My roomates fiance

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  1. hungschlong

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    Here it is, my first story ever!
    Comments are welcome
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    I looked at her sitting there on the sofa.

    My roomate was out for an hour getting some groceries to make her dinner for her birthday. They had been together for two years and were planning a wedding next spring.

    As I occasionally glanced at her from the corner of my eye. I could not help but notice her face getting red. She was watching a movie on the television.

    I got up from the table to see what was making her so excited. To my suprise she was watching a porno. I thought this was great as I now realized she had no idea I was there.

    "Interesting video choice Chloe." I said aloud. She quickly turned the video off and blushed.

    "How long have you been there for?" she asked.
    I decided to see where I could bring this.

    "Long enough to know you're horney" I teased.

    "No I'm not!" she replied with an almost guilty look on her face.

    I looked to the right of the sofa and noticed her panties were on the floor.

    "What are those then?" I asked while pointing to the tiny piece of fabic on the floor.

    She got up and walked towards my roomates bedroom forgetting her delicates behind. Thinking that the innocent fun was over I picked them up off the floor and brought them to the room.

    When I entered I couldn't see Chloe. Just then the door closed behind me and I felt a hand reach around and grab my dick.

    "Ahhh, Chloe??? What are you doing?" I asked. "We can't do this, it's not right."

    I turned around to see her petit frame naked, her mound glistening with juices.
    I then caught the smell of her sweet nectar.

    "I need you, I have never made love to anyone except Charles and I couldn't go on without alteast knowing what another mans cock feels like" She stated.

    Her smooth hands on my arms drew me closer as she began removing my shirt. She slid her hands down my stomach until she reached my pants. She knelt down and looked at the bulge in my pants.

    "Lets see how big you are" She slowly slid my pasts down past my cock "Oh my god!" Her eyes lit up as she revealed my 8 1/2 inch tool.

    "You have to be alteast twice as big as Charles."

    About right, in the past I've seen Charles around the apartment naked, usually drunk, and he is only around 4 1/2 inches, his girth yet again only 1/2 to my fat 6 inches.

    She paused for a minute not knowing what to do. To speed things up, as I knew I had little time to fuck her tight little hole. I laid her on the bed in 69'er position and sunk my now rock hard dick into her mouth. I stared at her perfectly pink cunt and went in for the taste, just as my tongue touched her clit she sprayed her nectar into my mouth while having the biggest orgasm I have even seen a woman endure. She rode the pleasure for what seemed to be 20 minutes of constant girations and atleast five more orgasms.

    I had enough, I wanted my cock in her.
    I spun her around and positioned my fat hammer at the opening to her now soaked hole. I couldn't get it in so I quickly laid down on the bed and pulled her on top of me. This new position worked as I saw myself dissappear into her hot pussy.

    She again had another orgasm this time her muscles squeezing my shaft.
    "I want your dick forever!" She screamed.

    I couldn't believe that this sweet innocent girl could get so horny.


    I could feel the pressure building up in my balls and I informed her to get off me. "I want you to come inside me", "But what if you...." she cut me off. "I am on the needle, I want to feel your dick cum inside me, Charles never would. Please!"

    I couldn't help but get more tunred on by her beggings. I laid her down on the bed and re-ented her. This time I could just squeeze into her slightyly stretch vagina. I began pounding her, the echo of my balls slapping her ass echoing the room.

    Her face was red with desire as I spewed my massive load into her pussy. Her cunt immediatly rejected my goo as there was no room in her completely filled gap.


    She went limp as she rode out her last orgasm.

    Just then we heard Charles pull in the driveway.
    I pulled out of her and fast as I could.
    We flipped the mattress over as fast as we could to hide the soaked area and then I ran to my room just seconds before he entered the front door.

    Five minutes later I came out into the living room and found Cglow sitting on the Sofa. "Where's Charles? I asked.

    "He's tired and taking a nap" Chloe replied.

    I looked into the room and found my roomate asleep on his bed where I just fucked his fiance. Ahh life was sweet, and when I turned around I realized that Chloe had a more risque session already planned.
     
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    Should I continue with a part 2?

    Any suggestions or requests?
     
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    Awesome. Please continue. Maybe make her talk about how awful her fiance is in bed more.
     
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    Chloe went to the bathroom to freshen up, or so I thought.

    I could hear talking. I walked towards the door and could hear her talking to Sophie her best friend.

    "It was so much bigger than Charles, i mean I could actually feel it........yeah, you should totally take that piece of meat for a spin."

    I couldn't believe she would tell someone of her infidelity, I ran to the kitchen to get a drink.

    When Chloe left the bathroom I went in for a quick shower. I wrapped the towel around my waist and put on some cologne. When I opened the bathroom door I was met by Sohpie. He eyes fixated on the buldge underneath my towel.

