she was able to adjust her grip downward as she slid lower. Her massive chest was heaving and hanging down heavily between her crouched legs and it reminded her of so many images she’d seen from her infrequent porn site web surfing. She shuffled her feet to help with her balance and leverage and continued to force her weight further down. She had no idea of just how much she had inside of her but she knew that she was absolutely chock full of cock and it was becoming a labor to breath - yet she wanted more. She adjusted her hands down on the bars and pushed one more time, felling another couple of delicious inches slide up inside of her. She was panting and gasping heavily now and it mattered none to her whether Lance was awake or not - all she could concentrate on was the fire she felt on her clit and the fullness Lance’s big dick was exerting on her vaginal walls.
Joan finally stopped her descent and started to move upward. She could feel the thick veins and the fa ridge of the head spreading her apart and the friction they caused on the upstroke made her nearly lose her balance. She had to be cautious since she could easily cause injury to Lance and that was something she dared not contemplate. Just as she was beginning to think her exercise was a bad idea, she felt a pair of strong hands grab herbage ass cheeks to steady her. She couldn’t see that Lance was now awake - her breasts were entirely to big to see down over. So she carefully let her right hand go and pulled the heavy bag to the side to find her husband beaming up at her. Her move mad them both laugh. “Peek-a-boo,” Lance joked. “I see someone just couldn’t wait until I was up. Guess u needed a head start, huh?” Joan blushed but her smile quickly turned into a look of pleasure as Lance slowly gyrated his hips, grinding the fat dorsal vein against her pulsing clit. “Mmmmmmmm you big bastard … you know I love it when you do that,” Joan sighed as Lance reversed direction and twisted his hips the other way.
After a few seconds of this, to Joan’s shock and surprise, he lifted her up a few inches on his cock and maneuvered them so that Joan was laying down and Lance was between her legs. Lance bent down and sucked her big nipple into his mouth, biting down hard. Joan groaned and grabbed the big tit in one hand, squeezing it hard and mashing it into Lance’s face. With her other hand she grabbed the back of his head and forced him down even more, making sure he didn’t move. Lanced flexed the muscles in his ass in a rhythm, causing him to kegel and his cock to surge in a pulsing fashion. Joan’s already overstretched cunt could feel each pulse and all along the shaft, the big head stuffed inside of her growing wider and bigger with each pulse. “My fucking goodness - you are such a good fuck,” Joan moaned as she wrapped her legs around his back in an effort spur him to get more of his cock inside of her. But Lance didn’t budge.
As suddenly as he started, he stopped and forced his way away from Joan’s grasp. He directed her to roll over on her stomach, keeping his cock firmly implanted deep in her womb as she rotated. When she’d made the transition, he grabbed her hips and pulled her up, making her get on all fours doggy-style. He grabbed a handful of her hair and pulled back hard as he thrust deeply inside of her. The lustful groan from Joan’s throat spurred Lance to increase the pace and soon his hips were a blur, pumping back and forth inside of his wife’s gushing slit. He pulled her hair harder as he bent down to grab as much of her tit as he could with his other hand. Her breasts were so big that even on her hands and knees, her breasts bunched up underneath her, barely moving as Lance rammed her.
Suddenly, Lance grunted deeply and slowed his strokes. Joan tried her best to maintain the hard pace and thrust her ass back into him as hard and as fast as she could. “Come on you big mother fucker! Don’t you dare stop on me! Fuck me! Fuck me! Fuck me!” Joan yelled over her shoulder. Lance let go of her hair and grabbed her big ass cheeks, kneading and squeezing them as he continued his long slow strokes. “Shut up,” he groaned and smacked her left ass cheek. The sting of the contact shot directly to Joan’s clit and lit on fire, sending chills up her spine. “You like smacking my ass, you big picked fucker? Huh? You like that? Smack it again!” she groaned. Lance gave her another whack on the left cheek before smacking her on the other side. Joan’s pussy quivered and spasmed in a hard orgasm, clamping down hard on Lance’s cock. Lance gritted his teeth and grabbed her hips for leverage as he tried to continue fucking the ultra tight canal.
