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THIS!!! IS SO GOOD IT SHOULD BE MADE INTO A MOVIE!!! I'm abso-fuckin-lutely serious. The storyline was soooooo well developed that it's more than just an erotica!Chapter 8
Matt’s face was tired and sweat-covered, but soon his own image in the mirror was replaced with the face of Stan, back in his human form.
“End this,” Stan said softly, seeming equally exhausted. “Please. Just go. You’ve proven your point.”
“No…” Matt said, rubbing his neck. “We both know the world’s not ending tonight. If you could end it all and bring her to you, you’d have done it by now. All that nonsense out there tonight was just a show. Just something to scare me away. So, tomorrow when she wakes up, she’ll either think it was just a bad storm or maybe she dreamed it all. Either way, her faith in you is gonna go down a notch. But you know what WILL be there? Me. And this thing.” Matt looked down at his deflated but still enormous cock.
“And I’ll use it on her every day,” he continued. “And each day I’ll pull her away from you. Little by little. Her love for you will fade and her devotion to my huge fucking cock will take its place. Hell, she was practically worshipping it tonight. She’ll have an alter to it within the week.”
Stan was quiet for a moment. His eyes flashed with fire and then faded, exhaustion and sadness returning to his face.
“Fine,” Stan said, quietly. “I’ll put it back.”
“What was that?” Matt asked.
“I will put it back. Your normal boring human cock.”
“I’m not asking you to! Let’s be very clear here.”
“I know, I know,” Stan growled. “You’re not asking, I’m offering. You get to keep your precious fucking soul. I’ll just shrinky-dink your dick up.”
“And what are we going to tell Mayana and Jessica? How do we explain the past 24 hours? No no…we need a more nuanced reset of some sort.”
“What did you have in mind?” Stan asked, annoyed.
“Listen carefully,” Matt said. “And no tricks…”
***
Matt blinked. The face in the mirror was his own again. And the mirror had changed.
He was no longer looking into Jessica’s bathroom mirror, but the mirror at the coffee shop.
Matt looked down. He was fully clothed, wearing the clothes he had been wearing when he met Mayana.
A smile crept across his face. He remembered everything.
He pulled his phone out. It was the right day and time. He checked the texts. All the texts from Kim and Jenny and Gabby were still there.
Just one more thing to check. He pulled down his pants and admired his completely normal dick in the mirror.
He smiled widely as he fastened his pants and pushed the door open.
THE END
Great answer!! Thanks!!!Wow, thanks everybody. Really appreciate the kind words. This story was a lot of fun to write.
As for specific sizes, I know that’s a question people have for all my stories and I guess the answer is: I dunno. For some people, having actual measurements and detailed descriptions are helpful to make things more real, and I appreciate that. But for me, it’s sort of the opposite. That level of realism brings me out of the story. Just a personal preference, and since I’m the one who has to write it, you’re stuck with me (or you can read the bunches of other great stories on this site).
Anyway, thanks for reading and commenting!
Keep up your writing! They are great reads and always fun and you keep the read engaged wanting more.Wow, thanks everybody. Really appreciate the kind words. This story was a lot of fun to write.
As for specific sizes, I know that’s a question people have for all my stories and I guess the answer is: I dunno. For some people, having actual measurements and detailed descriptions are helpful to make things more real, and I appreciate that. But for me, it’s sort of the opposite. That level of realism brings me out of the story. Just a personal preference, and since I’m the one who has to write it, you’re stuck with me (or you can read the bunches of other great stories on this site).
Anyway, thanks for reading and commenting!
I think it would’ve been hot to let Matt get revenge on Ian. Let Ian know what it fells like to have a huge cock in his ass. Then Ian begins to feel that he likes it…Eels like to have a huge cock in his ass. Wow, thanks everybody. Really appreciate the kind words. This story was a lot of fun to write.
As for specific sizes, I know that’s a question people have for all my stories and I guess the answer is: I dunno. For some people, having actual measurements and detailed descriptions are helpful to make things more real, and I appreciate that. But for me, it’s sort of the opposite. That level of realism brings me out of the story. Just a personal preference, and since I’m the one who has to write it, you’re stuck with me (or you can read the bunches of other great stories on this site).
Anyway, thanks for reading and commenting!
Great story, I was hook from the start. But I have mixed feelings about the ending even though it was the perfect and most natural ending. Why do I feel like I wanted Matt to keep the big dick or a slightly bigger dick than his own lool. Anyway, I am happy he got out the contract.Chapter 8
Matt’s face was tired and sweat-covered, but soon his own image in the mirror was replaced with the face of Stan, back in his human form.
“End this,” Stan said softly, seeming equally exhausted. “Please. Just go. You’ve proven your point.”
“No…” Matt said, rubbing his neck. “We both know the world’s not ending tonight. If you could end it all and bring her to you, you’d have done it by now. All that nonsense out there tonight was just a show. Just something to scare me away. So, tomorrow when she wakes up, she’ll either think it was just a bad storm or maybe she dreamed it all. Either way, her faith in you is gonna go down a notch. But you know what WILL be there? Me. And this thing.” Matt looked down at his deflated but still enormous cock.
“And I’ll use it on her every day,” he continued. “And each day I’ll pull her away from you. Little by little. Her love for you will fade and her devotion to my huge fucking cock will take its place. Hell, she was practically worshipping it tonight. She’ll have an alter to it within the week.”
Stan was quiet for a moment. His eyes flashed with fire and then faded, exhaustion and sadness returning to his face.
“Fine,” Stan said, quietly. “I’ll put it back.”
“What was that?” Matt asked.
“I will put it back. Your normal boring human cock.”
“I’m not asking you to! Let’s be very clear here.”
“I know, I know,” Stan growled. “You’re not asking, I’m offering. You get to keep your precious fucking soul. I’ll just shrinky-dink your dick up.”
“And what are we going to tell Mayana and Jessica? How do we explain the past 24 hours? No no…we need a more nuanced reset of some sort.”
“What did you have in mind?” Stan asked, annoyed.
“Listen carefully,” Matt said. “And no tricks…”
***
Matt blinked. The face in the mirror was his own again. And the mirror had changed.
He was no longer looking into Jessica’s bathroom mirror, but the mirror at the coffee shop.
Matt looked down. He was fully clothed, wearing the clothes he had been wearing when he met Mayana.
A smile crept across his face. He remembered everything.
He pulled his phone out. It was the right day and time. He checked the texts. All the texts from Kim and Jenny and Gabby were still there.
Just one more thing to check. He pulled down his pants and admired his completely normal dick in the mirror.
He smiled widely as he fastened his pants and pushed the door open.
THE END
That's one of the things I thought about as well. Maybe some how Ian and Kim walking in and catching Matt fucking Beth with his huge cock.I was hoping there’d be a little more pointed revenge on Ian too …
but seriously great writing and a great story. Couldn’t stop reading.