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First post on this forum but I do really like this story. Its by far and away one of the better efforts I've seen here and it would be a shame to see it abandoned

What I will say with regards criticism is that you should remember your audience. People reading this, including myself, aren't necessarily looking for deep characters or story (although they are always a plus). So more sex, preferably straight, is always welcome
 

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Pel stumbled down the shattered steps and around a statue lying on its side. He was a bit torn. On the one hand, Veda was a very scary woman and he was very happy to be away from her. On the other hand, she was also a very attractive woman and was doing some very interesting things to his two also very attractive companions. But on the other hand he was now heading towards another very dangerous looking woman, this Kir’da the snake lady had mentioned. Who while very attractive looking as well was definitely not doing any interesting things. At the moment she appeared to be shouting at the village thugs while brandishing a very wicked looking sword.
“And if any of you so much as think about lifting one single coin that I haven’t personally given to you as payment, I will very personally eviscerate you with this!”
The men backed away from her in a hurry. She stared at them for a long moment but having judged them sufficiently cowed, she turned to face Pel as he very hesitantly approached straining under his load.
She was beautiful, even with her skin a dark black…not brown like he’d seen a few travelers from the south but actually black. Her face had high cheek bones and a thin nose. Her lips were small and it didn’t look like she smiled…ever. Her one revealed eye was purple hewed. The other was covered with a dark violet eyepatch. There was no strap holding it in place, instead it was attached to her skin by three golden piercings. A feint grey scar could be seen sticking out from the top and bottom of the patch. Her hair was a stark white and it flowed in a mane down her back as well as sitting upon her shoulders. She had on armor of closely fitted scales that clung to her body so tightly that her form could be easily discerned. Her large….well…huge breasts now that he dared to look at them were held in place by armor that looked like two turtle shells of the same iridescent color as the scales. The very tops of her jugs were bare but given the size of her chest, the amount of cleavage and flesh on display was more than a lot of women had in their entirety.
Pel’s appraisal of her pretty much stopped upon his noticing of her well endowed chest. His brain shorted out a bit. Then he saw stars. Then little prancing unicorns.
The brain shorting out was her breasts. The stars were her fist slamming into his face. The unicorns were his head hitting the ground.
She was shouting again, “Don’t just stand there, you oafs! Get this shit picked up and into the carriage. Remember my blade! I’m lacking finger bones for my next necklace!”
Pel opened his eyes to see her beautiful face hovering over his and her breasts hovering somewhere nearby. Her voice was low as she drew her blade very gently across his neck, “You better learn to keep your eyes where they belong or I’m really going to enjoy myself. I don’t know what disgusts me more…the stupid surface elf blood in you or the fact one of those mangy wretches actually fucked a dirty human.”
Her hand plucked his very sensitive ear tip and pinched it painfully. He moaned a bit and squirmed but her blade only bit deeper.

