The adventures of Tom

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    Tom jumped out of bed.

    He had gone to bed exhausted, everyone from his entire family had been over for his 18th birthday.

    His head hitting the pillow he had gone to sleep dreaming, not really sure what he dreamt, just that he had the best sleep he had ever had in his life, and he woke up, feeling strangely glowing for some reason.

    Then it hit him, it was the same feeling he had had in his dream, and things started to come back to him, visions about him making various parts of his body bigger, or smaller, as if he had complete control of how his body was supposed to look like.

    Walking over to the mirror he inspected himself; Half long blond hair, sticking out there and there , your typical bedhair , 6''4, and lean, not much muscle, but even less fat. Like any other lanky teenager.

    His facial features were attractive, not your movie star face, but more the cute neighbourhood kid face that everyone tends to think is pleasant to look upon. With the pimple here and there.

    "So", he said out loud.." Lets try this...even tho I guess I am still asleep.."

    With that he contrentrated on his pimples...wishing them gone..and slowly, but surely, he face brightned, not only from the cleaner skin, but by the sheer look of surprise on his face..

    "This can't be...can it?" He pinched himself in the arm, really hard, nope..still awake.. he smiled to himself and looked down to see his cock hanging there..and his smile widened..

    His cock was never small, but it was certainly never big..it just hung there, about 3-4 inches soft. Tom had always wanted to have a really big dick,ever since he started to watch porn atleast.

    Even though some of the cocks he had seen fucking hot little sluts in porn were , lets say, pretty damn big, and the ladies looked like they struggled...he found out that was what he liked...watching them take it, even though they looked like they never could.

    He looked at it, wishing it was thicker..and longer...but still soft, he wanted to have a real big bulge in his jeans as he was going to school that day. Tom was always curious as to what kinda look he would get, if the girls were really into size, as every guy just assumed.

    Slowly he felt his cock get warmer..then before his eyes...thicker..and longer...picking up the ruler he had on his desk he placed it next to his cock, and held it out...

    "Wow.. 9 inches, and still soft...better not overdo it....the jeans ain't THAT baggy" he thought, and it was also considerably thicker, he was just about to get his hand around it.

    The door handle to his room turned..and his head snapped around in surprise, he hadn't heard anything, being so focused on himself..

    "Hey Tom, whats taking so long? Your mom sent me to get....."

    The door halfway open he says Ambers face looking in, and Tom was just standing there, his mouth half open in surprise looking at her..

    Then she looked over , finding him in the room, smiling first in greeting as she was talking...then her eyes went further down as she saw he was naked, only to widen as she stopped talking..and just stared at Tom who was just standing there...one hand holding his huge soft cock.

    They stood like that until Tom collected his thoughts and went over to close the door in her face, looking rather silly with his cock bouncing between his legs.

    " Damnit Amber, do you never knock!?"

    He heard her stammering some sort of apology as he threw on some jeans and a plain white tshirt.

    Walking out the door he walked straight past her, telling her to get to school on her own, catch the bus or something.

    He guessed that was kinda mean, but Tom he always been a shy guy, and was not used to girls seeing him naked. Then he realized...he had a monster cock now..and could shape his body as he liked.

    Giving himself a bit more muscle, he felt his body warming up, then he ran his hands over is abs..feeling them chissled and firm, and his arms bulged slighty, nothing obscene, just a nice firmness to them, similar to just having worked out.

    Smiling, he drove to school.

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    First time trying to write a story, would appreciate any comments and suggestions you might have.
     
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    i really like it, keep going please.
     
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    thanks for the kind replies, I'll write some more when I have the chance ^^
     
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    that sounds good. can you contine it?
     
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    Chapter 2

    First class that day was gym.

    Tom went into the locker rooms and quickly got changed, and found that he practically had to haul is cock out of his boxers, and when he put on his shorts, he found that his soft cock, now 9 inches and almost to big to get his hand around, jiggled around in them any time he moved. He would just have to make due.

    He walked out with the others, catching the odd look here and there as he strolled out from the guys, but he didn't pay them any mind.

    Tom saw Amber coming out from the girls locker room, and saw her eyes go from his, straight down to his crotch. He didn't mind...it gave him time to check out her figure.

    She was a slim as they come, with long legs, and a butt that stood out on top of them, each time she would bend over, it looked like a heart staring back at you, and she always wore formfitting pants. At the moment she was wearing a very tight number, practically digging into her firm ass cheeks.

    That wasn't her best feature, although it came close, but it was her tits that was the amazing thing about Amber. It almost looked comical on her, thats how big they were. No matter what she wore, it looked like they were about to bust through the fabric.

    Right now she wore a tight fitting tank top, and what must have been a sports bra underneath. The big teenage tits held in place firmly, and Tom kept thinking about all the wonderful things he would do to those tits if he got the chance..

    In the middle of Toms daydream, the teacher called out that it was handball on the agenda today. The girls against the guys.

    Amber came over towards Tom as they made their way over to the court..

    "You are so going down Tom!" , she said, hoping to skip the awkard conversation about what happened this morning.

