Penis Envy

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  1. Ivor Biggun

    Ivor Biggun New Member

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    First attempt here goes nothing.....

    John was 31, he had been happily married for years, he had 3 children and his sex life was average. His partner was 24 5ft8 quite busty slim and attractive. Their sex life was average and they played various games to liven up their sex life. John particularily enjoyed role play, especially when his partner told him that he needed to be bigger in the cock department. He loved to be teased, beth would place her mouth 2 or 3 inches away from the tip of his penis and tell him that if he was 10 or 12 inches he'd be in her mouth by now. This got John extremely horny and usually by this point his cock had extended out to its full potential, 6 and 1/2 inches. This by all means was average, but it had kept his partner happy for many years. John like many men reaching his 30's had begun to become paranoid about his expanding waistline had like most men in his position decided to join a gym. John was started off going to the gym 1 or twice a week, and had the personal trainer helping him to get fit. John had always been straight, but a chapter in his life was about to unfold which would permanently change his perception forever.
    It was late on a Thursday night, John had finished work at 8pm due to project commitments, his partner had gone out for the night, so he decided to visit the Gym for a late night session followed by a sauna. The Gym was relatively empty due to the time of night. John's personal trainer was still about and as usual offered advice and tips to John on how he could exercise different parts of his body. At the end of his session John went to to the locker room changed, wrapped his towel around himself, to protect his dignity and went to the sauna room. Once inside John relaxed, he was on his own, and that was the way he liked it. Occasionally, when placed in this position, John would have a cheeky wank, the thrill of being possibly caught always brought him to a shuddering climax. Tonight however John was just content with relaxing. Ten minutes, into the sauna, John could feel himself nodding off, when he heard the sauna door open, and a familiar voice say hello John. It was John's personal trainer 'Jamie' he had entered the sauna totally naked!! John said hello and tried to concentrate his gaze on the timer, and temperature display on the wall, determined not to check Jamie out for fear of being percieved as being 'GAY'; However this proved to be very difficult, Jamie struck up a conversation with John, discussing how his training was going, and thats when Johns eyes met with Jamie's crotch. There was the largest cock John had ever seen in his life. All men are guilty at some point of stealing a glance and checking other blokes out in communal showers etc, but John had only ever come across comparable cocks. Jamie's was different, What lay there soft may I add!! was bigger than John's fully erect cock, thicker as well. John when soft was only a mere 3 inches. Jamie's had to be at least 10!! John felt a strange feeling come over him as he stared at Jamie large member, and as the conversation went on John started to develop a Hard-on, due to what must have been pure penis envy. Jamie notice the growing bulge and tenting of John's towel. Jamie commented on it, and John went red with embarressment, 'Its OK Jamie said your not the first bloke to react like that around me' Jamie got up and went to sit next to John. 'Its ok' he said 'I'm not gay, you can remove your towel I understand', John removed his towel, and his cock bounced up to attention. John looked across at Jamie's it was huge in comparison and still soft!! Jamie asked John if he would enjoy some mutual masturbation, John could remember, doing this with his brother when he was younger, mainly to compare erection sizes, but this was no competition right from the start. However John agreed, at which point Jamie took his monstrous member in hand, and started to play with it. John wasnt playing with his cock, he was mesmerised, and totally focused on watching Jamie playing with his cock. Jamie knew this and was getting very turnewd on by the attention. Jamies cock started to grow, as it filled up with blood, John couldnt believe it, as it got harder John had to open his grip 'He could'nt put his hand around his monster cock'. It dwarfed John's hard dick when it reached its full potential, It was more than twice john erect length, and from what John could see almost as thick as a can of deoderant. It was amazing. The head of his cock was almost twice the size of John's puny dick. John thought to himself 'What would his partner think of this magnificent cock. John could contain his envy anymore, he hesitantly reached across and touched Jamie's big cock. Jamie just smiled 'You can finish me off if you like' he said. John had been staright all his life but confronted with this enormous cock he just didnt know what to do, and was overcome with desire and envy. John got on his knees and started rapidly wanking off Jamies big Dick. He even started to lick it and put it in his mouth. John was just overcome with lust for this big cock. Eventuallly Jamie couldnt take any more of the stroking and envy and came all in John face. He came an amount that John just couldnt comprehend, but it was an amount fitting of a big cock, John thought!! A trickle just wouldnt have done it justice. John desperately wanted to share this experience with his partner, and asked Jamie if he would be willing to show his monster member to his partner. Jamie agreed, and that is another story for another time... happy dreams...
     
  2. Ivor Biggun

    Ivor Biggun New Member

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    Replies please so that I can see if its worth doing a follow up story...:smile:
     
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    Sounds good.
     
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    very much worth a follow up!
     
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    Paragraphs are your friends.
     
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    Ivor, picking up on what Kiamo has already said, I would try splitting into paragraphs. This should be done whenever a new line of thought develops in the story or a fresh development takes place. It's not an exact science, but my view is that a paragraph should consist of no more than half a dozen sentences and fewer than that if possible.

    It's a good story but split into suitable paragraphs it would be so much easier to read.

    :smile:
     
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    I think it's hot
     
  8. funblokehere

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    Great story, can't wait for the next installment mate
     
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