Sex God

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    Here's the beginning of a story I'm writing. Read and review please. Tell me if I should continue it.

    Erena flew in close to it, giggling she asked, "Is this what I think it is?"

    Shareen looked over, "Don't get too close to that one." The Felarn padded over and her eyes widened at the glowing green sculpture the fairy had found.

    "...and yes, it appears to be a penis...a ridiculously large penis." She turned her attention to the rest of the treasure in the cavern.

    The little fairy continued to appraise the statue as she flitted around it. It was simply massive, she guessed it had to be 12 inches long at least and 3 inches thick. Giggling once more she called out, "What race do you think it's supposed to belong to?"

    Shareen was filling her pouch with several golden rings and looked back over her shoulder, "Felarn of course. Certainly not an elf or a human...and definitely not a puny half-breed." She cast a significant glance Pel's way.

    The half-elf teenager turned red as he stood in the middle of the room not touching anything as he'd been told. She was never going to let him live that down. What did she expect? Shareen was so beautiful and he'd never seen one of the cat like Felarns before.
    A small voice in the back of his mind told him that however beautiful she was it wasn't an excuse to sneak into her room and masturbate over her sleeping form. He hadn't even cum before he found himself thrown across the room. Rather than kill him as the deadly feline could have done she stood there and humiliated him about the size of his 4 inch erection.

    The inn keepers daughters had never woken up when he did it....apparently Felarns were somewhat more sensitive.

    "Ohh...Shareen, don't be so mean. I think Pel's wand is cute and it seems plenty big to me" Pel would have felt better if someone other than an 8 inch tall fairy had said this.
    Erena once again turned her attention to the statue. "Felarn huh, Sha? I'd say minotaur definitely...and you know...I've seen some humans with some pretty big ones..."

    Shareen rolled her eyes. The diminutive fairy was positively obsessed with the sexual habits of other species and especially with the male genitalia. Whenever they met new people, Shareen could count on Erena to disappear and use her magic to 'explore'. It was actually hilarious to watch an inn full of men get large bulges in their breeches one by one. Occasionally when she found one with a particularly impressive manhood, the fairy would bless them with a tremendous orgasm much to their embarrassment. Suffice it to say that Pel did not receive such treatment.

    Out of the corner of her eye, the feline noticed Erena getting awfully close to the statue. "Erena! Don’t touch it!"

    The fairy had been about to kiss the massive head of the statue, she flew backwards saying, "Oh it wont hurt anything! You're no fun!"

    "I don’t like it. Its magic and there's plenty of other treasure here that I know is safe...so leave it alone!"

    The fairy did as she was told and flew away wandering through the rest of the cavern.
    Pel found himself alone with the grotesque statue. Hmmph...I bet if I had a cock that big...Shareen would beg to fuck me.

    And so would Tanya and Sasha. With me you could fuck them right in front of their father. Shareen and Erena could be your personal sex slaves. Head north and we can fuck the Elvish Queen in the middle of her court! Any woman can be yours! Hah! We can fuck goddesses! How would you like Ulmaya, that sanctimonious bitch, licking your balls! See how high and mighty the goddess of virtue and good is then!

    Pel looked around wildly...where had that voice come from? Both Shareen and Erena were still searching through the hoards of treasure as if nothing had happened.
    His eyes settled upon the jade phallus. For some reason he felt that was where the voice had come from.

    What should he do?



    Shareen studied the ruby crystal with an expert's eye. It would fetch a good deal of gold just by itself and there were a dozen just like it in the chest!

    Her tail flicked back and forth unconsciously as she imagined what she could buy with the vast amount of money this treasure room was going to get her. That was of course if she could get it back to somewhere civilized, she certainly wasn't going to offload any of it in Pel's pathetic village...

    Her main problem was that there was so much of it. She'd have to choose the most valuable and easiest to move. And there would be other hunters. It was only blind luck that Shareen and Erena had been in the village of Tallas when the earthquake hit. Others would come. These ruins had been scavenged long before, making a great many very rich. The earthquake had opened new areas, this one included.

    Shareen glanced over and saw the diminutive fairy flitting around a disgusting human painting. "Erena! Focus. Start putting what you can into your magic space."

    A high pitched giggle "I know what I want in my magic space!"

    "Quiet." Shareen tossed the crystal at the fairy.

