The 18 Year old Legal Son of A Porn Star

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  1. mitc3117

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    Ever since I can remember, sex was a major part of my life.* I'm sure that most of you reading this will think, "No shit, join the club" and some of you may even curse me aloud for stating the obvious.* However, I think it was different for me than most of the people that will read this story.*

    You see, my father was a major player in the adult entertainment industry.* That is to say, my father (Jack) was one of the biggest porn stars ever, in more ways than one.* I never knew who my mother was, but based on comments that have been made in my presence throughout my life, I always suspected that it was a prominent female adult actress.* When I was 10, Jack married Tiffany, a former starlet who became one of the most successful distributors in the business.* So, I did have a somewhat of "motherly" influence, but their union certainly didn't lead me away from the world of porn.* If anything, it only increased my exposure.

    When I first entered school, Jack was optimistic that I could have a "normal" childhood and enrolled me in public school.* I managed to make it through fifth grade unscathed, but once I entered middle school, I started to notice that, while I had plenty of friends at school, I wasn't getting invited to birthday parties or to hang out at their houses.* And, it certainly didn't help that, when Tiffany came to pick me up at the end of the day or to watch me play sports, she always happened to show off her monster cleavage and plenty of leg in her short tight skirts.* After a while, the group of friends I did have began to decrease and the teasing started.* I spent every day after school in my room, crying, wondering why I had to deal with taunts about my stepmother's huge boobs or my dad's "horse cock."* It was miserable, and while Jack encouraged me to be tough and strong and all that bullshit, he finally realized that something would have to change.

    Thankfully, the adult industry is full of performers who have children, so this certainly wasn't a unique problem.* I was moved to a school that was chock full of these types of kids.* Thankfully, the teasing stopped, but as you can imagine, it certainly wasn't the ideal learning environment.* Not only did I get a pretty shitty education, I started partying at a young age.* I had my first beer at age 15 and smoked my first joint when I was 16.* It was also right around this time that I started becoming interested in the type of films my father was making.* He wasn't performing on screen anymore, but he was directing films and still very much involved in the industry, as evidenced by the collecting of AVN awards in his office that continued to grow year after year.* As I got older, there were often people from the adult business hanging around our house, and I had experiences with many big names, although they weren't the types of experiences you may think.* I shotgunned a beer with Jenna Jameson, Tera Patrick helped me with my chemistry homework, Ron Jeremy and I carried a passed-out Tiffany Mynx to bed (we shared a look between us, but nothing happened).* It all just became too normal, and ironically, I felt much more comfortable around actual female porn stars than I did around girls my age.*

    In addition to spending my time at home surrounded by incredibly hot women who fuck for a living, my social life had a porn foundation as well.* My friends from school got a huge kick out of watching scenes featuring each others' parents, and we would spend a lot of time getting stoned and critiquing their performances.* Even though Jack hadn't made a scene in years, he was still a legend and it was only a matter of time before someone brought one of his movies to a gathering.* Up until this point, I had heard comments about how hung he was and I had seen his cock plenty of times around the house since both he and Tiffany were pretty free with their bodies.* But when I saw it fully aroused on screen, I almost fell off my chair.*

    Just after my 18th birthday I was hanging out with a bunch of kids, guys and girls, most of whom older than me.* I was pretty uncomfortable about watching my father fuck on film, but at the same time, I was curious to see what all the fuss was about.* It was a scene with Tory Lane, who I had never met, but had quickly become one of my favorites to watch.* I had quickly become a fan of large natural breasts, so Tory wasn't my type in that respect, but I really loved her attitude and aggressiveness and the way she liked to dominate her partner.* I was a little concerned at first about seeing Jack emasculated, but I kept my eyes glued to the screen nonetheless.*

    As with most of Tory's scenes, the first 7-8 minutes was her solo.* Normally, I would have loved seeing her pleasure herself, but Amy grabbed the remote, and said "If I wanted to watch some slut play with her pussy, I'd watch myself in the mirror!* Let's see Greg's daddy!"* Of course, this was met with roars of approval, and the scene was quickly advanced to when my old man first appeared as some sort of UPS delivery guy.* I figured the scene was probably 6 years old, back when Jack had longer hair and a goatee.* He and Tory exchanged some cheesy dialogue, and I laughed out loud at what a poor actor he was.* Tory teased him, running her hands up and down his crotch, marveling at how big his bulge was and saying how she desparately needed to see it.*

    At this point, the room was silent.* You could actually see the lump in his pants growing and growing, appearing down his thigh.* There was no way it could be THAT big, right?* Everyone was on the edge of their seats - the tension was definitely high, almost like we were watching the 9th inning of a World Series game.* Finally, Tory unzipped his pants and reached into his fly.* Her eyes got really wide and her draw dropped as she fished around for it, struggling to pull it through the opening* in his jeans.* Jack laughed, entertained by her struggles, and said "Here honey, let me help you."*

    With that, he unbuttoned his pants and quickly dropped his drawers.* Everyone in the room, male and female, gasped aloud as his monster dong sprang into view, It was so big that it seriously looked fake.* I was waiting for Tory to start laughing and unscrew it from his body since there was no possible way that a real dick could be that big.* And you could tell that Tory, who had obviously been with hundreds of men, was legimately impressed and in awe.* She just knelt in front of it, stunned, while he laughed, having seen a similar reaction many, many times before.

