Since we are reviewing stories, at your leisure ..

Wyldgusechaz

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In advance do you want the god's honest truth or buttering up a bit :)

What earthly good would buttering up do?!!! Brutal honesty is always best. Its just a story!! Hit grammar, tense, and anything that doesn't ring true. You can't get better at anything if you don't receive honest criticisms. Mention them here or by PM.