    "Hey!" Erena threw her arms forward and the crystal disappeared in a shower of sparkling light.

    The Felarn stood and turned, looking for those jewel-encrusted daggers she'd seen earlier.

    The first thing she noticed was Pel standing furtively next to the...where was the sculpture?

    Shareen snarled, "Pel...what did you do with it?" She stalked towards him.

    The half-breed boy looked towards her. Shareen saw fear cross his features and then change into something she was all to familiar with. His eyes strayed from her face downward in an appraisal that he'd not dared done openly since his first punishment that night in the tavern.

    Her rage grew as she reached the fool. She grabbed his puny arm and jerked him away from the pedestal. It was quickly obvious what he'd done with the sculpture, the ridiculously huge bulge in his dirty breeches told the tale. Shareen contemptuously tossed the youth to the floor.

    "You stupid fool. Take it out of your pants right now."

    Shareen felt Erena fluttering next to her ear. "Shareen! I'm surprised at you! Thought you weren't interested in him that way."

    The half-elf was just lying there staring up at her stupidly. She was glad to see the fear was back in his eye. But even as she watched, his gaze settled upon the lightly furred breasts. Who did he think he was?
     
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    Pel didn't know what had drawn him to the obscene sculpture. He certainly wasn't sly and it wasn't like he normally had any interest in the male genitalia. Hmmph.... Shareen could attest to that. He still winced at the memory of the beating she'd given him. By the gods what had he been thinking? Sneaking into her room and masturbating over her sleeping form hadn't been one of his best ideas. It was just...he'd never seen anyone as beautiful and exotic as her before. He'd heard tales of the Felarn...

    They were a beautiful and graceful race, with both their males and females universally acclaimed as being among the most handsome of the many sentient species that inhabited the lands around the Inner Sea. They were in high demand as concubines, though few took them against their will, as lurking beneath their soft fur were muscles of steel. Their outward beauty masked the fact that beating beneath their breasts, there pulsed the heart of a hunting cat, swift and deadly when they desired, fond of toying with their prey when it was cornered.

    When she'd walked into the tavern, his mouth had literally fallen open. Though standing a few inches below six feet, her lithe frame was slender but solid. Her attire, consisting of some dark cloth wrapped around her waist and chest, did little to hide the rippling muscles playing beneath her spotted fur or the fullness of her breasts. He'd heard Felarn disliked wearing clothes, though did so when frequenting areas populated mainly by humans. Since the sight of a naked Felarn, whether male or female, had a predictable effect on humans, they had become accustomed to wearing them. A short sword hung in its leather scabbard at her side, swaying with her movement.

    Pel had just stared taking all of her in, her whiskered face with those mysterious slit green eyes, her soft golden fur, enticingly patterned with black spots, her cute little tail which flicked back and forth mischievously, her large firm breasts, doubtlessly topped with the most perfect of nipples. His reverie had been broken as a meaty palm slammed into the side of his head, he'd been so lost in her beauty that he'd over poured Gorish's beer and the big oaf hadn't taken it to well.

    Even now lying prostrate on the ground with the enraged cat about to thrash him again he couldn't help but appreciate her beauty.

    Shareen spoke slowly her tone full of menace, "Take it out of your pants right now or I'm going to..." She trailed off but raised her paw, her claws sliding out.

    Pel wanted to do just that but he couldn't. When he'd touched the statue it had seemed to melt. He drew back his hand but the liquefying sculpture had stuck and after only a few moments the entire thing seemed to disappear into his hand. Then he'd gotten an erection....a massive erection...far larger than possible...

    Now lying here with his obscene boner sticking up out of his pants he didn't know what to do....how would she react to him losing the sculpture?

    The Felarn's patience ran out and with a growl she hit the ground her hands on either side of his waist her knees digging into the hard ground around his legs. She sent the boy a look promising incredible pain to come as she reached down and pulled his pants down.

    The fat head of his cock slapped the bottom of her chin, thickly.

    Her lithe form stiffened, tensing as she stared at Pel's impossible cock. Her mind struggled to get around just what she was seeing. His cock was huge....larger than even the sculpture.