Terror gripped Pel like nothing he’d ever experienced. He was absolutely positive that in that moment she was going to kill him. He felt like shriveling up inside himself.
Something welled up within.
Something powerful.
Suddenly the twisting of his ear no longer hurt. It actually felt kind of good.
His eyes opened and some presence took possession of his throat. A much more confident voice than he’d ever managed escaped his lips,
“Gullible girls are easy.
They believe whatever you say.
Legs spread and mouths swallow at the silliest lie.”
The woman’s mouth fell open as her face lost all expression. Her one eye seemed to stare right through him for a long moment.
Then she shook her head and reared back, “What did you say?!” she demanded harshly.
Pel’s mind froze as it always did in such moments but as he saw one of her hands curl into a fist he managed to blurt out, “Nothing! I didn’t say anything!”
A rather confused expression spread across her fine features, “That’s right.”
She was sitting upon his stomach and now turned her attention away from him much to his relief. She carefully watched the village thugs stow the riches away and then turned to look up the steps towards the snake lady and his companions. She apparently liked what she saw because her purple tongue slid out to lick her lips and her hips shifted upon him. Slowly she slid her sword back into the sheath on her back.
If Pel thought he had been given a reprieve he was sorely mistaken as she drew out a wickedly curved dagger from her belt. Her violet eye was on him once more and she smiled, “It seems Veda was feeling generous this afternoon. She’s having her fun and she gave me the perfect toy for my fun… I haven’t cut up one of your disgusting kind in far too long….”
Pel’s terror shot higher as she lowered the dagger to his face. She started to slightly stroke it along his features as if deciding what to scar first. His mind frantically searched for a way out but she was much stronger than him and would surely kill him should he struggle. His brain flitted back to that confusing moment when he’d blurted out those words in a weird sing songy rhythm. She’d been about to seriously pound him for talking to her but then he’d told her he hadn’t said anything and… she’d agreed.
What had he said? He could barely remember it now as he felt her blade start to press harder. Something silliest lies….she’d believe whatever you say!
Pel drew a blank….what was he supposed to say to make her stop?
He needed her to stop cutting him……”Don’t cut me! It’s for your own safety! My blood…..it…its toxic! Very toxic! Poisonous!”
Her hand with the knife flew back as her eye widened, “What? How is that possible? I’ve never heard of such a thing.”
Pel stared at her, not quite believe that worked, “Umm…I was cursed by one of the items down there!”
She slowly nodded, “I’ve heard of cursed treasure. Its why we let idiots like Shareen to do the dirty work for us. I suppose that’s a lucky break for you…” she looked glum before starting to smile evily, “except there are plenty of ways to torture without bleeding. Little half elf wishes he hadn’t stared at my breasts now, does he?”
Pel couldn’t believe that had actually worked and he felt a quick thrill flow through him. Feeling strangely confident he said, “But I was staring at them to help you!”
Confusion filled her purple eye, “You were?”
“Yes….um….you see…there’s this really bad disease around here…..its called the um…boob plague…and um… it happens the quickest to women with really large um….boobs.”
There was anger in her eye but something else as well. She looked like she wanted to hit him for talking about her boobs but instead she asked, “What….what happens to those with this…plague?”
He could not believe this was working and he started to relax a bit, responding, “Oh…their breasts wither away and then they die.”
Her eye went very wide and then narrowed as she grabbed his shirt with both hands pulling him up slightly, “Is there a cure?!”
“Urh! If it is caught early enough!!!”
“Is it early enough?!”
“Um…. I have to.. um see your breasts to determine that!”
 

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There was no hesitation now as her hands flew to her sides, unsnapping and loosening clasps on her armor. Her mountainous breasts jiggled as they settled lower and she reached with her hands into the metal shells containing them. Pel’s terror receded at that moment, the heady exhilaration at the prospect of seeing yet another beautiful woman’s breasts pressing his fear to the side.


Pel was filled with awe struck wonder as her immense black skinned breasts bounced into view. Her boobs didn't just go out or hang down a mile, sagging or drooping ponderously like one might expect of someone with breasts of her dimensions, rather, they took up space in all directions, and somehow they retained all of the youthful perkiness of much smaller tits. Her breasts swelled…more like erupted out from her body with considerable vitality and amazing horizontality, like massive female flowers straining towards a setting sun. Her breasts were incredibly round, and they were almost aggressive in the way that they defied gravity, refusing to sag despite their tremendous size.


Even as Pel’s mind catalogued their sheer greatness, a small part of him wondered at the words and descriptions he was finding. He wasn’t even sure what some of those words meant…. It almost like someone was thinking for him. That was crazy….


He was jerked out of his thoughts by a harsh stab of two fingers into his chest, “Well?! Is it early enough?”


Pel was momentarily stunned by the intense gyrations her movement caused in her breasts. The jiggly mounds bouncing against each other delightfully. Finally he managed to sputter, “Um! Maybe! I have to feel them to be sure!”


Kir’da glared at him with her one eye for what seemed like an eternity but she finally sighed. “Fine.” Her eye caught something and she suddenly shouted, “You bloody oafs! Keep your eyes to yourselves or I’ll cut’em out of yer fat heads!”


Pel’s hands shook a bit as he slowly moved them towards her jutting jugs. Her attention returning to him, she rolled her eye and swiftly snatched his hands and pressed them against her breasts. “I don’t have all day, ingrate. Get this over with.” She positively growled.


