Well, *I* love the story as it is. I'm just happy to see that it's still going. Too many other stories on here die out completely.
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Well, *I* love the story as it is. I'm just happy to see that it's still going. Too many other stories on here die out completely.
Many films, novels, and plays are written with multiple plots taking place (simultaneously)...
Aactually I think we're synched back up at this point. The posts I put up take place earlier in the day from what's going on with Chris right now. I haven't noticed a clash in our writing styles either. I agree that Chris's story has become something of a spinoff from mine with its own life and characters, but that hasn't created any real conflict so far. I dunno. Thoughts?
I think the story hasnt tanked its taking on two different storylines, if you notice fafhrd doesnt write about Terry and Greg his part is about Chris he has created his own characters to continue that storyline, and longbow9 doesnt really write about Chris he writes about the two main characters. So technically they don't need to be on the same page
Well, I hope the story hasn't tanked, but I suppose that one of the things Longbow9 and I could do might be to open each story post with a 'location tag' like so:
Thursday night, Jen's apartment, 6pm:
and then post our story as normal. I can see how it could be a little confusing when I get ahead of him in the timeline of the world, or vice versa. If he is OK with that, I'll be glad to do it.
Or I could just do it on my posts, and you could assume that his posts, being from the Creator, as it were
tongue, establish the default timeline and my stuff diverges around it.
Thursday night, Jen's apartment, 6pm:
and then post our story as normal. I can see how it could be a little confusing when I get ahead of him in the timeline of the world, or vice versa. If he is OK with that, I'll be glad to do it.
Or I could just do it on my posts, and you could assume that his posts, being from the Creator, as it were
tongue, establish the default timeline and my stuff diverges around it.
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I'd love to see Jen's roommates get in on the action by tying him down, stuffing him to bursting and then raping him
I'd love to see Jen's roommates get in on the action by tying him down, stuffing him to bursting and then raping him
Only one problem with this scenario:
Chris would have to be unwilling for it to be rape.:biggrin1:
Thursday night, Jen's place, about 8pm:
“What are you talking about?", demanded Kimber.
“Shush. Follow me.” Tasha beckoned Kimber with her finger, and indicated she should follow into her room. Once inside the taller girl’s bedroom, Tasha motioned Kimber to a spot on the bed as she woke up her laptop. She made a couple of selections on the computer, and an image appeared on the screen of Jen and Chris in the bedroom.
“What? How did you do that?” Kimber seemed surprised, but had difficulty taking her eyes off the gigantic boner tenting out of Chris’s pants. There was sound, but it was very faint and hard to hear.
“I remotely activated her laptop’s webcam. Good thing she had it open and pointed the right way. Shame her laptop’s not closer to the bed.” Tasha watched eagerly, but Chris only sat down awkwardly on the bed. Jen pulled her t-shirt over her head. “Damn! I know she’s got us both beat in the boob department, but wow! I’d kill for a rack like that!”
“She is really busty…Wait a minute! Are you watching me on my webcam too?” Kimber spun Tasha around on her chair.
“No way. Why would I do that? When you have a boy over, all you do is cuddle and talk about your feelings. Boooooring.” Tasha rolled her eyes and turned her chair back around. “Oh, Jen’s got her pants off now. Those panties are soooo cute!”
“Oh, okay….hey! How would you know that if you weren’t spying on me too?!?” Kimber’s outrage was interrupted by Jen peeling Chris’s shirt off. “Oooh! He does have a nice body. Not big, but nice. I’d like to run my hands over his chest like that.”
“I’m not watching you on webcam any more. That’s what you asked, right?” Tasha leaned in towards the screen as Jen peeled the sweatpants off Chris. “Showtime!”
“Oh my God!” Both girls squealed in unison, as the thick, thirty inch length of Chris’s gigantic cock was revealed in its entirety. Jen and Chris seemed to start at the sound, and both Tasha and Kimber clapped their hands over their mouths, eyes wide.
“Did you hear something?, asked Chris, interrupted in his staring at Jen’s full breasts. Please, no interruptions. Need sex now.
