Some of you know me and some of you dont, my passion is music, so I'll be coming here from time to time with some new lyrics, looking for creative criticism. My latest attempt is called Sex Machine, it's a mix between two of my favorite things and something else that i dont enjoy so much. Women, Robots, and Cars(cars being the lesser of the three)
Sex Machine
Lusty six gear sex machine
She'll get it by any means
Coming down for a good time
Glossy coated she will shine
Jump start her engine lets go go
Rev her up let the oil flow
She will never need to be tweaked
She'll keep you going for weeks
She has got sex on her mind
For this goddess you'll make time
She goes for the stick shifter
When she's gone you'll miss her
All sorts are left in her wake
She's got a lust you'll never tame
Can't wait til she rides through town
You know she'll be going down.
With this i just wanted to reinvent the "fuck machine" or what have you. Anyway, our style is thrashing, heavy, punk... imagine this song put to fast music, or not if it helps. Please Gimme some input. Later I'm gonna put some instrumental demos on the bands Myspace so you can get a good feel for the music. (Also I'll be adding the chrous later, for our music the chorus is the most important, so i like to take more time on that)
Thanks in advanced,
Josh "Mephistopheles" Dodson
Sex Machine
Lusty six gear sex machine
She'll get it by any means
Coming down for a good time
Glossy coated she will shine
Jump start her engine lets go go
Rev her up let the oil flow
She will never need to be tweaked
She'll keep you going for weeks
She has got sex on her mind
For this goddess you'll make time
She goes for the stick shifter
When she's gone you'll miss her
All sorts are left in her wake
She's got a lust you'll never tame
Can't wait til she rides through town
You know she'll be going down.
With this i just wanted to reinvent the "fuck machine" or what have you. Anyway, our style is thrashing, heavy, punk... imagine this song put to fast music, or not if it helps. Please Gimme some input. Later I'm gonna put some instrumental demos on the bands Myspace so you can get a good feel for the music. (Also I'll be adding the chrous later, for our music the chorus is the most important, so i like to take more time on that)
Thanks in advanced,
Josh "Mephistopheles" Dodson
