Roommate Late Development

[Nuclear_Apple]

Omg amazing, I really should get to bed now.

I loved your epilogue... Much better than J.K.Rowling did with the Harry Potter series.

 

[guy_072332]

WOW! just wow!

great story man. i'm kinda glad i just read it in its entirety. i really don't think i would have been able to wait for each chapter. it's such a great story. i stayed up 'til 3am reading it.

great job & i can't wait to read ur next work

 

[tractorsupply]

To be honest, that was one of the best stories i've read on here. I'm straight so it really did nothing for me but it was nice to finally read a story that had an ending, and didn't cut off in the middle of a great part only to never be continued

props!

 

[Man4menu]

Excellent work this had me reading from beginning to end
Thank you for sharing

 

[melvin_blond]

nice!!

 

[D_Adoniah Sheervolume]

Just read the whole thing--VERY well done!!

 

[Nike93]

Aww i wanna meet someone now!

 

[fsu]

Aww i wanna meet someone now!

I can relate to that 100%.

GREAT story. That was how i wanted my roommate freshman year and i to end up like:redface:

 

[Cynix]

Thanks for the wonderful read. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece of fiction.

Hopefully you will honour your readership here with another story :smile:

 

[toadstool]

absolutely a perfect story I think u should write more i could not stop reading this story until the end lovely

 

[deleted12830]

extremely good!! thanx!!

 

[phasor11]

OMG!!! I've been reading your other story "Twin Fidelity" and you mentioned this one, so off I went to read it this morning and just like your most recent story, this one is truly amazing - you have an incredible gift!

 

[D_Weston Wideload]

Same here. First read the other story and now this one. Great writing and I love happy endings. Thanks

 

[ebutuoy28]

Great piece of writing. Hats off to you.

 

[hifzija]

I just read both of your story`s and I`m afraid that my words will destroy all what I think about your`s story.
Just GREAT.

 

[diablodevil]

That story absolutely inspiring and beautiful. Thank you very much.

 

[diablodevil]

I love that story, it was very inspiring. Definitely glad it worked well for you.

 

[ap5athome]

I agree with all the previous comments. A real page turner - great story telling.
I think I'm in love with Ryan but I have to admit I was dissapointed by the last chapter.

 

[poppabear]

Writer 2B? U B writer 4 sure! You asked for constructive criticism? Continue to write from your heart and polish your craft. You have been kissed by the Angels, my dear friend. You make me proud to love men.

More. More. More.