Here's the beginning of a story I'm writing. Read and review please. Tell me if I should continue it.
Erena flew in close to it, giggling she asked, "Is this what I think it is?"
Shareen looked over, "Don't get too close to that one." The Felarn padded over and her eyes widened at the glowing green sculpture the fairy had found.
"...and yes, it appears to be a penis...a ridiculously large penis." She turned her attention to the rest of the treasure in the cavern.
The little fairy continued to appraise the statue as she flitted around it. It was simply massive, she guessed it had to be 12 inches long at least and 3 inches thick. Giggling once more she called out, "What race do you think it's supposed to belong to?"
Shareen was filling her pouch with several golden rings and looked back over her shoulder, "Felarn of course. Certainly not an elf or a human...and definitely not a puny half-breed." She cast a significant glance Pel's way.
The half-elf teenager turned red as he stood in the middle of the room not touching anything as he'd been told. She was never going to let him live that down. What did she expect? Shareen was so beautiful and he'd never seen one of the cat like Felarns before.
A small voice in the back of his mind told him that however beautiful she was it wasn't an excuse to sneak into her room and masturbate over her sleeping form. He hadn't even cum before he found himself thrown across the room. Rather than kill him as the deadly feline could have done she stood there and humiliated him about the size of his 4 inch erection.
The inn keepers daughters had never woken up when he did it....apparently Felarns were somewhat more sensitive.
"Ohh...Shareen, don't be so mean. I think Pel's wand is cute and it seems plenty big to me" Pel would have felt better if someone other than an 8 inch tall fairy had said this.
Erena once again turned her attention to the statue. "Felarn huh, Sha? I'd say minotaur definitely...and you know...I've seen some humans with some pretty big ones..."
Shareen rolled her eyes. The diminutive fairy was positively obsessed with the sexual habits of other species and especially with the male genitalia. Whenever they met new people, Shareen could count on Erena to disappear and use her magic to 'explore'. It was actually hilarious to watch an inn full of men get large bulges in their breeches one by one. Occasionally when she found one with a particularly impressive manhood, the fairy would bless them with a tremendous orgasm much to their embarrassment. Suffice it to say that Pel did not receive such treatment.
Out of the corner of her eye, the feline noticed Erena getting awfully close to the statue. "Erena! Dont touch it!"
The fairy had been about to kiss the massive head of the statue, she flew backwards saying, "Oh it wont hurt anything! You're no fun!"
"I dont like it. Its magic and there's plenty of other treasure here that I know is safe...so leave it alone!"
The fairy did as she was told and flew away wandering through the rest of the cavern.
Pel found himself alone with the grotesque statue. Hmmph...I bet if I had a cock that big...Shareen would beg to fuck me.
And so would Tanya and Sasha. With me you could fuck them right in front of their father. Shareen and Erena could be your personal sex slaves. Head north and we can fuck the Elvish Queen in the middle of her court! Any woman can be yours! Hah! We can fuck goddesses! How would you like Ulmaya, that sanctimonious bitch, licking your balls! See how high and mighty the goddess of virtue and good is then!
Pel looked around wildly...where had that voice come from? Both Shareen and Erena were still searching through the hoards of treasure as if nothing had happened.
His eyes settled upon the jade phallus. For some reason he felt that was where the voice had come from.
What should he do?
Shareen studied the ruby crystal with an expert's eye. It would fetch a good deal of gold just by itself and there were a dozen just like it in the chest!
Her tail flicked back and forth unconsciously as she imagined what she could buy with the vast amount of money this treasure room was going to get her. That was of course if she could get it back to somewhere civilized, she certainly wasn't going to offload any of it in Pel's pathetic village...
Her main problem was that there was so much of it. She'd have to choose the most valuable and easiest to move. And there would be other hunters. It was only blind luck that Shareen and Erena had been in the village of Tallas when the earthquake hit. Others would come. These ruins had been scavenged long before, making a great many very rich. The earthquake had opened new areas, this one included.
Shareen glanced over and saw the diminutive fairy flitting around a disgusting human painting. "Erena! Focus. Start putting what you can into your magic space."
A high pitched giggle "I know what I want in my magic space!"
"Quiet." Shareen tossed the crystal at the fairy.
"Hey!" Erena threw her arms forward and the crystal disappeared in a shower of sparkling light.
The Felarn stood and turned, looking for those jewel-encrusted daggers she'd seen earlier.
The first thing she noticed was Pel standing furtively next to the...where was the sculpture?
Shareen snarled, "Pel...what did you do with it?" She stalked towards him.
The half-breed boy looked towards her. Shareen saw fear cross his features and then change into something she was all to familiar with. His eyes strayed from her face downward in an appraisal that he'd not dared done openly since his first punishment that night in the tavern.
Her rage grew as she reached the fool. She grabbed his puny arm and jerked him away from the pedestal. It was quickly obvious what he'd done with the sculpture, the ridiculously huge bulge in his dirty breeches told the tale. Shareen contemptuously tossed the youth to the floor.
"You stupid fool. Take it out of your pants right now."
Shareen felt Erena fluttering next to her ear. "Shareen! I'm surprised at you! Thought you weren't interested in him that way."
The half-elf was just lying there staring up at her stupidly. She was glad to see the fear was back in his eye. But even as she watched, his gaze settled upon the lightly furred breasts. Who did he think he was?