    " Nah Amber, you got it all wrong..you're the one going down! " , he was all for skipping that conversation, and just getting to be close friends again.

    "Mm...maybe later I will, " she replied..giving his bulge a quick glance before running off, giving him a view of her perfect ass, knowing he would stare after her.

    Tom just stood there for a moment, thinking about her last comment.." Maybe having this monster cock between my legs will be even more fun then I thought.."
     
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    Great so far, keep it going!
     
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    Very nice start! Hot intro.
     
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    Running over to the court Tom placed himself in defence, as the girls were the ones starting with the ball, and he noticed Amber placing herself in between the guys on offence ( as the senter striker on a soccer team would, for those that don't know handball that well).

    All the guys tried to keep their eyes on the ball, but it was hard with Amber in the midst of them, jumping around, so that even with a tight sports bra, her huge breasts bounced around on her slim body.

    Tom had also noticed that most of the girls were looking his way, and the way his cock jumped around as he jumped, jiggling around in his shorts ( he had found that it was easier to just drop the boxers he intented to wear underneath, cause it got way too tight).

    And no one was more interested in what was going on down there then Amber...

    She made her way over to where he was standing, and placed herself in front of him, with her ass towards his front, standing ready to receive the ball as it were.

    Amber smiled inwardly, knowing this was her chance to verify what was in Toms shorts.. she inched backwards, pretending to make space around her for an offensive attack by the girls team, and on purpose bumped into Toms crotch, and what she felt there made her jump forward a step, it was just that shocking.

    It was almost like fear, and excitement at the same time, and she felt her pussy get wet, as if on instinct.

    Tom had seen her coming, and stood still as a rock, and waited for her ass to connect to his crotch, and he knew that she had felt most of his massive soft member against her firm backside.

    Amber tried the same move several more times, but every time Tom moved away...wanting to leave her wanting more, leaving her desperate for another feel.

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    The gym class ended without more incident, and everyone started to head to the lockerroom. Tom waited until everyone had cleared out, and stood on the court still and threw some balls. There was no rush , and he liked to take a long nice shower, and there was always a crowd to get in there first. There never were enough showers compared to the number of guys, so he usually just waited until the others were done. There was a pretty long break until next class anyway. And Tom liked to stay after gym anyway, and do a few laps to wind down.

    After a while the guys started coming out of the locker room, so Tom stopped his laps, and jogged inside and started changing.


    -------- Meanwhile in the girls locker room.

    Amber knew about Toms rutine, afterall , he had been that way ever since she had known him. So she took her time, freshening up and getting herself into some ultra tight jeans, and a tank top, dropping the bra, it would be no good for what she had in mind anyway, and she knew the "girls" were her best assets.

    She lagged behind and took her time, waiting for Tom to come jogging back. After a while she heard the guys leaving, and a little bit after Tom entered, by this time the girls were done as well.

    Amber snuck out of the girls locker room barefoot, and over to the guys locker room, opening the door slightly, she peeked inside and saw Tom standing there.

    "Damnit!", she thought. He had his back towards her and was stripping off his clothes, and was down to only his shorts. She saw him look around, and was almost caught, but managed to duck away in time.

    When she turned back to peek inside, she saw him with his back still to her, but when he bent down, she could see his gigantic cock hanging there between his legs. She almost gasped out loud, but managed to hold it back.

    She could see it jiggling there, bigger then any guy she had ever fucked, and still soft, it was freaking unreal! Her pussy was almost dripping at the thought of seing that thing hard.

    As she stood there and watched Tom walked into the shower naked, his cock slapping around between his legs with each step.

    Amber, moving quietly, and quickly, snuck into the teachers shower, with was separate, but that had a small window to look through, in case any of the guys decided to make any trouble.


    ---------- From Toms point of view

    Having finished stripping off his shorts, he walked into the shower, loving the feel of his cock, so heavy, and each slap against his thighs almost turned him on, and thats when it hit him..he hadn't decided how big he wanted his erect cock to be, now that he had absolute control of his body. He simply hadn't gotten the time to imagine yet.

    Tom stood there, letting the water run down his back, closing his eyes, and soaking him. He started thinking about Amber, her tits, looking so outlandishly big on her firm body, and the way her ass rubbed against his cock earlier today, and felt himself get hard... The feel of hot water running over his cock egged him on..

    He must have stood there for several minutes, thinking about how Amber would look with a gigantic cock stuffed into her pretty little mouth.

    When he opened his eyes and looked down he was shocked..

    His cock stood straight out, with no droop or upwards angle at all, the cockhead was thicker then the rest, and the base was even thicker, almost formed like a treetrunk. If he had to guess, it would be around a staggering 14 inches or so, and he couldn't get his fingers around it anymore.

    He rubbed some soap on it..and stroked it clean, watching his hands having to travel a huge length, and how much better it felt, now that his cock was absolutely massive.

    Tom turned his head to the entrance of the locker room shower, and saw someone standing there..it was Amber.


    ....and she had her hand down her open jeans, rubbing furiously, with her eyes glued to his monster cock.
     
