Porn, art, or just plain pretentious?

[D_alex8]

 

[Pecker]

Very Burroughs of you.

 

[Normal_Guy1]

WTF mate!?!?

 

[D_alex8]

WTF mate!?!?

Wouldn't the world be boring if we were all the same? :biggrin1:

 

[D_Elijah_MorganWood]

Wouldn't the world be boring if we were all the same? :biggrin1:

Creative juices flow the best when our surroundings are boring as hell.

 

[Mkhonto]

Very Burroughs of you.

Alex8: Stay away from the Kool-Aid, dude! You write bloody brilliantly though!
Pecker: That goes for you too! No more Kool-Aid for you, cos this site's not ready for a psychedelic Pecker yet!
You may both give your critics a special Mkhonto-smack upside the head, and tell them it's from me.

 

[Chuck64]

Honest critique from a guy who usually just reads tech manuals: That is one of the most creative, disturbing short stories I've ever read. I'm really bad at picking up on symbolism, but the imagery is right up there with Poe - although it lacks a rhythm, which would really enhance the story...

 

[dankebilly]

i used to date a guy who wrote like that. he had a small cock and ejaculated too soon. not saying he was a bad author...

WTF mate!?!?