Southern Heat

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  1. ItalianShowOff

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    This is my first and i'll be updating a few times a week. Hope you like it!

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    It was dead quiet. Nothing but the sounds of the wind whistling through the willows, the ticking of the massive grandfather's clock, and Jason's breathing. Jason set his luggage down and eyed along the walls of the mansion's foyer. Pictures of long ago told stories of summers past. He finally made it to the Louisiana home of his ancestors, and he planned to restore it to it's former glory.
    Suddenly, the sound of gravel crunching interrupted the calm beauty. Jason ran out to the front of the glorious home, to see who had come. A burly man sat in a truck, who claimed that the furniture was here. Jason became estatic, the rest of the home's original furniture had made it! He ordered the men to set get to work, and Jason sat on the porch, smiling

    ~*~

    It was quite a bit later once the movers had finished. The sun hung low over the river and bayou behind the home, and the smell of magnolia and eucalyptus filled the heavy air. Jason walked through the house, admiring it's beauty. When he reached the master bedroom, which faced the bayou and was filled with the deep red of the sunset, Jason sat down. He couldn't believe he was there, sitting in the bedroom of his great-great grandfather.
    Jason didn't realize how exactly hot southern nights got. After resting in the bedroom for only a few minutes, he was drenched in sweat, and his musky man-smell wafted throughout the room. Slowly he peeled off his t-shirt and jeans, leaving him in his sweaty boxers.
    Jason looked across the room and noticed a huge gilded mirror across from the bed. Walking in front of it, he couldn't helo but smile, and feel the slightest bit coky. He looked good. His tousled brown hair was perfect against his milky skin, a touch of scruff along his chisled chin. His 6'1, broad frame was glistening in sweat. He meaty pecs were covered with a layer of perfect brown hair, which trailed down across his well-defined abs. His huge, muscled legs stood him sturdily up. Jason began to be turned on by himself, and his boxer started to show some serious bulge. Just as he began to reach his big hands down his tight boxers, he heard a motorboat quickly dock down on the river. Jason ran out to the porch, surprised by the strange visit.
    But he was even more surprised at who he saw in the boat.
     
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    Molto Bello!!!!!

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    ~~~*~~~

    Jason instantly got a throbbing boner.
    This man was a god! He stepped slowly out of the rickety boat, water splashing against his ripped body. He was about 5'9 with flowing golden hair, with a light dusting across his chest. His chest! It bulged out, ending with two perfectly perky nipples. They were connected to two massive, veiny arms that rubbed washboard abs. He wore low-riding jeans that accentuated his bubble butt, and a pair of rugged boots, but nothing else besides a sweaty red bandana. His body was tanned from the southern sun, and a sheer layer of sweat glistened. Jason threw on his tightest t-shirt and took his boxers off, replacing them with a pair of gym shorts he knew would give quite a show. He left the bedroom and ran outside, his bulge bouncing.
    "Hello?" Jason called, "I'm Jason LaCroix. I own this house now."
    The man strutted up the green lawn, his hips swinging back and forth and his muscles flexing as he walked. Finally he came within talking distance - the sweet smell of his sweat rushed towards Jason.
    "Hey," the man said in a sexy, southern drawl, "I'm Mitch, Mitch Long. But everyone calls me Dick, Lord knows why..."
    Jason liked the sound of that - Dick Long
    "... I don't know if the real estate guy told ya, but i'm the groundskeeper here at Sweetleaf Plantation. Us Longs have been the groundskeepers since this place was built. We've always kept a close friendship."
    Jason noticed Mitch eye him up and down, finally stopping at his bulge.
    "Well that's good to know. I'm glad i've got someone to tend to... my needs." Jason winked, and Mitch gave a coy, cute smile. Even though he was totally ripped, Mitch couldn't be any older than 20, maybe 21. This excited Jason, at 26.
    They stood in the setting sun for a moment, licking their lips.
    Then Jason spoke up, "So, would you like a drink?"
    "Yeah, that'd be great. Lead the way."
    Jason turned around and walked into the house. But just as he got inside the main hall, he heard Mitch quickly catch up to him. Suddenly, the young stud grabbed Jason's ass and began kissing him on the neck.
    Jason turned around and held Mitch's head, then deeply kissed him. Their bodies were touching, muscle to muscle. Hands ran across sweaty bodies and through touseled hair. They moaned and breathed deeply as they played with each other's tounges in their mouths. And just as Mitch reached down Jason's boxers, Jason swooped Mitch up in his massive arms and carried him upstairs, into the master bedroom.
     
