Mom's young friend
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Jim Dangle
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Yeah sort of. I kind of wanted to try something else for a while but I'll probably finish Tommy's story up eventually.
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HOT story.....keep it going a bit longer....
I will look forward to readying your future erotic stories...
I will look forward to readying your future erotic stories...
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1.) Older woman with inexperienced and much younger (but legal) guy - good stuff.2.) Inexperienced guy with big dick unaware of how special he is - also good stuff.3.) Non-erotic situational exposure of the penis gradually leading to arousal and then sensual contact - again, also good stuff.4.) 1.5" soft to 13" hard? Come on man, try to keep it realistic. I'll buy the thirteen iches hard if the soft length is, oh maybe...... Five at the least. And if you want to stick with the 1.5" soft length, I'll go along with, maybe eight inches hard at the most. But 1.5 to 13? I'd say you've moved out of the realm of fiction and into the realm of fantasy. But, hey - some people like that.So your story gets 3 out of a possible 4 from my point of view.
your a bloody good writer, love the detailed descriptions, perhaps a little bit more on what his pubes were like or the deep warm musky masculine scents that come from his crotch would finish off the descriptions perfectly
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