The young half elf was in heaven as he felt the lush softness of her breasts. Their sheer size dwarfed his small hands as he pressed into them, feeling their great weight. He explored them, his fingers traveling the full contours of her silky expanse. Her dark purple nipples were hardening into twin daggers as he proceded, each nearly an inch long and rather thick.


She suffered through all this with an impatient glare, clearly some sort of violent thoughts were welling up the longer he touched her. He could just sense it. But now that he’d started he couldn’t help but continue for fear of what she was going to do when this masquerade finally fell apart.


That weird feeling of otherness suddenly was back in his head and his hands started moving with much more purpose and steadiness. He’d been hesitant to touch her nipples before but his hands had no such compulsion now as they flickered across the erect nubs causing Kir’da to gasp. She had no time to react before his palms were pressing forcefully into her flesh and then he slapped one of her big tits hard, causing it to jounce against its neighbor with intense jiggles.


Shock and anger and something else were splashed across her features as his vigorous assault continued. Her arms came up to retaliate but his fingers were on her long sensitive nipples instantly. He pinched and pulled, manipulating the big dark forms of her breasts from just her tips. Her threatening arms froze in the air and shook, her fingers apart and her eye tightly closed as the sensations he was causing coursed through her body.

Pel was just as stunned by his actions as she was. He wasn’t the one controlling his hands! Something else was! Still, he couldn’t blame the invader because the beautiful dark elf on top of him, quivering and jerking in pleasure was one of the hottest things he’d ever experienced!
 

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A pungent scent filled his nostrils and he knew without knowing why that it was Kir’da’s pussy sopping with arousal as it pressed against his abdomen.


He didn’t know how long it took but his talented hands were steadily driving the drow closer and closer to orgasm. Her sharp feminine cries of pleasure were a far cry from her low menacing tones of before. Soon enough with her hips jerking against him, she cried out loud as she bent low against him. Her amazing breasts dragged against his skinny chest and he felt her hot breath on his neck as she came screaming against him.


Moments later Pel was still laying there with the drow on top of him, his hands once again his own crushed between her heavy breasts and his chest. The soft sounds coming from her throat against his own told him she was asleep.


He’d apparently made her cum so hard she passed out!


Now that was a decidedly odd experience. That was the sort of thing he dreamed about.


Of course, now he had to figure out what to do about his current situation. He was still in the clutches of a very dangerous woman. Craning his neck he looked around.


Well… that was disturbing. Gorish and the rest of the village toughs were staring at Kir’da and him with looks filled with lust and need. A couple even had their dicks out and were slowly stroking them as they approached.


Oh…this wasn’t good…


Looking back up the way he came, he could see the snake lady and Shareen writhing upon the ground against each other, very clearly doing something sexual. A flitting green glow told him Erena was fully engaged in the festivities. Clearly, he wasn’t going to be receiving help from that direction anytime soon.


Pel felt a shadow fall across him. Looking up he saw Gorish’s thick bony face. He smiled weakly, “Oh hey, Gorish! How’s it going?”


Gorish smiled back evily, “Great, Pel. Just great now. We really owe you one… this drow bitch is going to get what she deserves….right, boys?”


There were various degrees of agreement, a thin weedly voice Pel recognized as Sten’s said, “Yea! I’m going to whip that ass!”


Pel replied as cheerfully as he could manage, “Oh…that sounds like fun…” His fingers still pressed against her breasts, pinched her nipples hard.


With a snarl she leapt up and back like lightning, her sword seeming to teleport into her hands. “What is going on here you human scum?”


Well…that was a plus, thought Pel. Now she was focused on hurting the village thugs instead of him. And maybe just maybe she’d forget about what happened between the two of them.


But when the surprise left Gorish, he was still smiling, “We’re helping you out, mistress. The peck found the signs of plague. You’ve got it alright!”


Her sword’s tip lowered a bit as the fear hit her once more, her free hand coming up to grasp one exposed breast, “No!”


Pel’s heart sank. Apparently Gorish had been paying enough attention to realize the weird thing going on with Kir’da.


Gorish continued, “That’s right, missy. You’ve got it but it’s not too late. We were just about to give you the cure!”


“You were!?” There was hope in her voice but then she noticed Gorish’s big hand stroking his big human cock. “I take it, it has something to do with that?” Her voice filled with resignation.


