Stranger from the Mist

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  1. knowit

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    The sky was darkening. Jamie picked up the laptop computer and opened the front door, placing it inside. The young millionaire raked his fingers through his clean, blonde-streaked brown hair, and sighed deeply. It’d been a quiet week at his riverside getaway, not that it was much of a surprise. Accessible only by helicopter, the chateaux-like house was nicely tucked away between forest and river.
    However today felt different. A thick mist had been hanging around since the early morning, and as sunset arrived, the mist was clearing, only to be replaced by a steady drizzle. Jaime’s deep blue eyes scanned the forest, a strange sense making him feel paranoid. Was that movement? Jaime leaned forward, his eyes squinting into the gloom, as if trying to see by will alone into the forest. There it was again. The mist cleared completely as the advancing line of drizzle cleared the air. Out of the etheric atmosphere, a man appeared, limping slightly.
    His feet were bare, and the bottoms of his jeans were torn. He was wearing a simple white singlet, lightly smudged with dirt like the rest of his body. As he stepped into the clearing around the house and came closer to Jaime, time seemed to slow. Covered in a light slick of sweat and drizzle, the light from the dying sunset gleamed gold off the stranger’s bronzed, muscled arms. The drizzle had wet the singlet, making it transparent. The cold had stiffened his nipples, the dark circles clearly evident under the clinging fabric. The hard lines of his defined pecs led to the curves of his abs, twisting slightly with each limp. Still stunned by the appearance of this stranger, Jaime had not moved and was now only meters away from the strange man.
    “Sorry to impose,” said the stranger, his voice deep and raspy, “but could I sit down?” he asked with a cheeky grin. The stranger blinked heavily twice, and then fainted, falling forward. Jaime caught him. The stranger’s solid chest felt warm against his own, his musky smell filling Jaime’s nostrils, breaking his stupor. He held the exhausted stranger, dragging him inside.
     
