Roommate Late Development

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    Votes: 10 2.1%
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    Votes: 30 6.4%
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guy_072332

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WOW! just wow!

great story man. i'm kinda glad i just read it in its entirety. i really don't think i would have been able to wait for each chapter. it's such a great story. i stayed up 'til 3am reading it.

great job & i can't wait to read ur next work :)
 

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To be honest, that was one of the best stories i've read on here. I'm straight so it really did nothing for me but it was nice to finally read a story that had an ending, and didn't cut off in the middle of a great part only to never be continued

props!
 

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Thanks for the wonderful read. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece of fiction.

Hopefully you will honour your readership here with another story :smile:
 

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absolutely a perfect story I think u should write more i could not stop reading this story until the end lovely
 

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OMG!!! I've been reading your other story "Twin Fidelity" and you mentioned this one, so off I went to read it this morning and just like your most recent story, this one is truly amazing - you have an incredible gift!
 

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I agree with all the previous comments. A real page turner - great story telling.
I think I'm in love with Ryan but I have to admit I was dissapointed by the last chapter.
 
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Writer 2B? U B writer 4 sure! You asked for constructive criticism? Continue to write from your heart and polish your craft. You have been kissed by the Angels, my dear friend. You make me proud to love men.

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