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    ...WOW! Please continue :)
     
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    Can't I?

    mohaha!

    Naw, I'll make up more soon enough, just a bit busy these days!
     
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    Amber was so hypnotized by his monster cock that she wasn't even aware that Tom was looking at her.

    He rubbed his massive member slowly, taking his time...enjoying the feel of his hard cock, watching her eyes, as they remained glued to his gravity defying pole.

    "Enjoying the show are we Amber?" he said finally..

    Amber jumped, she was about to cum and was panting heavily, but Toms voice yanked her out of the trance she was in.

    "I...I..I wasn't..uhm..." she stammered..

    Tom was feeling empowered, and his confidence rose straight up, seeing the effect his cock had on girls, and especially one as hot as Amber, and he never stopped stroking it as he talked.

    "Its ok...I saw the look on your face this morning...first it was shock...then a look of feral hunger came over your face... I would have let you have a closer look, but it wasn't the time.." Tom said..and walked slowly towards her, stroking his cock as he went.

    "And I know you have been thinking about it since, " he stopped right before her, and lifted his cock up..her eyes following it, "and i know you have been wanting to...suck....this...monster..cock.."

    As he was saying those last words he slapped his cock down onto her tits, as they both stood there...and he could see her shiver each time his giant cock connected with her soft..firm teen tits..

    "P..Please...may I touch it? Can I please? I just HAVE to have that MONSTER COCK!. " Amber almost pleaded, and Tom smiled, completely in control of this teen size queen.

    " If you must...but get down on your knees first...and take of those huge tits of yours.."

    She dropped down to the ground before he finished his sentence, and ripped her top off, her huge teen tits jiggling slight, and sitting high on her chest.

    Amber wrapped both hands on Toms monster cock and just sat staring at it..drinking in the sight of her small hands on something to massive, her already wet cunt seemingly overrunning with juices, and she could swear it was dripping onto the floor.

    Tom looked down at the little bombshell at his feet, watching her eyes as she started reverently at his cock, he could swear this was almost like a religious experience for her.

    He took his cock out of her hands..and pressed it back against his body, leaving his oversized balls hanging freely. Amber took the hint and leaned in...poking her tongue out she ran them over his balls..taking in his scent. She coated his cock with her salivia, rubbing her face up under his huge balls, which covered her entire face.

    Tom let go of his cock and watched it smack down onto her face, provoking a groan from Amber, as she shivered invulentarally again. She stuck her tongue out as far as it went, and slowly ran it up the length of his shaft from beneath.

    When she finally got to the head of his cock, she looked up, and opened her mouth as far as it would go...and slowly sucked his cockhead into her waiting mouthm keeping her eyes on his..glancing down now and then to see the massive length still not in her mouth and throat.

    Tom couldn't believe what he was seeing...the hottest slut in school slowly going deeper on his cock, he kept thinking she must have had experience with big dicks beforfe, since she went down deeper then he would have thought, but he could tell she was struggling now, his cock slowed its decent, and she looked amazing...her tits sticking out, her mouth full of cock, and those naughty eyes looking up at him.

    He reached down, and she arched her back, giving him access to her huge tits...his hands kneading them , mmm...even firmer then he would have imagined..and still so soft.

    Amber took her Toms hands in her own, and placed them on her head, one on each side...she let his cock go with a pop from her mouth and said..

    " Tom.. I want you to fuck my dirty little face with the big fat monster cock of yours...can do you that for me? Amber cood and opened her mouth all the way.


    Tom needed no more encouragement and held her head firmly and slammed his cock into her mouth, and she took half of it before choking hard, Amber reached round and grabbed his ass, and pressed him down, forcing his cock even deeper.

    Tom took his time, pulling his cock almost all the way out and slamming it back in, fucking her little face, spit and drool leaking off her chin and dripped down onto her big tits.

    At around 10 inches it became obvious that they had reached Ambers limit as she was just choking and choking , without really going any deeper, Tom didn't care at that point, and just kept slamming her face with it, feeling the tension build in his huge balls.

    Amber was in heaven, having her face pounded by what must have been the biggest dick ever, even his balls kept slapping her face as he got to the 10 inch mark. She felt his cock expand even more, a sure sign that he was close to coming.

    She took his cock out of her mouth and rubbed it furiously while licking over his fat cockhead. Amber looked up and saw that Tom threw his head back, and just then he unleashed a torrent of cum onto Ambers face. First a huge, fat stream that didn't seem to stop for minutes, then several thick ropes.

    Amber tried to control it, swallowing what she could, but it was useless, she was left covered in cum, her face soaked, her tits soaked, and her clothes drenched. She didn't know that Tom had manipulated that aspect of his body as well.

    As the shooting ropes of cum stopped, it was still leaking and she just looked up at him..

    "Holy shit...that was crazy..!"

    Before Tom could reply, someone from the doorway said.

    " It sure as hell was!"
     
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    oh god let me be the first to say this it amazing! you must keep going
     
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    First time writing a story, so the feedback is very appreciated ^^
     
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    this is pretty amazing, im ready to explode here ;) there more coming?
     
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