    I went to my room. I could hear giggles from down the hall.
    I put on a pair of shorts and decided I would go for a jog. I tried to open the front door but both girls stopped me. Chloe told me that Sophie was vargin and wanted to see what a dick felt like.

    The thoughts began running through my head, was I dreaming? I mean I had trouble getting inside one tight hole already today and this one would be even more a challenge as Sophie is even more petit that Chloe.

    Sophie immediatley dropped to her knees ripping my shorts down right in the hallway. She took my cock in her mouth with one quick gulp. For a virgin she sure knew how to suck a dick. She must have been a gig tease in high school.

    The three of us progressed into the living room and onto the sofa. Chloe was working away at Sophies cunt while Sophie was drenching my dick with her saliva. I wanted more pussy in my mouth.

    I slid Sophie onto the couch and Chloe onto the floor. Leaning over Chloe I inserted my dick into her throat. I parted Sophies lips and lashed my tongue accross her clit. She accepted my tongue strokes with lust.

    She began begging for my prick to fill her. Forgetting that Chloe was even there I moved my rod to Sophies gash and pushed as hard as I could. There was resistance at first but my dick was so slick from both girls hot mouths I eventually pushed in with a pop. "ooohhhhh", Sophie gasped as I rid her of her sexual innocence.

    Chloe sitting on the sofa with us began fingering her now went cunt.
    I knew I could last much longer now as it was not over an hour ago that I had fucked Chloe in her fiances bed. I picked up the pace, both girls screeming in ectasy.

    "What the fuck!" We heard Charles. He was standing behind us. I thought I was dead, but his grimace slowly turned into a grim as he pulled his limp dick out and placed it in Sophies awaiting mouth.

    Sophie now had two dicks in her, one in her mouth and one in her pussy.
    After about five minutes Charles looks at me and says, "I want you to fuck Chloe for me". nuff said. I moved between Chloes legs and rammed my member into her.

    Charles moved over Sophies blood-tinted vagina and began fucking her.
    Not knowing his limit when fucking new meat Charles began to come inside Sophie. She began screaming as the sensation of his warm seed in her triggered her first orgasm she had ever had.

    Chloe became raged that Charles would come inside her best friend but not her so she decided to accounce my cuming. "Tylers gonna fucking come inside my cunt Charles, this big 8 inch cock is gonna fill me up!"

    Suprisingly Charles actually accepted the viewing invitation and requested I lay down and Chloe mount me ala' Cowgirl.

    Her glistening ass in my view as she bobbed up and down on my dick sent me into a raging orasm, even harder that before. I unloaded to what felt to be a gallon of jizz into her tight hole. Squirting out in all directions with the cum from Chloes simultanious orgasm, we soaked both of our viewers.

    Charlie and I cleaned up as we watched the girls lick the cum out of each other pussies.

    We all knew this was the start of something beutiful.
     
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    Any more comments?
    part 3? or is story dead?
     
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    Good story man
     
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    Three days have gone by since our fuckfest.

    The mood around the apartment has been somewhat lifted. we all get along and are more open.

    In the past Charles and I had never really seen eye to eye on most topics. We had a good friendship but had alot of disagreements.

    Today was the day that Charles would meet Chloe's parents and he was nervous as hell. I told him to relax, everything would be fine.

    I decided to make dinner for everyone as cooking is my specialty.
    Spaghetti was my choice, I mean, everyone loves spaghetti.

    Chloes parents, the Smiths, showed up around 5:00pm, her sister Megan decieded to tag along. Now for just turning 18 she had a hot body. She was much more toned than Chloe with a rack twice as big. I noticed where the girls got their looks from, the girls mother looked only 5-10 years older than they were.

    After the introductions were made we all sat down to eat. "The dinner is lovely Tyler" Mrs Smith complimented. Mr Smith nodded in agreement. I served wine with dinner to lighten the mood a bit for everyone. It seemed that Mrs Smith was enjoying the wine a little too much, while reaching for a roll she managed to knock her glass onto Megans lap, staining her dress red.

    "oh shit!" Megan said as she jumped out of her chair. "What am I going to do?" I remembered that I had a clean pair of shorts in my room so I offered to get them for her. She followed me to the bedroom and I gave her the shorts. When I left the room I noticed that she did not close the door all the way leaving a view into the room for someone to look in.

