More of My Passion

Discussion in 'Et Cetera, Et Cetera' started by mephistopheles, Sep 6, 2006.

  1. mephistopheles

    Gold Member

    Joined:
    Aug 27, 2006
    Messages:
    1,324
    Albums:
    1
    Likes Received:
    58
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    Hell
    Some of you know me and some of you dont, my passion is music, so I'll be coming here from time to time with some new lyrics, looking for creative criticism. My latest attempt is called Sex Machine, it's a mix between two of my favorite things and something else that i dont enjoy so much. Women, Robots, and Cars(cars being the lesser of the three)


    Sex Machine

    Lusty six gear sex machine
    She'll get it by any means
    Coming down for a good time
    Glossy coated she will shine

    Jump start her engine lets go go
    Rev her up let the oil flow
    She will never need to be tweaked
    She'll keep you going for weeks

    She has got sex on her mind
    For this goddess you'll make time
    She goes for the stick shifter
    When she's gone you'll miss her

    All sorts are left in her wake
    She's got a lust you'll never tame
    Can't wait til she rides through town
    You know she'll be going down.


    With this i just wanted to reinvent the "fuck machine" or what have you. Anyway, our style is thrashing, heavy, punk... imagine this song put to fast music, or not if it helps. Please Gimme some input. Later I'm gonna put some instrumental demos on the bands Myspace so you can get a good feel for the music. (Also I'll be adding the chrous later, for our music the chorus is the most important, so i like to take more time on that)

    Thanks in advanced,

    Josh "Mephistopheles" Dodson


     
  2. Gillette

    Gold Member

    Joined:
    Apr 2, 2006
    Messages:
    8,309
    Albums:
    1
    Likes Received:
    14
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    Nova Scotia
    I like this much better than your other submission.
    I can really see this one catching on.
     
  3. Heather LouAnna

    Gold Member

    Joined:
    Jun 28, 2006
    Messages:
    1,723
    Albums:
    1
    Likes Received:
    21
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    Austin, Texas
    Know you? You've 34 posts!
     
  4. B_big dirigible

    B_big dirigible New Member

    Joined:
    Dec 27, 2005
    Messages:
    2,739
    Likes Received:
    0
    Jeeez, it's not Friday again already, is it?
     
  5. findfirefox

    Gold Member

    Joined:
    Oct 9, 2005
    Messages:
    2,143
    Likes Received:
    1
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    Portland, OR
    You're a fun person.
     
Draft saved Draft deleted