Jen turned back from looking over her shoulder. “It’s just Tasha and Kimber arguing, as usual. Nothing to worry about, sweetie pie.”
Tasha and Kimber watched Jen push Chris’s massive, erect shaft slightly out of the way and start kissing him passionately. The slender Korean wrapped his arms around her and held her close as he returned her deep, probing kisses. Chris pulled her even closer to him, and Jen pulled her right leg up and over his towering rod. Her pert buttocks now rested against the top of his colossal dick. The two continued kissing with such wild abandon that it almost looked like they were trying to consume each other.
“Wow! Look at them go! I wish I had a guy that would kiss me like that,” said Kimber, dreamily. “That’s so romantic.”
Tasha noticed Jen’s dainty feet moving. While devouring Chris with kisses, Jen curled her legs back and rested her feet on the underside of Chris’s massive cock, squeezing and massaging his swollen shaft between her soles and her butt. “Damn that girl can multi-task! She should be better at videogames! Look how teenie her toes look next to that monster!”
“I’m not sure we should be watching this, Tasha. I mean, I’m curious, but this is private between Jen and Chris.” Kimber looked away from the screen.
“Oooh, she’s spreading lube all over that huge wang of his. I bet she’s gonna go through a whole bottle on that beast.” Tasha seemed unconvinced by Kimber’s argument.
“Tasha, I’m serious. We shouldn’t be watching th—Oh my God, is she going to give him head?!?” Kimber almost shoved Tasha out of her chair as she lunged forward to get a better view. After spreading the lube all over Chris’s massive shaft, Jen had seated herself on his stomach and was stroking his gigantic member with obvious enthusiasm. She suddenly leaned back and pulled Chris’s massive cockhead towards her mouth. Though it was far too large for her to engulf entirely, Jen began to lick and suck his head, focusing her attention on his substantial cock slit.
“Well, she’s not going to deep throat him, that’s for sure. That thing is bigger than her head! Tasha crossed her legs in her chair, squirming with excitement. “This is better than porn. You don’t need any camera tricks to make Chris look huge. Jen better watch out, though. As full as Chris’s balls look, she’s gonna get a lot more than a pearl necklace.”
“Chris got her a necklace? Aw, that’s swee — Ew! That’s gross, Tasha!” Kimber wrinkled her nose in disgust. “Chris wouldn’t do that. He seems nice.”
“Thar he blows!,” shouted Tasha, pointing. Chris’s whole body bucked upward, but before the immense surge of cum could shoot out of his cock, Jen fastened her mouth firmly over his cock slit. To Tasha and Kimber’s increasing amazement, Jen gulped frantically again and again, her throat visibly bulging with the huge quantity of cum being pumped in a seemingly endless supply from Chris’s bloated nutsack.
“Woohooo! Look at her go! I’ve never seen any girl swallow like that!” Tasha pumped her fist in the air. “Of course, I’ve never seen any girl who needed to swallow like that.”
“Oh, look! I think she’s done.” Kimber pointed to the screen, where a flushed Jen was gasping for air. “I wonder what he tasted like?”
“Must have been pretty good,” replied Tasha. “She’s going back for seconds.” The girls watched as Jen again locked her lips around Chris’s slit and began to suck furiously, squeezing his massive shaft with her hands as she did so. Jen continued to drain Chris’s anaconda for quite some time, until finally stopping and licking both her lips, and his cock, quite clean.
“Ohmigosh! Look! She has a little belly, like Chris did!” Kimber pointed out Jen’s distended stomach, full of Chris’s seed. “That’s so cute, like matching shirts!”.
“You are one weird little girl, Kimber,” said Tasha, rolling her eyes. “Chris still looks like he’s about to pop. I wonder if she’s got room for more?”
“What are you talking about?", demanded Kimber.
“Shush. Follow me.” Tasha beckoned Kimber with her finger, and indicated she should follow into her room. Once inside the taller girl’s bedroom, Tasha motioned Kimber to a spot on the bed as she woke up her laptop. She made a couple of selections on the computer, and an image appeared on the screen of Jen and Chris in the bedroom.