Joan lifted her leg and placed it firmly on Lance’s thigh and pushed hard, effectively pushing herself off of the long phallus. Lance was so shocked at the maneuver and the force it put on the ridge of his cock as she pushed off, that his cock sent a large trail of precum flying over and hitting Joan on her left breast. She quickly scooped the thick syrup from her breasts and sucked it into her mouth. Lance was up on her instantly, pushing the head of his engorged and angry cock into her mouth. Joan sucked as much as she could into her mouth, her teeth scrapping the sensitive underside. Lance pulled back and massaged the head of his cock, then forced his way back into her mouth. He repeated the move several times over the next few seconds, relishing the harsh bite of Joan’s teeth as it grated over the cock flesh. Lance could start to feel the hot boil of the impending load starting to churn in his gonads and he release another ridiculously large trail of precum. Joan frantically rubbed her dripping, gaped gash as she continued slobbering all over Lance’s shaft.
Just as Lance was about to put Joan into position so that he could lie on his side and take from behind, the door to the suite opened and Dr. Jackson walked in, followed by Peggy, Brandon, and Dr. Long. “Well, I see you two are hard at work,” Tasha said chuckling as she made her way into the bedroom. Joan couldn’t help but laugh - not only at the comment, but the fact that she had become so comfortable around these people, who had been complete and total strangers barely two weeks ago, to be totally naked in the middle of having sexing it not bother her one bit. Joan rolled over and sat up. She reached over and gave Lance’s balls a not so soft pat and smiled. “Looks like you all got her just in time,” Joan said giving each of them a hard squeeze. "The fellas are pretty full and I think were gonna blow pretty soon.”
Brandon walked over to Lance and shook his hand. “Good to see you up and t’em, buddy. After the work you put in last night, I thought you’d be sleeping for half the day.” Lance smiled but had a puzzled look on his face. “Last night? Huh? What about last night? What happened?” Peggy stepped closer to the bed. “You mean you don’t remember what went on?” she said, a hint of shock in her voice. Dr. Long opened his iPad and jotted some notes. “I’m not surprised that his short term memory has some holes,” he said as he continued to slide his fingers across the screen. “He’ll regain that function soon enough, once he’s thoroughly hydrated. He lost a lot of fluids.” Lance was starting to become concerned. “What are you guys talking about? What did I do? What happened?” Joan put her hand on Lance’s shaft and slowly pumped it up and down. Peggy moved to the other side of the bed and joined Joan in stroking the massive shaft. “Sit back and relax, dear,” Joan said with excitement in her voice. “I think you’re gonna like this story."
She gave herself a larger stretch and her leg bumped into something in the bed. She rolled over and to her shock and surprise, Lance was still there.
In all of the years she’d known Lance, his body was uncanny at knowing the exact time of the day and when he needed to get up. So for her to see him there, her first response was one of shock. “Is he okay? Is he conscious? Oh my - what if he’s dead? Did he die in his sleep? Oh no - not Lance!” The thoughts of dread and anxiety filled her mind until she saw him gently shift and move his arm. Joan sighed a big sigh of relief and giggled to herself for being so dramatic. But this was so unlike him that she still couldn’t help but wonder if something was wrong. But she looked at his face and saw something she hadn’t seen in a a long time - Lance looked completely and totally relaxed. Over the years, she’d watched him as he slept a thousand times and even in his sleep, he never seemed quite restful: grinding his teeth, his brow furrowed, his jaws often clenched. But as she looked down on her husband, she saw none of that. All she saw was perfect contentment and he was as relaxed and peaceful in his sleep as she’d ever seen. In fact, she’d never seen.
She noticed that the bulge of the sheets at his crotch was larger than normal so she moved the light comforter out of the way and slowly pulled back the thin sheet covering him. She smiled with pride as she looked at Lance’s cock. His legs were spread wide to accommodate the expanse of his huge, hairless ball sack and his long, fat, limp dong rested between each smooth, coconut sized testicle. She smiled as she gazed on the thick appendage that stretched well over a foot in length. She could tell that his cock was thicker than it was just the day before, even in its flaccid state. She reached out and softly stroked her finger up and down the length of the shaft and watched as the big balls gently move and shift in the big scrotal sac. The longer she stared at Lance and at his cock, the hornier she became. She looked down at her heavy After a couple of minutes, she couldn’t take it anymore and needed to feel that huge cock inside of her.
