"Mostly" True Experiences with Eddie (M/M Masturbation)

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Eddie has a few secrets - one was the magic pill he gave me in the second story. The next few stories will reveal more about him. One involves a talent, one is related to his experiences.

Cheers,
Riddle
 

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Riddle,
I am a creative writing professor and I like the way you write. The plot works well and there aren't too many characters. You have the right amount of suspense and you leave the reader wanting more. I look forward to Part 11. Keep in touch. You can e-mail me directly. Tony
 
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Cool, thanks everyone! I greatly appreciate the feedback. I'll work on building a good story from my other true experience with Eddie and then move to some completely fictional stuff. It shouldn't take long once I find time to sit down and write.

Cheers,
Riddle
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Riddle,
I.m sorry that I missed your story from OCT. It's great.. Keep up the good work!
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