    Her soft cry was unlike anything Pel had ever heard before, a mewling that seemed to express a great ache, a black void bereft of illumination, that must be filled. Madness glittered in her green eyes, shining in the throbbing light cast by the countless priceless gem scattered throughout the room. Her nubile body trembled from her whiskers to her feet, as if the pent up energies of the cosmos were coursing through her lithe frame questing vainly for release.

    Shareen burned. Her loins were on fire, boiling blood pulsed through her veins, engorging her reddened nipples, swelling her labial lips. Her cunt was a molten furnace, slick and fiery. The musk of her arousal rose from her in a fragrant wave. She wanted Pel, wanted to pleasure him and have him take her until she howled with release, as she had never wanted anything before in her life.

    Unable to control herself, Shareen leaned forward over Pel's enormous cock, quickly she took the head into her mouth. Rolling her tongue over the tip, she could see the excitement in Pel's face. She knew her rough tongue was creating a tantalizing sensation against his very sensitive cock. She began to take the fat cock deeper into her mouth letting her tongue slide along the bottom of the shaft. She had to have the entire length in her mouth, she wanted to feel it sliding down her throat. She was so close to getting it all in her throat when Pel began to thrust into her mouth. This was even better than she could have imagined.

    Lifting his hips to push his enormous cock deep into her throat, Pel was amazed by what was taking place. He began to quickly fuck her face, imagining that it was he tight pussy. All he wanted to do was suck on her nipples and fuck her tight pussy.

    Pel slid his cock out of Shareen's mouth and told her to lay on her back. Overcome with the desire to have the huge cock in her mouth, she did so without any hesitation. Leaning over her body, Pel removed the cloth covering her chest and her pussy. Seeing the perfect nipples he imagined, he couldn't control himself. He took one nipple into his mouth and began sucking on it while at the same time, flicking his tongue across it. Shareen moaned and writhed in pleasure. "Fuck me hard" Shareen begged Pel, "Fuck me with your massive cock." Pel moved down to Shareens pussy, it was the most amazing pussy he had ever seen. He began to slide his cock up and down Shareen's slit feeling her hot wetness against the head of his cock.



    Erena ran one delicate hand along the emerald's face. So shiny.... It was only one of three dozen in the ornate necklace and Erena really wished she could remember that shrinking spell. The green jewels would look so good draped around her neck... This big emerald sitting nicely between her breasts. She ran her finger tips along her cleavage. Yes...draw the eye nicely to her wonderfully large tits. Way bigger than Shareen's, she thought proudly. Well...bigger if their bodies were of the same proportion.

    It had take some doing. But Erena had managed to figure out they were double E's by the human way of measuring. Silly humans... why would you ever cover them up?

    Hmmph...well, I suppose when one is a slave to gravity one needs support, she thought as she did a little back flip in the air to accentuate her point. Slowing and hovering gently above the emerald, Erena gently pressed her palms into the soft flesh of her tits. She'd investigated the matter thoroughly and very rare it was for a female with breasts the size of hers to be so miraculously with out sagging from their own immense weight. Of course, once again hers were only the size of the end of a human's thumb so perhaps that explained it.

    Erena smiled. Not only did the emerald's match the color of her glow but they reminded her of Shareen's eyes filled with lust. She recalled that night years ago when she'd first met the Felarn. Wow...now that she thought about it she could practically hear the beautiful cat's howls of passion.

    The Felarn had wandered into the Erena's mushroom circle. And as any proper knowledgeable person could tell you, fairies have complete dominion over any who step into their circles at night. Unfortunately for Shareen she hadn't been paying attention and she found herself writhing and dancing for a group of thoroughly entertained fairies. Once her sisters had had their fun and left for other pursuits Erena had stayed behind. They'd always teased her about her fascination with other races and Erena couldn't help but take advantage of the situation.

    Of course, she hadn't realized Leelu had stayed behind. That little bitch always had been jealous of Queen Titania's affection for Shareen. Still, Erena hadn't realized to what length the bitch would go. The psychic pain of her mushroom dying was still with Erena even now. Her magic loci would have just moved to another unbonded mushroom if not for the fact that at that exact moment Erena had been orgasming all over Shareen's engorged clit as she rubbed her pussy across the Felarn's enflamed bud. The enthusiastic little nub of a clitoris wasn’t exactly the same thing as a mushroom but fairy magic was rarely concerned with exact definitions.

