Ok... I did enjoy the story, was it difficult to follow? Hell yeah! But I kept reading.
At some point I felt like I was missing a chart, a diagram, a map and a bottle of scotch to figure out what was going on.
A couple of days ago I did a second reading, and it felt lighter. The style remains peculiar, but that might be a good thing, right? So, I hope you keep sharing more stories like this one, actually, it's cool to read something different for a change.
Now, of y'all excuse me, I'm going for that scotch.