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    For reference, this is how I imagine our main characters. As the story progresses, I'll continue adding photos of people I think resemble the characters I create. If you are good with you're own imaginings, then you don't have to look at these links:

    Jason - A bigger Chris Evans

    http://www.webwombat.com.au/entertainment/movies/images/fantastic4-chris-evans-1.jpg

    http://www.iphone-wallpapers.us/images/wallpapers/if61ev2go.jpg

    Mitch (Dick) - A hairier Mark Dalton

    http://www.all-photos.net/pictures/d/83259-1/Mark+Dalton+picture+a13.jpg

    http://gayseen.co.uk/photos/MuscleMed/images/613/original.aspx
     
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    great stuff! excellent descriptions and just enough intro - looking forward to reading the mucky bits! :D
     
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    ~~~*~~~

    Mitch couldn't help but beam, his smile huge and wide. This sexy Yankee stud muffin was carrying him upstairs. He felt completely safe in Jason's ripped, hairy arms.
    Thrown across the bed, Mitch quickly threw his boots across the room. Jason walked up to the windows and opened them, the sheer curtains dancing in the smoldering breeze. He swung the french doors open that led to the porch, the sounds of the southern night filtering in. Slowly, with his back towards Mitch, Jason began to undress.
    Mitch felt his throbbing member between his tight jeans. He was sweating profusely and couldn't keep his eyes off Jason. Jason peeled the tight t-shirt off, revealing a milky body, his back rippling with every move. Then his shorts came off, revealing a pair of extremely muscled legs, like big hairy tree trunks, and a gorgeous, hairy behind. Then Jason began to turn.
    Mitch gasped. He had expected Jason to be hung, but not like this! He was easily 10 inches long, and thick. His balls were huge and hung very low, and made a funny smacking sound against his muscled thighs as he walked closer. Jason crawled across the king-sized bed towards Mitch.
    It easily became a good 20 degrees hotter in the room.
    Jason licked Mitch's perfect form. His warm tounge ran across his gorgeous pecs, easily his best feature. Mitch twisted his nipples and let out sweet moans of ectasy as Jason breathed heavily. The tounge carresed Mitch's rippled abs and then danced around his treasure trail, making the southern stud go almost crazy. Jason slowly undid the tight jeans then ripped them off across the room, falling near the muddy pair of boots.
    A deliciously uncut cock popped out, smaking against Mitch's abs. It was a good 7-8 inches, but incredidbly thick. Jason devoured the lovely dick, making Mitch let out a squeal of delight. Jason's tounge licked along the thick, veiny shaft as he deepthroated the beast dick. His lips moved along the dick as his mouth went in and out, Mitch rolling his head back in lust. Jason then backed away, winking at Mitch. He slid over Mitch's sweaty body until he sat on his pecs, Jason's massive member in Mitch's face. Mitch gladly excepted it, and began sucking it off.
    Jason let out loud moans of delight. He was very vocal, and this only made Mitch hotter. He sucked the big dick off with great speed, spit flying everywhere. Jason began to deeply face-fuck the beauty, Mitch choking on the behemoth but loving every second.
    But then, he pushed Jason away. He looked quizzically at the blond stud, who had a smirk across his face. In his sexy, southern drawl, Mitch slowy stated, "Jason, I want...no, need you inside me.
    Now."
     
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    I would really appreciate some feedback! More coming tomorrow. Also, if you have characters you thought of i'd be happy to include them!
     
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    i think your doing just fine! Good idea including pics so we can get a visual idea of what there guys look like. Keep up the good work mate
     