    Erena giggled to herself. The joke was on Leelu. Being bonded to Shareen's pussy wasn't at all a bad thing in Erena's view. She'd always wanted to know more about the other races. Unfortunately, Fairies had to stay near their mushrooms. Erena's curiosity could only be sated by the very occasional traveler. Traveling with Shareen was a much more efficient not to mention fun way of doing so.

    "Fuck me hard! Fuck me with your massive cock!" That lust filled call from a very familiar voice jerked Erena out of her reverie.

    Spinning around upon the emerald, she turned and her jaw dropped open at the scene before her.

    Shareen writhed and moaned on hard stone floor as Pel slowly thrust into her....thrust into with a simply huge cock.

    Queen Titiana! It was the biggest she'd ever seen (okay..not bigger than that dragon's...) Fuck but it was definitely bigger than Kaz's. And that minotaur made a living off fucking the high class women in the great human city of Tiras Li. Kaz was so big they had charms cast upon them to allow their pussies to take it all.
     
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    But here was Pel, short little Pel feeding Shareen's wanton twat with what had to be several more inches of length than Kaz and quite a bit thicker. As Erena flitted closer she saw Shareen's pussy lips stretched obscenely wide around Pel's tree trunk of a shaft.
    Erena gasped as Pel hips met Shareen's his entire length inside her, the cat woman spasming involuntarily her pert breasts jiggling, her claws scraping across the ground as if the sensations were too much to handle. Erena was too lost in this incredible scene to wonder about how this was happening. How Shareen who hated this boy with a passion could be actually fucking him or how the half-elf had gone from 4 inches to that massive thing.

    Indeed her mind didn't work like that. She was too busy enjoying it to even care why or how. Pel slowly pulled out until the fat head was resting once more outside the pussy. Shareen practically howled in desperation at the sudden lack. Pel mere smiled and slowly almost torturously slowly slid back in.

    Erena was struck by the calm and controlled persona that Pel projected as he fucked the Felarn. It was so unlike the nervous scared of his own shadow boy that Erena remembered. And Shareen...well, Erena had spied upon Shareen's sexual adventures long enough to know that she liked to be in control. Despite the immense pleasure that Erena knew she might be feeling, the Felarn would only barely show it. Not now...she was screaming and begging like a woman possessed. She hadn't seen her like this since that first night in the mushroom circle.

    Erena drifted ever closer her own passion long since ignited. Her pussy was on fire as it leaked its love juices. As the liquid hit the air it turned into fairy dust. An enterprising person could make several vials of love potion she was dripping so much.

    She watched as Pel pulled out once more and teased the Felarn once more. Her eyes traveled up and down his incredible length. It..it had to be twice as long as she was tall...that was 16 inches... Where did it all go? There was no way Shareen could fit all that inside her but...right before the fairy's eyes the entire thing disappeared into Shareen's hungry pussy. Fuck....the Felarn must have a magic space of her own in there!

    With a firm command from Pel, the cat scrambled around getting to her hands and knees. Her taut softly furred rear waved gently in the air her tail extended straight up. Erena watched in awe as Pel slapped that ass confidently even as he positioned himself at her entrance. This was a position a Felarn female saved only for a Felarn alpha male. It was a position of submission...the Felarn were a proud race. No Felarn would ever do this for a lesser race. Even Kaz who'd come closest to sending Shareen into this wild state hadn't gotten this.

    Pel began thrusting rapidly into Shareen's pussy, his hips slamming against the firm padding of her ass. Erena couldn't help but flit closer to the apex of their love....the place where they joined. She could hear the wet squelching sound of his huge cock sliding through the molten pool of love juices inside her. She could hear the meaty slap of his...huge balls. Damn...they were of a size with the rest of him. Erena watched from her vantage point sitting upon Shareens calf. They hung low under their own weight and she watched with much interest as they swung with his movement slapping her engorged clit with each thrust.

    Erena let out a squeak as a hand closed around her.

    Even while continuing thrusting Pel brought her to his face and smiled, "Hi there...."



    Pel could tell that the sexy little fairy wanted to take part in the festivities but he was going to make her wait. Grabbing her, he brought her to his face. "Hi there, what are you looking at?" Stunned, she managed to stammer out "J-J-Just enjoying the view."

