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I appreciate your thoughtful approach to your writing.

I, for one, am enjoying your exploration and can fantasize about that kind of growth and having such a colossal appendage.

Keep up the great work and do continue with your storyline.
 

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Hear here...

So far the subbing is great, I for one really enjoy the details... I also Enjoy the One on.... self :p aspect, its different than the normal 2 people... Keep it up just on track mate. I am waiting any post now for his hands to grow a bit :p
 

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For those who don't care much about the Chris storyline, I'm sorry!:redface: There's nothing stopping someone else from writing a Terry or Greg (or Bruce, or Jeff) storyline, though!


Thanks for continuing the tale. I for one find the Chris storyline far more interesting than Terry & Greg, who seemed fairly predictable and like 100 other characters on this site. So I'm glad you've focused on him and the new direction and the "tease" of whether he'll actually do anything with someone else.

The story has gotten a lot more interesting since you began to "sub."
 

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I'm not trying to say I don't enjoy a slow building storyline and details, but even if you are eventually planning to get around to sex with Chris in the LONG RUN, you have to understand- most of the time people will make 10 to 12 short story posts, and then the demands of real life butt in and leave them unable to continue (as was the case with Longbow, and I for one would not put money on him coming back to continue this story in a month). I think you are doing an excellent job so far as well, but given the track record I just mentioned and the pace at which the new action is unfolding, I have my doubts that you'll get as far as sex before you quit also. As long as you are in this for the long haul though, go as slow as you like.
 

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I'm not trying to say I don't enjoy a slow building storyline and details, but even if you are eventually planning to get around to sex with Chris in the LONG RUN, you have to understand- most of the time people will make 10 to 12 short story posts, and then the demands of real life butt in and leave them unable to continue (as was the case with Longbow, and I for one would not put money on him coming back to continue this story in a month). I think you are doing an excellent job so far as well, but given the track record I just mentioned and the pace at which the new action is unfolding, I have my doubts that you'll get as far as sex before you quit also. As long as you are in this for the long haul though, go as slow as you like.

basically Faf, he wants the action now but didnt want to type it outright lol
 

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Between the greasy carbs of the pizza, the sugar and caffeine of the pizza, and his newfound fantasies about Jen, the pizza girl, Chris was filled with newfound energy. He stroked his mammoth cock to one orgasm after another. No sooner than his huge, heavy balls had unloaded another massive payload of cum, his gigantic member was already demanding more attention. Chris spent the bare minimum of time unloading one sodden sock onto the growing mess on the floor before fitting another over his bulbous cockhead. He spend even less time on the lotion, carelessly squeezing it over the enormous length of his shaft, before eagerly grasping it again with both fists and pumping out another frenzied orgasm. He only paused to gulp more soda and scarf more pizza when his body demanded it. Eight more socks were added to the six on the floor before finally, something ran out.

“Damn! I’ve used up an entire bottle! Chris was interrupted in his one-man orgy by the end of his supply of hand lotion. Looks like I finished off the first pizza, too, he noted, looking around. Man, I don’t even remember eating half of it! Luckily for me, I had the foresight to plan ahead, Chris thought, as he pushed the empty box aside and opened the second. He snagged another sock and stretched it over his thick, solid erection, still hard after hours of jerking off. And luckily for me, both of my roommates have some lotion for me to “borrow’, too! Chris leaned forward and grabbed the nearest bottle of lotion off the bed. Figures that one of them would skimp on it, though. The bottle he grabbed was nearly empty, so Chris shook the contents down to the cap before opening it, and then squirted it all over his eager, throbbing rod. I hope the other bottle is fuller. I’m not running out to a store with a hard-on this big! Chris reached for his cock with anticipation, then stopped.

Oh, shit! The bottle in Terry’s closet hadn’t been hand lotion. It was the growth cream!

“Fuuuuuuck!”

Chris quickly evaluated his options. The lotion is already on my cock. If I wipe it off now, my dick might grow just where it contacted my skin. I had time to rub in the cream before. No other option. At least, there’s hardly any left. Chris quickly located the box of latex gloves in Chris’s closet, and, removing the sock, carefully began to spread the splatter of growth cream all over his gigantic cock and balls. His plan didn’t work perfectly, as there turned out to be not quite enough lotion to cover all of both his balls. After a moment of panic (I can’t have one nut three sizes bigger than the other!), Chris returned to the bottle of growth cream and, through disassembling it, and careful use of his gloved pinkie finger, was able to eke out enough cream to give his entire package an even coating. I can’t believe I’m doing this. It’s gonna be even bigger. How could I forget that the growth cream was in that bottle?

Chris stood up and watched his cock with anxiety. Despite his panic, the careful application of the cream had stimulated his schlong back to full attention. For a moment, it seemed like nothing had happened, but the tingling, burning sensation he had experienced before began to return. “Ahhh! Ohhh! Jesus!” That really burns! I thought it would tingle less! I hardly used any cream this time! Maybe it burns so much more because there’s so much more TO burn. As he squirmed in discomfort, Chris’s giant cock began to swell even larger, growing longer and thicker. He could see his balls ballooning up as well, getting fuller and heavier. Don’t tell me I have to buy bigger pants. I’m going to go from ‘goth Asian kid’ to ‘Asian who thinks he’s MC Hammer’.

