Story Request

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  1. TyWest

    TyWest New Member

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    Okay, main character in high school, he's in a stall, he looks beneath the wall toward the urinals and sees a huge dick...... someone willing to write a story about this?
     
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    I'm sure someone could write a good one but I'm not a writer!
     
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    Anyone?
     
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    Pee Shy

    Jake was trying desperately to hold his bladder until the bell rang, but could no longer wait. His teacher, Ms. Alves, was droning on and on about everything and nothing, and, since he was at the back of the room, he decided to slip out, knowing that she wouldn't even notice. Just a few doors down would be sweet relief--the boys' bathroom. Needless to say he was mortified upon seeing the OUT OF ORDER sign on the door, and he decided to haul-tail it to bathroom at the other end of the hallway before an accident occured. He was barely inside the stall when he'd slammed the door behind him, whipping his dick out and relaxing his lower adbomen. In no time flat, that wonderful sound of urine hitting toilet water filled the tiny space of the stall.

    Jake was almost done when he heard someone else come in. Whoever it was tread heavily when he walked, and he listened as the guy cleared his throat a few times before unzipping his fly and peeing into a urinal. Jake would've flushed and left the stall--had he been alone--but he always hated those awkward, forced exchanges between guys while washing up, so he decided to wait until the guy left. When the sound of the guy's pee dwindled down to little more than a trickle, Jake figured he'd flush the urinal and leave any second. Then a minute passed. Nothing. Two minutes. No flush. No footsteps. No running water at the sink. Just complete silence.

    'What the fuck is this guy doing?' Jake thought angrily. He told himself he'd give it a minute more, and if the guy didn't make a move, he would. Two more minutes passed, and still nothing. Jake's curiosity was getting the better of him, and he decided to have a peek at just what was going on out there at the urinals. He tried to peer over the stall door to get a look, but it was a bit too high. 'Screw it,' he thought, squatting down to peek underneath. He first caught a glimpse of the shoes. Big sneakers--size 14s at least. And run-down. The dude must be an athlete, he figured. Someone on the football team. He bent down a bit more and saw thick calves covered in blue jeans. Team captain, maybe? As his eyes went further north, thick calves gave way to even thicker legs. 'He can't possibly still be taking a leak,' Jake thought, but stopped short when his eyes caught hold of a hand moving back and forth in a frenetic motion. 'What the...' It took a few seconds to register, but from what he could tell, the mystery guy was jacking off. 'No fucking way am I witnessing this,' he said to himself. But, indeed, he was. Suddenly the guy widened his stance, and Jake could see even more of what he was doing. The guy was completely hard and stroking his enormous cock into the urinal. He used his free hand to tug his jeans down a little more, and then began to gently caress his abdomen as he hastily stroked himself off.

    Jake was impressed to say the least. Weirded out for sure, but still impressed. Whoever this guy was, he was hung like a stallion. Jake looked down at his own crotch, and giggled inwardly at the thought of his own dick--not small by any means, but certainly average next to this dude's massive schlong. He racked his brain trying to figure out who it could be. The guy certainly had balls (pun intended) to be jacking it not only at school, but at a urinal as opposed to inside a stall. What if somebody else came in? Sure, this was usually a pretty secluded bathroom, but who wants to take that kind of a chance?

    The guy grunted suddenly, breaking Jake's erratic chain of thought. 'Ok,' he thought. 'I'm clearly not going anywhere now. Whoever this is obviously doesn't know I'm in here, so why spoil it for him? Let him blow his load, zip up, flush, wash his hands and be on his way.' The guy grunted again--his husky voice echoing off the cold, ceramic bathroom walls. Jake's eyes wandered off of him for a moment, quickly catching a piece of graffitti on the stall that read, "Mr. Chase Is A Jerkoff, And His Class Sucks". 'How fitting,' he thought, moving his gaze back to the guy, who was now in full masturbatory mode. His hand was moving even faster, and his once-erect stance had become an uneven, wobbly slump. 'He's gonna blow soon,' Jake thought. The guy's cock seemed even bigger than before, it that were even possible. He'd stepped back from the urinal a bit, and, from what Jake could tell, he was now using his free hand to balance himself. The guy was jacking his dick in an weird, under-handed motion--a way that Jake himself had never done, but was certainly going to try after seeing this graphic display.

    "Oh...ffffuuuccckkk..." the guy moaned, and Jake's eyes widened. He was anxious to get an even better look, or maybe to even catch a glimpse at who this actually was. He leaned his body against the door of the stall, not realizing that it wasn't completely latched. In what seemed like less than a split second, Jake fell out of the stall and onto the floor, and he knew that his cover was blown...

    (to be continued...)
     
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    Congratulations Thee1... nicely done.
     
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    thanx!
     
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    nice story,haha
     
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    Good story.
     
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    NICEE, continue continue!
     
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