[FONT=&quot]“Yea, that’s right. Just give head, it's a natural cure for the plague to suck cocks since they have something in the cum that stops the disease…" He explained as he stepped forward.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]Kir’da looked mildly disgusted and dejected for a long moment before she stepped forward quickly and snapped a kick back around Gorish’s legs. With a shout, the surprised thug fell to the ground. She was straddling his big thighs in seconds, her small hands grasping his cock and squeezing tightly. Fliking her head around and sending her long white hair flying, she demanded, “The rest of you start jerking off! Fast. I don’t have time for this shit!”[/FONT]
 

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[FONT=&quot]She started to stroke Gorish’s member roughly and clumsily, not at all concerned how he felt. She made absolutely no move to suck him. He was still enjoying it but clearly he wanted more, he gasped, “That’s not enough. Uh….you have to take in your mouth or it doesn’t work. It’s a magical plague. And…ah! It is making you really weak now! You’re no stronger than a kitten!”[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]She stared at him in confustion and dismay. But her hand’s grip upon him softened and that was all the cue Gorish needed to prove his words had worked. With a snarl of his own he grabbed her hips and thrust her back off of him. Kir’da’s reaction was instant but completely ineffectual. A clearly expert martial art sort of move was easily defeated because of the apparent complete lack of strength in her limbs. Soon enough he had her splayed out on the ground and was quickly divesting her of the rest of her tight fitting armor, his companions crowding in to help. She cursed and struck at them but she couldn’t seem to make her limbs strong enough.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]Pel watched this in arousal and consternation. Seeing this strong woman who had been quite cruel to him dominated and subjugated was sexy but he couldn’t help but feel anger that these men were fucking her and not him. It was he who conquered her after all. It was he who had given her such a powerful orgasm that she’d passed out![/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]He stroked his obscene erection as it tented his pants and groaned in frustration.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]The idea of stepping forward and doing…something was tantalizing but he remembered the all encompassing fear he’d felt with her knife at his throat and he couldn’t help but feel relieved to just stand there with no one paying attention to him. Perhaps he could just slink off…[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]But as he watched Kir’da’s now completely nude body work between the grunting men and the way her sopping pussy squelched around Gorish’s dick, he couldn’t help but feel his arousal shoot ever higher demanding that he could not leave. At the same time a weird feeling of jealousy and outrage was building somewhere in the back of his head.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]“You’re a slut!”[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]Kir’da’s eye widened upon hearing that but only momentarily. She then began to suck upon the cock in her mouth with much more enthusiasm, a deep purring moan escaping from her slurping lips. Her toned black buttocks started to roll with Gorish’s thrusting hips as her hands reached out to grasp the straining members to either side.