    Pel let Erena go and as she was floating in the air, once again enjoying the view she felt her face became relaxed. She felt that all too familiar tingling starting in her clit. How is this happening? she wondered. Oh God it was better than ever before. She could feel the tingling traveling throughout her body, all the way to the tips of her fingers. Her whole body spasming from the pleasure. Oh god, this was the best orgasm of her life. The orgasms kept coming in waves, each stronger than the last. She had never felt so much pleasure in her life.

    Pel continued to thrust into Shareen, amazed by the power and strength of his enormous cock. It was so amazing; he knew that he could make her do anything he wanted and he was going to. Slamming into her tight pussy, his cock slapping hard against her clit, his hands pulling her ass close to him. He began to slide one hand up and down the crack of her ass, watching her enjoy herself.

    Shareen was meowing in pleasure, every few moments punctuated with a growl. Pel had never heard such passionate sounds from any female and it made him want to fuck her more. He began thrusting faster and harder. He loved the feeling of her pussy as his cock slid in and out.

    Erena's orgasms were finally beginning to subside but she didn't want the pleasure to end. She fought to keep the feeling from leaving. Panting heavily, she began to float back down to Pel and Shareen's level.
     
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    Only read the beginning but this story is really hard to follow so far. It's pretty jumpy in the beginning. How did they get into this random Inn room and how do they just see the penis without knowing what the hell it's attached to.
     
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    Fantasy meets.. fantasy:)

    Not bad
     
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    It's all very clear to me, Kafm... It's just some flashbacks and narration, I'm sure you've seen it before !
    Anyway, it's very very hot... please keep going !
     
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    I like it, and look forward to more.
     
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    nice i like it something new/
     
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    Please do write some more.
     
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    Dear god more please.
     
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    Shareen felt the immense cock within her swell even larger and a tremendous orgasmic wave crashed upon her as it blasted her insides with a flood of semen. Her arms collapsed and she screamed into the stone floor as her body shook and quaked as extreme ecstasy wracked her weakened body. She felt her pussy fill with his copious loads so much that the thick goo was pouring from her aching cunt lips in torrents. Pel stayed buried within her all throughout his amazingly long ejaculation, his own body jerking in reaction as his hands remained firmly clutching her sensitive breasts as they hung from her lithe chest. Erena’s little body lay beneath their towering forms in a pool of their combined love juices completely unconscious, though her hips twitched in time with the aftershocks of pleasure still pulsing through Shareen’s system


    Pel’s softened cock slid out of the Felarn with a wet squelch, the pussy in question squeezing frantically in an attempt to keep the still amazingly long and thick member within its tight embrace. Pel fell backwards, his thick mop of unruly white hair softening the blow as his head hit the hard stone floor. He snored loudly. Shareen mewled in disappointment briefly before the all encompassing contentment of a feline getting truly well fucked washed over her and she drifted into slumber, her well shaped ass still thrust out in the air, her tail only now slowly falling to cover her weeping swollen pussy.







    Several hours later….


    Shareen groaned and opened her eyes. She pressed herself off of the floor and onto her butt only to jump sharply as her soft fur came in contact with wetness.


    What in the nine hells had happened? She remembered Pel taking the statue and… With a snarl, she whirled around.


    There the little twerp was…though 'little' definitely wasn’t the all encompassing term it once had been for him. She stared at the appendage snaking out from between his legs with no small amount of awe. The fat length of his flaccid member bulged out as it lay first across his tremendously sized testicles before it curved over his thigh, its fat head pointing at the ground on the outside of his leg. Shareen’s eyes flitted back and forth across it, cataloguing its sheer beauty and physical perfection as only a Felarn could. For only the Felarn male of all the races around the Inner Sea, only his member maintained its size when soft so that when strangers entered the Pride they knew immediately who the Alpha Male was without a doubt. Shareen stared at Pel’s testicles each the size of a large orange and she could not find within her memory one Felarn with a package even half this imposing.


    Erena was fluttering near her ear, “Magnificent isn’t it? Our little Pel all grown up!”


    Shareen flicked the air near the fairy without looking, “Disturbing more likely. THIS is why we don’t touch magical objects!”


    “Wait. This is why? Why haven’t I been touching more magical objects!? I mean seriously, that was the best cum ever and I didn’t really get touched! I can’t imagine what it was like for you……what was it like?”