    Normally, all of us 18 and over year olds all be making smartass comments, poking fun at the dialogue or talking about the pimples on the guy's ass or the razor burn on the girl's inner thighs.* But for the first time, nobody was saying a word.* I knew that I had never seen a penis that large, and it was pretty obvious that nobody else had either.* We all just watched, quietly, while Tory's long tongue ran up and down my father's impossibly long shaft.* Finally, she decided to take on the challenge, opened her mouth, and slowly took it inside, inch by inch slowly disappearing.* When she finally realized she had taken as much as she could, which was only about half, Tory slowly moved her head back, keeping her lips tightly wrapped around his pole, causing Jack to moan deeply.* She pulled his cock out of her mouth and looked up at him, smiling wickedly, before plunging back down on top of it.* She bobbed up and down, drooling and slobbering all over his fleshy throbbing meat, making hot slurping noises with each thrust.

    Still, not a word was spoken amongst my fellow viewers, not even when Jack uttered the terrible line, "Ma'am, you're going to be charged extra for this large delivery."* After a long blowjob that included some hot ball play and even some rimming, Tory said something about depositing the package and pushed him down on the couch.* Finally, Amy spoke up again, breaking the silence, saying somewhat quietly, "There's no way..."* Tory straddled him and rubbed his swollen head along the length of her sopping wet snatch.* You could actually hear how wet she was, which is always a huge turnon.* She took a deep breath as she attempted to relax herself, and slowwwwwwly guided it inside her vagina, taking great care to ensure she didn't hurt herself.* Jack's mushroom-like cockhead disappeared, making a slight suction noise as it vanished from view.* The camera focused on Tory's face for a few seconds, just in time to catch her eyes rolling back in her head as she enjoyed by stretched to the limit.

    Just as when she sucked Jack's member, she eventually became comfortable and took him deeper and deeper, screaming loudly as he penetrated her.* It was at this point that I somewhat snapped out of my trance and began to wonder about my own endowment.* I had seen a few of my friends naked and I was pretty sure that I was above average, but I didn't really know what "average" was and had never actually measured it.* However, as I mentioned before, I really had no game when it came to girls.* I mostly hung out with older kids, and the guys were constantly talking about the chicks they were hooking up with and getting blow jobs from and fucking behind the school.* No girls ever showed any interest in me, and even after i graduated because I am older than 18, I was too shy and awkward to really make any sort of move.* I did notice that a few of the girls were glancing over at me while watching Jack wield his mighty sword and wondered if my luck was about to change...
     
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    Honestly, the original writer never specified the time lapse until the movie watching, nothing specifically said any age younger or older than 18, and i think some serious over-reacting happened. Please, continue.
     
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    I agree ! The moderators overreacted with this one...
    There was no sexual activity linked with children in any way in the original story. It showed them at an undetermined age watching a film... together, with no adult present.
    It is a realistic situation that's a part of the narrator's youth, and not one to entail or imply paedophilia or sex between minors.
    I must also point out that the original story contains references to minors taking drugs and in contact with something of an "amoral" milieu, but THAT doesn't seem to be a problem...
     
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    I don't know how long this'll last. Anything under 13 no matter what has the power to have take down notices posted. BE Archive got in major shit 5-6 years ago, and had to redact every comment that mentioned 'child, kid', etc... I'm totally down with reading about the 18 year old, though ;D
     
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    What's with all the fucking asterisks? It's sorta cunty in a bad way: Jus'sayin'.
     
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    im curious to read more ;)
     
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    I'm going to rework the story and submit to the mods before I continue. Thanks for all the compliments!

    And I apologized about the asterisks in my original post. They appeared after I pasted the story. I will make sure they don't appear in the future.

    Cheers,
    Riddle
     
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    Good luck and i look forward to it!
     
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    I think the story was pretty good. and I didn't see anything wrong with it either.
     
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    Bbucko: What's with all the fucking asterisks? It's sorta cunty in a bad way: Jus'sayin'.

    Bbucko, Some word processing programs do not mark word as "bold." Instead the replace bold by a beginning and ending asterisk. I know my writing does that when I get replies. It is frustrating.:frown1:
     
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    Why would the narrator name his own father "Jack?" It feels kind of weird. Just saying.

    It seems like you would write from "I" POV and then use "my father." Or write from the 3rd person, name the narrator, and use "Jack" as the father's first name.
     
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    "Why would the narrator name his own father "Jack?" It feels kind of weird. Just saying. "

    It happens in more families than you'd think, and it depends on the father-son relationship...

    Bart calls his dad Homer, just so you know.
     
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    I thought "Jack" was a solid alternative to "my father" or, even moreso, "dad." It's really not that important to me - does anyone else have a preference?

    Cheers,
    Riddle
     
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    In the North of America, specifically North Dakota, MANY kids would call their parents by their first names when I was in high school. No preference here.
     
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    bump...
    This one was censored (completely unjustly), the author said he apologized, and that he would revise his story...
    Still no news.

    Thank you moderators, thank you very much for saving our souls from imaginary paedophilia by strangling inspiration in its egg.
     
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    Just posted a revised version. Hopefully the changes I made won't affect this chapter too drastically!

    Cheers,
    Riddle
     
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