“What? How did you do that?” Kimber seemed surprised, but had difficulty taking her eyes off the gigantic boner tenting out of Chris’s pants. There was sound, but it was very faint and hard to hear.
“I remotely activated her laptop’s webcam. Good thing she had it open and pointed the right way. Shame her laptop’s not closer to the bed.” Tasha watched eagerly, but Chris only sat down awkwardly on the bed. Jen pulled her t-shirt over her head. “Damn! I know she’s got us both beat in the boob department, but wow! I’d kill for a rack like that!”
“She is really busty…Wait a minute! Are you watching me on my webcam too?” Kimber spun Tasha around on her chair.
“No way. Why would I do that? When you have a boy over, all you do is cuddle and talk about your feelings. Boooooring.” Tasha rolled her eyes and turned her chair back around. “Oh, Jen’s got her pants off now. Those panties are soooo cute!”
“Oh, okay….hey! How would you know that if you weren’t spying on me too?!?” Kimber’s outrage was interrupted by Jen peeling Chris’s shirt off. “Oooh! He does have a nice body. Not big, but nice. I’d like to run my hands over his chest like that.”
“I’m not watching you on webcam any more. That’s what you asked, right?” Tasha leaned in towards the screen as Jen peeled the sweatpants off Chris. “Showtime!”
“Oh my God!” Both girls squealed in unison, as the thick, thirty inch length of Chris’s gigantic cock was revealed in its entirety. Jen and Chris seemed to start at the sound, and both Tasha and Kimber clapped their hands over their mouths, eyes wide.
“Did you hear something?, asked Chris, interrupted in his staring at Jen’s full breasts. Please, no interruptions. Need sex now.
Jen turned back from looking over her shoulder. “It’s just Tasha and Kimber arguing, as usual. Nothing to worry about, sweetie pie.”
Tasha and Kimber watched Jen push Chris’s massive, erect shaft slightly out of the way and start kissing him passionately. The slender Korean wrapped his arms around her and held her close as he returned her deep, probing kisses. Chris pulled her even closer to him, and Jen pulled her right leg up and over his towering rod. Her pert buttocks now rested against the top of his colossal dick. The two continued kissing with such wild abandon that it almost looked like they were trying to consume each other.
“Wow! Look at them go! I wish I had a guy that would kiss me like that,” said Kimber, dreamily. “That’s so romantic.”
Tasha noticed Jen’s dainty feet moving. While devouring Chris with kisses, Jen curled her legs back and rested her feet on the underside of Chris’s massive cock, squeezing and massaging his swollen shaft between her soles and her butt. “Damn that girl can multi-task! She should be better at videogames! Look how teenie her toes look next to that monster!”
“I’m not sure we should be watching this, Tasha. I mean, I’m curious, but this is private between Jen and Chris.” Kimber looked away from the screen.
“Oooh, she’s spreading lube all over that huge wang of his. I bet she’s gonna go through a whole bottle on that beast.” Tasha seemed unconvinced by Kimber’s argument.
“Tasha, I’m serious. We shouldn’t be watching th—Oh my God, is she going to give him head?!?” Kimber almost shoved Tasha out of her chair as she lunged forward to get a better view. After spreading the lube all over Chris’s massive shaft, Jen had seated herself on his stomach and was stroking his gigantic member with obvious enthusiasm. She suddenly leaned back and pulled Chris’s massive cockhead towards her mouth. Though it was far too large for her to engulf entirely, Jen began to lick and suck his head, focusing her attention on his substantial cock slit.
“Well, she’s not going to deep throat him, that’s for sure. That thing is bigger than her head! Tasha crossed her legs in her chair, squirming with excitement. “This is better than porn. You don’t need any camera tricks to make Chris look huge. Jen better watch out, though. As full as Chris’s balls look, she’s gonna get a lot more than a pearl necklace.”
“Chris got her a necklace? Aw, that’s swee — Ew! That’s gross, Tasha!” Kimber wrinkled her nose in disgust. “Chris wouldn’t do that. He seems nice.”