    “Disturbing.” Was her reply and disturbing it had been. That the single most pleasurable sexual experience of her life had been the doing of a pathetic half elf orphan? She shuddered at the thought even as she felt a deep ache in her quim at its terrible emptiness. Her mind started replaying earlier events and she snapped it to a halt with a vengeance as she felt her nipples harden and places begin to get moist down below.


    Roughly she grabbed Pel’s pants around his ankles and wrestled them up his body, very carefully ignoring the very interesting way his massive cock shifted in response. She practically sighed with relief when it was covered. Now she could at least pretend it had never happened.


    And now…


    “Wake up you little bastard before I slash the fuck out of you! Wake up! Right fucking now!” She punctuated her words with harsh slaps to his face. For some reason she left her claws in. Hmph…his face was kind of aesthetically pleasing in this light…a shame if she marred it, only to have to look at his ruined visage the rest of their time together.



    Some time later....




    Pel hauled himself out of the hole with a loud groan of effort. Normally, he’d have spidered over the ledge with no problems at all. He was small but stronger than his size thanks to his elven heritage. But normally he wasn’t burdened with four large sacks bulging with gold, jewels, and other heavier artifacts. Sparing a moment to catch his breath, he suddenly felt compelled to turn and offer Shareen a hand as she (much less burdened) clambered over the side, contemptuously ignoring his outstretched arm. She looked around and stiffened at what she saw.


    Pel followed her gaze. Down some shattered steps from them and over some fallen columns was an ornate coach with some sort of green insignia emblazoned on the side. Around it stood several stupid looking oafs from the village to include his personal favorite, Gorish. There was also a very dangerous looking woman with very dark skin and white hair.


    Shareen was growling, “Erena! I suffer your indignities breezily and the least you can do is your job. Scouting? Remember that?”


    The fairy’s very shallowly glowing form popped over the edge, “Oh! Yea….about that. I kind of got distracted by that lovely derriere of yours. It’s really sexy!” She smiled prettily and batted her lashes.


    Shareen ignored her companion’s antics and cast her eyes around as she clutched her necklace. “Damn it! Where is that bitch? I know she’s here…the opportunist little harlot…”


    A new voice floated out from behind them, “Ooooh! How rude! That’s not the way a kitty talks about her mistress! I simply must think up the proper punishment.”


    Pel’s eyes widened as he saw the speaker slither out from behind a still standing column. It was a Naga! The stories so didn’t do the reality justice! Half human half snake was right but this… She was beautiful…high cheek bones…full pouting lips… Her hair was a vibrant blue that cascaded down her slender sinuous back in waves. Her upper body was completely human, her torso was mostly nude displaying the fine lines of her shoulders and flat taut stomach to excellent effect. Her breasts were small but obviously well shaped hidden by thin green silk bracketed with gold wire. Her lower half was that of a snake, though an extremely large one of the constrictor variety. Her length was hard to judge as the serpentine body extended towards the ground before looping around itself a few times before reaching out and wrapping around the column. Pel stared hard at the place where soft white skin met green scales with a bit of consternation. The Human part dipped low on her hips to display a tantalizing expanse of navel flesh…teasing him with the hint of what he would be able to see if she was a human.


    As she approached Shareen, totally ignoring Pel, he was able to see her back and was again teased with the sight of the tops of a well rounded human buttock including a sexy crack before it blended into her snake form.
     
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    Shareen snarled but didn’t step back as the naga slid into her personal space, “I’ll show you this kitty’s claws, Veda. You’re hypnosis won’t work this time.”




    Veda upper body was shifting rhythmically side to side, “Really, Shareen? I take it that little bauble around your neck is supposed to do something? Let’s see, shall we?”




    She snapped her fingers in front of Shareen’s face even as her eyes went weird almost looking like twin spirals. Pel looked at the Felarn and was surprised to see her face go slack, her whole body losing its tense ready to pounce air, relaxing. What was happening?




    Veda threw her head back and laughed, “Well, well…well…not so feisty now are we?” She reached out and grabbed Shareen’s necklace, with a jerk she tore it off, “Now who sold you this, kitty?”




    Shareen’s voice was completely without emotion, “Vaalgis the Learned, mistress.”




    “My my! A Sorcerer of great renown! You’re trying so hard to escape my grasp, aren’t you? Hmmm…and how many times have you fallen prey to my little game?”