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    ~~~*~~~

    Mitch was estatic, and his cock showed it. He hadn't been properly fucked in so long, and now he was gonna get rammed by a Yankee stud! His mind was racing.
    Jason knelt on the bed and lifted Mitch's hairy legs above his broad shoulders. Jason spat into his hand then rubbed it across Mitch's asshole, which made him squirm in delight. Taking a condom from the bedside drawer, Jason teased Mitch with the label. It clearly stated Magnum XXL.
    Mitch could've came right then and there.
    Jason slowly slipped the condom over his throbbing member, it barely reaching 3/4 of the way down the shaft. He moved closer towards Mitch and teased him with his big cock head. Then, Jason plunged his dick in Mitch's hole.
    Both of them flew into the passions of ectasy. Jason was so big, and Mitch so tight! Their faces contorted and they reeled back in delight, moaning and swearing in deep, thoarty voices.
    "Just put it all in me!" Shouted Mitch.
    Jason happpily obliged, sticking all 10 inches deep inside Mitch, who responded with a huge groan and a bucking body. He grabbed around him for anything to hold onto, and grasped onto the headboard.
    Jason began fucking Mitch, really ramming the shit out of him. The sounds of love-making could be clearly heard across the bayou. With each thrust Mitch let out a moanful squeal, his pecs bouncing with each movement. Jason's hips swung back and forth - he fucked like a monster. His big hands grasped onto Mitch's trembling hips and shoved his dick extremely deep inside of his ass. His screamed dirty nothings, like Fuck Yeah! or Holy Shit! and Holy Mother you're tight! Mitch's personal favorite was when Jason slapped his ass, and moaned You like that big dick up your ass, babe? You slut!
    The fucking was wild, and their bodies moved in complete unison. Jason ran his hands across Mitch's trembling body, feeling every muscle contract and flex. Mitch watched Jason fuck him, little drops of sweat falling across his body.
    Jason began to fuck Mitch even harder, if it was possible. His low, heavy balls made a delightful smacking sound against Mitch's ass. He jerked the blond stud off and could feel his dick throbbing, his balls pouching up. Fucking Mitch even harder, Mitch let out screams of ectasy as the bed rocked and creaked, and he came streams of cum high into the air. The white fluid fell upon his sweaty body as Jason screamed "FUCK YEAH!" and spanked Mitch's butt.
    Jason pulled out of Mitch and start rubbing his huge dick across Mitch's cum-lidden torso. He moaned and swore and looked deeply into Mitch's sparkling blue eyes. Mitch loved the feeling of Jason's heavy weight above him as he jerked on his abs.
    Jason suddenly arched his back, veins in his neck popping out. He screamed in his heavy Italian accent and shot huge ropes of cum on to Mitch, who loved every minutes. The streams fell down his pecs and abs and across his face.
    Jason fell on top of Mitch, and they rolled around in the bed, laughing. They cuddled and looked deeply into each other's eyes. Eventually they fell asleep on top of Jason's cum and sweat stained, ripped sheets.
    ~*~
    The next morning, Jason woke to the sounds of birds outside of his window. He smiled and laughed to himself, then looked towards Mitch...
    only, Mitch wasn't there.
     
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    tsk tsk mitch
     
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    Naughty boy. Horny story.
     
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    hes gone to buy Viagra and a couple of litres of lube so they can fuck all day :p

    but seriously this is an awsome story, love their descriptions :)
     
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    Thanks for the great comments!
    I'm gonna try to incorparate the audience in this ongoing story, so if you would pick a following character just based on his name, he'll be Jason's next encounter:

    - Sean McNeil
    - Greg Dufresnes
    - Daddy Bubba
    - Thomas Smith
     
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    Greg Dufresnes. Just sounds so sexy.
     
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    sean mcneil sounds awsome...could be a hot irishman
     
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    I second Sean :p
     
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    Great story so far! My vote's also for Sean.
     
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    ~~~*~~~

    Jason was confused.
    He had just had one of the most amazing sexual experiences in his whole life, yet Mitch had ran off. When he awoke a feeling of extreme anger took him over, but as he got ready for the day, a gut feeling began to creep in on his mind. For some reason he had a horrible feeling that Mitch wasn't good... possibly even in trouble.
    The small car sped down back roads, kicking dust up in huge clouds. Jason had to keep the windows up from the dust getting in the car even though it was at least 100 degrees that day. By the time he reached New Orleans, only about 10 minutes away, Jason's t-shirt, boxers, and cargo shorts were already totally soaked with sweat. He realy needed to cool down. He parked outside of a bar in the French Quarter and walked inside.
    Jason smiled. The bar was quiet, almost no one inside. He sat at the bar and ordered a beer, slowly sipping the cooling drink.
    Suddenly, the door flew open. Three guys walked in, fooling around like guys would. Even though it was only midday, all three were totally shit-faced. Two of them were shorter and stockier, but not very attractive - they seemed very cocky, with ugly, voiceferous attitudes. But the guy - no, man - they hung too, was a complete hunk.
    He was at least 6'7, his head almost hit the ceiling. He had short brown hair and sparkling green eyes. His shoulders were huge, like giant grapefruits. His delts popped out of his tight fitting button-up shirt. Beefy pecs looked almost liked boobs, they were so huge. Small, hard nipples stuck out of his tight second skin of a shirt. A hairy chest popped out of the collar. Abs were amazingly defined as the sweat made the shirt cling to his body. His khaki pants looked 2-sizes too small, and his legs were huge! And in between them, a bulge the size of three baseballs looked like it was about to explode.
    He was amazingly hot.
    Their heavy English accents echoed through the bar. They sat at a booth, the sexy one filling up one whole side, he was that giant-like. Ordering a round of beers, Jason noticed Mr. Rugby Stud stare directly at him, flashing him an amazing smile.
    Jason's dick instantly popped up. He gulped down his beer and ran to the bathroom.
    It was an old, dingy bathroom. Jason stood at the trough urinal, pissing like a racehorse. Suddenly, the door opened, a deep English accent filling the room.

    ~*~

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    I'll post a new chapter soon! Hope you like it so far.
     
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    I know I would like to read more of this Story!
     
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