“Thar he blows!,” shouted Tasha, pointing. Chris’s whole body bucked upward, but before the immense surge of cum could shoot out of his cock, Jen fastened her mouth firmly over his cock slit. To Tasha and Kimber’s increasing amazement, Jen gulped frantically again and again, her throat visibly bulging with the huge quantity of cum being pumped in a seemingly endless supply from Chris’s bloated nutsack.
“Woohooo! Look at her go! I’ve never seen any girl swallow like that!” Tasha pumped her fist in the air. “Of course, I’ve never seen any girl who needed to swallow like that.”
“Oh, look! I think she’s done.” Kimber pointed to the screen, where a flushed Jen was gasping for air. “I wonder what he tasted like?”
“Must have been pretty good,” replied Tasha. “She’s going back for seconds.” The girls watched as Jen again locked her lips around Chris’s slit and began to suck furiously, squeezing his massive shaft with her hands as she did so. Jen continued to drain Chris’s anaconda for quite some time, until finally stopping and licking both her lips, and his cock, quite clean.
“Ohmigosh! Look! She has a little belly, like Chris did!” Kimber pointed out Jen’s distended stomach, full of Chris’s seed. “That’s so cute, like matching shirts!”.
“You are one weird little girl, Kimber,” said Tasha, rolling her eyes. “Chris still looks like he’s about to pop. I wonder if she’s got room for more?”
No where near tanked.. its only gotten better. Longbow regarding lacross and anything in general feel free to just wing it, accuracy is nice, but its like icing, It makes the cake better, but trust me you have one of the best cakes going It doesnt need accuracy (however like I said still nice to have it) I do hope ALL the extra cream gets used. Either one person or a ton of guy... but I SOOOOOO BADLY want to see Javier overdose on it, not as bad as Chris but still HUGE More than Bruce ^_^
It doesnt need accuracy (however like I said still nice to have it) I do hope ALL the extra cream gets used. Either one person or a ton of guy... but I SOOOOOO BADLY want to see Javier overdose on it, not as bad as Chris but still HUGE More than Bruce ^_^The cream? It'd probably just make it puff up. Like, you can think of it as the difference between a ditch and a mountain. A ditch can only be dug so far, until it just becomes a hole to the other side. A mountain can endlessly grow higher. So, because the cream has to grow something without moving her organs around, it'd probably just make the thing all swollen. (That was all just conjecture, but I think I have the basic idea.)
I'm interested in seeing what Chris' cum is gonna end up doing to her, though.
I'm interested in seeing what Chris' cum is gonna end up doing to her, though.
Conquered is right on that point. The cream doesn't make everything it touches "larger" necessarily, just "more". It's ideal for boobs and dicks because they're all soft tissue and stick out of the body. If you put it on your hand, you wouldn't get a giant hand, just a super swollen looking hand. God help you if you ate some.
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Dont go too crazy on the cream please!! We dont want javier and Bruce and Terry and Greg and John and Jacob and whoever all else to get huge and massive, that isnt the point of the story.
What good fiction does is takes a more or less real situation, then takes something completely abnormal and puts it into that situation. Thus we have the cream affecting some guys in a college scenario and the fact that the situation is still realistic, even if the the dimensions of some of the characters are not, is what makes the reader connect to the story. Well endowed guys may have had a girl that was REALLY into their size, and so the connect with Chris's story line with Jen. If everyone starts getting super hung and super huge boobs and sexsexsexsexsex than the story loses its connection with the audience.
My thoughts, at least.
What good fiction does is takes a more or less real situation, then takes something completely abnormal and puts it into that situation. Thus we have the cream affecting some guys in a college scenario and the fact that the situation is still realistic, even if the the dimensions of some of the characters are not, is what makes the reader connect to the story. Well endowed guys may have had a girl that was REALLY into their size, and so the connect with Chris's story line with Jen. If everyone starts getting super hung and super huge boobs and sexsexsexsexsex than the story loses its connection with the audience.
My thoughts, at least.