    “Thirty three times including this one, mistress”




    “Hmmm…and you’ve enriched me so well, indeed. For that you deserve a reward. But first…” Pel watched with no small amount of interest as Veda’s slender hands searched Shareen drawing forth several jewels from her pouches even as they groped the Felarn’s furred flesh familiarly, “Erena…oh Erena….where’s my little fairy…with a head so small there’s only room for my sweet commands?”




    Pel nearly jumped as he suddenly felt a commotion in his pants and the green sparkling fairy’s upper body appeared over his waistband. How had she gotten there?! When?! And how hadn’t he noticed?!




    Erena’s voice was taunting, “I’m right here you skanky snake slut! My head may be small but my jugs are way bigger than yours!”





    Veda quirked one vibrantly blue eyebrow at this statement even as one of her hands appeared to be looking for treasure within Shareen’s supple pussy.




    The fairy was silent for a minute before adding, “….proportionately!”




    The naga replied slowly rather engrossed with the softly mewling felarn before her, “I see…. I see that your standards have rather slackened of late. That’s a rather pathetic half breed’s pants you’re residing within.”




    Erena cried, “Ha! That’s what you think. I’ll have you know-“




    Veda’s sharp voice interjected, “Come here.”




    Erena slipped out of his pants as she continued her tirade, “…that I’m coming over there and giving you a piece of my mind. Face to face! Where you can properly see how your sad form pales in comparison to my utter perfection!”




    The beautiful seductress rolled her eyes and raised one hand, a dainty pinky finger extended, “Hop on and tell me how you betrayed Shareen just as I ordered you to at our last meeting.”




    “As if!” replied Erena as she fluttered over the extended digit. Grasping its tip with both diminutive hands she shifted her hips and outstretched legs upward and out so that her tiny fairy pussy was poised above Veda’s fingertip. With a low groan she lowered herself upon it, “Ooooooh! You stupid snakey whore, that’s like ordering me to be sexy and cute! Of course, I exchanged Vaalgis’s Amulet of Mental Defense for a fake! If I hadn’t, Shareen would have just kicked your scaley ass and I wouldn’t be enjoying this oh so thick Veda finger up my cute Fairy cunt!”




    Erena wasn’t apparently aware of the rather pleased smile gracing Veda’s face as the naga replied, “Nor would you be tasting my delicious asshole you’re so obsessed with.”




    “That’s right! Now lower those scales of yours and give me a ride to that pretty puckered hole of yours!” demanded an enthusiastic Erena as she thrust herself up and down upon the naga’s finger even as the rest of Veda’s fingers curled around to stroke the fairy’s body, pushing her fat tits around in circles.




    Veda ignored the fairy as her head turned to look at Pel, acknowledging his presence for the first time. He cringed under her steady gaze and the evil smile upon her lips. While utterly confused by the way his companions were acting, he had been nonetheless immensely turned on. He had hoped his ability to go unnoticed would hold out for longer but now his hopes were dashed. Veda’s eyes traveled to the immense boner stretching his breeches obscenely and she laughed.




    “Boy, take those bags down to my coach. And make very sure you show Kir’da that dildo in your pants. One of her elven cousins with delusions of grandeur will be quite…interesting to her…”




    Pel didn’t like the way she’d said the word ‘interesting’ but he didn’t know what else to do. Clearly, she had some kind of power over his companions and if experienced adventurers like them had fallen, surely there was nothing he could do. On the other hand, he wasn’t looking forward to dealing with Gorish and the rest of those oafs not to mention this Kir’da.
     
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    Dont stop now man, more soon please.
     
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    Just bumping this up. Hopefully the writer will return. Good story.
     
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    bump...
     
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    Pel - Elf Half Breed +magic
    Shareen - Felarn (cat like humanoid)
    Erena - E cup Fairie
    Veda - Naga half snake half tiny tit woman

    oh yeah and bump
     
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    Well thanks for the responses. hardly seemed worth it to write more if no one would bother to say anything.

    It'll be a bit but certainly not too long before I have more up.

    Stating what you particularly enjoyed as well as what you'd like to see in the future would increase my motivation greatly.

    thanks
     
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    I'll tell you the only thing I didn't enjoy- the fact that it was a furry/non-human story. Everything else was pretty damn good.
     
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    PLease continue!!
     
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