Joan began to increase the way she was rubbing her husband’s cock and after a few seconds, she lost patience and started to work on him harder. Lance barely stirred from his slumber but his cock awake from its and Joan nearly squealed with delight as she watched it slowly inflate. She moved over and positioned herself between Lance’s outstretched legs and squeezed and pumped the base of the behemoth. “Fucking shit - I think it’s gained weight!” Joan said to herself as she pumped the big stick up and down. “Let’s see if I can help it along,” she thought as she bent down and lathered the fat head with her tongue. That illicit a bit more than just a moan and shuffle from Lance and his cock responded mores, inflating and lengthening even faster. After a few more seconds of attention with her mouth, Lance’s cock was soon pulsing and throbbing at full mast. Yet he remained fast asleep.
“Hmmm, he doesn’t wanna wake up huh?” Joan thought as she rubbed her very wet pussy in anticipation of mounting the big dong. “Well he’s gonna have one helluva wet dream.” She stood up on the bed and positioned herself over the massive pole. She grabbed the headboard with one hand and grabbed the neck of the big cock in the other. She slowly lowered herself down and rubbed the broad tip against her engorged lips. She shuddered at the sensations and had to stop in order to focus on keeping her balance. After she’d adjusted herself, she once again lowered down and pushed the immense head inside of her. “Fuck - it IS bigger!” Joan’s voiced screamed in her head.
She braced herself with both hands on the headboard and continued to push further down on Lance’s cock, each inch sending ripples of pain and pleasure coursing outward from her clit to every inch of her body. She was thankful the headboard had wrought iron bars and she was able to adjust her grip downward as she slid lower. Her massive chest was heaving and hanging down heavily between her crouched legs and it reminded her of so many images she’d seen from her infrequent porn site web surfing. She shuffled her feet to help with her balance and leverage and continued to force her weight further down. She had no idea of just how much she had inside of her but she knew that she was absolutely chock full of cock and it was becoming a labor to breath - yet she wanted more. She adjusted her hands down on the bars and pushed one more time, felling another couple of delicious inches slide up inside of her. She was panting and gasping heavily now and it mattered none to her whether Lance was awake or not - all she could concentrate on was the fire she felt on her clit and the fullness Lance’s big dick was exerting on her vaginal walls.
Joan finally stopped her descent and started to move upward. She could feel the thick veins and the fa ridge of the head spreading her apart and the friction they caused on the upstroke made her nearly lose her balance. She had to be cautious since she could easily cause injury to Lance and that was something she dared not contemplate. Just as she was beginning to think her exercise was a bad idea, she felt a pair of strong hands grab herbage ass cheeks to steady her. She couldn’t see that Lance was now awake - her breasts were entirely to big to see down over. So she carefully let her right hand go and pulled the heavy bag to the side to find her husband beaming up at her. Her move mad them both laugh. “Peek-a-boo,” Lance joked. “I see someone just couldn’t wait until I was up. Guess u needed a head start, huh?” Joan blushed but her smile quickly turned into a look of pleasure as Lance slowly gyrated his hips, grinding the fat dorsal vein against her pulsing clit. “Mmmmmmmm you big bastard … you know I love it when you do that,” Joan sighed as Lance reversed direction and twisted his hips the other way.
After a few seconds of this, to Joan’s shock and surprise, he lifted her up a few inches on his cock and maneuvered them so that Joan was laying down and Lance was between her legs. Lance bent down and sucked her big nipple into his mouth, biting down hard. Joan groaned and grabbed the big tit in one hand, squeezing it hard and mashing it into Lance’s face. With her other hand she grabbed the back of his head and forced him down even more, making sure he didn’t move. Lanced flexed the muscles in his ass in a rhythm, causing him to kegel and his cock to surge in a pulsing fashion. Joan’s already overstretched cunt could feel each pulse and all along the shaft, the big head stuffed inside of her growing wider and bigger with each pulse. “My fucking goodness - you are such a good fuck,” Joan moaned as she wrapped her legs around his back in an effort spur him to get more of his cock inside of her. But Lance didn’t budge.
