Since we are reviewing stories, at your leisure ..

Discussion in 'Women's Issues' started by Wyldgusechaz, Jan 11, 2008.

  1. Wyldgusechaz

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    In advance do you want the god's honest truth or buttering up a bit :)
     
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    What earthly good would buttering up do?!!! Brutal honesty is always best. Its just a story!! Hit grammar, tense, and anything that doesn't ring true. You can't get better at anything if you don't receive honest criticisms. Mention them here or by PM.
     
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    Some people don't want brutal honesty :)
     
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    Well I have really thick skin, I am very confident, so it doesn't bother me. Fire away.
     
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