To his immense relief, the growth petered out after just a few minutes. Chris’s dick was clearly longer and thicker than before, but not by much. I don’t think i’ve grown more than an inch or two. Thank God! He grasped his shaft with both hands and realized that he could just barely encircle his new massive girth at the thickest point. My fingers used to overlap here. I guess that’s not too bad, all things considered. His nuts had swelled as well, but Chris guessed that they weren’t more than an inch or two bigger around either. They sure feel a lot heavier though. He lifted his balls with his hands. Oh, fuck! That feels good. Heavy, but good. Chris cupped his bigger balls with both hands and hefted them more, bouncing them against the underside of his titanic tool. Sooo fucking heavy. I bet this baby weighs fifteen pounds. Maybe more…Mmmmm. Chris licked his lips. I’ve still got plenty of lotion, and lots of fuck socks. No sense in wasting them.

Cradling his newly enlarged package, Chris clambered back onto Terry’s bed. He positioned the pizza and soda within easy reach, and checked the third bottle of lotion, the one he had gotten out of the dresser. Awesome! Full bottle. Nothing stopping me now! He grabbed another athletic sock and struggled to stretch it over his fatter, meatier rod. That’s more like it! Chris squirted lotion into his palm and began stroking his monster cock. Oh, yessss! That feels even better than before! God, that feels incredible! He pumped both hands up and down on his veiny shaft, squeezing the firm, hot meat as he did so. He bit down on his lower lip and grunted with pleasure. Mmmmmm. Unhhhhh. Fuck, this feels amazing! Sorry I kept you waiting so long, baby, thought Chris, ignoring the fact that he had only stopped masturbating less than five or ten minutes before. Chris continued to stroke his phallus with his left hand as his right hand began to massage his balls, rolling them around in his sack. Oh, yeah. So full of cum. Ready to cum all night. His left hand left his shaft to play with his sensitive cock head through the fabric of the sock, then he brought both hands back onto his slick, hot rod. Chris used his left hand near the root of his cock to push his entire dick upwards, angling his penis towards his face. He rubbed the underside of the base of his cock with short, firm strokes of his right hand, as he gripped as much as he could with his left hand, and slid that hand up and down near the center of his shaft. Oh, yeah! Cum for me. Cum for Chris. Cum for me! As his strokes accelerated, Chris seized his cock with both hands and pumped with long, hard strokes. He accentuated the strokes with thrusts of his athletic torso, pumping so hard his firm ass bounced up off the bed. Unhhhh! Chris came with an orgasm more volcanic and intense than any of the night. His massive sack tensed again and again, shooting thick jets of cum into the sock stretched over his manhood. By the time his prick finally stopped flooding jizz into the sock, it was soaked and dripping. Chris pulled the sperm-filled sack off his cock and let it slap onto the floor with a squelch. That’s waaay more than a pint of spunk. Without even thinking about it, Chris reached for another sock and the bottle of lotion. His cock was demanding his full attention.
 

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Just a little thanks and explanation. Some of you have sent me some very helpful PMs.

I know Chris didn't need to get any bigger, but one of you pointed out that the bottle of lotion in Terry's closet was the growth cream. I still can't believe I forgot that detail!:redface: While, of course, it was possible that he had a regular bottle of lotion in there too, I didn't want to forget Chekov's dictum:

If in the first act you have hung a pistol on the wall, then in the following one it should be fired. Otherwise don't put it there.

That's my story and I'm sticking to it.
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Thanks to everyone who has sent me an idea, or a compliment, or even just a comment, whether in the thread or via PM. They are appreciated.
 

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I'm not trying to say I don't enjoy a slow building storyline and details, but even if you are eventually planning to get around to sex with Chris in the LONG RUN, you have to understand- most of the time people will make 10 to 12 short story posts, and then the demands of real life butt in and leave them unable to continue (as was the case with Longbow, and I for one would not put money on him coming back to continue this story in a month). I think you are doing an excellent job so far as well, but given the track record I just mentioned and the pace at which the new action is unfolding, I have my doubts that you'll get as far as sex before you quit also. As long as you are in this for the long haul though, go as slow as you like.

Oh ye of little faith (not back, checking in on cell). Great subbing so far Fafhrd! Amazing stuff, your style really dovetails well with the style of the story, keep up the great work! I'll be back in a couple weeks.
 

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I think the story is spreading too wide... Will Terry, Greg, andbthe other guy..what was his name...make an appearance again?

I can't say that there will be anything about Bruce (or Jerry) until Longbow comes back. I guarantee you that Terry and Greg will show up before long (as they are still Chris's room-mates). Other than that, there should be a new segment posted tomorrow, and Chris's jerk-off session should come to an end (at least, for the night).

On the other hand, some guys do have wet dreams...:sleeping:
 

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I could only imagine his wet dream.... ^___^


And guys, do remember this is a side story, for a subbing author. When Longbow gets back we will get back to our regularly scheduled program.
 

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Awesome job so far. Fafhrd one of my favorite things about you is that you show so much respect to longbow, and dont want to step on his toes as an author in anyway. Its pretty awesome.
 

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It is important to remember that they left a jumpy, extremely messy, totally disorganized stoner with a lab for making this stuff. There might be a lot of it, there might be a little of it, there might be a lost formula under the pizza boxes and cat pee. The guy arguably had bricks of marijuana to sell, but lived in a beat up Winnebago with a camp stove (so he didn't even bother to get the stove in the camper fixed).

On the other hand, that stoner also had break-ins by the local kids...
 

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It is important to remember that they left a jumpy, extremely messy, totally disorganized stoner with a lab for making this stuff. There might be a lot of it, there might be a little of it, there might be a lost formula under the pizza boxes and cat pee. The guy arguably had bricks of marijuana to sell, but lived in a beat up Winnebago with a camp stove (so he didn't even bother to get the stove in the camper fixed).

On the other hand, that stoner also had break-ins by the local kids...

Makes you wonder, don't it?