As suddenly as he started, he stopped and forced his way away from Joan’s grasp. He directed her to roll over on her stomach, keeping his cock firmly implanted deep in her womb as she rotated. When she’d made the transition, he grabbed her hips and pulled her up, making her get on all fours doggy-style. He grabbed a handful of her hair and pulled back hard as he thrust deeply inside of her. The lustful groan from Joan’s throat spurred Lance to increase the pace and soon his hips were a blur, pumping back and forth inside of his wife’s gushing slit. He pulled her hair harder as he bent down to grab as much of her tit as he could with his other hand. Her breasts were so big that even on her hands and knees, her breasts bunched up underneath her, barely moving as Lance rammed her.
Suddenly, Lance grunted deeply and slowed his strokes. Joan tried her best to maintain the hard pace and thrust her ass back into him as hard and as fast as she could. “Come on you big mother fucker! Don’t you dare stop on me! Fuck me! Fuck me! Fuck me!” Joan yelled over her shoulder. Lance let go of her hair and grabbed her big ass cheeks, kneading and squeezing them as he continued his long slow strokes. “Shut up,” he groaned and smacked her left ass cheek. The sting of the contact shot directly to Joan’s clit and lit on fire, sending chills up her spine. “You like smacking my ass, you big picked fucker? Huh? You like that? Smack it again!” she groaned. Lance gave her another whack on the left cheek before smacking her on the other side. Joan’s pussy quivered and spasmed in a hard orgasm, clamping down hard on Lance’s cock. Lance gritted his teeth and grabbed her hips for leverage as he tried to continue fucking the ultra tight canal.
Joan lifted her leg and placed it firmly on Lance’s thigh and pushed hard, effectively pushing herself off of the long phallus. Lance was so shocked at the maneuver and the force it put on the ridge of his cock as she pushed off, that his cock sent a large trail of precum flying over and hitting Joan on her left breast. She quickly scooped the thick syrup from her breasts and sucked it into her mouth. Lance was up on her instantly, pushing the head of his engorged and angry cock into her mouth. Joan sucked as much as she could into her mouth, her teeth scrapping the sensitive underside. Lance pulled back and massaged the head of his cock, then forced his way back into her mouth. He repeated the move several times over the next few seconds, relishing the harsh bite of Joan’s teeth as it grated over the cock flesh. Lance could start to feel the hot boil of the impending load starting to churn in his gonads and he release another ridiculously large trail of precum. Joan frantically rubbed her dripping, gaped gash as she continued slobbering all over Lance’s shaft.
Just as Lance was about to put Joan into position so that he could lie on his side and take from behind, the door to the suite opened and Dr. Jackson walked in, followed by Peggy, Brandon, and Dr. Long. “Well, I see you two are hard at work,” Tasha said chuckling as she made her way into the bedroom. Joan couldn’t help but laugh - not only at the comment, but the fact that she had become so comfortable around these people, who had been complete and total strangers barely two weeks ago, to be totally naked in the middle of having sexing it not bother her one bit. Joan rolled over and sat up. She reached over and gave Lance’s balls a not so soft pat and smiled. “Looks like you all got her just in time,” Joan said giving each of them a hard squeeze. "The fellas are pretty full and I think were gonna blow pretty soon.”
Brandon walked over to Lance and shook his hand. “Good to see you up and t’em, buddy. After the work you put in last night, I thought you’d be sleeping for half the day.” Lance smiled but had a puzzled look on his face. “Last night? Huh? What about last night? What happened?” Peggy stepped closer to the bed. “You mean you don’t remember what went on?” she said, a hint of shock in her voice. Dr. Long opened his iPad and jotted some notes. “I’m not surprised that his short term memory has some holes,” he said as he continued to slide his fingers across the screen. “He’ll regain that function soon enough, once he’s thoroughly hydrated. He lost a lot of fluids.” Lance was starting to become concerned. “What are you guys talking about? What did I do? What happened?” Joan put her hand on Lance’s shaft and slowly pumped it up and down. Peggy moved to the other side of the bed and joined Joan in stroking the massive shaft. “Sit back and relax, dear,” Joan said with excitement in her voice. “I think you’re gonna like this story."
I've got to say GTOK is a writer. I also read The Holy Bible and I see similarities between his sentences and thoughts. It's not like mindless dribble word after word but actual meaning and story telling. Good job on accomplishing that! As the story goes...I've stopped cumming to it for the most part. I'd say it gets a passing grade but idk about a best selling book deal.