Erena flew in close to it, giggling she asked, "Is this what I think it is?"
Shareen looked over, "Don't get too close to that one." The Felarn padded over and her eyes widened at the glowing green sculpture the fairy had found.
"...and yes, it appears to be a penis...a ridiculously large penis." She turned her attention to the rest of the treasure in the cavern.
The little fairy continued to appraise the statue as she flitted around it. It was simply massive, she guessed it had to be 12 inches long at least and 3 inches thick. Giggling once more she called out, "What race do you think it's supposed to belong to?"
Shareen was filling her pouch with several golden rings and looked back over her shoulder, "Felarn of course. Certainly not an elf or a human...and definitely not a puny half-breed." She cast a significant glance Pel's way.
The half-elf teenager turned red as he stood in the middle of the room not touching anything as he'd been told. She was never going to let him live that down. What did she expect? Shareen was so beautiful and he'd never seen one of the cat like Felarns before.
A small voice in the back of his mind told him that however beautiful she was it wasn't an excuse to sneak into her room and masturbate over her sleeping form. He hadn't even cum before he found himself thrown across the room. Rather than kill him as the deadly feline could have done she stood there and humiliated him about the size of his 4 inch erection.
The inn keepers daughters had never woken up when he did it....apparently Felarns were somewhat more sensitive.
"Ohh...Shareen, don't be so mean. I think Pel's wand is cute and it seems plenty big to me" Pel would have felt better if someone other than an 8 inch tall fairy had said this.
Erena once again turned her attention to the statue. "Felarn huh, Sha? I'd say minotaur definitely...and you know...I've seen some humans with some pretty big ones..."
Shareen rolled her eyes. The diminutive fairy was positively obsessed with the sexual habits of other species and especially with the male genitalia. Whenever they met new people, Shareen could count on Erena to disappear and use her magic to 'explore'. It was actually hilarious to watch an inn full of men get large bulges in their breeches one by one. Occasionally when she found one with a particularly impressive manhood, the fairy would bless them with a tremendous orgasm much to their embarrassment. Suffice it to say that Pel did not receive such treatment.
Out of the corner of her eye, the feline noticed Erena getting awfully close to the statue. "Erena! Dont touch it!"
The fairy had been about to kiss the massive head of the statue, she flew backwards saying, "Oh it wont hurt anything! You're no fun!"
"I dont like it. Its magic and there's plenty of other treasure here that I know is safe...so leave it alone!"
The fairy did as she was told and flew away wandering through the rest of the cavern.
Pel found himself alone with the grotesque statue. Hmmph...I bet if I had a cock that big...Shareen would beg to fuck me.
And so would Tanya and Sasha. With me you could fuck them right in front of their father. Shareen and Erena could be your personal sex slaves. Head north and we can fuck the Elvish Queen in the middle of her court! Any woman can be yours! Hah! We can fuck goddesses! How would you like Ulmaya, that sanctimonious bitch, licking your balls! See how high and mighty the goddess of virtue and good is then!
Pel looked around wildly...where had that voice come from? Both Shareen and Erena were still searching through the hoards of treasure as if nothing had happened.
His eyes settled upon the jade phallus. For some reason he felt that was where the voice had come from.
What should he do?
Shareen studied the ruby crystal with an expert's eye. It would fetch a good deal of gold just by itself and there were a dozen just like it in the chest!
Her tail flicked back and forth unconsciously as she imagined what she could buy with the vast amount of money this treasure room was going to get her. That was of course if she could get it back to somewhere civilized, she certainly wasn't going to offload any of it in Pel's pathetic village...
Her main problem was that there was so much of it. She'd have to choose the most valuable and easiest to move. And there would be other hunters. It was only blind luck that Shareen and Erena had been in the village of Tallas when the earthquake hit. Others would come. These ruins had been scavenged long before, making a great many very rich. The earthquake had opened new areas, this one included.
Shareen glanced over and saw the diminutive fairy flitting around a disgusting human painting. "Erena! Focus. Start putting what you can into your magic space."
A high pitched giggle "I know what I want in my magic space!"
"Quiet." Shareen tossed the crystal at the fairy.
"Hey!" Erena threw her arms forward and the crystal disappeared in a shower of sparkling light.
The Felarn stood and turned, looking for those jewel-encrusted daggers she'd seen earlier.
The first thing she noticed was Pel standing furtively next to the...where was the sculpture?
Shareen snarled, "Pel...what did you do with it?" She stalked towards him.
The half-breed boy looked towards her. Shareen saw fear cross his features and then change into something she was all to familiar with. His eyes strayed from her face downward in an appraisal that he'd not dared done openly since his first punishment that night in the tavern.
Her rage grew as she reached the fool. She grabbed his puny arm and jerked him away from the pedestal. It was quickly obvious what he'd done with the sculpture, the ridiculously huge bulge in his dirty breeches told the tale. Shareen contemptuously tossed the youth to the floor.
"You stupid fool. Take it out of your pants right now."
Shareen felt Erena fluttering next to her ear. "Shareen! I'm surprised at you! Thought you weren't interested in him that way."
The half-elf was just lying there staring up at her stupidly. She was glad to see the fear was back in his eye. But even as she watched, his gaze settled upon the lightly furred breasts. Who did he think he was?