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[FONT=&quot]“Whore!”[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]It was true, she agreed. She wasn’t pleasuring them for coin but for the cure boiling within their balls. She’d do anything to rid herself of the plague, using her body was easy. The more she thought about it the more it made sense. Veda paid her for her services as a bodyguard but Kir’da spent every night in the naga’s arms. She had thought of herself as Veda’s lover but now it seemed more like she was simply Veda’s favorite whore….[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]“You need our cocks, dontcha?!”[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]Well, of course she did. That was quite obvious. She needed that cure.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]“Yea! You need our big human cocks!”[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]That thought exploded across her fragile mind. They were big cocks. Big human cocks. Each six or seven inches and quite thicker than the kind a weak drow male possessed. Gorish’s big cock felt pleasingly full within her. Perhaps that’s why she always found herself laying with females rather than males.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]She had little time to ponder it as the human with his cock in her mouth grabbed her head and thrust his member straight down her throat. He face fucked her vigorously and she felt herself choking on his cock. Part of her felt outrage at being dominated in this way but the rest couldn’t help but get off and just how slutty she was being. And she really did need their big human cocks inside her.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]A sudden beast like roar from nearby froze all the participants of the little impromptu orgy. Kir’da couldn’t see past Gorish’s bulk between her legs and she craned her neck to see past him even as the dick in her mouth slipped out as it shrunk to lay flaccid upon her eyepatch. The dicks in her hands were similarly going soft as the men seemed to wilt as they stared at something beyond Gorish. Gorish himself was actually cringing, his big shoulders sagging as he seemed to fight to not look behind him at what had so enthralled his companions. Inside her Kir’da felt his cock diminish quickly, going soft so quickly and shrinking so fast that it slipped from her pussy’s tight embrace with what she oddly imagined to be a wimper. All around her the pathetic humans were looking like abashed boys with their hands caught in the lauder, their genitials only highlighting the image as their shafts were now positively miniscule all nestled up tightly to their small balls is if trying to hide themselves. Kir’da twisted and struggled to see what had so effected them even as she felt derision for her earlier appreciation for their manhoods.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]Finally, a hand gripped Gorish’s shoulder and the big man was tossed aside like he was nothing but a sack of potatoes. [/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]Kir’da barely had time to register the presence of the half-elf and the incredible size of his massive beautiful cock before he was kneeling between her legs and pressing its tip to her very ready entrance.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]Steadily inserting his flesh within her until his massive balls were pressing against her ass. The entire time he slowly slid into her the shear incredible fullness that hit her had her breath hard to catch. Her eye clenched shut and her toes curled even as her legs reflexively wrapped around his waist and her mouth opened wide as she silently cried out at this astonishing sensation. It felt like her organs were spreading aside for him to fit his massive weapon within her. His monstrous organ sent waves of tingling across her nerves as the overwhelming feeling of fullness dominated her thoughts. Everything se’d ever experienced paled to this one moment. Conscious thought was impossible. She could feel every throb of his massive prick inside her and that was all that mattered.[/FONT]
 

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[FONT=&quot]He pulled out halfway and then shoved himself back in forcefully with no more of gentleness now that her trough had been thoroughly plowed. Kir’da saw stars as the intensity of the pleasure was almost pain and she loved it. The coursing shock of fanged whip was nothing next to the shocking power of his huge member bludgeoning within her. The squelching sounds of their joining were loud, even over her panting and groaning. She was barely aware of it so totally focused on the pleasure his member was causing but his steady powerful pounding was causing her prodigious breasts to slap her face continually. Despite the frenzied way her body shook and gyrated beneath him, his movements were controlled and calculated as he probed and pumped inside her with precision, easily finding ways of sending her pleasure and cries ever higher as a quick barrage of orgasms washed over her.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]His pace never let up as if he hadn’t even noticed her climaxes and her body voiced its approval by thrusting and grinding back up into him while squeezing his immense shaft in a vice-like grip as her cunt bathed it in juices from yet more orgasms.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]His remarkable endurance continued to show as he never yielded to her moist tightness, even increased his tempo. Soon the slap of their colliding flesh became as loud as applauding hands, and louder still. She moaned and screamed in response until he casually grasped one of her breasts while cradling her head forward, his pistoning hips never slowing in an incredible show of strength, virility, and dominance. Kir’da immediately knew what he intended and her lips hurriedly grasped her offered nipple, her teeth clamping down to hold it against its massive gyrations. Taking the humiliating action was nothing in her mind, so gone was she to the pleasure as she fought to stifle her cries with her own tit flesh, her right breast still free to slap her cheek rhythmically.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]Through all this faster still did her pound, his massive testicles bouncing against the curves of her ass with force. Faster and more forceful still his cock battered within her sending her climaxes ever stronger and higher. His hips slammed into her ever faster and louder, battering and stimulating her engorged clit at the same time. His hips became a blur as he rammed into her with more stamina, force , and especially speed than should be possible.[/FONT]
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[FONT=&quot]Finally he cried out another astonishing roar and Kir’da screamed even louder as she felt him pulse still larger within her as he came with tremendous force inside her. Cum splashed her insides to force itself out between her lips and the massive shaft piercing her cunt. Her back arched and her hips shook from the climaxes that washed across her in response[/FONT]
 

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I appreciate the responses. But more are needed to stoke my motivation. I have a day off tomorrow and I suppose I could use that time to write more... Perhaps if more readers respond and perhaps even tell me what specifically they liked and would like to see more of or where they'd like the story to go my muse would brighten?
 

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the thing is so many writers have one main character. Maybe you could introduce more male leads, so to speak. I definitely want to see shareen get fucked