Porn, art, or just plain pretentious?

Discussion in 'Fictitious Stories' started by D_alex8, Feb 11, 2006.

  1. D_alex8

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    Very Burroughs of you.
     
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    WTF mate!?!?
     
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    Wouldn't the world be boring if we were all the same? :biggrin1:
     
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    Creative juices flow the best when our surroundings are boring as hell.
     
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    Alex8: Stay away from the Kool-Aid, dude! You write bloody brilliantly though!
    Pecker: That goes for you too! No more Kool-Aid for you, cos this site's not ready for a psychedelic Pecker yet!
    You may both give your critics a special Mkhonto-smack upside the head, and tell them it's from me.
     
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    Honest critique from a guy who usually just reads tech manuals: That is one of the most creative, disturbing short stories I've ever read. I'm really bad at picking up on symbolism, but the imagery is right up there with Poe - although it lacks a rhythm, which would really enhance the story...
     
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    i used to date a guy who wrote like that. he had a small cock and ejaculated too soon. not saying he was a bad author...
     
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