    I though 'fuck it' and I approached the door. Uh, oh. I paused in the hallway. She found my porno mag, i must have forgot to put it away. Suprisingly she laid down and began playing with herself. Knowing that everyone else wa still in the dining room I took out my prick and began to jerk away at the view of Megan getting off on my bed. Just as I was about to blow my load Mrs Smith came around the corner. "Oh, a little perve are you, looking at my daughter" She walked towards me and looked in the room. "fair enough" realizing that her daughter put herself in a position to be gawked at. "She must have become a slut at school.... Just like her mother". She grabbed my dick and began jerking me.

    I realized now that Megan could see us too as she decided to join us. Oh my god, a mother and daughter both sucking me off. This was so hot. I blew my load onto their faces. Just then Charles came around the corner. He signaled us to get into the bedroom, he followed.

    Without hesitance he whipped out his cock and shoved it in Megans mouth.
    "Excuse me, but you are marrying Chloe, you can't expect for me to approve". Charles simply replied my groaning louder as Megan inhaled his tool. I got behind Mrs Smith and pulled her pants down. As I touched her cunt I felt it was already wet and ready for invasion. This made me rock hard again instantly. "Here let me take you mind off of that" I rammed my fat cock in her from behind in one single thurst. She screamed in ectasy.

    Mr Smith and Chloe came to the door. Mr Smith was speechless but eventually had the courage to say something after Charles began reaming Megan. "What the fuck! Get off of my wife daughter you pigs.". "Shut up dad" Chloe said as she took his hand. "You know you are turned on by this, how about we join?" He pulled away, "I can't you're my daughter". "So, thats your wife and thats your daughter other there and by the look of the bulge in your pants you like it." she replied.

    Mr Smith laid down on the bed and unbuckled his pants. "Show them your fat cock Jim, show them what I get to fuck everyday". Mrs Smith proclaimed.

    I knew at this point he must have been huge, I had her filled with my massive member and she seemed to be used to somehthing bigger.

    He pulled down his pants to reveal a massive 11inch weapon. Although straight my mouth watered. Chloe moved in to see, she laid down and began sucking his tool. Megan wanted to taste too, there it was both daughters sucking their fathers cock. Charles and I repositined ourselves behind the hot vixens and began punding away. We swapped back and forth between the girls, telling them how they were fuck their father and we were just loosing them up. It was now time.

    Megan was first, she climbed aboard Jims solid pole and shutteder and she accepted him.

    "Now I get to see what my dear Chloe rides" Mrs Smith pulled Charles ontop of her and demanded his presence. He slid in with one quick thrust. Remebering his almost premature ejaculation the last time her was in this situation he decieded to go slow. Chloe and I paired up and began fucking each other with our pelvis's directly beside Mr Smith's head so he could watch me fuck one of his daughters while he fucked his other one.

    After a few minutes we swapped daughters, I knew the time was fast approaching the we could all erupt into a simultaious orasgm.

    Charles announced he was coming and just then that triigered Jim and I to begin cumming as well. Just the feeling of so much sex in the room made it so hot that the ladies were not long to come as well.


    What a great dinner.
    Oh, and Chloes parents approved.
     
  8. bigTizzo

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    That was hot. Need more. Now I'm officially hooked on this site. Thx.
     
  9. millionman

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    Good story so far, but you might want to slow down a bit and develop the characters a bit more. Otherwise it just reads a bit too quickly, but that's one man's opinion.
     
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    You're welcome
     
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    Thanks, i agree i go to fast. I will slow down next time, yes, i am going to write another one. I usually just open the forum and start typing, each chapter takes only 30minutes, maybe i'll take a whole day and really develop the story.

    That in mind, any requests for the storyline?
     
  12. millionman

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    Well, you could give a back story on the family. Why have they all of a sudden gotten to having sex with each other, what's different now, has anything changed for Chloe and Charlie? Will the family continue down this path?

    I don't know which one of those directions you should go in, but I think you have more than a few angles you could play and come out with a very interesting story. I'd just take it easy and build something substantial. It may be beat off material but as we all know lust and passion are cultivated over time, and if you can get your readers involved and put themselves into the situation you'll have that many more readers. It's a good story set, and I'm eager to see where you go with it.
     
  13. kaientai

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    hey man great stuff keep it up .

    you may indeed want to slow things down a bit though take you're time it will be worth the wait
    thanks
     
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    Ok I created a pt2 as a new thread. Check it!
     
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    Sorry, but I think you built up to it too quickly and you used filthy language too often whereas using it sparingly would cause more effect.

    Slow down as the above said.

    Not bad though.
     
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    wow,

    it's been a few months since I wrote this and it still makes me fuckin horny.

    LoL, thought I'd share
     
  17. chicagosam

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    Schlong! Anything makes you fuckin' horny! LOL! Keep writing. Sam
     
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    Dug the first part, kinda liked the second...you really lost me at the third...big random incestual family orgy? no thanks
     
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    Thanks for the feedback
     
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