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    Jaime sat on the couch, deep in thought. The shower ran in the background, the stranger cleaning himself while food cooked in the oven. Jaime just couldn’t get the stranger’s face out of his head. Dirty blonde hair, almost the colour of steel, hanging in bangs just over intense blue-green eyes. Chiselled face, with a long chin and soft red lips. Caleb, he said his name was. A timer beeped in the kitchen, and Jaime got up to turn the oven off. As he turned the gas off, a loud thump came from the bathroom.
    Jaime ran to the bathroom, and flung open the door. Caleb lay on the floor of the large shower, the water streaming out of the shower head. Jaime turned the shower off, then bent over and picked Caleb up, his hands sliding over the smooth, wet skin. Jaime, who worked out at least four times a week, picked him up with ease. Grabbing a towel off the rail, Jaime began to dry Caleb.
    Rubbing gently up the legs, Jaime took in Caleb’s beautiful body. He had strong arms, with defined biceps, smooth chest and stomach leading to a small waist. Jaime’s rubbing was having an effect. Caleb’s cock was growing, even though Caleb was unconscious. Jaime watched as the regular sized flaccid cock started to grow, past the heavy, full ballsac, thickening as it got longer. Jaime’s own cock twitched, and he felt his pulse begin to race. Breathing deeply, he picked up Caleb, taking him, still naked, into the bedroom.
    He lay Caleb down on the double bed, pulling back the covers. His cock had calmed down, but still hung heavy and warm on his leg. Jaime pulled the covers over him gently, his hand brushing over Caleb’s nipple, hard again after the cool air outside of the shower. Jaime hesitated, leaning gently against the bed. Caleb’s eyes fluttered and began to open. Still woozy, he looked up at Jaime, and for a moment, their eyes locked. With a sharp intake of breath, Caleb leaned up, hooking a hand around Jaime’s shoulder, and drew him down into a heavy kiss. In that moment, Jaime fell in love.
    They kissed, long, and hard, Caleb’s tongue flicking into Jaime’s mouth. Jaime hungrily kissed back, his arm reaching under Caleb’s arm and gripping hard to his shoulder. Fingers reached at Jaime’s shirt, ripping it over his head and exposing his own well developed chest, with a spray of hair leading from his navel down. Caleb then started loosening Jaime’s belt, undoing the buttons on the fly of the jeans as he rose for breath, then began kissing Jaime’s neck. His soft lips led downward, lingering over Jaime’s nipples as his dexterous tongue flicked in and out over the darker skin. Jaime grunted, lust thick in his voice, as his jeans slid down over his legs. His dick sprang free, as he wasn’t wearing any underwear beneath the jeans.
    Caleb stopped suddenly, taking in the sight. “And I thought I was gifted,” he muttered through heavy breaths, looking at the thick, heavy nine and a half inch fuck pole that swayed in front of him.
    “What?” asked a stunned Jaime, still shocked from the sudden sexual energy, unaware that he was so well endowed.
    “You have a big cock.” Caleb said, his teeth biting his lower lip gently as he looked up at Jaime, “and I need to taste it.” His own cock was growing again, still heavy from the bathroom. His tongue traced the crevasse in between Jaime’s abs, sneaking into his navel as he tongued the opening in the stomach.
    Jaime’s cock twitched, and he grunted again, looking down at the gorgeous face below him. Now free of all his clothing, he rolled onto the bed, Caleb rolling on top of him. Caleb ground his groin into Jaime’s, sliding back up to take his mouth in another mind-blowing kiss. Their taught, soft skin slid smoothly against each other as both of their cocks grew to full length.
    Caleb’s cock was huge as well, a full nine inches, and slightly thicker than Jaime’s. His heavy, hanging nutsack glided against Jaime’s leg, as smooth and hairless as his chest. Raising Jaime’s legs and placing them under his arms, Caleb moved back down and concentrated on Jaime’s cock. Taking the head in his mouth with only a little difficulty, he rolled his tongue around the underside of the helmet and moved his lips back and forth a half inch or so.
    “Ohh, fuck, that feels good.” Jaime moaned, his breath heavy and his stomach growing goosebumps. “Suck all of it.”
    Caleb didn’t obey. He continued to tease the head, sending waves of pleasure through his soft, velvety lips and tongue.
    Jaime couldn’t stand it. “Fuck, suck all of it, just suck it,” he pleaded, “Oh fuck,” he groaned, the pleasure almost becoming too much to bear.
    Without warning, Caleb swallowed about eight inches of his staff, expertly sending the throbbing cock down his throat. He began to bob back and forth, rocking his tongue against the base of Jaime’s meat.
    Caleb and Jaime moaned together, Caleb getting almost as much enjoyment sucking the thick cock as Jaime was. He continued to rock his head backward and forward, tilting every now and again to allow his tongue to roam either side of Jaime’s meat. Bit by bit, he moved lower and lower on the cock, leaving less and less outside as his throat grew used to the member. Jaime was grinding gently in time, the pleasure taken control as his body moved to the rhythm of the skilled cocksucker.
    Half an inch, quarter an inch, until Caleb was only millimeters away from swallowing Jaime’s cock whole. He increased in pace, getting faster on the cock without entirely swallowing it. Jaime’s moans got louder, barely stopping only for the breaths he needed. Caleb then took Jaime’s cock to the heel, his lips tasting the clean brush of hair at the base. The feel of Caleb’s lips on his groin was too much for Jaime, and he let out a yell as he shot deep into Caleb’s throat. Shot after shot of warm, salty spunk emptied into Caleb’s throat, Jaime’s eyes rolled back as he rode out the orgasm, thrusting against Caleb’s mouth. As he began to soften in the warm, soft mouth, Caleb’s strong lips milked the last of the sperm from Jaime’s dick, his tongue again flicking around the head of the cock, making Jaime’s body spasm in the incredibly sensitive state after orgasm. Jaime’s cock fell heavily out of Caleb’s lips, making a slightly wet sound as the spit-soaked organ landed against his leg. Jaime’s cock still hung seven and a half inches, fat and heavy in its flaccid state.
    “Fuck you’re sexy,” growled Caleb, still kneeing in between Jaime’s legs. His enjoyment at giving head was evident, his cock almost pointing straight up past his navel, the vein on the underside throbbing in time with his heart.
    “You’re just as hot,” replied Jaime, his voice still thick with lust and emotion. “Fuck me, fuck me hard you stud.” He said, his nutsack relaxing back in the now hot bedroom. “Fuck me with your big, fat, fuckpole.”
    Caleb didn’t need to be told twice. Changing position slightly, he placed Jaime’s legs on top of his shoulders, and licked just under Jaime’s balls. His tongue probed downwards, and found its target. Sliding in, his tongue flicked backwards and forwards, sliding around the edges of the slit. Caleb nuzzled Jaime’s hole as his tongue deftly slid in and out. Caleb felt something banging gently the side of his face, as Jaime’s dick started to grow again. Jaime began to groan again as the pleasure of Caleb’s soft tongue got him hard. Caleb tongued harder and harder, deeper and deeper, using lots of spit to loosen up Jaime’s slit. Caleb couldn’t resist, and licked along the ridge below Jaime’s balls, flicking the nut with his tongue and rolling it around on his lips. Jaime’s cock twitched in reply, almost back to its full nine and a half inches and Jaime let out a yelp of surprise and pleasure, precum suddenly sliding from the end of his cock. Caleb went back to business, tongue-fucking Jaime’s hole. Caleb kneeled up and pulled Jaime closer, leaning in for a tongue-filled kiss that was full of the taste of their sex. As Caleb pulled away, Jaime gently biting Caleb’s lip, he placed his cock at the entrance to Jaime’s slit. Pushing gently, Jaime’s tight hole resisted the intruder, despite the loosening by Caleb’s tongue. Jaime savoured the feel of Caleb’s cock head pushing past the tightness and sliding in. All of Jaime’s nerves were on fire, as inch by inch ever so slowly pushed its way into his hole. Eight inches filled Jaime, an inch still protruding outside. Caleb pulled out, his thick cock pulling at the edges of Jaime’s hole, the spit allowing it even to glide at all.
    “Fuck me hard I said,” demanded Jaime, his cock now rock hard, his arse dying to be fucked. “Fuck me as hard as you can.”
     
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    Will hopefully post more later - depending on the comments
     
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    Very hot writing. Can't wait to read where this is going!
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    GREAT!!! Post more, please.

    Thanx. ;)
     
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